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* RapeAsBackstory: Dylan, [[spoiler: Hence his BeserkButton and BigBrotherInstinct.]]
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* ADateWithRosiePalms: Both Karen and Lisa talk about this as an outlet for their stress. Lisa, due to her increased libido and decreased impulse control, engages in this on the bus but at least tries ([[BrickJoke and fails]]) to be discrete.
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* MasturbationMeansSexualFrustration: Both Karen and Lisa talk about this as an outlet for their stress. Lisa, due to her increased libido and decreased impulse control, engages in this on the bus but at least tries ([[BrickJoke and fails]]) to be discrete.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Lisa and Tyler get on the bus together. Lisa is a hyperactive redheaded GenkiGirl and Tyler has a heart condition that leaves him both very lethargic and with a blue tint to his skin making this a more literal example than most.
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** Lisa and Tyler get on the bus together. Lisa is a hyperactive redheaded GenkiGirl and Tyler has a heart condition that leaves him both very lethargic and with a blue tint to his skin making this a more literal example thanmost.most.
** Mark is loud and acerbic, while Dylan is introspective and calm. [[BerserkButton Unless he sees a woman being threatened,]] at which point Dylan loses all control and Mark has to get him to chill out.
** Lisa and Tyler get on the bus together. Lisa is a hyperactive redheaded GenkiGirl and Tyler has a heart condition that leaves him both very lethargic and with a blue tint to his skin making this a more literal example than
** Mark is loud and acerbic, while Dylan is introspective and calm. [[BerserkButton Unless he sees a woman being threatened,]] at which point Dylan loses all control and Mark has to get him to chill out.
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* WhamLine: Vaughn drops the following bombshell in one of his journal entries:
--> Just get to the point. Say the words. You can do it.\\
Okay. Here it is.\\
[[spoiler: I killed my wife.]]\\
[[spoiler: I killed Carolyn.]]
--> Just get to the point. Say the words. You can do it.\\
Okay. Here it is.\\
[[spoiler: I killed my wife.]]\\
[[spoiler: I killed Carolyn.]]
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* BerserkButton: Dillon is a very chill guy, but threaten a woman in his presence and he ''will'' not hesitate to beat the crap out of you.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Dillon is fiercely protective of not only the girls on the bus, but even a stranger he sees in a hotel parking lot being threatened by her husband.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Dillon is fiercely protective of not only the girls on the bus, but even a stranger he sees in a hotel parking lot being threatened by her husband.
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* BerserkButton: Dillon Dylan is a very chill guy, but threaten a woman in his presence and he ''will'' not hesitate to beat the crap out of you.
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* DwindlingParty: Not everyone makes it to the end of the road together: [[spoiler: Only Soldier, Zeke, and Tyler die early. Shanelle decides to give life another shot after making friends on the bus, while Theresa, Jim, Mark, Karen, and Dillon all get kicked off for different reasons.]]
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* DwindlingParty: Not everyone makes it to the end of the road together: [[spoiler: Only Soldier, Zeke, and Tyler die early. Shanelle decides to give life another shot after making friends on the bus, while Theresa, Jim, Mark, Karen, and Dillon Dylan all get kicked off for different reasons.]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone figures out immediately after Dillon and Karen become a couple. [[spoiler: Which is why the remaining passengers kick them off the bus, so they can have a chance at a life together.]]
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* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone figures out immediately after Dillon Dylan and Karen become a couple. [[spoiler: Which is why the remaining passengers kick them off the bus, so they can have a chance at a life together.]]
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* ReturningWarVet: Dillon, the driver. Mark notes that "D" has a very strong protective instinct where the women on the bus are involved, and thinks it has something to do with his time in the Army. [[spoiler: [[DarkAndTroubledPast It doesn't]], and instead was a big part of why he enlisted.]]
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* ReturningWarVet: Dillon, Dylan, the driver. Mark notes that "D" has a very strong protective instinct where the women on the bus are involved, and thinks it has something to do with his time in the Army. [[spoiler: [[DarkAndTroubledPast It doesn't]], and instead was a big part of why he enlisted.]]
