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Luz and the other camp kids arrive at summer camp but before they can actually do anything, they black out and awaken alone in their dorm-room. Things go from going from 0 to 100 when the state's governor gets involved with his palsn for the teenagers.
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Luz and the other camp kids arrive at summer camp but before they can actually do anything, they black out and awaken alone in their dorm-room. Things go from going from 0 to 100 when the state's governor gets involved with his palsn plans for the teenagers.
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* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up during daylight no worse for wear.
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* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime.night-time. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up during daylight no worse for wear.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: When the soldiers pull out their semi-automatic guns to cow the vocal protests of the kidnapped kids, Maxwell tells them to put their weapons down, as it's unnecessary on children while being amused at the sight of it all.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: When the soldiers pull out their semi-automatic guns to cow the vocal protests of the kidnapped kids, Maxwell tells them to put their weapons down, as it's unnecessary on children while being visibly amused at the sight of it all.
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* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into 3 teams and are force to kill each other.
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* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into 3 teams and are force to kill each other.other, with the last team left standing.
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* FantasticRacism: Maxwell refers to the superhuman teenagers as biological weapons.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected to their ear.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected to their ear.
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* FantasticRacism: Maxwell refers to the superhuman teenagers as biological weapons.
"biological weapons".
* FauxAffablyEvil: When the soldiers pull out their semi-automatic guns to cow the vocal protests of the kidnapped kids, Maxwell tells them to put their weapons down, as it's unnecessary on children while being amused at the sight of it all.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected totheir his ear.
* FauxAffablyEvil: When the soldiers pull out their semi-automatic guns to cow the vocal protests of the kidnapped kids, Maxwell tells them to put their weapons down, as it's unnecessary on children while being amused at the sight of it all.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected to
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* GenreSavvy: Luz claims she's seen enough death-game anime to know where being kidnapped by some guy in a military uniform is going. She makes a conscious effort to keep a rational head, and don't do or say anything reckless.
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* GenreSavvy: Luz claims that she's seen enough death-game anime to know where being kidnapped by some guy in a military uniform is going. She makes a conscious effort to keep a rational head, and don't to not do or say anything reckless.reckless in her situation.
* NotHyperbole: Governor Maxwell makes it explicitly clear when he says eliminate the other teams he doesn't mean so like in a game of tag. He means '''eliminated as in killed, wiped off the face of the Earth.'''
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* ShoutOut: Luz notes she's played and watched ''far'' too much ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' to know how that would end if they were put into a DeadlyGame.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Luz notes she's played and watched ''far'' too much ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' to know how that would end if they were put into aDeadlyGame.DeadlyGame.
** Luz mentally comments that in their predicament she probably looks like a frightened dog whimpering as they were chained up to be [[KickTheDog shot in the face point blank with a shotgun]]. The girl then notes play way too much ''VideoGame/{{Wolfenstein}}'' if ''that'' was the first thing she thought of…
** Luz notes she's played and watched ''far'' too much ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' to know how that would end if they were put into a
** Luz mentally comments that in their predicament she probably looks like a frightened dog whimpering as they were chained up to be [[KickTheDog shot in the face point blank with a shotgun]]. The girl then notes play way too much ''VideoGame/{{Wolfenstein}}'' if ''that'' was the first thing she thought of…
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** Julia is depicted with eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that. Luz envies this trait.
* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up during daylight.
* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up during daylight.
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** Julia is depicted with eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that. Luz envies this trait.
hat characteristic.
* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up duringdaylight.daylight no worse for wear.
* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids and they all wake up during
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* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into teams and are force to kill each other.
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* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into 3 teams and are force to kill each other.
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* MassOhCrap: Luz and all the other superhuman teens have this reaction they're told by the governor.
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* MassOhCrap: Luz and all the other superhuman teens have this reaction they're told by the governor. Governor of Connecticut he arranged for them to be kidnapped and put into a death-game scenario.
* NervesOfSteel: A 17-year-old girl with vitiligo shows this, being the first of the kidnapped kids to calmly question the AntagonisticGovernor why he orchestrated the whole thing, while everyone else was too afraid to say anything at all.
