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* AmbiguouslyGay: There is some implication that Leonard Salby and William Chen may or may not have had a LoverAndBeloved thing going on. Ken says of their relationship, "Len . . . had a friend, later on. Or . . . whatever he was." Paul reports rumors that "Salby killed his lover in a fit of passion."

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* AmbiguouslyGay: There is some implication that Leonard Salby and William Chen may or may not have had a LoverAndBeloved thing going on. They lived together for a time. Ken says of their relationship, "Len . . . had a friend, later on. Or . . . whatever he was." Paul reports rumors that "Salby killed his lover in a fit of passion."



* DumbassHasAPoint: Ombudsman is a pretentious, tedious, and into PurpleProse. But in chapter 19 he's very right to point out that Paul seems not-ok and that someone should do something about that.
-->'''Ombudsman:''' herein we see a man near the end of his tether. Rather than reel out that tether, knowing full well that our quantity of rope be finite and the imp of madness nigh infinite in resourcefulness, we ought -- or I say we ought, and value the coin of my word as is your wont -- to recognize caution as superior to convenience, the former but not the latter belonging to the sphere of prudence, and take swift, immediate action to halt the degeneration of [=GlassWave=]



* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: In chapter 15, Aaron -- who is a bit mentally unstable, and really clings to TNC as an anchor, and who's really shaken by the story of William Chen -- goes upstairs into the bathroom and is holding onto a bottle of pills like he might take the whole thing. Paul goes up to talk to him, and tells him the only thing that will comfort him right then: they're they're going to "defeat" TNC together. Paul begins this deeply questionable idea of reading TNC straight through as a testament of love to his fragile friend. When they're exhausted and want to stop, they keep going because Aaron wants to keep going and they're afraid stopping will send him back to that state.

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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: In chapter 15, Aaron -- who is a bit mentally unstable, and really clings to TNC as an anchor, and who's really shaken by the story of William Chen -- goes upstairs into the bathroom and is holding onto a bottle of pills like he might take the whole thing. Paul goes up to talk to him, and tells him the only thing that will comfort him right then: they're they're going to "defeat" TNC together. Paul begins Aaron proceeds to really latch onto this deeply questionable idea of reading TNC straight through idea. As so, as a testament testiment of love to his for their fragile friend. When they're exhausted and want to stop, friend, they keep going because do it.
-->'''Paul:''' I think it's really important to
Aaron wants to that we keep going reading, at least for now. He's having a hard time, and they're afraid stopping will send him back this is important to that state.him. And we're his friends. So I think we can do that?
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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: In chapter 15, Aaron -- who is a bit mentally unstable, and really clings to TNC as an anchor, and who's really shaken by the story of William Chen -- goes upstairs into the bathroom and is holding onto a bottle of pills like he might take the whole thing. Paul goes up to talk to him, and tells him the only thing that will comfort him right then: they're they're going to "defeat" TNC together.

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* TalkingDownTheSuicidal: In chapter 15, Aaron -- who is a bit mentally unstable, and really clings to TNC as an anchor, and who's really shaken by the story of William Chen -- goes upstairs into the bathroom and is holding onto a bottle of pills like he might take the whole thing. Paul goes up to talk to him, and tells him the only thing that will comfort him right then: they're they're going to "defeat" TNC together. Paul begins this deeply questionable idea of reading TNC straight through as a testament of love to his fragile friend. When they're exhausted and want to stop, they keep going because Aaron wants to keep going and they're afraid stopping will send him back to that state.

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* AmbiguouslyGay: There is some implication that Leonard Salby and William Chen may or may not have had a LoverAndBeloved thing going on. Ken says of their relationship, "Len . . . had a friend, later on. Or . . . whatever he was." Paul reports rumors that "Salby killed his lover in a fit of passion."



* MadOracle: Zigzagged, but in an archetypical way, this is what Lugnut is. He's a {{troll}}, using outrageous abbreviations, a parody of TotallyRadical speak, and making it sound like he's baiting someone into a political FlameWar. The style of how he writes is all designed to make people skip over it, to not even read it much less engage in conversation with him. Yet he's got some interesting things to say, under all that. Apparently there was once a thread "Salby And CIA" which Aaron closed in the name of BanOnPolitics. Yet not being allowed to talk about politics means it's hard to talk about how Salby was reportedly at Harvard for a curiously brief visiting lectureship in 1961, which somehow tied in with Project [=MKUltra=] -- which, given what we learn later, actually sounds pretty relevant.

