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16. For context, Eithan gave Lindon that robe about two paragraphs prior.
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->Jai Daishou wore a gratifying expression of total horror. "Tell me how," he demanded.\\
Eithan paused with scissors to his neck. "I'll tell your Remnant," he said.\\
Then he slit Jai Daishou’s throat.\\
The Underlord's body slumped to the ground. A moment later, a skeletal white Remnant began to rise.\\
As promised, Eithan met the Remnant's eyes and explained. "You weren't good enough."\\
Then Eithan blew the spirit apart with a half-formed Hollow King's Spear and hobbled away from the bodies.\\
The Truegold Remnants had already fled.
-->-- [[https://www.willwight.com/uploads/9/0/7/1/9071768/blackflame_bonus_spoiler_scene.pdf Blackflame bonus spoiler scene]]
Eithan paused with scissors to his neck. "I'll tell your Remnant," he said.\\
Then he slit Jai Daishou’s throat.\\
The Underlord's body slumped to the ground. A moment later, a skeletal white Remnant began to rise.\\
As promised, Eithan met the Remnant's eyes and explained. "You weren't good enough."\\
Then Eithan blew the spirit apart with a half-formed Hollow King's Spear and hobbled away from the bodies.\\
The Truegold Remnants had already fled.
-->-- [[https://www.willwight.com/uploads/9/0/7/1/9071768/blackflame_bonus_spoiler_scene.pdf Blackflame bonus spoiler scene]]
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->"Oh no, we're under attack," Larian muttered. With one finger, she plucked the string of the bow lying next to her. "Eat my best techniques, robbers! Pchew, pchew!" She clapped a hand to her armored chest. "Ack! They got me! I'll tell my grandchildren of this battle. Let us part with mutual respect."
-->-- Chapter 21
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->At that point, Lindon removed his veil. Just a crack, but the pressure from his spirit hung over the crowd as though he'd suspended a sword an inch over each of their heads.\\
There was utter silence.\\
He looked over them with black-and-white eyes, and he told them what he had once told an Underlord he didn't quite trust. "Remember that whatever you do while wearing my symbol, you do in my name. And I will be watching."\\
Though Lindon didn't ask for it, Dross projected a giant version of himself looming behind Lindon, staring at them all with a giant purple eye.\\
A shudder passed over all the students.\\
Message sufficiently delivered, Lindon veiled himself again. This time, he pulled out a book. He ran a thumb over its pages--some yellowed, most weathered, and some newer but crammed loosely in the middle.\\
Then he opened ''The Path of Twin Stars''.\\
"Now, prepare yourselves and follow closely," Lindon said. "This is the Heaven and Earth Purification Wheel."
-->-- Chapter 31
There was utter silence.\\
He looked over them with black-and-white eyes, and he told them what he had once told an Underlord he didn't quite trust. "Remember that whatever you do while wearing my symbol, you do in my name. And I will be watching."\\
Though Lindon didn't ask for it, Dross projected a giant version of himself looming behind Lindon, staring at them all with a giant purple eye.\\
A shudder passed over all the students.\\
Message sufficiently delivered, Lindon veiled himself again. This time, he pulled out a book. He ran a thumb over its pages--some yellowed, most weathered, and some newer but crammed loosely in the middle.\\
Then he opened ''The Path of Twin Stars''.\\
"Now, prepare yourselves and follow closely," Lindon said. "This is the Heaven and Earth Purification Wheel."
-->-- Chapter 31
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->"I can strike once, with the power you have allotted me," Ozmanthus said. "Afterwards, you will not be able to project me again for quite some time without destabilizing my memory."\\
Lindon turned to face Malice, as her attack seemed most imminent. "Which target would you prefer?"\\
Ozmanthus barked a laugh. "I thought you knew me well. I said one ''attack''..." Suddenly, towering ancient armor swallowed him, so he hovered at the center of a giant that stretched from the ground to the clouds. It reminded Lindon strongly of Malice's bloodline armor.\\
A gray, translucent cloak billowed from the Forger technique's shoulders, and it held a spear in one hand. "...not one ''opponent''," Ozmanthus finished. "Brace yourself, future disciple."\\
[You need to take lessons from him on style,] Dross commented.
