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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In [[Literature/{{Dracula}}]], [[spoiler: Quincy Morris is mortally wounded in the final battle with Dracula. In the Athena Club's world, that confrontation never took place, but he dies along with the other men by being burned alive by Queen Tera.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In [[Literature/{{Dracula}}]], [[Literature/{{Dracula}} Dracula]], [[spoiler: Quincy Morris is mortally wounded in the final battle with Dracula. In the Athena Club's world, that confrontation never took place, but he dies along with the other men by being burned alive by Queen Tera.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: In [[Literature/{{Dracula}}]], [[spoiler: Quincy Morris is mortally wounded in the final battle with Dracula. In the Athena Club's world, that confrontation never took place, but he dies along with the other men by being burned alive by Queen Tera.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: DiesDifferentlyInAdaptation: In [[Literature/{{Dracula}}]], [[spoiler: Quincy Morris is mortally wounded in the final battle with Dracula. In the Athena Club's world, that confrontation never took place, but he dies along with the other men by being burned alive by Queen Tera.]]
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* DiesDifferentlyInTheAdaptation: In [[Literature/{{Dracula}}]], [[spoiler: Quincy Morris is mortally wounded in the final battle with Dracula. In the Athena Club's world, that confrontation never took place, but he dies along with the other men by being burned alive by Queen Tera.]]
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-->[[spoiler: '''Margaret Trelawny:''' "Princess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!"]]
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-->[[spoiler: '''Margaret Trelawny:''' "Princess "Preistess of Isis, Queen of Egypt, accept our sacrifice!"]]
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* OOCIsSeriousBusiness: While Diana is probably the most irritable member of the Athena Club, she is genuinely hurt when she learns that the Athena Club has an inside joke policy of "Don't Wake Diana" which is a way to leave her out of things. Instead of cursing them out or being petulant, the Diana commenting on the story runs away from the room Catherine's writing from and is very upset with Catherine for a good chunk of the rest of the commentary.
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* PutOnABus: Hyde plays no part in SMMG, despite having moved into Castle Frankenstein and he's still probably doing experiments.
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* PutOnABus: Hyde plays no part in SMMG, despite having moved played such a large part in the first two books. Instead, he's into Castle Frankenstein and he's still probably doing experiments.
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* FlatCharacter: Unlike the rest of the Order of the Golden Dawn, Lord Godalming has next to no characterization at all.
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--> '''Catherine:''' Every book is as hard to write as every other book. They are never easy.
--> '''Mary:''' But I would think the process gets easier, over time?
--> '''Catherine:''' You would think. But no, it doesn't. I've had just as hard a time writing this book as I had with the first one. Which is available for sale-
--> '''Mary:''' Please. Just stop.
--> '''Mary:''' But I would think the process gets easier, over time?
--> '''Catherine:''' You would think. But no, it doesn't. I've had just as hard a time writing this book as I had with the first one. Which is available for sale-
--> '''Mary:''' Please. Just stop.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: In addition to the [[Literature/TheStrangeCaseOfDrJekyllAndMrHyde intellectual]] [[Literature/TheIslandOfDoctorMoreau properties]] [[Literature/{{Frankenstein}} used]] [[Literature/{{Dracula}} in]] [[Franchise/SherlockHolmes the]] [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rappaccini%27s_Daughter previous]] [[Literature/{{She}} novels]], this novel features two cameos by [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian Gray]] and fully introduces characters from the fairly obscure ''Literature/TheGreatGodPan'' and ''Literature/TheJewelOfSevenStars''.
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* MassiveMultiplayerCrossover: In addition to the [[Literature/TheStrangeCaseOfDrJekyllAndMrHyde intellectual]] [[Literature/TheIslandOfDoctorMoreau properties]] [[Literature/{{Frankenstein}} used]] [[Literature/{{Dracula}} in]] [[Franchise/SherlockHolmes the]] [[https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rappaccini%27s_Daughter previous]] [[Literature/{{She}} novels]], this novel features two cameos by [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray Dorian Gray]] and fully introduces characters from the fairly obscure ''Literature/TheGreatGodPan'' and ''Literature/TheJewelOfSevenStars''. "Green Tea" by [=LeFanu=] is referenced near the end.
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* EvilCannotComprehendGood: It doesn't even seem to cross Helen Raymond's mind that Alice might not ''like'' to see Dr. Watson or the Baker Street boys shot at, her Athena Club friends menaced, or her country betrayed and overthrown. Likewise, she takes it for granted that Alice must've hated being a maid, a job the girl was quite content with.
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* BewareTheNiceOnes: An outright villainous version. Margaret Trelawny starts out genuinely nice to Alice, but she is extremely ruthless, [[spoiler: eventually trying to shoot Alice in the final battle. Helen takes the bullet for her.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Margaret Trelawny starts out genuinely nice to Alice, but she is extremely ruthless, not caring for who gets in her way, [[spoiler: eventually trying to shoot Alice in the final battle. Helen takes the bullet for her.]]
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* DiabolicalMastermind: This is certainly how Moriarty is presented in the first half of the novel, and he certainly thinks of himself this way. [[spoiler: Surprisingly subverted with Moriarty halfway through the novel when he gets completely blindsided by Helen Raymond and Margaret Trelawny and murdered by Queen Tera.]]
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* DiabolicalMastermind: This is certainly how Moriarty is presented in the first half of the novel, and he certainly thinks of himself this way. [[spoiler: Surprisingly subverted with Moriarty (given his reputation in other adaptations) halfway through the novel when he gets completely blindsided by Helen Raymond and Margaret Trelawny and murdered incinerated by Queen Tera.]]