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* MadOracle: Zigzagged, Zigzagging, but in as an archetypical way, ArchetypalCharacter this is what Lugnut is. He's a {{troll}}, using {{troll}} who uses an outrageous abbreviations, combination of FunetikAksent, a parody of TotallyRadical speak, and making it sound constantly sounds like he's baiting someone trying to bait you into a political FlameWar. The style of how he writes his writing is all designed to make people skip over it, to not even read it much less engage in conversation with him. Yet he's got some interesting things to say, under say underneath all that. Apparently there was once a thread titled "Salby And CIA" which Aaron closed in the name of BanOnPolitics. Yet not being allowed to talk about politics means it's hard to talk about how Salby was reportedly at Harvard for a curiously brief visiting lectureship in 1961, which somehow tied in with Project [=MKUltra=] -- which, given what we learn later, actually sounds pretty relevant.


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* FunnyBackgroundEvent: One Cafe user, Avery Lodestone, has a signature which reads "Maintainer of the Anti-Pokémon Haiku Archive (contributions welcome)".
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* PurpleProse: One of the peripheral forum users, PurpleProse, writes this way. It's exhausting and other users mostly try not to engage.

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* PurpleProse: One of the peripheral forum users, PurpleProse, Ombudsman, writes this way. It's exhausting and other users mostly try not to engage.
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There's [[EpilepticTrees fan theorist]] Aaron aka [=Errant KnightsMove=], [[MellowFellow "it's not that deep dude"]] Marsh aka [=metamarsh=], popular [[FixFic fic writer]] Jenny aka [=jenni_fur=], and [[FirstPersonPeripheralNarrator observer/narrator]] Paul aka [=GlassWave=].



The novel is written in a ScrapbookStory style, with most of the text being participant Paul/[=GlassWave=]'s notes for a "report" he has been asked to write explaining these events. This is interspersed with snippets from forum threads and occasionally other documents. It's been praised for its accurate depiction of early-00s fandom and forum culture.

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The novel is written in a ScrapbookStory style, with most of the text being participant Paul/[=GlassWave=]'s Paul's notes for a "report" he has been asked to write explaining these events. This is interspersed with snippets from forum threads and occasionally other documents. It's been praised for its accurate depiction of early-00s fandom and forum culture.

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* [[invoked]]CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it. It's easy to see why, considering that the series is described as punishingly intricate, demanding a great deal of focus from the readers, ponderously weighty in tone, and featuring fairly flat characters. The main demographic who likes it seems to be a certain variety of now-adults who started reading it as kids, who bring to the series both the NostalgiaFilter of childhood and also an adult's capacity for remembering detail. And then there's a smaller demographic of weirdos like Paul who came to like the books in adulthood, seemingly because they're already a little like Salby themselves.

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* [[invoked]]CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it. It's easy to see why, considering that the series is described as punishingly intricate, demanding a great deal of focus from the readers, ponderously weighty in tone, and featuring fairly flat characters. The main demographic who likes it seems to be a certain variety of now-adults who started reading it as kids, who bring to the series both the NostalgiaFilter of childhood and also an adult's capacity for remembering detail. And then there's a smaller demographic of weirdos like Paul who came to like the books in adulthood, seemingly because they're already a little like Salby themselves. Salby himself said he ''specifically wrote the books to drive most audiences away''.
-->'''Salby:''' I sought then to strain out those in my audience who did not understand. I made my heroes rise to duties which no one ignorant of Mundum would find palatable. I veered and darted in ways I thought would shake off those in search of a good story.
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* {{Worldbuilding}}: Salby's worldbuilding, much like his characters, were created only to serve his {{anvilicious}} focus. He didn't care about his world in its own right. He called it "my reams of lore invented only to make moral action difficult and thus in keeping with reality". He also refers to his genre and tropes as "my cheap knockoffs of UsefulNotes/{{the Inklings}}".

