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** It's implied that some Scholomance students who aren't able to handle long-term residence in the school go over the DespairEventHorizon and commit suicide. That's why events such as Induction Day are so important; it's a reminder that there is someone waiting for them outside, so that's why they have to keep going.
** Aadhya suspects her paternal grandfather committed suicide after his SafetyWorst idea of protecting his family led to her older sister (who was only eight at the time) getting killed by mal after she snuck out of the house.



** A poignant part of Aadhya's backstory. [[spoiler:One of her grandparents practically locked up their entire family inside their home and refused to let anyone go outside so that way none of the mals could get them (or more specifically, their children). Aadhya's older sister (who was eight at the time), didn't understand this and grew frustrated with all the restrictions, which led to her escaping home to finally see the outside world. By the time any of the adults found out, it was already too late and a mal had already gotten to her. The entire experience forced Aadhya's parents to accept that keeping their children locked up away from the world to protect them wasn't something they could do forever and wouldn't be doing the kids any favors when they were gone, so they completely inverted their strategy. They made sure they had as mundane a house and knew as many mundane kids as possible, with only tiny locked-away rooms for training in magic, and tried to give her as much of a good life as they could before she had to attend the Scholomance]].

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** A poignant part of Aadhya's backstory. [[spoiler:One One of her grandparents practically locked up their entire family inside their home and refused to let anyone go outside so that way none of the mals could get them (or more specifically, their children). Aadhya's older sister (who was eight at the time), didn't understand this and grew frustrated with all the restrictions, which led to her escaping home to finally see the outside world. By the time any of the adults found out, it was already too late and a mal had already gotten to her. The entire experience forced Aadhya's parents to accept that keeping their children locked up away from the world to protect them wasn't something they could do forever and wouldn't be doing the kids any favors when they were gone, so they completely inverted their strategy. They made sure they had as mundane a house and knew as many mundane kids as possible, with only tiny locked-away rooms for training in magic, and tried to give her as much of a good life as they could before she had to attend the Scholomance]].Scholomance.


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* OverpopulationCrisis: The establishment of the Scholomance (and its expansion to include independent wizard children) decreased the overall mortality rate of wizards, leading to an increase in the amount of malia being used and therefore an increase in the number of mals. It also led to an increase of enclaves being built, [[spoiler:which led to an increase in the number of maw-mouths to gobble everyone and everything up. El notes that even without her bungling her way into the situation, the entire world was already in one big fat race to the bottom. All she did was speed it up]].


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* SafetyWorst: When Aadhya was a toddler, her paternal grandfather tried to keep his family safe from mals outside by essentially locking everyone up in the house and never allowing them to go outside. Eventually, Aadhya's older sister couldn't stand the restrictions any longer and snuck out, only for a mal to get her before the adults could find her and bring her back. Aadhya's family took her and left her grandfather's house after that for their own place, and while they never told her outright, it's heavily implied the guilt over the situation led to her grandfather committing suicide.
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* AlchemyIsMagic: Alchemy is one of the three main tracks at the Scholomance, with dedicated labs and supplies. While all students take an alchemy every, only those going for the alchemist-track take the more advanced classes and spend more than the required amount of time in the labs. As the labs, much like the workshops for ShopClass, are frequent hiding places for mals, there's no point in going for the alchemist-track unless you have an affinity for it.

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* AlchemyIsMagic: Alchemy is one of the three main tracks at the Scholomance, with dedicated labs and supplies. While all students take an alchemy every, class every year, only those going for the alchemist-track take the more advanced classes and spend more than the required amount of time in the labs. As the labs, much like the workshops for ShopClass, are frequent hiding places for mals, there's no point in going for the alchemist-track unless you have an affinity for it.
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* AlchemyIsMagic: Alchemy is one of the three main tracks at the Scholomance, with dedicated labs and supplies. While all students take an alchemy every, only those going for the alchemist-track take the more advanced classes and spend more than the required amount of time in the labs. As the labs, much like the workshops for ShopClass, are frequent hiding places for mals, there's no point in going for the alchemist-track unless you have an affinity for it.
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* ShopClass: The assignments are for magical artificing, and if you don't finish by the deadline, your work comes to life and tries to kill you.