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* TraumaButton: Dillon [[spoiler: witnessed his sister's rape when he was a child]] and reacts [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown poorly]] to seeing women threatened.
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* TraumaButton: Dillon Dylan [[spoiler: witnessed his sister's rape when he was a child]] and reacts [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown poorly]] to seeing women threatened.
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''Together We Will Go: A Novel'' is an EpistolaryNovel about a group of strangers who decide to go on [[RoadTripPlot one last road trip]] together before they end their lives. It explores the reasons why people decide to commit suicide, why they decide ''not'' to, the politics surrounding suicide, and the different stories behind why all of these people decide to get on the bus.
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''Together We Will Go: A Novel'' is an EpistolaryNovel by Creator/JMichaelStraczynski about a group of strangers who decide to go on [[RoadTripPlot one last road trip]] together before they end their lives. It explores the reasons why people decide to commit suicide, why they decide ''not'' to, the politics surrounding suicide, and the different stories behind why all of these people decide to get on the bus.
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* HiddenDepths: As is typical for a JMS story, nobody is exactly as they appear at first. Even Theresa gets some sympathy once you hear her story. Some characters reveal their depths to each other in different ways, others provide revelation only to the reader, as nobody can read anyone else's journal entries unless given permission.
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* InsufferableGenius: Peter. He freely acknowledges it and gets that he's hard to like, though.
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* KnowWhenToFoldThem: [[spoiler: Mark doesn't try to reclaim his bus once he gets kicked off, but instead decides to let the situation play out. It's not his story anymore.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: After his lies are discovered by the others, Mark avoids admitting his own responsibility for the situation even in his own journal.]]
* NeverMyFault: [[spoiler: After his lies are discovered by the others, Mark avoids admitting his own responsibility for the situation even in his own journal.]]
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* CoversAlwaysLie: Both the hardcover and paperback copies prominently feature Soldier the cat. Soldier doesn't actually get on the bus until relatively late in the story, [[spoiler: and is the first character to leave the bus or die.]]
** The paperback edition depicts the bus with all of the human characters and Soldier driving off a cliff, which never happens in the book. [[spoiler: When the bus goes off the cliff, only four of the humans are still aboard.]]
** The paperback edition depicts the bus with all of the human characters and Soldier driving off a cliff, which never happens in the book. [[spoiler: When the bus goes off the cliff, only four of the humans are still aboard.]]
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What starts out as [[ASimplePlan a straightforward plan]] begins hitting roadblocks and taking detours (metaphorical and literal) with each new pickup ([[DwindlingParty and drop-off]]) of passengers, with the group dynamic constantly shifting along with the mix of personalities, [[UnreliableNarrator less-than-honest explanations]], [[DarkAndTroubledPast revelations about personal histories]], and [[CharacterDevelopment new possibilities.]] And all of that before the authorities find out about their little roadtrip.
Sometimes the only certain thing about any road trip is the end of the road. It's everything on the way that makes it worthwhile.
Sometimes the only certain thing about any road trip is the end of the road. It's everything on the way that makes it worthwhile.
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* RedOniBlueOni: Lisa and Tyler get on the bus together. Lisa is a hyperactive redheaded GenkiGirl and Tyler has a heart condition that leaves him both very lethargic and with a blue tint to his skin making this a more literal example than most.
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* Hypocrite: [[spoiler: Mark has no intention of killing himself, and is planning to exploit those he invited onto the bus because he isn't able to write a compelling story himself.]]
* Jerkass: More than a few on the bus, to include Mark, Lisa, Peter, and Theresa. [[spoiler: This gets Mark and Theresa both kicked off the bus, and it's assumed that Theresa subsequently called the cops on them out of spite.]]
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* Hypocrite: {{Hypocrite}}: [[spoiler: Mark has no intention of killing himself, and is planning to exploit those he invited onto the bus because he isn't able to write a compelling story himself.]]