* NervesOfSteel: A 17-year-old girl with vitiligo shows this, being the first of the kidnapped kids to calmly question the AntagonisticGovernor why he orchestrated the whole thing, while everyone else was too afraid to say anything at all.
* PsychoticSmirk: Maxwell has this when he sees the looks of dread on the teens he abducted.
* ShoutOut: Luz notes she's played and watched ''far'' too much ''Franchise/{{Danganronpa}}'' to know how that would end if they were put into a DeadlyGame.
* StunnedSilence: The superpowered teenagers are scared into silence as the AntagonisticGovernor explains why he kidnapped them.
* StunnedSilence: The superpowered teenagers are scared into silence as the AntagonisticGovernor explains why he kidnapped them.
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* TranquilFury: Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at the governor, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of him.
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* TranquilFury: TranquilFury:
** Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at the governor, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out ofhim.him.
** Julia is depicted with eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that. Luz envies this trait.
** Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at the governor, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of
** Julia is depicted with eyes glimmering in anger, repulsion, and fury; yet has a ever-calm expression that did not display any of that. Luz envies this trait.
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* WellIntentionedExtremist: The governor tries to present himself as this, explain his motive for kidnapping 33 superpowered children to monitor said powers.
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* AndThatsTerrible: Luz mentally notes anybody who lets anyone sleep with shoes on after kidnapping them is a sick freak.
* GenreSavvy: Luz claims she's seen enough death-game anime to know where being kidnapped by some guy in a military uniform is going. She makes a conscious effort to keep a rational head, and don't do or say anything reckless.
* {{Goth}}: One of the kidnapped teenagers, Carla, is dressed like one.
* {{Goth}}: One of the kidnapped teenagers, Carla, is dressed like one.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Rodger Maxwell is described as a large, muscular man and is the current Governor in the State of Connecticut.
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* LargeAndInCharge: Rodger Maxwell is described as a large, over 6 ft. tall, muscular man and is the current Governor in the State of Connecticut. Connecticut.
* MassOhCrap: Luz and all the other superhuman teens have this reaction they're told by the governor.
* OhCrap: Kennedy Jenkins freezes in place and goes pale when Governor Rodger Maxwell tells him who he is and knows his name.
* MassOhCrap: Luz and all the other superhuman teens have this reaction they're told by the governor.
* OhCrap: Kennedy Jenkins freezes in place and goes pale when Governor Rodger Maxwell tells him who he is and knows his name.
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* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out. The same thing happened to the other kids.
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* TapOnTheHead: Luz felt a sharp and sudden pain in the back of her head, before being knocked out. out at nighttime. The same thing happened to the other kids.kids and they all wake up during daylight.
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Luz and the other camp kids arrive at summer camp. However, things camp but before they can actually do anything, they black out and awaken alone in their dorm-room. Things go from going from 0 to 100 when the state's governor gets involved.involved with his palsn for the teenagers.
* ForcedIntoEvil: Camp Counsellor Johnson being coerced by Governor Rodger Maxwell into helping him effectively kidnap the children with powers going to his camp to turn them into Super Soldiers for the government. He really didn't want to do it.
--> '''Counsellor Johnson''': ''I'm sorry, but I have no choice. Please, God, forgive me, because I'm sending these children to their doom…''
* GasStationOfDoom: Subverted. Nothing bad happens at the gas station the bus stops at (besides buying overpriced snacks).
* HeroesLoveDogs: Luz tells Julia puppy dogs are her favourite pet animals.
--> '''Counsellor Johnson''': ''I'm sorry, but I have no choice. Please, God, forgive me, because I'm sending these children to their doom…''
* GasStationOfDoom: Subverted. Nothing bad happens at the gas station the bus stops at (besides buying overpriced snacks).
* HeroesLoveDogs: Luz tells Julia puppy dogs are her favourite pet animals.
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* LargeAndIncharge: Rodger Maxwell is described as a large, muscular man and is the current Governor in the State of Connecticut.
