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!!!Chapter 24: A COMPLETE MESS
* Taiichiro tricks Kinugawa into revealing himself by pretending to leave the apartment, telling him that the broken window's fracture pattern couldn't have possibly come from a thrown rock (which [[SpannerInTheWorks Yuda]] threw to warn Kinugawa of Taiichiro's presence in the first place). When he realizes that he's in trouble, Kinugawa immediately moves to kick Taiichiro in the face, which the latter easily dodges before sweeping Kinugawa off his feet. As Kinugawa scrambles to throw things at Taiichiro in order to escape, he ends up grabbing a framed photo of Taiichiro with Mari and Kiritaka from when the latter was a baby. Noticing Taiichiro's [[OhCrap reaction]] from this, Kinugawa quickly realizes the photo is Taiichiro's weakness and callously crushes it in his hand. A seemingly random robber has broken into his home and destroyed one of the few precious memories he has left of his broken family? No wonder Taiichiro snaps.
-->"YOU'RE FUCKING DEAD, YOU LITTLE SHIT!"
* Unfortunately, Taiichiro has become BlindedByRage, [[CombatPragmatist just as Kinugawa intended]], and as he lunges at Kinugawa the latter tosses him the broken frame to block his line of sight before punching it into his face. Kinugawa then spends the next minute [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown mercilessly turning Taiichiro's face into a bloody mess]]. Attentive readers will even notice that [[EyeScream there's a glass shard embedded in Taiichiro's eye]]. ''Ouch.''
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* [[TheSociopath Nozomu]] [[TeensAreMonsters Okaya]]. A teenager who can convincingly portray himself as a charming and kind-hearted young man but is, in reality, a ruthless and remorseless sociopath who sadistically brutalizes anyone he likes [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]! Even worse is how he never raises his voice nor drops his smile even when saying or doing the most horrific things. What sells it is how his eyes look downright [[EmptyEyes dead]], emphasizing his utter lack of humanity. The reason he bullies Kiritaka and makes his life a living hell? [[DisproportionateRetribution Because he didn't like the defiant look in Kiritaka's eyes]]! When Kiritaka eventually dies, Okaya is furious because he can't torment him anymore, feeling like he "won."

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* [[TheSociopath Nozomu]] [[TeensAreMonsters Okaya]]. Nozomu Okaya. A teenager {{teen|sAreMonsters}}ager who can convincingly [[VillainWithGoodPublicity portray himself himself]] as [[BigManOnCampus a charming and kind-hearted young man man]] but is, [[BitchInSheepsClothing in reality, reality]], [[TheSociopath a ruthless and remorseless sociopath sociopath]] who sadistically brutalizes anyone he likes [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]! Even worse is how [[SoftSpokenSadist he never raises his voice nor drops his smile even when saying or doing the most horrific things.things]]. What sells it is how his eyes look downright [[EmptyEyes dead]], emphasizing his utter lack of humanity. The reason he bullies Kiritaka and makes his life a living hell? [[DisproportionateRetribution Because he didn't like the defiant look in Kiritaka's eyes]]! When Kiritaka eventually dies, Okaya is furious because he can't torment him anymore, feeling like he "won."
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** Also, Okaya's face when Kinugawa promises he will not give their names away if he gets caught by the authorities. It's clear he's pleased with that so he and Mutta do not get under the police's radar.

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** Also, Okaya's face smile when Kinugawa promises he will not give their names away if he gets caught by the authorities. It's clear he's pleased with that so he doesn't care if his so-called "friend" gets caught [[ItsAllAboutMe as long as he and Mutta do not get under the police's radar.radar]].
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* [[TheSociopath Nozomu]] [[TeensAreMonsters Okaya]]. A teenager who can convincingly portray himself as a charming and kind-hearted young man but is, in reality, a ruthless and remorseless sociopath who sadistically brutalizes anyone he likes [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]! Even worse is how he never raises his voice nor drops his smile even when saying or doing the most horrific things. What sells it is how his eyes look downright [[EmptyEyes dead]], emphasizing his utter lack of humanity. The reason he bullies Kiritaka and makes his life a living hell? [[DisproportionateRetribution Because he didn't like the defiant look in Kiritaka's eyes]]!