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* ShopClass: Every student is required to take shop every year. The assignments are for magical artificing, artificing (with those specifically going for the artifice-track taking the more advanced classes), and if you don't finish by the deadline, your work comes to life and tries to kill you.you. The workshops themselves are frequent hiding places for mals, so it's not worth going for the artificer-track unless you have an affinity for it.
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* FreshmanFears: Freshmen are the biggest casualties of any one year at the Scholomance. They're the weakest wizards in the school ''and'' the most numerous, making them the prime targets for mals; at the bottom of the social hierarchy, so most of the upperclassmen, even stragglers and losers, have no issues taking advantage of them; and aren't used to life at the Scholomance yet, so they don't have the in-built reflexes and survival skills that their older peers have already developed. Those who don't learn quick are gradually winnowed out until only those who have what it takes to at least make it to next year, if not all four years, are left.

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* FreshmanFears: Freshmen are the biggest casualties of any one year at the Scholomance.Scholomance (even shockingly easy years like in the second book). They're the weakest wizards in the school ''and'' the most numerous, making them the prime targets for mals; at the bottom of the social hierarchy, so most of the upperclassmen, even stragglers and losers, have no issues taking advantage of them; and aren't used to life at the Scholomance yet, so they don't have the in-built reflexes and survival skills that their older peers have already developed. Those who don't learn quick are gradually winnowed out until only those who have what it takes to at least make it to next year, if not all four years, are left.
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* TeenageWasteland: Averted. Despite being entirely made up of kids aged 14 - 18 with no adult supervision, things generally stay civil in the Scholomance. It helps that the school is dangerous enough on a normal day that no one is particularly eager to add fellow students to the list of things openly trying to kill them. There still might be students ''secretly'' trying to kill them, but they're more of an occupational hazard.

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* TeenageWasteland: Averted. Despite being entirely made up of kids aged 14 - 18 with no adult supervision, things generally stay civil in the Scholomance. It helps that the school is dangerous enough on a normal day that no one is particularly eager to add fellow students to the list of things openly trying to kill them. There still might be students ''secretly'' trying to kill them, but they're that's more of an occupational hazard.
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* FreshmanFears: Freshmen are the biggest casualties of any one year at the Scholomance. They're the weakest wizards in the school ''and'' the most numerous, making them the prime targets for mals; at the bottom of the social hierarchy, so most of the upperclassmen, even stragglers and losers, have no issues taking advantage of them; and aren't used to life at the Scholomance yet, so they don't have the in-built reflexes and survival skills that their older peers have developed yet. Those who don't learn quick are gradually winnowed out until only those who have what it takes to at least make it to next year, if not all four years, are left.

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* FreshmanFears: Freshmen are the biggest casualties of any one year at the Scholomance. They're the weakest wizards in the school ''and'' the most numerous, making them the prime targets for mals; at the bottom of the social hierarchy, so most of the upperclassmen, even stragglers and losers, have no issues taking advantage of them; and aren't used to life at the Scholomance yet, so they don't have the in-built reflexes and survival skills that their older peers have developed yet.already developed. Those who don't learn quick are gradually winnowed out until only those who have what it takes to at least make it to next year, if not all four years, are left.
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* FreshmanFears: Freshmen are the biggest casualties of any one year at the Scholomance. They're the weakest wizards in the school ''and'' the most numerous, making them the prime targets for mals; at the bottom of the social hierarchy, so most of the upperclassmen, even stragglers and losers, have no issues taking advantage of them; and aren't used to life at the Scholomance yet, so they don't have the in-built reflexes and survival skills that their older peers have developed yet. Those who don't learn quick are gradually winnowed out until only those who have what it takes to at least make it to next year, if not all four years, are left.
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* MomentKiller: A RunningGag in ''The Last Graduate'' is El's new mouse familiar Precious doing her best to cock-block Orion and prevent El and him from having a moment together.
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** The school deliberately gives seniors the more unpleasant tasks, time slots, classes, etc. explicitly because they're the most powerful and experienced wizards in building. Anything that might gobble up freshmen by the dozen will die against a reasonably skilled senior. Hence why the senior residence hall is always on the bottom of the school, right above the Graduation Hall.
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* UpsettingTheBalance: This one of the basic laws of reality as far as the magical world goes. If anyone does something that tips the scales too much in one direction, then the universe will engineer some kind of event to tip it back so both sides are more equitable. El initially believes that this is why she was born with so much power and prophecy of doom relating to becoming an EvilSorceress--both of her parents are paragons of goodness, her father having heroically died to save her mother (who had been pregnant with El at the time) from a maw-mouth during their graduation, and her mother being a IncorruptiblePurePureness GranolaGirl who heals other wizards for free. Therefore, their daughter being destined to be the worst evil wizard society has seen in centuries is par the course. [[spoiler:Of course, her theory is later proven to be wrong. While El was indeed born to correct an imbalance, it wasn't one her parents caused]].

