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* BlatantLies: Pax tries to claim to a security guard at the shipping depot that he and Sarge are there on official business. It falls apart quickly when he can't cover for the fact that he has no idea what kind of agency they'd be representing.
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* BlatantLies: Pax tries to claim to a security guard at the shipping depot that he and Sarge are there on official business. It falls apart quickly when he can't cover for the fact that that, being an alien, he has no idea what kind of agency they'd be representing.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Sarge describes diamonds and other precious stones as being "trash". They're much more interested in common crystals that can be used to power their tech. Pax tells Jaco to take some diamonds anyway, as they're valuable on Earth.
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* WorthlessYellowRocks: Sarge describes diamonds and other precious stones as being "trash". They're much more interested in common crystals that can be used to power their tech. Pax tells Jaco to take some diamonds anyway, as they're valuable on Earth. The rocks they're interested in are common quartz, which you can find pretty much everywhere just by... kicking rocks.
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* ChronicHeroSyndrome: Fitz can't stand by and let the Controller kill the Silvians, even though they're extreme xenophobes.
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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: "You may be a hell of an engineer, but you don't look like much of a fighter.