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* [[TheSociopath Nozomu]] [[TeensAreMonsters Okaya]]. A teenager who can convincingly portray himself as a charming and kind-hearted young man but is, in reality, a ruthless and remorseless sociopath who sadistically brutalizes anyone he likes [[ForTheEvulz simply because he can]]! Even worse is how he never raises his voice nor drops his smile even when saying or doing the most horrific things. What sells it is how his eyes look downright [[EmptyEyes dead]], emphasizing his utter lack of humanity. The reason he bullies Kiritaka and makes his life a living hell? [[DisproportionateRetribution Because he didn't like the defiant look in Kiritaka's eyes]]!eyes]]! When Kiritaka eventually dies, Okaya is furious because he can't torment him anymore, feeling like he "won."
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** Also, Okaya's face when Kinugawa promises he will not give their names away if he gets caught by the authorities. It's clear he's pleased with that so he and Mutta do not get under the police's radar.
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* Maria [[NoJustNoReaction rejects having Yuda as her helper]], revealing that [[CaughtOnTape she recorded his confession to killing Iijima]] and warns him to get out of the car or she will go to the police with the confession. But as Maria drives away and looks at her rearview mirror, Yuda has this twisted smile on him and reveals that he has not given up on helping her. Yuda's guilt and trauma have twisted him into a murderer, and while his targets [[AssholeVictim are scumbags that deserve to die]], it's unnerving to see how dedicated he is to Maria and how driven he is in wanting to kill his targets.

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* Maria [[NoJustNoReaction rejects having Yuda as her helper]], revealing that [[CaughtOnTape she recorded his confession to killing Iijima]] and warns him to get out of the car or she will go to the police with the confession. But as Maria drives away and looks at her rearview mirror, Yuda has this [[SlasherSmile twisted smile smile]] on him and reveals him, indicating that he has not given up on helping her. Yuda's guilt and trauma have twisted him into a murderer, and while his targets [[AssholeVictim are scumbags that deserve to die]], it's unnerving to see how dedicated he is to Maria and how driven he is in wanting to kill his targets.

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* Maria [[NoJustNoReaction rejects having Yuda as her helper]], revealing that [[CaughtOnTape she recorded his confession to killing Iijima]] and warns him to get out of the car or she will go to the police with the confession. But as Maria drives away and looks at her rearview mirror, Akihiro Yuda has this twisted smile on him and reveals that he has not given up on helping her. Akihiro's guilt and trauma have twisted him into a murderer, and while his targets are scumbags that deserve to die, it's nerving to see how dedicated he is to Maria and how satanic he is in wanting to kill his targets.
* Nozomu Okaya and Tsuyoshi Kinugawa suspect that Inspector Taiichiro Nagare has murdered their two friends, so Kinugawa is looking for evidence in his house while he's away. It's horrifying that Taiichiro Nagare is on that two radar for suspecting their friend's murder and the fact that that monster Kinugawa, Who is known to brutally beat people, is in Taiichiro House and could be his next victim.

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* Maria [[NoJustNoReaction rejects having Yuda as her helper]], revealing that [[CaughtOnTape she recorded his confession to killing Iijima]] and warns him to get out of the car or she will go to the police with the confession. But as Maria drives away and looks at her rearview mirror, Akihiro Yuda has this twisted smile on him and reveals that he has not given up on helping her. Akihiro's Yuda's guilt and trauma have twisted him into a murderer, and while his targets [[AssholeVictim are scumbags that deserve to die, die]], it's nerving unnerving to see how dedicated he is to Maria and how satanic driven he is in wanting to kill his targets.
* Nozomu Okaya and Tsuyoshi Kinugawa suspect that Inspector Taiichiro Nagare has murdered their two friends, so Kinugawa is looking decides to break into his home to look for evidence in his house while he's away. It's horrifying that Taiichiro Nagare is on that two their radar for suspecting their friend's murder and friends' murder, along with the fact that that monster Kinugawa, Who a monster who is known to brutally beat people, [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown brutalize people]] at [[HairTriggerTemper the slightest provocation]], is in Taiichiro's house and could turn him into his next victim.
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Taiichiro House and could returns home for a change of clothes while Kinugawa is still inside. And the only person who's currently in any kind of position to do anything about it is Yuda, who was stalking Kinugawa to prove to Maria that he can still be his next victim.useful.
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!!!Chapter 23: THE FANATICS
* Maria [[NoJustNoReaction rejects having Yuda as her helper]], revealing that [[CaughtOnTape she recorded his confession to killing Iijima]] and warns him to get out of the car or she will go to the police with the confession. But as Maria drives away and looks at her rearview mirror, Akihiro Yuda has this twisted smile on him and reveals that he has not given up on helping her. Akihiro's guilt and trauma have twisted him into a murderer, and while his targets are scumbags that deserve to die, it's nerving to see how dedicated he is to Maria and how satanic he is in wanting to kill his targets.
* Nozomu Okaya and Tsuyoshi Kinugawa suspect that Inspector Taiichiro Nagare has murdered their two friends, so Kinugawa is looking for evidence in his house while he's away. It's horrifying that Taiichiro Nagare is on that two radar for suspecting their friend's murder and the fact that that monster Kinugawa, Who is known to brutally beat people, is in Taiichiro House and could be his next victim.
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** He became so entranced by the sight of Maria killing Kowase that he followed her all the way home, broke into her house and searched her room to learn more about her. While this is already creepy, when Yuda laid eyes on the altar Maria made for Kiritaka he decided that it was his destiny to help her. He then began following Maria ''everywhere'', blurring the line between LoonyFan and StalkerWithoutACrush (or perhaps ''[[StalkerWithACrush with]]'' a Crush, if his blushing is any indication).