*Jerkass: {{Jerkass}}: More than a few on the bus, to include Mark, Lisa, Peter, and Theresa. [[spoiler: This gets Mark and Theresa both kicked off the bus, and it's assumed that Theresa subsequently called the cops on them out of spite.]]
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* IWantToLive: [[spoiler: Shanelle found a new love for life thanks ironically to the friends she made on the bus, and returns home to her mom. Peter comes tantalizingly close to this revelation himself but his own stubbornness keeps him from vocalizing it before the end. Mark has a history of suicidal ideations, but never intended for anyone to actually kill themselves on the trip.]]
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* WorthLivingFor: [[spoiler: Shanelle found a new love for life thanks ironically to the friends she made on the bus, and returns home to her mom. Peter comes tantalizingly close to this revelation himself but his own stubbornness keeps him from vocalizing it before the end. Mark has a history of suicidal ideations, but never intended for anyone to actually kill themselves on the trip.]]
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* CuteKitten: Zeke's traveling companion, Soldier. Not a kitten, but very sick and on the verge of death.
* HotBlooded: Dillon and Vaughn. Vaughn is a little surprised to learn this about himself, having been [[SuppressedRage suppressing his anger for many years.]]
* IWantToLive: [[spoiler: Shanelle found a new love for life thanks ironically to the friends she made on the bus, and returns home to her mom. Peter comes tantalizingly close to this revelation himself but his own stubbornness keeps him from vocalizing it before the end. Mark has a history of suicidal ideations, but never intended for anyone to actually kill themselves on the trip.]]
* TitleDrop: The title of the book comes from something Vaughn's wife used to say about how they'd likely grow old and die together.
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!!Together We Will Go'' contains the following tropes:
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* BerserkButton: Dillon is a very chill guy, but threaten a woman in his presence and he ''will'' not hesitate to beat the crap out of you.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Dillon is fiercely protective of not only the girls on the bus, but even a stranger he sees in a hotel parking lot being threatened by her husband.
* CoolOldGuy: Vaughn, a well-dressed elderly man with a briefcase full of cash who doesn't hesitate to get in a fight to protect his fellow passengers.
* DarkSecret: There's a reason Vaughn is carting around all that cash. [[spoiler: He murdered his wife and ran off with the life insurance payout]]
* BerserkButton: Dillon is a very chill guy, but threaten a woman in his presence and he ''will'' not hesitate to beat the crap out of you.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Dillon is fiercely protective of not only the girls on the bus, but even a stranger he sees in a hotel parking lot being threatened by her husband.
* CoolOldGuy: Vaughn, a well-dressed elderly man with a briefcase full of cash who doesn't hesitate to get in a fight to protect his fellow passengers.
* DarkSecret: There's a reason Vaughn is carting around all that cash. [[spoiler: He murdered his wife and ran off with the life insurance payout]]
* DramaticIrony: The police have no idea that one of the folks they are chasing [[spoiler: is a murderer.]] They only care about the fact that they helped with [[spoiler: Zeke's suicide.]]
* DwindlingParty: Not everyone makes it to the end of the road together: [[spoiler: Only Soldier, Zeke, and Tyler die early. Shanelle decides to give life another shot after making friends on the bus, while Theresa, Jim, Mark, Karen, and Dillon all get kicked off for different reasons.]]
* DwindlingParty: Not everyone makes it to the end of the road together: [[spoiler: Only Soldier, Zeke, and Tyler die early. Shanelle decides to give life another shot after making friends on the bus, while Theresa, Jim, Mark, Karen, and Dillon all get kicked off for different reasons.]]
* EveryoneCanSeeIt: Everyone figures out immediately after Dillon and Karen become a couple. [[spoiler: Which is why the remaining passengers kick them off the bus, so they can have a chance at a life together.]]
* GenkiGirl: Lisa. [[{{Deconstruction}} It turns out to be due to her bipolar disorder]], and it has caused her no shortage of problems in her life.
