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* The villagers' torture of Giselle, repeatedly dunking her head in a pot of sewage. [[{{Squick}} Yuck.]]
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* The villagers' torture [[JackBauerInterrogationTechnique interrogation-cum-torture]] of Giselle, repeatedly dunking her head in a pot of sewage. [[{{Squick}} Yuck.]]
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* Nellie's [[https://lpix.org/3031250/208.png insane grin]] [[SanitySlippage (and oddly carefree behavior)]] after she cuts off the White-Haired Girl's hair in a fit of rage and [[CreepySouvenir wears it as a wig.]]
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* Nellie's [[https://lpix.org/3031250/208.org/3031248/207.png insane grin]] [[SanitySlippage (and oddly carefree behavior)]] after she cuts off the White-Haired Girl's hair in a fit of rage and [[CreepySouvenir wears it as a wig.]]
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* Most of the BGM from Yukimasa's chapter. There's just something...''off'' about most of the music.
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* Maria's [[TheBlackDeath fate.]] And despite her best efforts, her next incarnation also suffers for the sins of others.
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* Maria's [[TheBlackDeath fate.]] fate]], shown in rather graphic detail. And despite her best efforts, her next incarnation also suffers for the sins of others.
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* Barnier's [[OffWithHisHead decapitated head]] appearing in Jacopo's nightmares to taunt him.
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* Maria's [[TheBlackDeath fate.]] And despite her best efforts, her next incarnation also suffers for the sins of others.
* Maria's [[TheBlackDeath fate.]] And despite her best efforts, her next incarnation also suffers for the sins of others.
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* [[BitchInSheepsClothing Aimee's]] six-month torture of Michel. Too weak to fight back, he has to resort to degrading himself just to survive. Also the fact that he goes without water for nearly a week, with no one realizing he's almost dead until it's too late.
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* [[BitchInSheepsClothing Aimee's]] six-month torture of Michel. Too weak to fight back, he has to resort to degrading himself just to survive. Also the fact that he goes without water for nearly a week, with no one realizing he's almost dead until it's nearly too late.
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* [[BitchInSheepsClothing Aimee's]] six-month torture of Michel. Too weak to fight back, he has to resort to degrading himself just to survive. Also the fact that he goes without water for nearly a week, with almost no one realizing he's almost dead until it's too late.
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* Michel's existence after he dies and his earthly body is destroyed. His soul wanders around aimlessly, never at rest, for hundreds of years before he finds his way back to the mansion.
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* Nellie's [[https://lpix.org/3031250/208.png insane grin]] [[SanitySlippage (and oddly carefree behavior)]] after she cuts off the White-Haired Girl's hair in a fit of rage and [[CreepySouvenir wears it as a wig.]]
* Nellie's [[https://lpix.org/3031250/208.png insane grin]] [[SanitySlippage (and oddly carefree behavior)]] after she cuts off the White-Haired Girl's hair in a fit of rage and [[CreepySouvenir wears it as a wig.]]
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** You get a good look at her state just before death a couple of times in the original visual novel too, rotting face, [[ThousandYardStare dead-eyed stare]] and all. By the time Michel convinces Jacopo to free her, her mind has also completely fractured, and they find her pretty much rotting while alive and having a conversation with herself.
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* Barnier forcing Morgana [[ImAHumanitarian to eat another slave's brother.]]
* Barnier forcing Morgana [[ImAHumanitarian to eat another slave's brother.]]
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!! ''The House in Fata Morgana:''
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!! ''The House in Fata Morgana:''Morgana''
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!! ''A Requiem for Innocence:''Innocence''
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-->'''Jacopo:''' Some wounds were older, and had already scabbed over; some were swollen, bright red protrusions on her pale skin; [[{{Squick}} some were oozing pus;]] and others were so fresh they were still bleeding.
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-->'''Jacopo:''' Some wounds were older, and had already scabbed over; some were swollen, bright red protrusions on her pale skin; [[{{Squick}} some were oozing pus;]] and others were so fresh they were still bleeding.bleeding.
* Barnier's perpetually [[TheUnblinking unblinking]], wide-eyed expression.
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* Morgana's fate when she was alive - even more horrifying if you are {{squeamish}}. And in ''Requiem for Innocence'', you get to see exactly the kinds of wounds the [[AristocratsAreEvil nobles]] inflicted on her.
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* Morgana's fate when she was alive - even more horrifying if you are {{squeamish}}.[[AfraidOfBlood squeamish]]. And in ''Requiem for Innocence'', you get to see exactly the kinds of wounds the [[AristocratsAreEvil nobles]] inflicted on her.
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* The very thought of living alone for years (Michel), or in Giselle's case ''centuries'', with nothing but a disembodied young girl's voice to keep you company, and said girl ''[[MotorMouth never stops talking]]''. It's a wonder that Giselle managed to stay sane as long as she did
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* The very thought of living alone for years (Michel), or in Giselle's case ''centuries'', with nothing but a disembodied young girl's voice to keep you company, and said girl ''[[MotorMouth never stops talking]]''. It's a wonder that Giselle managed to stay sane as long as she did
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* The very thought of living alone for years (Michel), or in Giselle's case ''centuries'', with nothing but a disembodied young girl's voice to keep you company, and said girl ''[[MotorMouth never stops talking]]''. It's a wonder that Giselle managed to stay sane as long as she did
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-->'''Jacopo:''' Some wounds were older, and had already scabbed over; some were swollen, bright red protrusions on her pale skin; [[{{Squick}} some were oozing pus; pus;]] and others were so fresh they were still bleeding.
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!! ''The House in Fata Morgana:''
!! ''A Requiem for Innocence:''
!! ''A Requiem for Innocence:''
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* Barnier's treatment of Morgana and Jacopo's description of her [[BodyHorror wounds:]]
-->'''Jacopo:''' Some wounds were older, and had already scabbed over; some were swollen, bright red protrusions on her pale skin; some were oozing pus; and others were so fresh they were still bleeding.
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* Barnier's treatment of Morgana and Jacopo's description of her [[BodyHorror wounds:]]
-->'''Jacopo:''' Some wounds were older, and had already scabbed over; some were swollen, bright red protrusions on her pale skin; some were oozing pus; and others were so fresh they were still bleeding.
