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->The fog parted as a feak show curtain, revealing a graveyard of ships. Rusty steel, ancient wood Dhows, Viking long-boats, modern frigates, oil tankers, and luxury cruise liners - they all dipped and bobbed in the same water - vessels from all times, all cultures, [[AlienKudzu all covered in red]].
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->The fog parted as a feak show curtain, revealing a graveyard of ships. Rusty steel, ancient wood Dhows, Viking long-boats, modern frigates, oil tankers, and luxury cruise liners - they all dipped and bobbed in the same water - -- vessels from all times, all cultures, [[AlienKudzu all covered in red]].
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->The Void is filled with derelicts - [[ScienceHero Technocratic]] [[SpaceStation Constructs]], [[OurMagesAreDifferent Traditionalist]] [[MageTower Chantries]], broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
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->The Void is filled with derelicts - -- [[ScienceHero Technocratic]] [[SpaceStation Constructs]], [[OurMagesAreDifferent Traditionalist]] [[MageTower Chantries]], broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - -- all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension- -- Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
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-->--'''Lt. Commander Shelby''' identifying recently-destroyed ships, ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', "The Best of Both Worlds, pt. II"
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-->--'''Lt. Commander Shelby''' identifying recently-destroyed ships, ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', "The Best of Both Worlds, pt. II"II"
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->It's like this is a giant spaceship graveyard. ''[beat]'' Has anyone else got the feeling that we've been led here like lambs to the kebab shop?
->It's like this is a giant spaceship graveyard. ''[beat]'' Has anyone else got the feeling that we've been led here like lambs to the kebab shop?
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-->-- Fanfic/TheLastGreatTimeWar
->It's''Fanfic/TheLastGreatTimeWar''
->''It's like this is a giant spaceship graveyard. ''[beat]'' Has anyone else got the feeling that we've been led here like lambs to the kebabshop?shop?''
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->"The ''Tolstoy''...the ''Kyushu''...the ''Melbourne''.
-->--'''Lt. Commander Shelby''' identifying recently-destroyed ships, ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', "The Best of Both Worlds, pt. II"
->"The ''Tolstoy''...the ''Kyushu''...the ''Melbourne''.
-->--'''Lt. Commander Shelby''' identifying recently-destroyed ships, ''Series/StarTrekTheNextGeneration'', "The Best of Both Worlds, pt. II"
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->All the ships of all the races that had been lured to [[TheAssimilator Father]] [[TimeAbyss over the millions of years he lay in wait]]. I had found Father's trash dump.
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->All the ships of all the races that had been lured to [[TheAssimilator Father]] [[TimeAbyss Father over the millions of years he lay in wait]].wait. I had found Father's trash dump.
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->The fog parted as a feak show curtain, revealing a graveyard of ships. Rusty steel, ancient wood Dhows, Viking long-boats, modern frigates, oil tankers, and luxury cruise liners - they all dipped and bobbed in the same water - vessels from all times, all cultures, [[AlienKudzu all covered in red.red]].
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-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
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-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''(revised)''
->Here and there, nestled between the trees, were spacecraft. Some had been there so long they were completely overgrown with vines and moss and trees. Some looked like they might have crashed just weeks or at most months before. They were huge, and they were small. Dangerous-looking and innocuous. Some bristled with weapons or were painted fantastically. Others were utilitarian boxes.
->All the ships of all the races that had been lured to [[TheAssimilator Father]] [[TimeAbyss over the millions of years he lay in wait]]. I had found Father's trash dump.
-->--''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''
->Here and there, nestled between the trees, were spacecraft. Some had been there so long they were completely overgrown with vines and moss and trees. Some looked like they might have crashed just weeks or at most months before. They were huge, and they were small. Dangerous-looking and innocuous. Some bristled with weapons or were painted fantastically. Others were utilitarian boxes.
->All the ships of all the races that had been lured to [[TheAssimilator Father]] [[TimeAbyss over the millions of years he lay in wait]]. I had found Father's trash dump.
-->--''Literature/{{Animorphs}} - The Ellimist Chronicles''
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->The Void is filled with derelicts - Technocratic Constructs, Traditionalist Chantries, broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
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->The Void is filled with derelicts - Technocratic Constructs, Traditionalist Chantries, [[ScienceHero Technocratic]] [[SpaceStation Constructs]], [[OurMagesAreDifferent Traditionalist]] [[MageTower Chantries]], broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
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-->--'''Dave Lister,''' ''Series/RedDwarf''
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-->--'''Dave Lister,''' ''Series/RedDwarf''''Series/RedDwarf''
->The Void is filled with derelicts - Technocratic Constructs, Traditionalist Chantries, broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
->The Void is filled with derelicts - Technocratic Constructs, Traditionalist Chantries, broken pocket dimensions, temporal bubbles, [[EvilSorcerer Nephandic]] strongholds, [[CoolStarship Voidships]] and [[CoolAirship Etherships]] - all up for grabs and all contested. Centuries of investment are floating out there.
-->--''TabletopGame/MageTheAscension - Convention Book: Void Engineeers (revised)''
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->It's like this is a giant spaceship graveyard. ''[beat]'' Has anyone else got the feeling that we've been led here like lambs to the kebab shop?
-->--'''Dave Lister,''' ''Series/RedDwarf''
->It's like this is a giant spaceship graveyard. ''[beat]'' Has anyone else got the feeling that we've been led here like lambs to the kebab shop?
-->--'''Dave Lister,''' ''Series/RedDwarf''
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->The surface of the planet was a mess. Ruined ship parts and machinery as far as the eye could see, with discernible individual wrecks visible among unrecognizable heaps of scrap metal and junk. Several large plumes of smoke were visible in the distance, creating a thick layer of haze which was occasionally punctured by more falling debris.
-->-- Fanfic/TheLastGreatTimeWar
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->The fog parted as a feak show curtain, revealing a graveyard of ships. Rusty steel, ancient wood Dhows, Viking long-boats, modern frigates, oil tankers, and luxury cruise liners - they all dipped and bobbed in the same water - vessels from all times, all cultures, all covered in red.
-->-- Lore entry on '''The Lady Margaret''', ''Videogame/TheSecretWorld''
-->-- Lore entry on '''The Lady Margaret''', ''Videogame/TheSecretWorld''
