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* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularly its [[spoiler: humanoid face]].
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* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularly its [[spoiler: humanoid face]].face.
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Uncanny Valley is IUEO now and the subjective version has been split; cleaning up misuse and ZCE in the process
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* Wilbur Whately, a grotesque seven-foot-tall man with a goat-like face. UncannyValley doesn't even begin to describe him.
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* Wilbur Whately, a grotesque seven-foot-tall man with a goat-like face. UncannyValley doesn't even begin to describe him.
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* Wilbur Whately, a grotesque 7 foot tall man with a goat-like face. UncannyValley doesn't even begin to describe him.
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularly it's [[spoiler: humanoid face]].
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularly it's [[spoiler: humanoid face]].
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* Wilbur Whately, a grotesque 7 foot tall seven-foot-tall man with a goat-like face. UncannyValley doesn't even begin to describe him.
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularlyit's its [[spoiler: humanoid face]].
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself, particularly
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* Wilbur Whately, my goodness!
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* Wilbur Whately, my goodness!
a grotesque 7 foot tall man with a goat-like face. UncannyValley doesn't even begin to describe him.
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearanceitself.itself, particularly it's [[spoiler: humanoid face]].
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance
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* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself.itself.
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* The Horror's second rampage, where we actually hear the poor woman on the phone describing the invisible Horror coming closer and closer until there's the horrible crunching sound of the house being destroyed and the phone goes dead.
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rampage which results in an entire family being wiped out.
* Wilbur Whately, mygoodness!goodness!
* [[EldritchAbomination The Horror's]] appearance itself.
* Wilbur Whately, my
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* The Horror's rampage.
* Wilbur Whately, my goodness!
* Wilbur Whately, my goodness!
