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* '''Straight''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and gets [[TakenForGranite turned into gold]].
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* '''Straight''': The hero [[TheHero Bob]] and villain Emperor Evulz have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero Bob is inches away from it, the villain Evulz appears and grabs it himself...and gets [[TakenForGranite turned into gold]].
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* '''Downplayed''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and his hands get turned into gold.
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* '''Downplayed''': The hero Bob and villain Emperor Evulz have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero Bob is inches away from it, the villain Evulz appears and grabs it himself...and his hands get turned into gold.
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* '''Inverted''': The hero Bob and villain Emperor Evulz have been trying to avoid ending up with Pandora's box for months. When the villain Evulz gets it (wrapped up like a birthday present), it unleashes torment on him.
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'''Subverted''': ???
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The author originally wrote the ending with Bob getting the [=MacGuffin=]. However, the editor thinks he's more saleable as the underdog rather than a rich guy. He makes the author write in a reason why the hero doesn't have the [=MacGuffin=] after spending all this time chasing it.
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-->'''Bob''': Wouldn't you know it -- you spend all that time looking for something and it's an ArtifactOfDoom.
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-->'''Bob''': Wouldn't you know it -- you spend all that time looking for something and it's an ArtifactOfDoom.
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'''Basic Trope''': Object that everyone wants that will kill you if you try to use it.
* '''Straight''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and gets [[TakenForGranite turned into gold]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Every artifact comes with some kind of deadly catch.
* '''Downplayed''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and his hands get turned into gold.
* '''Justified''': ???
* '''Inverted''': The hero and villain have been trying to avoid ending up with Pandora's box for months. When the villain gets it (wrapped up like a birthday present), it unleashes torment on him.
* '''Subverted''':
* '''Double Subverted''':
* '''Parodied''': ???
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': No {{MacGuffin}}s appear in the story.
* '''Enforced''': ???
* '''Lampshaded''':
* '''Invoked''': One of the past owners of the [=MacGuffin=] cursed it.
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* '''Defied''':
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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You could take this link back to the fabled FatalMacGuffin, but I wouldn't. I really wouldn't.
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* '''Straight''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and gets [[TakenForGranite turned into gold]].
* '''Exaggerated''': Every artifact comes with some kind of deadly catch.
* '''Downplayed''': The hero and villain have been trying to track down the Golden Fleece for months. Just when the hero is inches away from it, the villain appears and grabs it himself...and his hands get turned into gold.
* '''Justified''': ???
* '''Inverted''': The hero and villain have been trying to avoid ending up with Pandora's box for months. When the villain gets it (wrapped up like a birthday present), it unleashes torment on him.
* '''Subverted''':
* '''Double Subverted''':
* '''Parodied''': ???
* '''Zig Zagged''': ???
* '''Averted''': No {{MacGuffin}}s appear in the story.
* '''Enforced''': ???
* '''Lampshaded''':
* '''Invoked''': One of the past owners of the [=MacGuffin=] cursed it.
* '''Exploited''':
* '''Defied''':
* '''Discussed''': ???
* '''Conversed''': ???
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You could take this link back to the fabled FatalMacGuffin, but I wouldn't. I really wouldn't.
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