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* UpsettingTheBalance: This one of the basic laws of reality as far as the magical world goes.goes, called the Principle of Balance. If anyone does something that tips the scales too much in one direction, then the universe will engineer some kind of event to tip it back so both sides are more equitable. El initially believes that this is why she was born with so much power and prophecy of doom relating to becoming an EvilSorceress--both of her parents are paragons of goodness, her father having heroically died to save her mother (who had been pregnant with El at the time) from a maw-mouth during their graduation, and her mother being a IncorruptiblePurePureness GranolaGirl who heals other wizards for free. Therefore, their daughter being destined to be the worst evil wizard society has seen in centuries is par the course. [[spoiler:Of course, her theory is later proven to be wrong. While El was indeed born to correct an imbalance, it wasn't one her parents caused]].

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* UpsettingTheBalance:

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* UpsettingTheBalance: This one of the basic laws of reality as far as the magical world goes. If anyone does something that tips the scales too much in one direction, then the universe will engineer some kind of event to tip it back so both sides are more equitable. El initially believes that this is why she was born with so much power and prophecy of doom relating to becoming an EvilSorceress--both of her parents are paragons of goodness, her father having heroically died to save her mother (who had been pregnant with El at the time) from a maw-mouth during their graduation, and her mother being a IncorruptiblePurePureness GranolaGirl who heals other wizards for free. Therefore, their daughter being destined to be the worst evil wizard society has seen in centuries is par the course. [[spoiler:Of course, her theory is later proven to be wrong. While El was indeed born to correct an imbalance, it wasn't one her parents caused]].



** ''The Golden Enclaves'' reveals that [[spoiler:this is part of why El was born. By slaughtering every student of one year in the Scholomance in order to create Orion, her wizard/maw-mouth hybrid LivingWeapon, Ophelia created a terrible imbalance in the universe that needed to be corrected. The universe responded with El, the only wizard powerful enough to eventually stop him when he finally gave in to his hunger, and able to end the injustices that are the maw-mouths. El having the strength to not only kill maw-mouths but do it easily has a more gentle use too, even beyond ending the suffering of those a maw-mouth has devoured--it allows her to create Golden Stone foundations in place of the malia-anchored ones, making her the embodiment of the change in magical society her parents earnestly wished and suffered for]].

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** ''The Golden Enclaves'' reveals that [[spoiler:this is part of why El was born.[[spoiler:El wasn't born because her parents put too much good in the world, but as a response to Ophelia's crimes against humanity. By slaughtering every student of one year in the Scholomance in order to create Orion, her wizard/maw-mouth hybrid LivingWeapon, Ophelia created a terrible imbalance in the universe that needed to be corrected. The universe responded with El, the only wizard powerful enough to eventually stop him when he finally gave in to his hunger, and able to end the injustices that are the maw-mouths. El having the strength to not only kill maw-mouths but do it easily has a more gentle use too, even beyond ending the suffering of those a maw-mouth has devoured--it allows her to create Golden Stone foundations in place of the malia-anchored ones, making her the embodiment of the change in magical society her parents earnestly wished and suffered for]].
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* MundaneLuxury: As the Scholomance is a SmallSecludedWorld and the students can only bring so many supplies without exceeding the weight allowance, basic necessities for everyday life such as clean clothes can be considered incredible luxurious by the school's low standards.

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* MundaneLuxury: As the Scholomance is a SmallSecludedWorld and the students can only bring so many supplies without exceeding the weight allowance, basic necessities for everyday life such as clean clothes can be considered incredible luxurious luxuries by the school's low standards.



* ServileSnarker: El's mouse familiar Precious who, while loyal to El, has no issues biting her ear and protesting any actions her master commits or is about to commit that she doesn't agree with. Liu later notes that Precious developing an independent personality is another sign of El's affinity for destructive power.

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* GameOfChicken: The eastern enclaves got the western enclaves who manage the Scholomance to add the Chinese-language track of general classes to the school and give them more Scholomance seats for their children to attend by threatening to create another Scholomance to compete with the current one. This is actually something that neither side wants, as there simply isn't enough indie wizard children to populate both schools and act as diversionary fodder without increasing the mortality rate of enclaver children. However, the threat had enough teeth that the Board of Governors relented and gave them what they wanted anyway.