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* SuperSoldier: Governor Maxwell claims he wants to turn the superhuman teenagers into these.
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* WhamEpisode: Rodger Maxwell, governor of Luz's state, has her and 32 other kids going to Reality Check Summer Camp kidnapped to be put in a DeadlyGame with, as far as anyone could tell, is supported by the government, and under the threat of being gunned down if they try to escape.
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* EveryoneHasStandards: Counsellor Johnson is horrified by what Rodger Maxwell plans to do with the superhuman children.
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* AboveGoodAndEvil: When Counsellor Johnson laments that the Death Camp plan isn't right, Governor Maxwell simply just shrugs and tells him what's right and what's wrong doesn't matter in the end, [[MyCountryRightOrWrong when learning how to serve your nation]].
* AbsoluteXenophobe: The Governor of Connecticut set up an entire death game one day after people started showing up with superpowers.
* AntagonisticGovernor: Maxwell is blatantly played out to be a massive douchebag and a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children of varying ages into a literal death game for his sick kicks.
* ArcVillain: Maxwell is the first of many villains introduced that will show up throughout the course of the story. He is NOT the main villain of the fanfic, but rather the BigBad of the arc he is contained in.
* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into teams and are force to kill each other.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Counsellor Johnson ishorrified shocked and disgusted by what Rodger Maxwell plans to do with the superhuman children.children. He's ''not'' happy at all about being forced to go along with it.
* FantasticRacism: Maxwell refers to the superhuman teenagers as biological weapons.
* AbsoluteXenophobe: The Governor of Connecticut set up an entire death game one day after people started showing up with superpowers.
* AntagonisticGovernor: Maxwell is blatantly played out to be a massive douchebag and a morally bankrupt character, seeing as he put 33 children of varying ages into a literal death game for his sick kicks.
* ArcVillain: Maxwell is the first of many villains introduced that will show up throughout the course of the story. He is NOT the main villain of the fanfic, but rather the BigBad of the arc he is contained in.
* DeadlyGame: Maxwell has the 33 kidnapped teenagers, including Luz, all compete in a Death Game where they are split into teams and are force to kill each other.
* EveryoneHasStandards: Counsellor Johnson is
* FantasticRacism: Maxwell refers to the superhuman teenagers as biological weapons.
* KnightOfCerebus: Governor Rodger Maxwell's introduction establishes the story as DarkerAndEdgier.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveMoney: Maxwell tells the Johnson that he paid off his bosses with extra funding for Reality Check Camp to allow him to carry out his project.
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* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Governor Maxwell takes control of the Reality Check Camp from the original counsellor and turns it into a Death Camp.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* EveryoneHasStandards: Counsellor Johnson is horrified by what Rodger Maxwell plans to do with the superhuman children.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected to their ear.
* LargeAndIncharge: Rodger Maxwell is described as a large, muscular man and is the current Governor in the State of Connecticut.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Rodger Maxwell seems to be milking this.
* SharpDressedMan: The Governor is described as wearing a black two-piece suit, with a white dress shirt underneath, and a black tie.
* TranquilFury: Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at the governor, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of him.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Governor Maxwell takes control of the Reality Check Camp from the original counsellor and turns it into a Death Camp.
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!!This chapter contains examples of:
* EveryoneHasStandards: Counsellor Johnson is horrified by what Rodger Maxwell plans to do with the superhuman children.
* FBIAgent: Governor Maxwell is described as looking like the stereotype, minus the sunglasses and wiretap connected to their ear.
* LargeAndIncharge: Rodger Maxwell is described as a large, muscular man and is the current Governor in the State of Connecticut.
* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Rodger Maxwell seems to be milking this.
* SharpDressedMan: The Governor is described as wearing a black two-piece suit, with a white dress shirt underneath, and a black tie.
* TranquilFury: Camp Counsellor Johnson is described as one point looking like wanting to scream his face off at the governor, he's able to compose himself, not wanting to continue to let the SmugSnake to get a rise out of him.
* TyrantTakesTheHelm: Governor Maxwell takes control of the Reality Check Camp from the original counsellor and turns it into a Death Camp.
