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** The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.

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** The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard [[TheStoic cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.
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'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''\\

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'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''\\'''''GOOD!'''''
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--->'''Kayaba''': Trust me, you won't be seeing that player respawn anytime soon. Let that be a lesson for all those who dare-
--->'''Female Player''': ''Denny! Oh God no, Denny! Nooo!''
-->'''Kayaba''': Oh I'm sorry, was he perhaps a friend of yours?
--->'''Female Player''': ''That was my brother! Why?! Why would you do this, Kayaba?! You're a monster! MONSTER-''
--->''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via HandBlast) Would anyone else care to share their concerns for those fallen players?
--->'''Random Player''': [[TemptingFate Uh-]]
--->'''Kayaba''': (CUE [[EyeBeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''
--->'''Everyone else''': ''NO!''
--->'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''

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--->'''Kayaba''': Trust me, you won't be seeing that player respawn anytime soon. Let that be a lesson for all those who dare-
--->'''Female
dare-\\
'''Female
Player''': ''Denny! Oh God no, Denny! Nooo!''
-->'''Kayaba''':
Nooo!''\\
'''Kayaba''':
Oh I'm sorry, was he perhaps a friend of yours?
--->'''Female
yours?\\
'''Female
Player''': ''That was my brother! Why?! Why would you do this, Kayaba?! You're a monster! MONSTER-''
--->'''
MONSTER-''\\
'''
Kayaba:''' (kills her via HandBlast) Would anyone else care to share their concerns for those fallen players?
--->'''Random
players?\\
'''Random
Player''': [[TemptingFate Uh-]]
--->'''Kayaba''':
Uh-]]\\
'''Kayaba''':
(CUE [[EyeBeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''
--->'''Everyone
ELSE?!'''\\
'''Everyone
else''': ''NO!''
--->'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''
''NO!''\\
'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''\\

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'''Episode 1'''

Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT [[PlayedForDrama played for laughs]], as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.

-> '''Kayaba''': (deadly cold) ''- and I knew I had to punish each, and everyone one of you.''

After this, a player attempts to dismiss his claims... and Kayaba kills him with a HandBlast.
-> '''Kayaba''': Trust me, you won't be seeing that player respawn anytime soon. Let that be a lesson for all those who dare-
-> '''Female Player''': ''Denny! Oh God no, Denny! Nooo!''
-> '''Kayaba''': Oh I'm sorry, was he perhaps a friend of yours?
-> '''Female Player''': ''That was my brother! Why?! Why would you do this, Kayaba?! You're a monster! MONSTER-''
-> ''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via HandBlast) Would anyone else care to share their concerns for those fallen players?
-> '''Random Player''': [[TemptingFate Uh-]]
-> '''Kayaba''': (CUE [[EyeBeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''
-> '''Everyone else''': ''NO!''
-> '''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''

The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.

'''Episode 2'''

The players eyes after the light sears them- it looks incredibly off.

'''Episode 3'''

In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than ''[[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]''

The Moonlight Black Cats are led into the dungeon where they are trapped- [[spoiler: because Ducker, their [[TokenEvilTeammate teammate]], led them there with the intent of them being killed while he escaped... or he would have if they weren't in a room that negated crystals. Trusting someone close to you only to find out that they were plotting your death?]][[SarcasmMode Good luck sleeping tonight.]]

After the Moonlight Black Cats are wiped out and he finds out that the item that can revive players only works within ten seconds, Kirito crosses the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Even Horizon]] and goes to encounter Nicholas the Renegade in order to ''[[SuicideByCop die by his hand.]]'' Only by [[spoiler: encountering [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing]] does he show any sign of hope again.]]

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* '''Episode 1'''

1'''
**
Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT [[PlayedForDrama played for laughs]], as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.

-> '''Kayaba''':
say.
--->'''Kayaba''':
(deadly cold) ''- and ''And I knew I had to punish each, and everyone one of you.''

