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** Alice did start off as quite ugly like her father, but she improved her looks by better personal care, by magic, or by MagicPlasticSurgery.
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** Alice did start off as quite ugly like her father, but she improved her looks either by better personal care, by magic, or by MagicPlasticSurgery.
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** Alice is unattractive, but [[{{Gonk her Dad}}]] makes her look like Marilyn Monroe in comparison.
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** Alice is unattractive, but [[{{Gonk [[{{Gonk}} her Dad}}]] Dad]] makes her look like Marilyn Monroe in comparison.
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** Alice did start off as quite ugly like her father, but she improved her looks by better personal care, by magic, or by [[MagicPlasticSurgery Magic Plastic Surgery]].
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** Alice did start off as quite ugly like her father, but she improved her looks by better personal care, by magic, or by [[MagicPlasticSurgery Magic Plastic Surgery]].MagicPlasticSurgery.