* MutuallyAssuredDestruction: The eastern enclaves got the western enclaves who manage the Scholomance to add the Chinese-language track of general classes to the school and give them more Scholomance seats for their children to attend by threatening to create another Scholomance to compete with the current one. This is actually something that neither side wants, as there simply isn't enough indie wizard children to populate both schools and act as diversionary fodder without increasing the mortality rate of enclaver children. However, the threat had enough teeth that the Board of Governors relented and gave them what they wanted anyway.
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* MutuallyAssuredDestruction: The eastern enclaves got the western enclaves who manage the Scholomance to add the Chinese-language track of general classes to the school and give them more Scholomance seats for their children to attend by threatening to create another Scholomance to compete with the current one. This is actually something that neither side wants, as there simply isn't enough indie wizard children to populate both schools and act as diversionary fodder without increasing the mortality rate of enclaver children. However, the threat had enough teeth that the Board of Governors relented and gave them what they wanted anyway.
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** El's full name is [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Galadriel]] Higgins.

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** El's full name is [[Literature/TheLordOfTheRings Galadriel]] Higgins. Her friends later enforce the trope by naming her mouse familiar Precious, a name that unfortunately sticks.
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* BloodMagic: A common strategy for people who plan to go onto the maleficer tracker for the Scholomance instead of doing it ad hoc is to use their weight allowance to bring a bag of small animals like hamsters or mice and sacrifice them on a schedule to have a regular stream of malia while also minimizing the amount of psychic taint they might receive. This is Liu's original strategy at the start of the series, helped by the fact that she had an affinity for animals that allowed her to keep her sacrifices alive for constant malia use. After she goes clean, she stops using the mice for malia and instead makes them into familiars for herself and her friends.


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* MundaneLuxury: As the Scholomance is a SmallSecludedWorld and the students can only bring so many supplies without exceeding the weight allowance, basic necessities for everyday life such as clean clothes can be considered incredible luxurious by the school's low standards.

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* EstablishingCharacterMoment: The first time we meet El, she's trying to find a simple spell to clean her floor, instead receiving hundreds of spells for laying waste to her enemies.

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* FiveSecondForeshadowing: During the [[spoiler:rescue mission to save Liu]], El and her friends encounter the Seventh Sage of Beijing, the founder of the Beijing enclave. He helps them by [[spoiler:giving El a scroll that will take her to Liu]], and the last thing he says before disappearing is: "I'm tired of demons in my house." Later, in that very same chapter, [[spoiler:El learns that the creation of an enclave involves turning a strict-mana wizard into a maw-mouth]].

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* CripplingTheCompetition: The competition for Valedictorian is so fierce that back in the old days, candidates were willing to resort to murder to take out their rivals. The school remedied this by having the rankings posted at the end of the first semester of a class's senior year so that way none of those in the running would know who was at the front of the pack until it was too late to matter. However, while that stopped most of the killing, it didn't prevent candidates from regularly sabotaging each others' work.

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* CripplingTheCompetition: The competition for Valedictorian is so fierce that back in the old days, candidates were willing to resort to murder to take out their rivals. The school remedied this by having the rankings only posted at the end of the first semester of a class's senior year so that way none of those in the running would know who was at the front of the pack until it was too late to matter. However, while that stopped most of the killing, it didn't prevent candidates from regularly sabotaging each others' work.



* ObviouslyEvil: The more malia maleficers take and use the harder it is to conceal resultant [[SupernaturalSensitivity tell]] [[RedRightHand tales]], until everyone can sense it. That's why everyone thought El was a maleficer, because her strong affinity for TheDarkArts gave her the aura of one (and her lack of displayed power only meant that she was bad at it). [[spoiler:What makes Ophelia Rhys-Lake so unsettling is how she's ''not'' this, looking like a perfectly ordinary woman who is neither supernaturally beautiful nor a decrepit hag. If it weren't for El's heightened SupernaturalSensitivity, neither she nor her friends would've realized she was a maleficer at all]].

