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->Letting the subject go, he started to shed his clothes when his eye caught himself in the mirror. He had seen his reflection before in the waters of the Kokiri Village and Lost Woods, or in the mirrors that were found on deceased Hylians, but now it was just surreal.
->Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.'
->Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.'
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->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.
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->''Letting the subject go, he started to shed his clothes when his eye caught himself in the mirror. He had seen his reflection before in the waters of the Kokiri Village and Lost Woods, or in the mirrors that were found on deceased Hylians, but now it was just surreal.''
->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
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->Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.
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->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier, with odd formations on his stomach]] he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
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->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier, bulkier]], with odd formations on his stomach]] stomach he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
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->''Letting the subject go, he started to shed his clothes when his eye caught himself in the mirror. He had seen his reflection before in the waters of the Kokiri Village and Lost Woods, or in the mirrors that were found on deceased Hylians, but now it was just surreal.''
->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier, with odd formations on his stomach]] he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
-->-- ''Fanfic/TheBoyWithoutAFairy''
->''Going over, he observed himself. Gone was the chubby and adorable face he had, even if he wouldn’t quite use the latter word to describe it. Now he was more handsome, chiseled and hardened in his facial structure. His blue eyes were duller than he remembered, dark circles decorating the skin underneath despite seven years of sleep. In just his white tights, he saw how his body changed too. It looked [[HeroicBuild harder and bulkier, with odd formations on his stomach]] he didn’t understand. Obviously, none of the Kokiri were muscular, so this was the first time Link saw such a form.''
-->-- ''Fanfic/TheBoyWithoutAFairy''