''
**
After this, a player attempts to dismiss his claims... and Kayaba kills him with a HandBlast.
-> '''Kayaba''': --->'''Kayaba''': Trust me, you won't be seeing that player respawn anytime soon. Let that be a lesson for all those who dare-
-> '''Female --->'''Female Player''': ''Denny! Oh God no, Denny! Nooo!''
-> '''Kayaba''': -->'''Kayaba''': Oh I'm sorry, was he perhaps a friend of yours?
-> '''Female --->'''Female Player''': ''That was my brother! Why?! Why would you do this, Kayaba?! You're a monster! MONSTER-''
-> ''' --->''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via HandBlast) Would anyone else care to share their concerns for those fallen players?
-> '''Random --->'''Random Player''': [[TemptingFate Uh-]]
-> '''Kayaba''': --->'''Kayaba''': (CUE [[EyeBeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''
-> '''Everyone --->'''Everyone else''': ''NO!''
-> '''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''

--->'''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''
**
The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.

switch.
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'''Episode 2'''

2'''
**
The players eyes after the light sears them- them; it looks incredibly off.

off.
*
'''Episode 3'''

3'''
**
In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] stuff. If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than ''[[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]''

]]''
**
The Moonlight Black Cats are led into the dungeon where they are trapped- [[spoiler: trapped, because Ducker, their [[TokenEvilTeammate teammate]], led them there with the intent of them being killed while he escaped... or he would have if they weren't in a room that negated crystals. Trusting someone close to you only to find out that they were plotting your death?]][[SarcasmMode death? [[SarcasmMode Good luck sleeping tonight.]]

]]
**
After the Moonlight Black Cats are wiped out and he finds out that the item that can revive players only works within ten seconds, Kirito crosses the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Even Horizon]] and goes to encounter Nicholas the Renegade in order to ''[[SuicideByCop die by his hand.]]'' Only by [[spoiler: encountering [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing]] does he show any sign of hope again.]]
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After the Moonlight Black Cats are wiped out and he finds out that the item that can revive players only works within ten seconds,Kirito crosses the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Even Horizon]] and goes to encounter Nicholas the Renegade in order to ''[[SuicideByCop die by his hand.]]'' Only by [[spoiler: encountering [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing]] does he show any sign of hope.]]

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After the Moonlight Black Cats are wiped out and he finds out that the item that can revive players only works within ten seconds,Kirito seconds, Kirito crosses the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Even Horizon]] and goes to encounter Nicholas the Renegade in order to ''[[SuicideByCop die by his hand.]]'' Only by [[spoiler: encountering [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing]] does he show any sign of hope.hope again.]]
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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than ''[[TheDreaded ''Laughing Coffin.]]]]''

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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than ''[[TheDreaded ''Laughing Laughing Coffin.]]]]''
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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded ''Laughing Coffin''.]]]]

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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded ''[[TheDreaded ''Laughing Coffin''.]]]]
Coffin.]]]]''
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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff. If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]

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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, [[spoiler: he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely ''no problem'' in ''maiming or killing them'' to get their stuff. stuff.]] If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.''Laughing Coffin''.]]]]
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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely no problem in maiming or killing them to get their stuff. If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their school bus to kill Keita. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]

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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely no problem ''no problem'' in maiming ''maiming or killing them them'' to get their stuff. If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their [[ItMakesSenseInContext school bus to kill Keita.Keita]]. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]
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In his previous appearance, Klein was just an asshole who laughed at Kirito's problems. But here, he not only doesn't believe that Kayaba made SAO a death game, but he and his guild ambush players, rob them and have absolutely no problem in maiming or killing them to get their stuff. If that wasn't enough, [[spoiler: he even stole from the Holy Dragon Alliance and used their school bus to kill Keita. At the end of the episode, he gets confronted and offered a proposition by none other than [[TheDreaded Laughing Coffin.]]]]

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The Moonlight Black Cats are led into the dungeon where they are trapped- [[spoiler: because Ducker, their teammate, intentionally trapped them there with the intent of them being killed. Trusting someone close to you only to find out that they were plotting your death?]][[SarcasmMode Good luck sleeping tonight.]]