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* ObviouslyEvil: The more malia maleficers take and use the harder it is to conceal resultant [[SupernaturalSensitivity tell]] [[RedRightHand tales]], until everyone can sense it. That's why everyone thought El was a maleficer, because she was very attractive in spite of the low hygenic standards of the Scholomance, her strong affinity for TheDarkArts gave her the aura of one (and one, and her lack of displayed power only meant that she was bad at it).it. [[spoiler:What makes Ophelia Rhys-Lake so unsettling is how she's ''not'' this, looking like a perfectly ordinary woman who is neither supernaturally beautiful nor a decrepit hag. If it weren't for El's heightened SupernaturalSensitivity, neither she nor her friends would've realized she was a maleficer at all]].all]].
* ObviousRulePatch: Many of the systems in the Scholomance are in place to prevent frowned-upon behaviors employed by the students who attended earlier in its existence. For example, a curfew was instituted to ensure students remained in their own rooms and didn't try to steal anyone else's; prior to that, seniors were throwing newly-inducted freshmen out of their rooms and delaying their graduation by one to two years once they realized there was a massive horde of mals down in the Graduation Hall[[note]]The Senior Dorms are on the second most bottom floor of the school, and therefore the ones closest to the horde, which is in the hall on the bottom floor[[/note]].
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* BlessedWithSuck: Many of the stragglers at the Scholomance are actually perfectly competent wizards, but with strong affinities for things that won't help them and their allies survive the run through the Graduation Hall. El cites water weaving as an example--great for managing the sewage lines of an enclave, not-so-great for taking out a million different mals trying to bite off your head at the same time.

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* HadToBeSharp: Anyone who survives the Scholomance will be an industrious hard worker with a multitude of practical skills, and able to cope with general privation inculuded but not limited to sleep deprivation, lack of food, and poor hygiene. And, not least, be a fully-trained wizard. As El notes, the reason the mals come after wizard children is that for the most part, a grown wizard is the apex predator of the magical world.

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** Most indie kids from the east tend to be the best and brightest wizards in their respective cities and countries. This is because the number of spare Scholomance seats for eastern enclaves is extremely limited due to an inequitable allocation favoring the western enclaves, so the indie kids have to compete with each other through rigorous exams in order to get into the school as a student.



** As the Scholomance was built by western enclaves and has only ever been maintained by them, a disproportionate amount of seats are allocated towards wizards in the western world, to the point the nearly every indie kid in the UK, including [[MageBornOfMuggles kids who don't even know they're magic]], gets a seat at the school. Compare that to the east, where the enclaves only have just enough to send their own children (and even ''that'' is a recent development) and a handful of seats for their own indie kids to compete viciously over. As there is a stark divide between the western and eastern wizards with minimal overlap, that means the eastern enclavers have less potential allies and recruits to choose from for graduation and thus lower survival rates than their western counterparts. This has become a major point of contention in the recent decades and drives much of the conflict of the second book.

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** As the Scholomance was built by western enclaves and has only ever been maintained by them, a disproportionate amount of seats are allocated towards wizards in the western world, to the point the nearly every indie kid in the UK, including [[MageBornOfMuggles kids who don't even know they're magic]], gets a seat at the school. El even admits that her own seat in the Scholomance--which the London enclave gave to her as a favor for her mother--is one she ''really'' shouldn't have. Compare that to the east, where the enclaves only have just enough to send their own children (and even ''that'' is a recent development) and a handful of seats for their own indie kids to compete viciously over. As there is a stark divide between the western and eastern wizards with minimal overlap, that means the eastern enclavers have less potential allies and recruits to choose from for graduation and thus lower survival rates than their western counterparts. This has become a major point of contention in the recent decades and drives much of the conflict of the second book.

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*** The Jaipur enclave is allies with Shanghai and were the ones to give the enclave-building skills to a circle of wizards who lived in Pune in exchange for a book of spells the circle had co-authored together. When the circle fell to in-fighting, killing most of them off and ending the enclave before it could even be built, they took on a few of the survivors.

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*** The Jaipur enclave is allies with Shanghai and were the ones to give the enclave-building skills spells to a circle of wizards who lived in Pune in exchange for a book of powerful spells the circle had co-authored together. When the circle fell to in-fighting, killing most of them off and ending the enclave before it could even be built, they took on a few of the survivors.



* ProfessionalButtKisser: Minion-track kids, who are non-enclaver students who aren't magically-talented enough make themselves useful allies for the Graduation Run (or do maintenance shifts) and don't have the social skills to make good connections with others. They instead resort to kissing up to enclavers and anyone else with enough talent and clout for whatever scraps they have left to throw them. Ibrahim is an example of a minion track kid, someone that El is surprised to realize actually does like people and isn't putting up an act.