-->-- Chapter 8
Lindon turned to face Malice, as her attack seemed most imminent. "Which target would you prefer?"\\
Ozmanthus barked a laugh. "I thought you knew me well. I said one ''attack''..." Suddenly, towering ancient armor swallowed him, so he hovered at the center of a giant that stretched from the ground to the clouds. It reminded Lindon strongly of Malice's bloodline armor.\\
A gray, translucent cloak billowed from the Forger technique's shoulders, and it held a spear in one hand. "...not one ''opponent''," Ozmanthus finished. "Brace yourself, future disciple."\\
[You need to take lessons from him on style,] Dross commented.
-->-- Chapter 8
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->"You get a royal audience with the Silent King? You his puppet?"
->"Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now."
->"I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say."
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
->'''Lindon:''' "I am grateful for what you have done for my family. But I do not look favorably on those who keep Coppers imprisoned as slave labor, or who kill Jades in their beds over a blood feud."\\
'''Jai Long's''' back straightened. "I will take responsibility for my actions."\\
'''Lindon:''' "I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family." He looked deeper into Jai Long. "Is that who you are?"
->"You get a royal audience with the Silent King? You his puppet?"
->"Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now."
->"I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say."
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
->'''Lindon:''' "I am grateful for what you have done for my family. But I do not look favorably on those who keep Coppers imprisoned as slave labor, or who kill Jades in their beds over a blood feud."\\
'''Jai Long's''' back straightened. "I will take responsibility for my actions."\\
'''Lindon:''' "I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family." He looked deeper into Jai Long. "Is that who you are?"
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-->-- Dross, '''Dross''', Chapter 1
->"You ->'''Yerin:''' You get a royal audience with the Silent King? You his puppet?"
->"Yes.puppet?\\
'''Lindon:''' Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now."
->"I'd\\
'''Yerin:''' I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say."
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
->'''Lindon:''' "I am grateful for what you have done for my family. But I do not look favorably on those who keep Coppers imprisoned as slave labor, or who kill Jades in their beds over a blood feud."\\
'''Jai Long's''' back straightened. "I will take responsibility for my actions."\\
'''Lindon:''' "I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family." He looked deeper into Jai Long. "Is that who you are?"
->"Yes.
'''Lindon:''' Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now.
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'''Yerin:''' I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say.
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
->'''Lindon:''' "I am grateful for what you have done for my family. But I do not look favorably on those who keep Coppers imprisoned as slave labor, or who kill Jades in their beds over a blood feud."\\
'''Jai Long's''' back straightened. "I will take responsibility for my actions."\\
'''Lindon:''' "I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family." He looked deeper into Jai Long. "Is that who you are?"
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'''Gerravon''' closed his eyes and remembered his life.\\
"Weak''er''," '''the Reaper''' said. "He should have said weak''er''."
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'''Jai Long:''' I will take responsibility for my actions.\\
'''Lindon:''' I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family. Is that who you are?
-->-- Chapter 4
->Ozriel stood next to him in black armor, white hair flowing behind him, a satisfied smile on his face. "So Daruman told you I was weak, did he?"\\
"Weak''er'',"
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The Truegold's brow furrowed, and '''Lindon''' wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?" '''Cassias''' asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," '''Lindon''' said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
'''Cassias''' nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
"Why?" '''Cassias''' asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," '''Lindon''' said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
'''Cassias''' nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
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The Truegold's brow furrowed, and '''Lindon''' Lindon wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?"'''Cassias''' Cassias asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left,"'''Lindon''' Lindon said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
'''Cassias''' Cassias nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
"Why?"
