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A 2016 [[{{Novella}} novella]] by Katilin Hellerich, her first published work.
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A 2016 [[{{Novella}} novella]] by Katilin Hellerich, Kaitlin Hillerich, her first published work.
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** [[spoiler: Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
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** [[spoiler: Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] wife with a prostitute.]]
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Miguel, Eduardo, ''and'' Luciana]] are all revealed to have committed adultery by the end of the story.
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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[[{{UsefulNotes/Mexico}} Mexico]], 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a [[ProperLady proper lady]] should. [[SpiritedYoungLady Fiercely independent]], she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
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[[{{UsefulNotes/Mexico}} Mexico]], 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a [[ProperLady proper lady]] should. [[SpiritedYoungLady Fiercely independent]], independent, she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Miguel, Eduardo, ''and'' Luciana]] are all revealed to have committed adultery by the end of the story.
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* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Miguel, Eduardo, ''and'' Luciana]] are all revealed to have committed adultery by the end of the story.story.
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* ItsAlwaysMardiGrasInNewOrleans: Takes place during the three days of the
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* ItsAlwaysMardiGrasInNewOrleans: Takes place during the three days of theDia de los Muertos, and is set in 1875 Mexico.
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* CoolMask: Naturally, since it's Day of the Dead in 1870's Mexico, but the murderer's trademarek Calavera mask - blue poppy
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* CoolMask: Naturally, since it's Day of the Dead in 1870's Mexico, but the murderer's trademarek Calavera mask - blue poppy petals around the eyes to look like tears - deserves a special mention.
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* ArrangedMarriage: After Isadora learned [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]] was pregnant, she set up the marriage between [[her and Eduardo]] so no one would ever find out.
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* ArrangedMarriage: After Isadora learned [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]] was pregnant, she set up the marriage between [[her [[spoiler: her and Eduardo]] so no one would ever find out.
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Thrust into a tangled web of secrets and lies that threaten to destroy everything she thought she knew, Esperanza must uncover the truth and bring her uncle’s murderer to justice or the guilt of her failure will haunt her forever.
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Thrust into a [[BigScrewedUpFamily tangled web of secrets and lies lies]] that threaten to destroy everything she thought she knew, Esperanza must uncover the truth and bring her uncle’s murderer to justice or the guilt of her failure will haunt her forever.
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* LadykillerInLove: Despite his reputation and significant vices, Ricardo and María ''truly'' love each other.
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* LadykillerInLove: Despite his reputation [[TheCassonova reputation]] and [[TheGamblingAddict significant vices, vices]], Ricardo and María ''truly'' love each other.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Well, 'tomboy' in Victorian terms. While she does occupy herself with more 'masculine' hobbies, like reading, science, and stargazing, Esperanza loves to dance. She would always convince Miguel to dance with her, even though he never enjoyed it as much as she.
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* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Well, 'tomboy' in Victorian 1870's terms. While she does occupy herself with more 'masculine' hobbies, like reading, science, and stargazing, Esperanza loves to dance. She would always convince Miguel to dance with her, even though he never enjoyed it as much as she.she.
* TrappedByGamblingDebts: [[spoiler: Ricardo]], a major source of blackmail against him.
* TrappedByGamblingDebts: [[spoiler: Ricardo]], a major source of blackmail against him.
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[[UsefulNotes/Mexico Mexico]], 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a [[ProperLady proper lady]] should. [[SpiritedYoungLady Fiercely independent]], she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
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Mexico, 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a proper lady should. Fiercely independent, she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
When Esperanza’s uncle is murdered during a festival celebrating the Day of the Dead, her world is shaken. To catch the killer, she must accept the help of the last person she wants to see—her ex-fiancé Alejandro Valladares, a gentleman turned bounty hunter with a troubled past.
When Esperanza’s uncle is murdered during a festival celebrating the Day of the Dead, her world is shaken. To catch the killer, she must accept the help of the last person she wants to see—her ex-fiancé Alejandro Valladares, a gentleman turned bounty hunter with a troubled past.
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When Esperanza’s uncle is murdered during a [[ItsAlwaysMardiGrasInNewOrleans festival celebrating the Day of the
* BountyHunter: Alejandro, [[spoiler: though he's retired now.]]
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* {{Frame-up}}: [[spoiler: Eduardo]] was set up to be framed for Muiguel's death. By [[spoiler: his own mother-in-law,]] no less.