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** The author of the copy of the Golden Stone sutras that El receives. Much of his commentary in the book is mainly geared toward sucking up to his sponsor, a Baghdad enclaver who helped him get into the enclave after his whole family was killed.

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*** The Jaipur enclave is allies with Shanghai and were the ones to give the enclave-building skills to a circle of wizards who lived in Pune in exchange for a book of spells the circle had co-authored together. When the circle fell to in-fighting, killing most of them off and ending the enclave before it could even be built, they took on a few of the survivors.



*** The Munich enclave is said to be the most powerful of the German enclaves, and is integral to the backstory of Liesel. [[spoiler:Her father is a council member of Munich, and his wife is the daughter of their current Domina. He could've easily brought Liesel and her mother into the enclave but it would've meant losing his council seat, so he essentially abandoned them, only bothering to give Liesel a Scholomance seat to keep their mouths shut]].

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*** The bigger Japanese enclaves have each of their children create their own alliances with one or two potential enclave recruits from the Japanese indie kids, the rest being foreign indie students who they'll aggressively sponsor into foreign enclaves, with hopes of creating connections throughout the world. That makes Japanese enclavers highly sought out allies, since it's a great way for an indie kid to get a spot at an enclave of their choice.
*** The Munich enclave is said to be the most powerful of the German enclaves, and is integral to the backstory of Liesel. [[spoiler:Her father is a council member of Munich, and his wife is the daughter of their current Domina. He could've easily brought Liesel and her mother into the enclave but it would've meant losing his council seat, so he essentially abandoned them, only bothering to give Liesel his daughter a Scholomance seat to keep their mouths shut]].shut. His wife found out anyway and murdered Liesel's mother, leaving a bitter Liesel to swear vengeance against both of them]].



* ProfessionalButtKisser: Minion-track kids, who are non-enclaver students who aren't magically-talented enough make themselves useful allies for the Graduation Run (or do maintenance shifts) and don't have the social skills to make good connections with others. They instead resort to kissing up to enclavers and anyone else with enough talent and clout for whatever scraps they have left to throw them. Ibrahim is an example of a minion track kid, someone that El is surprised to realize actually does like people and isn't putting up an act.



** When you re-read the series, [[spoiler:it becomes much more obvious that the Scholomance is preparing El for her ''actual'' destiny as the destroyer of maw-mouths and the builder of Golden Stone enclaves, than preparing her to be an EvilSorceress like she initially believed for most of the books. For her senior year, it even gave her an independent study explicitly focused on nothing else but translating the Golden Stone sutras]].

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** When you re-read the series, [[spoiler:it it becomes much a lot more obvious that the [[spoiler:the Scholomance is preparing El for her ''actual'' destiny as the destroyer of maw-mouths and the builder of Golden Stone enclaves, than preparing her to be an EvilSorceress like she initially believed for most of the books. For The reason she keeps getting all these dark, destructive spells to learn is because they're the only spells that match her affinity and will allow her to kill something as dangerous as a maw-mouth, and for her senior year, it even gave her an independent study explicitly focused on nothing else but translating the Golden Stone sutras]].


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* SpoiledSweet: Many of the nicer enclavers, such as Chloe and Alfie, who can be generous once you get to know them and are seemingly ignorant of how lucky they actually are.

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* GoneHorriblyRight: [[spoiler:El's parents wanted the Golden Stone sutras for enclave-building badly enough to attempt {{summoning|Ritual}} them without naming [[EquivalentExchange a price]]. El's father got eaten by a maw-mouth, [[SinsOfOurFathers El herself suffered a miserable childhood]] and survived a maw-mouth attack, and, after everything, El shows up at her mother's house with the Sutras, and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Gwen takes it hard indeed]].]]
* GoodAllAlong: In ''The Last Graduate'', [[spoiler:El spends half the series thinking that the Scholomance is out to either kill her or drive [[ApocalypseMaiden her]] into embracing TheDarkSide (which means she ends up killing a lot of people), only to realize that it's trying to force her to ''save'' everyone in the only way it can.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: El is incredibly cranky and cynical, and so prone to self-sabotage she can't even ''pretend'' to be polite to enclave kids--but she also actively chooses, over and over, to be pure mana instead of using malia to make her life much easier. [[spoiler:In book 2, she goes from caring only about herself to refusing to let any of her friends die, and then from there to refusing to let anyone in her year die. She eventually comes around to trying to fixing the Scholomance so kids don't die, period. In book 3, she goes out and tries to save the world--not from some evil external threat, but from itself, and the pettiness, shortsightedness, and greed of modern wizards.]]