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left,"
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->'''Mercy:''' ''You'' didn't need this much help. I've had someone holding my hand since I was a girl. ''[paces]'' At first, it was easy. I was just better than everyone else. And then, when I'd proven myself, I had a Sage and a Herald teaching me. My mother's a Monarch! And still, you and Yerin--\\
'''Lindon:''' Eithan turned out to be the Reaper of Worlds.\\
'''Mercy:''' That's... that's true, but...\\
'''Lindon:''' I have received more help than anyone in the universe. Even most of my power is stolen. There's nothing noble about doing everything yourself. You just have to do your best to honor the help you've gotten.
-->-- Chapter 24
[[folder:Book 12 - Waybound]]
->'''Mercy:''' ''You'' didn't need this much help. I've had someone holding my hand since I was a girl. ''[paces]'' At first, it was easy. I was just better than everyone else. And then, when I'd proven myself, I had a Sage and a Herald teaching me. My mother's a Monarch! And still, you and Yerin--\\
'''Lindon:''' Eithan turned out to be the Reaper of Worlds.\\
'''Mercy:''' That's... that's true, but...\\
'''Lindon:''' I have received more help than anyone in the universe. Even most of my power is stolen. There's nothing noble about doing everything yourself. You just have to do your best to honor the help you've gotten.
-->-- Chapter 24
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->"Oh no, we're under attack," Larian muttered. With one finger, she plucked the string of the bow lying next to her. "Eat my best techniques, robbers! Pchew, pchew!" She clapped a hand to her armored chest. "Ack! They got me! I'll tell my grandchildren of this battle. Let us part with mutual respect."
-->-- Chapter 21
-->-- Chapter 21
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->'''Yerin''': My master used to say that no Path is wide enough for two.
->'''Eithan''': And that is ''exactly'' the problem I wish to solve. I have been looking for people to walk with me every step of the way.
->'''Yerin''': Where to?
->'''Eithan''': To the end.
-->-- Chapter 19
->'''Eithan''': And that is ''exactly'' the problem I wish to solve. I have been looking for people to walk with me every step of the way.
->'''Yerin''': Where to?
->'''Eithan''': To the end.
-->-- Chapter 19
->'''Eithan''': I wanted to raise up peers. In theory, t was possible. If you started from the beginning, you can raise a generation of truly unparalleled sacred artists who would never leave each other behind.
->'''Lindon''': [firmly] Congratulations. Yerin and I, at least, would never leave you behind.
->'''Eithan''': I know. I've never been happier.
-->-- Chapter 20
->'''Lindon''': [firmly] Congratulations. Yerin and I, at least, would never leave you behind.
->'''Eithan''': I know. I've never been happier.
-->-- Chapter 20
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->[You must not be acquainted with grief yet, or you would know that it is not a weak motivation. ''Wonderful.'' I marvel at the path of tragedy ahead of you that shaped you into such an unparalleled killer.]
-->-- Dross, Chapter 1
->"You get a royal audience with the Silent King? You his puppet?"
->"Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now."
->"I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say."
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
-->-- Dross, Chapter 1
->"You get a royal audience with the Silent King? You his puppet?"
->"Yes. Apologies, but I have to feed you all to a Dreadgod now."
->"I'd bet my spine that's really what you'd say."
-->-- Yarin and Lindon, Chapter 4
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Gerravon closed his eyes and remembered his life.\\
"Weak''er''," the Reaper said. "He should have said weak''er''."
Gerravon closed his eyes and remembered his life.\\
"Weak''er''," the Reaper said. "He should have said weak''er''."
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'''Jai Long's''' back straightened. "I will take responsibility for my actions."\\
'''Lindon:''' "I don't want that person in my sect, and I don't want that person in my family." He looked deeper into Jai Long. "Is that who you are?"
-->-- Chapter 4
->'''Ozriel''' stood next to him in black armor, white hair flowing behind him, a satisfied smile on his face. "So Daruman told you I was weak, did he?"\\
"Weak''er'',"
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"Put me back!" Noroloth demanded.
Its perception stretched upward and froze. Then the spiritual sense spun right back into its soul.\\
"Put me back!" Noroloth demanded.
