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* MindRape: Happens during the final confrontation. [[spoiler:Upon full activation, the Sword of Good bombards Hirou with countless experiences of injustice, evil and suffering that has happened over the ages, ''in person''. He's a girl being raped by her father, an innocent being sentenced for a crime they did not commit, a mother watching her child draw their last breath, freezing to death, starving, burning, having their limbs crushed, and more. Carring it harrowing does not do it justice.]]
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* MindRape: Happens during the final confrontation. [[spoiler:Upon full activation, the Sword of Good bombards Hirou with countless experiences of injustice, evil and suffering that has happened over the ages, ''in person''. He's a girl being raped by her father, an innocent being sentenced for a crime they did not commit, a mother watching her child draw their last breath, freezing to death, starving, burning, having their limbs crushed, and more. Carring Calling it harrowing does not do it justice.]]
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* TranslatorMicrobes: Hirou relies on a "translation spell" to understand the spoken and written languages of the world he's in. It might have a tendency toward leaving out nuance, as shown when the spell translates the sign on a building as "INN OF EXTREMELY TASTY FOOD."
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Or possibly [[FaceHeelTurn the other way around.]] Alek the thief is mentioned by the intercepted courier to be searching for a vital artifact on behalf of the antagonists. A TimeSkip later, he's with the protagonists and Selena's lover, implying they convinced him to switch sides.
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* HeelFaceTurn: [[spoiler:Or possibly [[FaceHeelTurn the other way around.]] ]]]] Alek the thief is mentioned by the intercepted courier to be searching for a vital artifact on behalf of the antagonists. A TimeSkip later, he's with the protagonists and Selena's lover, implying they convinced him to switch sides.
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Alek was mentioned by the courier as the man he was supposed to meet. While his meeting with the protagonists is off-screen, it's implied they convinced him to join them.
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Alek suddenly appears after TimeSkip with no explanation who he is [[spoiler: and why Selena is in love him with.]]
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* MindRape: Happens during the final confrontation. [[spoiler:Upon full activation, the Sword of Good bombards Hirou with countless experiences of injustice, evil and suffering that has happened over the ages, ''in person''. He's a girl being raped by her father, an innocent being sentenced for a crime they did not commit, a mother watching her child draw their last breath, freezing to death, starving, burning, having their limbs crushed, and more. Carring it harrowing does not do it justice.]]