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* {{Frame-up}}: {{FrameUp}}: [[spoiler: Eduardo]] was set up to be framed for Muiguel's death. By [[spoiler: his own mother-in-law,]] no less.less.
* GratuitousSpanish: Justified, as all the characters are technically speaking Spanish to begin with.
* TheGunslinger: Alejandro
* GratuitousSpanish: Justified, as all the characters are technically speaking Spanish to begin with.
* TheGunslinger: Alejandro
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* PosthumousCharacters: Alejandro's parents. They were murdered a few years before the story proper.
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* PosthumousCharacters: PosthumousCharacter: Alejandro's parents. They were murdered a few years before the story proper.
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* SpiritedYoungLady: Esperanza would rather spend her time reading books published by Isaac Newton than worry herself about finding a husband. And she doesn't care what that makes other people think.
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A 2016 novella [[{{Novella}} novella]] by Katilin Hellerich, her first published work.
* ActionGirl: Despite only having fired a gun once in her life, Esperanza does not hesitate to fire at the man in the Calavera mask when Alejandro's been knocked out.
* BirdsOfAFeather: Esperanza has a much stronger relationship with her uncle than her father, given their similarities in personality and Miguel's understanding of her fascination with science and machines. She considers Miguel more of a father than Eduardo. [[spoiler: All the more fitting once she finds out he actually ''is''.]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].awesome]].
* CoolMask: Naturally, since it's Day of the Dead in 1870's Mexico, but the murderer's trademarek Calavera mask - blue poppy
* DaddysGirl: [[AvertedTrope Averted]], at first. Eduardo has no interest in Esperanza's hobbies or her scientific pursuits and remains somewhat distant her whole life - it was her Uncle Miguel who encouraged her, gave her books to read, danced with her. [[spoiler: Ultimately Played Straight, as Miguel is her real father, not Eduardo.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: After his parents' murder, Alejandro dedicated himself to tracking down their killer and bringing him to justice. He took up the life of a bounty hunter and nearly lost himself to his anger and his need for revenge.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: The epilogue shows Esperanza and Alejandro happy and re-settled a year after the events of the story[[spoiler: - and [[HappilyMarried happily engaged]]]], but the two of them had to go through a lot of crap to get there.
* ForYourOwnGood: [[spoiler: Isadora]] tries to use this as her motives for arranging Miguel's death, but Esperanza is having none of it.
* {{Frame-up}}: [[spoiler: Eduardo]] was set up to be framed for Muiguel's death. By [[spoiler: his own mother-in-law,]] no less.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Ignacio, unfortunately, knew too much to be allowed to live.
* ItsAlwaysMardiGrasInNewOrleans: Takes place during the three days of the
*LadykillerInLove: Despite his reputation and significant vices, Ricardo and María ''truly'' love each other.
* PlotDevice: Eduardo's knife, used to kill Miguel.
* PosthumousCharacters: Alejandro's parents. They were murdered a few years before the story proper.
* {{Revenge}}: A recurring theme.
* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Well, 'tomboy' in Victorian terms. While she does occupy herself with more 'masculine' hobbies, like reading, science, and stargazing, Esperanza loves to dance. She would always convince Miguel to dance with her, even though he never enjoyed it as much as she.
* TraumaCongaLine: Pobre Esperanza. Over the course of a few days, her uncle is murdered, she discovers [[spoiler: she is actually the bastard child of her mother and Miguel, and that the two of them had had a years-long affair]], her [[spoiler: parent's marriage]] had been a complete lie, [[spoiler: Eduardo]] had been sleeping with a prostitute for the past two nights, and to top it all off, [[spoiler: Isadora]] was the one who orchestrated the murders in the first place.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Esperanza and Alejandro. [[spoiler: They do.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Miguel, Eduardo, ''and'' Luciana]] are all revealed to have committed adultery by the end of the story.
* CoolMask: Naturally, since it's Day of the Dead in 1870's Mexico, but the murderer's trademarek Calavera mask - blue poppy
* DaddysGirl: [[AvertedTrope Averted]], at first. Eduardo has no interest in Esperanza's hobbies or her scientific pursuits and remains somewhat distant her whole life - it was her Uncle Miguel who encouraged her, gave her books to read, danced with her. [[spoiler: Ultimately Played Straight, as Miguel is her real father, not Eduardo.]]
