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** [[DeconstructedTrope Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].
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** [[DeconstructedTrope Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].safety.
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** Or, Bob is in a situation where [[EverythingTryingToKillYou everyone is trying to kill him]], and with Sally [[AnAxeToGrind as handy with an axe as she is]], he'll take whatever help he can get.
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** Or, Bob is in a situation where [[EverythingTryingToKillYou everyone is trying to kill him]], and with Sally [[AnAxeToGrind as handy with an axe as she is]], is, he'll take whatever help he can get.
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** [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].
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** [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome [[DeconstructedTrope Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...But then she secretly poisons Alice's drink.
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* '''Double Subverted''': ...But then she secretly poisons Alice's drink.[[KillAndReplace kills Alice and takes on her identity and appearance]].
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** Sally was unable to feel any emotions until she met Bob.
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** Sally will do anything to [[ShipperOnDeck get Bob and Alice together]].
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** Bob wants to murder Sally, a ClingyJealousGirl.
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** Sally absolutely ''hates'' Bob, and will do anything to get Bob to hate her and her alone.
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** Alice, a BitchInSheepsClothing herself, sets Sally up to ''look'' unstable and deliberately sets off her ClingyJealousGirl instincts in order to drive a wedge between her and Bob.
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** Alice, a BitchInSheepsClothing {{Yandere}} herself, sets Sally up to ''look'' unstable and deliberately sets off her ClingyJealousGirl instincts in order to drive a wedge between her and Bob.
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** [[RealityEnsues Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].
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** [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety]].
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** Alice is a manipulative GoldDigger or even a BlackWidow, so Sally is right to be protective of Bob.
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Don't think that's allowed. Also bad indentation.
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* '''Unconventional Example''':
** Bob is Sally's younger brother, and Sally channels this trope to protect her brother from harm.
** Bob is Sally's younger brother, and Sally channels this trope to protect her brother from harm.
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* '''Unconventional Example''':
** Bob is Sally's younger brother, and Sally channels this trope to protect her brother from harm.
** Bob is Sally's younger brother, and Sally channels this trope to protect her brother from harm.
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** But Sally violates the restraining order by breaking into Bob and Alice’s hotel after their wedding and [[IfICantHaveYou murders them both]].
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** [[CruelTwistEnding But Sally violates the restraining order order]] by breaking into Bob and Alice’s hotel after their wedding and [[IfICantHaveYou murders them both]].both]] before [[MurderSuicide offing herself too]].
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** [[RealityEnsues Sally gets arrested for stalking]], or Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety.
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** [[RealityEnsues Sally gets arrested for stalking]], or Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety.safety]].
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** But Sally violates the restraining order by breaking into Bob and Alice’s hotel after their wedding and [[IfICantHaveYou murders them both]].
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** [[RealityEnsues Sally gets arrested for stalking]], or Bob files a restraining order on Sally because he sees her as a threat to him and Alice’s personal safety.
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** Sally adores Bob and would do anything for him. ''Anything''. This means that she'll destroy anyone Bob dislikes in order to prove her devotion to him.
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** Except Danny is now jealous and can't bear that she has become geniunely JustFriends with Bob. She can't bear that he did the same with Alice. One of them ends up cooling down. The other creates unsettling fantasies to entertain oneself. [[ThanatosGambit What if]] [[TheButlerDidIt a]] minor accident...
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** Except Danny is now jealous and can't bear that she has become geniunely genuinely JustFriends with Bob. She can't bear that he did the same with Alice. One of them ends up cooling down. The other creates unsettling fantasies to entertain oneself. [[ThanatosGambit What if]] [[TheButlerDidIt a]] minor accident...
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** The only thing that renders Sally insane is her fear of abandonment, and even otherwise, [[TheConscience Danny]] insists she should be treated with compassion. He comforts her, and she succeeds in her attempts to overcome her abandonnement issues, avoiding to have been slowly driven completely mad. She drops all violent behaviour, realizes that Alice is the best for Bob, still [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy wants her beloved to be happy]], and retreats. Even Danny and her might get their happy ending... [[PairTheSpares together]].
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** The only thing that renders Sally insane is her fear of abandonment, and even otherwise, [[TheConscience Danny]] insists she should be treated with compassion. He comforts her, and she succeeds in her attempts to overcome her abandonnement abandonment issues, avoiding to have been slowly driven completely mad. She drops all violent behaviour, realizes that Alice is the best for Bob, still [[IWantMyBelovedToBeHappy wants her beloved to be happy]], and retreats. Even Danny and her might get their happy ending... [[PairTheSpares together]].
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** Except Danny is now jealous and can't bear that she has become geniuely JustFriends with Bob. She can't bear that he did the same with Alice. One of them ends up cooling down. The other creates unsettling fantasies to entertain oneself. [[ThanatosGambit What if]] [[TheButlerDidIt a]] minor accident...
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** Except Danny is now jealous and can't bear that she has become geniuely geniunely JustFriends with Bob. She can't bear that he did the same with Alice. One of them ends up cooling down. The other creates unsettling fantasies to entertain oneself. [[ThanatosGambit What if]] [[TheButlerDidIt a]] minor accident...