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** He became so entranced by the sight of Maria killing Kowase that he followed her all the way home, broke into her house and searched her room to learn more about her. While this is already creepy, when Yuda laid eyes on the altar Maria made for Kiritaka he decided that it was his destiny to help her. He then began following Maria ''everywhere'', blurring the line between LoonyFan and StalkerWithoutACrush (or perhaps ''[[StalkerWithACrush with]]'' a Crush, if his blushing is any indication). The night Maria took Iijima to the love hotel? Yuda was in the next room, peeping through a hole in the wall. When Maria decided not to kill Iijima, [[OverzealousUnderling Yuda unilaterally decided to do it for her]], believing that this was his "mission."

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* This chapter shows much more about how Yuda's mind becomes disturbed because of the trauma and guilt he suffered. When he tried to kill Iijima by smashing his head with a hammer so that he wouldn't get in the way of Maria's revenge, he ended up accidentally pushing him downstairs, leading to his death by a broken neck. At that moment, as Yuda contemplated Iijima's corpse, he visualized Okaya in his place. While panting and "blushing" heavily. This chapter also makes clear how much he worshiped the ground Maria Akeboshi walks on for hunting down the bullies that killed his best friend and her son and that he is willing to be put at risk by offering himself as a tool for Maria (whom he idolizes), to atone for Kiritaka. It is clear that the guilt from his friend's death and the trauma he suffered from the bullies have twisted him into a killer in the making, and he is willing to be used to get revenge on the monsters who killed his friends

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* This chapter shows much more about how Yuda's mind becomes has become disturbed because of the trauma and guilt he suffered. suffered.
** He became so entranced by the sight of Maria killing Kowase that he followed her all the way home, broke into her house and searched her room to learn more about her. While this is already creepy, when Yuda laid eyes on the altar Maria made for Kiritaka he decided that it was his destiny to help her. He then began following Maria ''everywhere'', blurring the line between LoonyFan and StalkerWithoutACrush (or perhaps ''[[StalkerWithACrush with]]'' a Crush, if his blushing is any indication).
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When he Yuda tried to kill Iijima by smashing his head with a hammer so that he wouldn't get in the way of Maria's revenge, he ended up accidentally pushing him downstairs, leading to his death by a broken neck. At that moment, as Yuda contemplated Iijima's corpse, he visualized Okaya in his place. While panting and "blushing" blushing heavily. This chapter also makes clear how much [[LikeAGodToMe he worshiped worshipped the ground Maria Akeboshi walks on on]] for hunting down the bullies that killed Kiritaka, as Yuda voices his best friend and her son and that he is willing willingness to be put at risk by offering himself as a tool for Maria (whom he idolizes), idolizes) to use in order to atone for Kiritaka. It is clear that the guilt from his friend's death and the trauma he suffered from the bullies have twisted him into a killer in the making, and he is willing to be used to get revenge on the monsters who killed his friendsfriend.
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I'm making these changes because, despite the scary implications in this chapter, I think he was still sympathetic because of that scene where he looked at the shrine to Kiritaka Nagare. Also, I believe that it's clear that despite his desire to hunt and mutilate, his main motive is the guilt and trauma he suffered.


* This chapter shows much more about Yuda's disturbed mind. When he tried to kill Iijima by smashing his head with a hammer so that he wouldn't get in the way of Maria's revenge, he ended up accidentally pushing him down stairs, leading to his death by broken neck. In that moment, as Yuda contemplated Iijima's corpse, he visualized Okaya in his place. While panting and ''blushing'' heavily. He is willing to be put at risk by offering himself as a tool for Maria (whom he idolizes), not only to atone for Kiritaka, but to satisfy his twisted desires.

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* This chapter shows much more about how Yuda's mind becomes disturbed mind. because of the trauma and guilt he suffered. When he tried to kill Iijima by smashing his head with a hammer so that he wouldn't get in the way of Maria's revenge, he ended up accidentally pushing him down stairs, downstairs, leading to his death by a broken neck. In At that moment, as Yuda contemplated Iijima's corpse, he visualized Okaya in his place. While panting and ''blushing'' "blushing" heavily. He This chapter also makes clear how much he worshiped the ground Maria Akeboshi walks on for hunting down the bullies that killed his best friend and her son and that he is willing to be put at risk by offering himself as a tool for Maria (whom he idolizes), not only to atone for Kiritaka, but to satisfy Kiritaka. It is clear that the guilt from his friend's death and the trauma he suffered from the bullies have twisted desires.him into a killer in the making, and he is willing to be used to get revenge on the monsters who killed his friends

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