* DarkAndTroubledPast: After his parents' murder, Alejandro dedicated himself to tracking down their killer and bringing him to justice. He took up the life of a bounty hunter and nearly lost himself to his anger and his need for revenge.
* EarnYourHappyEnding: The epilogue shows Esperanza and Alejandro happy and re-settled a year after the events of the story[[spoiler: - and [[HappilyMarried happily engaged]]]], but the two of them had to go through a lot of crap to get there.
* ForYourOwnGood: [[spoiler: Isadora]] tries to use this as her motives for arranging Miguel's death, but Esperanza is having none of it.
* {{Frame-up}}: [[spoiler: Eduardo]] was set up to be framed for Muiguel's death. By [[spoiler: his own mother-in-law,]] no less.
* HeKnowsTooMuch: Ignacio, unfortunately, knew too much to be allowed to live.
* ItsAlwaysMardiGrasInNewOrleans: Takes place during the three days of the
*LadykillerInLove: Despite his reputation and significant vices, Ricardo and María ''truly'' love each other.
* PlotDevice: Eduardo's knife, used to kill Miguel.
* PosthumousCharacters: Alejandro's parents. They were murdered a few years before the story proper.
* {{Revenge}}: A recurring theme.
* TomboyWithAGirlyStreak: Well, 'tomboy' in Victorian terms. While she does occupy herself with more 'masculine' hobbies, like reading, science, and stargazing, Esperanza loves to dance. She would always convince Miguel to dance with her, even though he never enjoyed it as much as she.
* TraumaCongaLine: Pobre Esperanza. Over the course of a few days, her uncle is murdered, she discovers [[spoiler: she is actually the bastard child of her mother and Miguel, and that the two of them had had a years-long affair]], her [[spoiler: parent's marriage]] had been a complete lie, [[spoiler: Eduardo]] had been sleeping with a prostitute for the past two nights, and to top it all off, [[spoiler: Isadora]] was the one who orchestrated the murders in the first place.
* WillTheyOrWontThey: Esperanza and Alejandro. [[spoiler: They do.]]
* YourCheatingHeart: [[spoiler: Miguel, Eduardo, ''and'' Luciana]] are all revealed to have committed adultery by the end of the story.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: As it turns out, [[spoiler: Esperanza's family]] is '''very''' screwed up. Everyone (except maybe [[spoiler: Esperanza herself]]) has something they're hiding.
** [[Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
** [[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of '''her own granddaughter's father''']] and tries to frame her [[spoiler: Eduardo]] for it.
** [[Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
** [[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of '''her own granddaughter's father''']] and tries to frame her [[spoiler: Eduardo]] for it.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: As it turns out, [[spoiler: Esperanza's family]] is '''very''' ''very'' screwed up. Everyone (except maybe [[spoiler: Esperanza herself]]) has something they're hiding.
**[[Don [[spoiler: Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
** [[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of'''her ''her own granddaughter's father''']] father'']] and tries to frame her [[spoiler: Eduardo]] for it.it.
* {{Blackmail}}: [[spoiler: Ignacio]] blackmails [[spoiler: Miguel]] with evidence of his affair with [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]], [[spoiler: Miguel]] blackmails [[spoiler: Ignacio]] with the ledger containing his son's gambling debts.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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** [[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of
* {{Blackmail}}: [[spoiler: Ignacio]] blackmails [[spoiler: Miguel]] with evidence of his affair with [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]], [[spoiler: Miguel]] blackmails [[spoiler: Ignacio]] with the ledger containing his son's gambling debts.
* CallingTheOldManOut: Esperanza manages to do this not only to both her parents, but to her grandmother. And it is [[CrowningMomentOfAwesome awesome]].
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->''We came here only to sleep—''\\
''Only to dream.''\\
''It is not true that we have come to live upon the earth.''\\
-Unknown Aztec Poet\\\
A 2016 novella by Katilin Hellerich, her first published work.
Mexico, 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a proper lady should. Fiercely independent, she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
When Esperanza’s uncle is murdered during a festival celebrating the Day of the Dead, her world is shaken. To catch the killer, she must accept the help of the last person she wants to see—her ex-fiancé Alejandro Valladares, a gentleman turned bounty hunter with a troubled past.
