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* '''Straight''': Our heroes [[StarterVillain first]] face off against [[TheMafia Crimer]], then [[MadScientist Dr. Destructo]], before moving on to [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]], and finally facing off against the [[TheChessmaster Queen Terra]] whom the previous villains [[UnwittingPawn unknowingly helped]].
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* '''Straight''': Our heroes [[StarterVillain first]] face off against [[TheMafia Crimer]], [[{{Delinquent|s}} Bruizer]], then [[MadScientist Dr. Destructo]], before moving on to [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]], and finally facing off against the [[TheChessmaster Queen Terra]] whom the previous villains [[UnwittingPawn unknowingly helped]].
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** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, [[BarbaricBully Flash Young]], while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, [[BarbaricBully Flash Young]], Young]] (who's a really young Bruizer), while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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** After Dr. Destructo is defeated, Crimer steps in -- an ordinary gangster, compared to the powerful scientist before him.
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** After Dr. Destructo is defeated, Crimer Bruizer steps in -- an ordinary gangster, compared to the powerful scientist before him.
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** Crimer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very good at being one]], and with the resources and control Crimer has, Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
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** Crimer Bruizer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very good at being one]], and with the resources and control Crimer has, Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
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** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, [[BarbaricBully Flash Young]], while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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** Evilz has many enemies, and at the start our heroes are the least of his worries. At the start of the tale Evulz has his stronger troops held back to protect him against the actual threats to his reign, which does not include the heros until [[FromNobodyToNightmare much later in the plot.]]
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** Evilz has many enemies, and at the start our heroes are the least of his worries. At the start of the tale Evulz has his stronger troops held back to protect him against the actual threats to his reign, which does not include the heros heroes until [[FromNobodyToNightmare much later in the plot.]]
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* '''Straight''': Our heroes [[StarterVillain first]] face off against [[TheMafia Crimer]], then [[MadScientist Dr. Destructo]], before moving on to [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]], and finally facing off against the [[TheChessMaster Queen]] [[GalacticConqueror Terra]] who previous villains [[UnwittingPawn unknowingly helped]].
* '''Exaggerated''': The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
* '''Exaggerated''': The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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* '''Straight''': Our heroes [[StarterVillain first]] face off against [[TheMafia Crimer]], then [[MadScientist Dr. Destructo]], before moving on to [[EvilOverlord Emperor Evulz]], and finally facing off against the [[TheChessMaster Queen]] [[GalacticConqueror [[TheChessmaster Queen Terra]] who whom the previous villains [[UnwittingPawn unknowingly helped]].
*'''Exaggerated''': '''Exaggerated''':
** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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** The [[StarterVillain first villain]] Bob faces is a schoolyard bully, while the FinalBoss is a nigh-omnipotent GodOfEvil.
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* '''Downplayed''':
** The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of strength or threat level.
** Each Big Bad is stronger than the previous one, but only for a little bit.
** The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of strength or threat level.
** Each Big Bad is stronger than the previous one, but only for a little bit.
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* '''Downplayed''':
** The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of strength or threat level.
**'''Downplayed''': Each Big Bad is stronger than the previous one, but only for a little bit.
** The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of strength or threat level.
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* '''Averted''': The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of threat level.
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* '''Averted''': The villains are not all that different from each other in terms of strength or threat level.
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** Crimer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very, very good at being an ordinary gangster]], and Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
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** Crimer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very, very good at being an ordinary gangster]], one]], and with the resources and control Crimer has, Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
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* '''Subverted''': The heroes defeat the BigBad in the first episode.
* '''Double Subverted''': Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Evil Overlord}}s and isn't even that strong compared to them.
* '''Double Subverted''': Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Evil Overlord}}s and isn't even that strong compared to them.
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* '''Subverted''': '''Subverted''':
** The heroes defeat the BigBad in the first episode.
** After Dr. Destructo is defeated, Crimer steps in -- an ordinary gangster, compared to the powerful scientist before him.
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** Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Evil Overlord}}s and isn't even that strong compared tothem.them.
** Crimer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very, very good at being an ordinary gangster]], and Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
** The heroes defeat the BigBad in the first episode.
** After Dr. Destructo is defeated, Crimer steps in -- an ordinary gangster, compared to the powerful scientist before him.
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** Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Evil Overlord}}s and isn't even that strong compared to
** Crimer may be an ordinary gangster, but [[BadassNormal he's very, very good at being an ordinary gangster]], and Bob has far more trouble with him than he did with Destructo.
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** Each opponent defeated directly affects the goals of the next. Without Crimer's drug cartel, Dr. Destructo lost the distribution network for the PsychoSerum he was trying to inject people with. Without Dr. Destructo, Emperor Evulz no longer has a way to build the mutant army he needed. And without Evulz's authority and influence over the planet, Queen Terra's entire plan for galactic dominance has been jeopardized.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, and isn't even that strong compared to them.
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* '''Double Subverted''': Except it turns out that the supposed BigBad was just one of many {{Eldritch Abomination}}s, {{Evil Overlord}}s and isn't even that strong compared to them.
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* '''Parodied''': While facing off against Bob, the villains organize themselves from weakest to strongest and fight Bob one-by-one.
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* '''Parodied''': While facing off against Bob, the villains organize themselves get in a line from weakest to strongest and fight Bob one-by-one.