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"Put me back!" Noroloth demanded.
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Its perception stretched upward and froze. Then the spiritual sense spun right back into its soul.\\
"Put me back!" '''Noroloth''' demanded.
-->-- Chapter 18
->'''Cassias''' started to walk, but then he hesitated. "Actually, I apologize, but there is one more thing I was wondering. Eithan... was he really..."\\
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The Truegold's brow furrowed, and Lindon wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?" Cassias asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," Lindon said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
Cassias nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
"Why?" Cassias asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," Lindon said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
Cassias nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
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The Truegold's brow furrowed, and Lindon '''Lindon''' wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?"Cassias '''Cassias''' asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left,"Lindon '''Lindon''' said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
Cassias '''Cassias''' nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
"Why?"
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left,"
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"Yeah."\\
The Truegold's brow furrowed, and Lindon wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?" Cassias asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," Lindon said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
Cassias nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
-->-- Chapter 20
"Yeah."\\
The Truegold's brow furrowed, and Lindon wasn't sure how to read the expressions crossing his face.\\
"Why?" Cassias asked at last.\\
"I've asked that myself every hour since he left," Lindon said. "If you'll pardon me for half a guess, I think he was lonely."\\
Cassias nodded. "Yes. I think he was." He straightened his spine and gave a crisp bow, then walked off to join his family.
-->-- Chapter 20
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"Weaker," the Reaper said. "He should have said weaker."
-->-- [[https://www.willwight.com/a-blog-of-dubious-intent/before-i-drift-off-to-sea Dreadgod preview]]
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->"At last!" the spirit of the black dragon prince cried. "I am fr--"\\
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"Put me back!" Noroloth demanded.
-->-- Chapter 18
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->Ozriel stood next to the Vroshir, white hair flowing behind him, a satisfied smile on his face. "So Daruman told you I was weak, did he?"\\
Gerravon closed his eyes and remembered his life.\\
"Weaker," the Reaper said. "He should have said weaker."
-->-- [[https://www.willwight.com/a-blog-of-dubious-intent/before-i-drift-off-to-sea Dreadgod preview]]
[[folder:Book 11 - Dreadgod]]
->Ozriel stood next to the Vroshir, white hair flowing behind him, a satisfied smile on his face. "So Daruman told you I was weak, did he?"\\
Gerravon closed his eyes and remembered his life.\\
"Weaker," the Reaper said. "He should have said weaker."
-->-- [[https://www.willwight.com/a-blog-of-dubious-intent/before-i-drift-off-to-sea Dreadgod preview]]
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'''Yaren''': First thing, we're not calling it that. ''[considers]'' Burning cloak. ''That's'' a real technique name. [...] You want to call it Fierce Burning Clothes on Fire in your own head, that's on your account, but I'll cut you every time you say it out loud.\\
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'''Lindon:''' ''[thinking]'' Was that how she saw him?
'''Lindon:''' ''[thinking]'' Was that how she saw him?
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->'''Mercy:''' If ''[about Lindon]''If I asked you to punch a hole in the sky, I thought you'd say "Apologies, it might take me a few years."\\
'''Lindon:''' ''[thinking]'' Was that how she saw him?"\\
'''Lindon:''' ''[thinking]'' Was that how she saw him?
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->''"You are not my goal. You're just in my way."''
-->-- '''Eithan''' (to '''Reigan Shen'''), chapter 15
-->-- '''Eithan''' (to '''Reigan Shen'''), chapter 15
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->''[A destroyer has come.]''
-->-- '''Every oracle on Cradle''', chapter 25
->''[The Destroyer has come.]]''
-->-- '''The Oracle Codex''', chapter 25
->'''Sage of Calling Storms:''' He is here.\\
'''Reigan Shen:''' Who?\\
'''Sage of Calling Storms:''' The Reaper.
-->-- Chapter 25
->''"We have stared into the abyss and lived to tell the tale. I'm going to sleep."''
-->-- '''Ziel''', chapter 26