Thrust into a tangled web of secrets and lies that threaten to destroy everything she thought she knew, Esperanza must uncover the truth and bring her uncle’s murderer to justice or the guilt of her failure will haunt her forever.
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*AfterActionPatchUp: After Alejandro and the man in the Calavera mask tousle in the graveyard, Alejandro goes back to Esperanza's hacienda, where a servant cleans up his head wound while they wait for the doctor to arrive.
*AmateurSleuth: The basis of the plot. Alejandro has been bounty hunting for years now, but Esperanza has never solved a murder case before, nor has she ever done any sort of police work.
*ArrangedMarriage: After Isadora learned [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]] was pregnant, she set up the marriage between [[her and Eduardo]] so no one would ever find out.
*AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Don Ignacio.]] He by no means deserved to die, but the entirety of his interactions with Esperanza and Alejandro were filled with jibes, rude comments toward Esperanza, and teasing remarks.
*BarBrawl: At the hotel outside town, Alejandro attacks [[spoiler: the outlaw who murdered his parents]], and the ensuing fight results in shots fired.
*BestServedCold: After the murder of his parents, Alejandro had dedicated himself to hunting down the man responsible, becoming a bounty hunter and losing himself to his need for vengeance. [[spoiler: It wasn't until he was almost killed that he decided to go back to Esperanza.]]
*BigScrewedUpFamily: As it turns out, [[spoiler: Esperanza's family]] is '''very''' screwed up. Everyone (except maybe [[spoiler: Esperanza herself]]) has something they're hiding.
**[[Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
**[[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of '''her own granddaughter's father''']] and tries to frame her [[spoiler: Eduardo]] for it.
''Only to dream.''\\
''It is not true that we have come to live upon the earth.''\\
-Unknown Aztec Poet\\\
A 2016 novella by Katilin Hellerich, her first published work.
Mexico, 1875. Twenty-three-year old Esperanza de la Rosa knows more about steam engines and electromagnetics than a proper lady should. Fiercely independent, she’s more interested in science and superstition than finding a suitor.
When Esperanza’s uncle is murdered during a festival celebrating the Day of the Dead, her world is shaken. To catch the killer, she must accept the help of the last person she wants to see—her ex-fiancé Alejandro Valladares, a gentleman turned bounty hunter with a troubled past.
Thrust into a tangled web of secrets and lies that threaten to destroy everything she thought she knew, Esperanza must uncover the truth and bring her uncle’s murderer to justice or the guilt of her failure will haunt her forever.
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!!This Novella Provides Examples of:
*AfterActionPatchUp: After Alejandro and the man in the Calavera mask tousle in the graveyard, Alejandro goes back to Esperanza's hacienda, where a servant cleans up his head wound while they wait for the doctor to arrive.
*AmateurSleuth: The basis of the plot. Alejandro has been bounty hunting for years now, but Esperanza has never solved a murder case before, nor has she ever done any sort of police work.
*ArrangedMarriage: After Isadora learned [[spoiler: Esperanza's mother]] was pregnant, she set up the marriage between [[her and Eduardo]] so no one would ever find out.
*AssholeVictim: [[spoiler: Don Ignacio.]] He by no means deserved to die, but the entirety of his interactions with Esperanza and Alejandro were filled with jibes, rude comments toward Esperanza, and teasing remarks.
*BarBrawl: At the hotel outside town, Alejandro attacks [[spoiler: the outlaw who murdered his parents]], and the ensuing fight results in shots fired.
*BestServedCold: After the murder of his parents, Alejandro had dedicated himself to hunting down the man responsible, becoming a bounty hunter and losing himself to his need for vengeance. [[spoiler: It wasn't until he was almost killed that he decided to go back to Esperanza.]]
*BigScrewedUpFamily: As it turns out, [[spoiler: Esperanza's family]] is '''very''' screwed up. Everyone (except maybe [[spoiler: Esperanza herself]]) has something they're hiding.
**[[Don Eduardo]] is an alcoholic, disapproves of [[spoiler: his daughter's]] interests, and [[spoiler: [[YourCheatingHeart cheats on his wife]] with a prostitute.]]
**[[spoiler: Isadora]] plans [[spoiler: the murder of '''her own granddaughter's father''']] and tries to frame her [[spoiler: Eduardo]] for it.