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The Moonlight Black Cats are led into the dungeon where they are trapped- [[spoiler: because Ducker, their teammate, intentionally trapped [[TokenEvilTeammate teammate]], led them there with the intent of them being killed.killed while he escaped... or he would have if they weren't in a room that negated crystals. Trusting someone close to you only to find out that they were plotting your death?]][[SarcasmMode Good luck sleeping tonight.]]

After the Moonlight Black Cats are wiped out and he finds out that the item that can revive players only works within ten seconds,Kirito crosses the [[DespairEventHorizon Despair Even Horizon]] and goes to encounter Nicholas the Renegade in order to ''[[SuicideByCop die by his hand.]]'' Only by [[spoiler: encountering [[TheArtifact The Blue Thing]] does he show any sign of hope.
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Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT [[PlayedForDrama played for laughs]], as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarrier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.

to:

Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT [[PlayedForDrama played for laughs]], as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarrier scarier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.



The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.

to:

The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.switch.

'''Episode 2'''

The players eyes after the light sears them- it looks incredibly off.

'''Episode 3'''

The Moonlight Black Cats are led into the dungeon where they are trapped- [[spoiler: because Ducker, their teammate, intentionally trapped them there with the intent of them being killed. Trusting someone close to you only to find out that they were plotting your death?]][[SarcasmMode Good luck sleeping tonight.]]
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Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT Played For Laughs, as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarrier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.

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Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT Played For Laughs, [[PlayedForDrama played for laughs]], as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarrier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.
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-> '''Kayaba''': (CUE [[Eyebeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''

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-> '''Kayaba''': (CUE [[Eyebeams [[EyeBeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''



-> '''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!'''''

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-> '''Kayaba''': '''''GOOD!''''''''''GOOD!'''''

The way that Kayaba flips back between [[MagnificentBastard cool and collected]], [[AffablyEvil cheery]] and [[SuddenlyShouting murderously angry]] is deeply unsettling and there is little telling when he will switch or what triggers him to switch.

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After this, a player attempts to dismiss his claims... and Kayaba kills him with a Finger Bang.

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After this, a player attempts to dismiss his claims... and Kayaba kills him with a Finger Bang. HandBlast.



-> ''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via Finger Bang) Would anyone else care to
-> '''Kayaba''': (ENERGY BLAST FROM HIS FACE KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''

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-> ''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via Finger Bang) HandBlast) Would anyone else care to
to share their concerns for those fallen players?
-> '''Random Player''': [[TemptingFate Uh-]]
-> '''Kayaba''': (ENERGY BLAST (CUE [[Eyebeams ENERGY BLAST]] FROM HIS CLOAKED FACE THAT KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''



-> '''Kayaba''': '''GOOD!'''

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-> '''Kayaba''': '''GOOD!''''''''GOOD!'''''
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'''Episode 1'''

Akihiko Kayaba as he reveals that they are trapped inside the game and would die if their headgear is removed. The scene is NOT Played For Laughs, as Klein RapidFireNo's at this information. Arguably scarrier is where Kayaba reveals that he did want to create a game for everyone to enjoy- but in the process of researching modern day game-players, he had this to say.

-> '''Kayaba''': (deadly cold) ''- and I knew I had to punish each, and everyone one of you.''

After this, a player attempts to dismiss his claims... and Kayaba kills him with a Finger Bang.
-> '''Kayaba''': Trust me, you won't be seeing that player respawn anytime soon. Let that be a lesson for all those who dare-
-> '''Female Player''': ''Denny! Oh God no, Denny! Nooo!''
-> '''Kayaba''': Oh I'm sorry, was he perhaps a friend of yours?
-> '''Female Player''': ''That was my brother! Why?! Why would you do this, Kayaba?! You're a monster! MONSTER-''
-> ''' Kayaba:''' (kills her via Finger Bang) Would anyone else care to
-> '''Kayaba''': (ENERGY BLAST FROM HIS FACE KILLS THE PLAYER) '''ANYONE ELSE?!'''
-> '''Everyone else''': ''NO!''
-> '''Kayaba''': '''GOOD!'''

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