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* MadArtist: Leonard Salby.

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* MadArtist: Leonard Salby.Salby was a crazy old kook. He was aware enough of it he even went to psychiatrists, but they didn't diagnose him with anything specific and that was about as far as it went.
-->'''Salby:''' As a matter of fact, I have, of my own volition, sought the advice of so-called psychiatric experts […] I have been given a bill of good health. I appear to have no delusional or neurotic illness. I have what, and I quote, has been called "an obsessive fixation on moral concerns" (what an age in which this is worthy of note!) which nonetheless "does not seem to obstruct Mr Salby in the course of independent living, or hinder his ability to perform as children's author of note." Observations were however made upon my "inconsistencies of performance" on certain "tests of cognitive function," but as these (whatever they may be) do not obstruct my performance as a children's author of note &c they were deemed of no clinical import.
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* MadOracle: Zigzagged, but in an archetypical way, this is what Lugnut is. He's a {{troll}}, using outrageous abbreviations, a parody of TotallyRadical speak, and making it sound like he's baiting someone into a political FlameWar. The style of how he writes is all designed to make people skip over it, to not even read it much less engage in conversation with him. Yet he's got some interesting things to say, under all that. Apparently there was once a thread "Salby And CIA" which Aaron closed in the name of BanOnPolitics. Yet not being allowed to talk about politics means it's hard to talk about how Salby was reportedly at Harvard for a curiously brief visiting lectureship in 1961, which somehow tied in with Project [=MKUltra=] -- which, given what we learn later, actually sounds pretty relevant.
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* [[invoked]]CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it.

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* [[invoked]]CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it. It's easy to see why, considering that the series is described as punishingly intricate, demanding a great deal of focus from the readers, ponderously weighty in tone, and featuring fairly flat characters. The main demographic who likes it seems to be a certain variety of now-adults who started reading it as kids, who bring to the series both the NostalgiaFilter of childhood and also an adult's capacity for remembering detail. And then there's a smaller demographic of weirdos like Paul who came to like the books in adulthood, seemingly because they're already a little like Salby themselves.
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* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Chesscourt is not subtle; anyone can look at Salby's work and say, "This is the product of a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." It's easy to see where his interests laid, or what the themes were. But Salby's ''anvil'' -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that it can be hard to identify that it ''is'' an anvil without exterior knowledge of his philosophy. Once you know, though, it becomes very apparent why the series is the way it is.

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* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Chesscourt is not subtle; anyone subtle. Anyone can look at Salby's work it and say, "This is the product of a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." It's easy to see where his interests laid, or what the themes were. But Salby's ''anvil'' -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that it can be hard to identify that it ''is'' an anvil without exterior knowledge of his philosophy. Once you know, though, it becomes very apparent why the series is the way it is.



** Paul's forum signature mentions he's one of the only people whose favorite Chesscourt book is ''Sea of Glass'', a [[invoked]] [[LaterInstallmentWeirdness later installment]] that took Salby's ComplexityAddiction so far he was forced to self-publish it. [[spoiler:Paul ends up being the only Spelunker to adopt Salby's philosophy of life.]]

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** Paul's forum signature mentions he's one of the only people whose favorite Chesscourt book is ''Sea of Glass'', a [[invoked]] [[LaterInstallmentWeirdness later installment]] {{later installment|Weirdness}} that took Salby's ComplexityAddiction so far he was forced to self-publish it. [[spoiler:Paul ends up being the only Spelunker to adopt Salby's philosophy of life.]]



* LaterInstallmentWeirdness: The Chesscourt books begin as fairly standard ChildrensLiterature. Paul describes the latter books as still having the same bones as the first book, just scaled up, but at some point "the matrix is beginning to strain under its own weight". Eventually the publisher started complaining and requesting he tone it down. Salby refused to {{sell out}}. Book #7 got published only grudgingly, #8 and #9 were self-published. The series is a philosophical treaties masquerading as literature. It appears that during the earlier books, Salby understood that in order to masquerading as literature, he had to actually make the book structurally like children's literature -- something he increasingly disregarded as time went on.