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* '''Enforced''': "How are we going to make AliceAndBob the OfficialCouple when we don't have someone to [[PairTheSpares pair Sally off with]]? We can't just [[DieForOurShip kill her off]]..." "[[LoveMakesYouCrazy Have her go nuts]]?"
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* '''Enforced''': '''Enforced''':
** "How are we going to make AliceAndBob the OfficialCouple when we don't have someone to [[PairTheSpares pair Sally off with]]? We can't just [[DieForOurShip kill her off]]..." "[[LoveMakesYouCrazy Have her gonuts]]?"nuts]]?"
** The author was once in an abusive relationship, and is trying to work through it in their writing.
** "How are we going to make AliceAndBob the OfficialCouple when we don't have someone to [[PairTheSpares pair Sally off with]]? We can't just [[DieForOurShip kill her off]]..." "[[LoveMakesYouCrazy Have her go
** The author was once in an abusive relationship, and is trying to work through it in their writing.
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Can't link to works, unfortunately. If the link to Weird Al is referential humor, I'd allow it, but I don't know if it is or not.
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'''Bob''': [[Music/WeirdAlYankovic That dog doesn't love you!]]
** Sally [[WebVideo/MiraiNikkiTheAbridgedSeries kills a dog because it was trying to hump Bob's leg]].
** Sally [[WebVideo/MiraiNikkiTheAbridgedSeries kills a dog because it was trying to hump Bob's leg]].
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'''Bob''': [[Music/WeirdAlYankovic [[ComicallyMissingThePoint That dog doesn't love you!]]
** Sally[[WebVideo/MiraiNikkiTheAbridgedSeries kills a dog because it was trying to hump Bob's leg]].leg.
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** Sally is extremely hostile to anyone who shows romantic interest in Bob, but it's never explained why.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Bob has no clue that Sally loves him; she makes several cartoonish attempts to break them apart, only to push the pair closer together.
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* '''Played For Laughs''': Laughs''':
** Bob has no clue that Sally loves him; she makes several cartoonish attempts to break them apart, only to push the pair closertogether.together.
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** Bob has no clue that Sally loves him; she makes several cartoonish attempts to break them apart, only to push the pair closer
** BlackComedy
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** Sally attempts to kill anyone shows any interest or could possibly harm Bob.
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** Sally attempts to kill anyone who shows any interest or could possibly harm Bob.
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** Sally is normally nonviolent and sane, except around [[StalkerWithACrush Bob]], who seems to be a walking {{trigger}} for her.
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** Sally is normally nonviolent and sane, except around [[StalkerWithACrush Bob]], who seems to be a walking {{trigger}} [[TraumaButton trigger]] for her.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheCutie falls [[LoveMakesYouCrazy madly in love]] and goes to [[AxeCrazy insane lengths]] to keep their LoveInterest.
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'''Basic Trope''': TheCutie A seemingly harmless character falls [[LoveMakesYouCrazy madly in love]] and goes to [[AxeCrazy insane lengths]] lengths to keep their LoveInterest.
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** Sally is normally sane, [[ObfuscatngInsanity but acts insane, as she wishes to be hated by Bob]]. One day, Bob says he doesn't hate her, at which point Sally does '''anything''' to get Bob to hate her.
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** Sally is normally sane, [[ObfuscatngInsanity [[ObfuscatingInsanity but acts insane, as she wishes to be hated by Bob]]. One day, Bob says he doesn't hate her, at which point Sally does '''anything''' to get Bob to hate her.
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** Sally is normally sane, but acts insane, as she wishes to be hated by Bob. One day, Bob says he doesn't hate her, at which point Sally does '''anything''' to get Bob to hate her.
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** Sally is normally sane, [[ObfuscatngInsanity but acts insane, as she wishes to be hated by Bob.Bob]]. One day, Bob says he doesn't hate her, at which point Sally does '''anything''' to get Bob to hate her.
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** Alternatively, Bob has a lot of girls chasing him. He has a thing for yanderes, knows that Sally is one and starts dating with her to keep other girls away from him.
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** Alternatively, Bob has a lot of girls chasing him. him [[UnwantedHarem and is getting fed up with the overwhelming attention]]. He has a thing for yanderes, knows that Sally is one and starts dating with her to keep other girls away from him.
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I've been lonely without you, lover troper! If you won't play with me, [[{{yandere}} that little tsundere vixen will pay with her life~!
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I've been lonely without you, lover troper! If you won't play with me, [[{{yandere}} that little tsundere vixen will pay with her life~!life~!]]
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I've been lonely without you, lover troper! If you don't play my favorite game, ''[[{{yandere}} we can always play basketball... with your head! Tee-hee~!]]''
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I've been lonely without you, lover troper! If you don't won't play my favorite game, ''[[{{yandere}} we can always play basketball... with your head! Tee-hee~!]]''me, [[{{yandere}} that little tsundere vixen will pay with her life~!