* HateSink: Theresa is not liked by anyone on the bus, makes no attempts to befriend anyone beyond her fiancé Jim, and tries to pressure Mark into kicking Lisa off the bus (resulting directly in her and Jim getting left behind the next morning.)
* HateSink: Theresa is not liked by anyone on the bus, makes no attempts to befriend anyone beyond her fiancé Jim, and tries to pressure Mark into kicking Lisa off the bus (resulting directly in her and Jim getting left behind the next morning.)
* KindheartedCatLover: Zeke, who is taking his sick cat Soldier for one last adventure together.
* RapeAsBackstory: Dillon, [[spoiler: Hence his BeserkButton and BigBrotherInstinct.]]
* ReturningWarVet: Dillon, the driver. Mark notes that "D" has a very strong protective instinct where the women on the bus are involved, and thinks it has something to do with his time in the Army. [[spoiler: [[DarkAndTroubledPast It doesn't]], and instead was a big part of why he enlisted.]]
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* LiteraryAgentHypothesis: The introduction states that the book was originally an ApocalypticLog uploaded to a few websites before it was ordered taken down by the Utah Attorney General's office, before it was published amid a controversy that the AG was trying to cover up their own part in the events of the story.
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->''"Everyone says first-person narratives are bullshit, that there's no suspense because you know that [[PlotArmor whoever's talking can't die by the end of the story]], otherwise who's writing it? [[GoodbyeCruelWorld Well, by the time you read this I'll be dead]], along with maybe a dozen others, so I guess the joke's on you.//
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->''"Everyone says first-person narratives are bullshit, that there's no suspense because you know that [[PlotArmor whoever's talking can't die by the end of the story]], otherwise who's writing it? [[GoodbyeCruelWorld Well, by the time you read this I'll be dead]], along with maybe a dozen others, so I guess the joke's on you.//
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->''"Everyone says first-person narratives are bullshit, that there's no suspense because you know that [[PlotArmor whoever's talking can't die by the end of the story]], otherwise who's writing it? [[GoodbyeCruelWorld Well, by the time you read this I'll be dead]], along with maybe a dozen others, so I guess the joke's on you.//
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[[LampshadeHanging That's called the narrative hook]]."''
-->-- '''Mark Antonelli'''
''Together We Will Go: A Novel'' is an EpistolaryNovel about a group of strangers who decide to go on [[RoadTripPlot one last road trip]] together before they end their lives. It explores the reasons why people decide to commit suicide, why they decide ''not'' to, the politics surrounding suicide, and the different stories behind why all of these people decide to get on the bus.
!!Together We Will Go'' contains the following tropes:
* DeathSeeker: A bus full of them, plus the driver.
* EpistolaryNovel: The book is told through a collection of journal entries, audio recordings, emails, and text messages to and from the characters on the bus. Only the Intro and Outro are not written by or to them.
* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: AvertedTrope: The introduction leads the reader to assume everyone on the bus will die at the end of the story, but about half of them actually survive by getting off or getting kicked off the bus partway through the story, including Mark.]]
* HowWeGotHere: Going into the novel, the reader only knows that several people died, and the Utah Attorney General tried to stop the story from being distributed. [[spoiler: We learn by the end of the book that the remaining passengers of the bus died in a high-speed chase with the Utah State Police]].
* Hypocrite: [[spoiler: Mark has no intention of killing himself, and is planning to exploit those he invited onto the bus because he isn't able to write a compelling story himself.]]
* Jerkass: More than a few on the bus, to include Mark, Lisa, Peter, and Theresa. [[spoiler: This gets Mark and Theresa both kicked off the bus, and it's assumed that Theresa subsequently called the cops on them out of spite.]]
* LiteraryAgentHypothesis: The introduction states that the book was originally an ApocalypticLog uploaded to a few websites before it was ordered taken down by the Utah Attorney General's office, before it was published amid a controversy that the AG was trying to cover up their own part in the events of the story.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: The police's efforts to stop the group from committing suicide contribute to Peter's death, as he was having second thoughts near the end. The high-speed chase through Utah ends with the bus driving off of a convenient cliff before Peter had time to articulate his feelings.]]