** [[spoiler:El's parents wanted the Golden Stone sutras for enclave-building badly enough to attempt {{summoning|Ritual}} them without naming [[EquivalentExchange a price]]. El's father got eaten by a maw-mouth, [[SinsOfOurFathers El herself suffered a miserable childhood]] and survived a maw-mouth attack, and, after everything, El shows up at her mother's house with the Sutras, and [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone Gwen takes it hard indeed]].]]
** The Scholomance was created with the intention of decreasing the mortality rate of child wizards. It did exactly that, causing a population boom that led to an increase in the rate of enclaves being built, and by extension, an increase in the political tensions between the eastern and western enclaves as they squabbled over the allocation of Scholomance seats. [[spoiler:And that's not even getting into how the increase in enclaves led to an increase in the number of maw-mouths, which both sides have been lobbing at each other for the last several decades]].
* GoodAllAlong: In ''The Last Graduate'', [[spoiler:El spends half the series thinking that the Scholomance is out to either kill her or drive [[ApocalypseMaiden her]] into embracing TheDarkSide (which means she ends up killing a lot of people), only to realize that it's trying to force her to ''save'' everyone in the only way it can.]]
* GoodIsNotNice: El is incredibly cranky and cynical, and so prone to self-sabotage she can't even ''pretend'' to be polite to enclave kids--but she also actively chooses, over and over, to be pure mana instead of using malia to make her life much easier. [[spoiler:In book 2, she goes from caring only about herself to refusing to let any of her friends die, and then from there to refusing to let anyone in her year die. She eventually comes around to trying to fixing the Scholomance so kids don't die, period. In book 3, she goes out and tries to save the world--not from some evil external threat, but from itself, and the pettiness, shortsightedness, and greed of modern wizards.]]



* NoHeroToHisValet: At the start of the series, El is just about the only person not impressed by Orion's heroics. While she does come to care for him as a friend and then more, she ''still'' remains unimpressed, and often gets exasperated by his IdiotHero antics. The rest of El's friends and acquaintances similarly begin to gradually lose their reverence for him as they get to know him better.



** Sir Alfred Cooper Browning, the founder and original architect of the Scholomance. When you think about it, every single conflict in the series can be traced back to the founding of the school. [[spoiler:The establishment of the Scholomance led to a dramatic decrease in the mortality rate for western wizards, which led to a rise in the rate western enclave were being built (and thus the number of maw-mouths translocated to the east). That eventually led to the collapse of Shanghai, whose revival and subsequent retaliation with sponsoring and supporting more easter enclaves started the LensmanArmsRace that culminated in Orion and El's respective births]].
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** Alfie's knowledge of the numerous attempts to fix the scouring machinery in the Graduation Hall and keep it working becomes a lot more noticeable once you know [[spoiler:he's a descendant of the original creator of the Scholomance, Sir Alfred Cooper Browning, who he also happens to be named after]].


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** Sir Alfred Cooper Browning, the founder and original architect of the Scholomance. When you think about it, every single conflict in the series can be traced back to the founding of the school. [[spoiler:The establishment of the Scholomance led to a dramatic decrease in the mortality rate for western wizards, which led to a rise in the rate western enclave were being built (and thus the number of maw-mouths translocated to the east). That eventually led to the collapse of Shanghai, whose revival and subsequent retaliation with sponsoring and supporting more easter enclaves started the LensmanArmsRace that culminated in Orion and El's respective births]].


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* UptownGuy: Just about any relationship between an enclaver and indie kid is going to be unequal, unless the indie kid is from a powerful independent family.
** Orion and El's relationship plays with this trope. On the surface, Orion is vastly superior in station to El, being a once-in-a-generation talent whose mother is in line to become Domina of the most powerful enclave in the world. El, meanwhile, is an indie kid wizard from the middle of nowhere with barely anything to her name. However, El is actually of a much higher station than most people are aware of, being the daughter of a world-renowned healer and a descendant of the most powerful seer in the world, and a once-in-a-generation talent herself. The only reason she hasn't bothered to elevate her status to match Orion's is largely by choice.
** Played straight with Alfie and Liesel. Alfie is a powerful London enclaver who is [[spoiler:directly descended from the original founder of the Scholomance]] and whose father is in line to become the next Dominus of London. Liesel is [[spoiler:the HeroicBastard of a council member of the Munich enclave]], who specifically sought him out as a future spouse to gain more power.
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** [[spoiler:The wife of Liesel's father is able to get away with essentially murdering Liesel's mother because she is the daughter of the Domina of the Munich enclave. Therefore, the only hope Liesel has of revenge is to become the Domina of a more powerful enclave]].

