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I'm sure the doorbell is a hallucination.
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*** The blood itself might add to the horror, or at least the amount does. It could be from Ame, but it would be hard to hide the wounds which result in that much blood, even with a costume. In another ending however, at least one stray cat was mentioned...
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms down and starts rambling about making curry. It's probable she just butchered one of her harassers.
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms down and starts rambling about making curry. It's probable she just butchered one of her harassers.
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*** The blood itself might add to the horror, or at least the amount does. It could be from Ame, but it would be hard to hide the wounds which result in that much blood, even with a costume. In another ending one off-hand conversation however, at least one stray cat was mentioned...
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms downmentioned, and starts rambling she also rambled about making curry. It's probable curry and a cat prior. Was she just butchered one of her harassers.so insane that ''she killed that cat to make curry?''
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms down
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*** The blood itself might add to the horror, or at least the amount does. It could be from Ame, but it would be hard to hide the wounds which result in that much blood, even with a costume. In another ending however, at least one stray cat was mentioned..
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*** The blood itself might add to the horror, or at least the amount does. It could be from Ame, but it would be hard to hide the wounds which result in that much blood, even with a costume. In another ending however, at least one stray cat was mentioned.. mentioned...
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms down and starts rambling about making curry. It's probable she just butchered one of her harassers.
*** It's unclear whether the doorbell ringing is a hallucination or if there really was someone at the door-and right after the ringing quiets down, Ame suddenly calms down and starts rambling about making curry. It's probable she just butchered one of her harassers.
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*** The blood itself might add to the horror, or at least the amount does. It could be from Ame, but it would be hard to hide the wounds which result in that much blood, even with a costume. In another ending however, at least one stray cat was mentioned..