* PublicServiceAnnouncement: The end of the book includes a message directly to the readers with information on how to contact the Suicide Prevention Hotline if they or someone they know is considering suicide.
* RevealingCoverup: The Utah AG's official efforts to pull the story from the internet are implied to be the [[StreisandEffect only reason anyone was interested enough in it to have it published]].
* RoadTripPlot: A group of strangers get on a bus headed towards the figurative end of the road.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Theresa. Everyone thinks she is a "Death Tourist" who has no intentions of killing herself, because she came on the bus with her fiancé, Jim, [[spoiler: who is secretly trying to convince her not to do it.]] When they get kicked off the bus, it is implied she called the cops on them [[spoiler: to report Zeke's assisted suicide.]]
->''[[FireForgedFriends Together we will go, together we will go, high ho the derry oh, Together we will go.]]''
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[[LampshadeHanging That's called the narrative hook]]."''
-->-- '''Mark Antonelli'''
''Together We Will Go: A Novel'' is an EpistolaryNovel about a group of strangers who decide to go on [[RoadTripPlot one last road trip]] together before they end their lives. It explores the reasons why people decide to commit suicide, why they decide ''not'' to, the politics surrounding suicide, and the different stories behind why all of these people decide to get on the bus.
!!Together We Will Go'' contains the following tropes:
* DeathSeeker: A bus full of them, plus the driver.
* EpistolaryNovel: The book is told through a collection of journal entries, audio recordings, emails, and text messages to and from the characters on the bus. Only the Intro and Outro are not written by or to them.
* ForegoneConclusion: [[spoiler: AvertedTrope: The introduction leads the reader to assume everyone on the bus will die at the end of the story, but about half of them actually survive by getting off or getting kicked off the bus partway through the story, including Mark.]]
* HowWeGotHere: Going into the novel, the reader only knows that several people died, and the Utah Attorney General tried to stop the story from being distributed. [[spoiler: We learn by the end of the book that the remaining passengers of the bus died in a high-speed chase with the Utah State Police]].
* Hypocrite: [[spoiler: Mark has no intention of killing himself, and is planning to exploit those he invited onto the bus because he isn't able to write a compelling story himself.]]
* Jerkass: More than a few on the bus, to include Mark, Lisa, Peter, and Theresa. [[spoiler: This gets Mark and Theresa both kicked off the bus, and it's assumed that Theresa subsequently called the cops on them out of spite.]]
* LiteraryAgentHypothesis: The introduction states that the book was originally an ApocalypticLog uploaded to a few websites before it was ordered taken down by the Utah Attorney General's office, before it was published amid a controversy that the AG was trying to cover up their own part in the events of the story.
* NiceJobBreakingItHero: [[spoiler: The police's efforts to stop the group from committing suicide contribute to Peter's death, as he was having second thoughts near the end. The high-speed chase through Utah ends with the bus driving off of a convenient cliff before Peter had time to articulate his feelings.]]
* PublicServiceAnnouncement: The end of the book includes a message directly to the readers with information on how to contact the Suicide Prevention Hotline if they or someone they know is considering suicide.
* RevealingCoverup: The Utah AG's official efforts to pull the story from the internet are implied to be the [[StreisandEffect only reason anyone was interested enough in it to have it published]].
* RoadTripPlot: A group of strangers get on a bus headed towards the figurative end of the road.
* SpannerInTheWorks: Theresa. Everyone thinks she is a "Death Tourist" who has no intentions of killing herself, because she came on the bus with her fiancé, Jim, [[spoiler: who is secretly trying to convince her not to do it.]] When they get kicked off the bus, it is implied she called the cops on them [[spoiler: to report Zeke's assisted suicide.]]
->''[[FireForgedFriends Together we will go, together we will go, high ho the derry oh, Together we will go.]]''