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** [[spoiler:The wife of Liesel's father father]], who is the daughter of the Domina of a major enclave, is able to get away with essentially murdering Liesel's mother because she is the daughter of the Domina of the Munich enclave. Therefore, [[spoiler:Liesel's mother]], who isn't an enclaver. [[spoiler:Therefore, the only hope Liesel has of revenge is to become the Domina of a more powerful enclave]].



* StutterStop: One of the stragglers in El's year, Hideo, is actually a rather talented incanter--who is unfortunately inflicted with a horrible case of shakes (likely the result of either a failed poisoning or trauma) that make him interrupt his own incantations. Luckily for him, El's mother has a potion to help settle someone's nerves, and with some experimentation, her and Chloe manage to brew up a batch for him.

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* BecauseYouWereNiceToMe: Inverted. Orion starts hanging out with El because she's the only person who isn't nice to him. Given the intense pressure the guy constantly feels from all the fawning adulation of his peers, it's understandable.

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* BeneathNotice: The best way to make it to Valedictorian is to make sure nobody knows you're going for Valedictorian, so that way you can work without fear of sabotage. Clarita manages this by acting as unassuming as possible, wearing shabby clothes, and taking the occasional maintenance shift to make it look like she's going for the maintenance track. Liesel similarly avoids sabotage by acting like a flirty bimbo and cozying up to enclave kids.


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* CripplingTheCompetition: The competition for Valedictorian is so fierce that back in the old days, candidates were willing to resort to murder to take out their rivals. The school remedied this by having the rankings posted at the end of the first semester of a class's senior year so that way none of those in the running would know who was at the front of the pack until it was too late to matter. However, while that stopped most of the killing, it didn't prevent candidates from regularly sabotaging each others' work.
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* LanguageBarrier: As all the classes in the Scholomance are taught in English or Chinese (the latter a recent development), there is no point in sending a student there if they're not fluent in either or aren't good enough in languages to learn one of them early enough for it to matter. According to El, that doesn't stop a lot of desperate families from sending their kids anyway.


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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: [[spoiler:The wife of Liesel's father is able to get away with essentially murdering Liesel's mother because she is the daughter of the Domina of the Munich enclave. Therefore, the only hope Liesel has of revenge is to become the Domina of a more powerful enclave]].

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** [[spoiler:El openly acknowledges the only reason her end-of-series plan of destroying maw-mouths and rebuilding Golden Enclaves is only possible because the Dominuses of the two strongest enclaves in the world are completely on board with the idea]].

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** It's offhandedly mentioned in the second book that the reason why there's no enclave in Pune is because the wizards who were going to build it immediately started infighting after receiving the enclave-building spells from the Jaipur enclave in trade. Most of them died, some joined Jaipur, and the rest renounced magic, purged their body of mana, and left to live ascetic lives in the woods. A seemingly innocuous fun fact [[spoiler:and one of the initial hints about the dark nature of modern enclave-building; it's implied the reason they began infighting is because they fell into conflict over whether or not to use the spells, knowing they would be condemning an innocent life to becoming a maw-mouth in exchange for their new home]].



* RewatchBonus: When you re-read the series, [[spoiler:it becomes much more obvious that the Scholomance is preparing El for her ''actual'' destiny as the destroyer of maw-mouths and the builder of Golden Stone enclaves, than preparing her to be an EvilSorceress like she initially believed for most of the books]].

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** It's offhandedly mentioned in the second book that the reason why there's no enclave in Pune is because the wizards who were going to build it immediately started infighting after receiving the enclave-building spells from the Jaipur enclave in trade. Most of them died, some joined Jaipur, and the rest renounced magic, purged their body of mana, and left to live ascetic lives in the woods. A seemingly innocuous fun fact [[spoiler:and one of the initial hints about the dark nature of modern enclave-building; it's implied the reason they began infighting is because they fell into conflict over whether or not to use the spells, knowing they would be condemning an innocent life to becoming a maw-mouth in exchange for their new home. Hence why some of the survivors joined Jaipur while the rest swore off magic entirely]].

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