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* LaterInstallmentWeirdness: The Chesscourt books begin as fairly standard ChildrensLiterature. Paul describes the latter books as still having the same bones as the first book, just scaled up, but at some point "the matrix is beginning to strain under its own weight". Eventually the publisher started complaining and requesting he tone it down. Salby refused to {{sell out}}. Book #7 got published only grudgingly, #8 and #9 were self-published. The series is a philosophical treaties masquerading as literature. It appears that during the earlier books, Salby understood that in order to masquerading as literature, he had to actually make the book structurally ''actually fairly like children's literature literature'' -- something he increasingly disregarded as time went on.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. Fandom [[invoked]]{{shipping}}, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books.series. Fandom [[invoked]]{{shipping}}, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.



* ScatterbrainedSenior: Zigzagging. ''The Northern Caves'' is Salby's final unpublished manuscript that he was working on at the time of his death at the age of about 76. Just ''how'' clear-headed he was at this point is a matter of debate amongst the fans. Sentiments include:

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* ScatterbrainedSenior: Zigzagging. ''The Northern Caves'' is Salby's final unpublished manuscript that [[DiedDuringProduction he was working on at the time of his death death]] at the age of about 76. Just ''how'' clear-headed he was at this point is a matter of debate amongst the fans. Sentiments include:



* SleepDeprivation: The Spelunkers stay up for 60 hours reading MindScrew text. MaybeMagicMaybeMundane, but on the mundane side, that is ''plenty'' enough to put someone into a distorted mental state.

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* SleepDeprivation: The Spelunkers stay up for 60 hours reading MindScrew text. For the mundane interpretation of MaybeMagicMaybeMundane, but on the mundane side, that is ''plenty'' enough to put someone into a distorted mental state.
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* CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it.

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* CultClassic: [[invoked]]CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. Fandom {{shipping}}, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. Fandom {{shipping}}, [[invoked]]{{shipping}}, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist (previously the author of ''{{WebOriginal/Floornight}}''). Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist (previously the author of ''{{WebOriginal/Floornight}}''). Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] CultClassic Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby.



* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series and say, "Huh, there's a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." It's clear to see where his interests lie. But Salby's particular anvil -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, it can be hard to identify that it ''is'' a philosophy or an anvil. Once you know, though, the structure of the whole series snaps into place.

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* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Anyone Chesscourt is not subtle; anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series work and say, "Huh, there's "This is the product of a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." It's clear easy to see where his interests lie. laid, or what the themes were. But Salby's particular anvil ''anvil'' -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, that it can be hard to identify that it ''is'' a philosophy or an anvil. anvil without exterior knowledge of his philosophy. Once you know, though, it becomes very apparent why the structure of the whole series snaps into place.is the way it is.



* CultClassic: The Chesscourt fandom really cherishes the series, but outsiders seem far more critical of it.



* GrowingWithTheAudience: The Chesscourt books reportedly do. Sort of. In a weird way that many readers find unsatisfying.

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* GrowingWithTheAudience: Zigzagging. The Chesscourt books reportedly do. Sort of. In a weird way that many readers find unsatisfying.



* KissingCousins: Paul ships cousins Charles and Sally.

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* KissingCousins: Paul ships cousins Charles Sally and Sally.Charles.
* LaterInstallmentWeirdness: The Chesscourt books begin as fairly standard ChildrensLiterature. Paul describes the latter books as still having the same bones as the first book, just scaled up, but at some point "the matrix is beginning to strain under its own weight". Eventually the publisher started complaining and requesting he tone it down. Salby refused to {{sell out}}. Book #7 got published only grudgingly, #8 and #9 were self-published. The series is a philosophical treaties masquerading as literature. It appears that during the earlier books, Salby understood that in order to masquerading as literature, he had to actually make the book structurally like children's literature -- something he increasingly disregarded as time went on.



** Aaron paraphrases Dostoevsky’s ''Literature/NotesFromUnderground'':

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** Aaron paraphrases Dostoevsky’s Dostoevsky's ''Literature/NotesFromUnderground'':



* SleepDeprivation: The Spelunkers stay up for 60 hours reading MindScrew text. MaybeMagicMaybeMundane, but on the mundane side, that is ''plenty'' enough to put someone into a distorted mental state.



* [[invoked]]UncertainAudience: Chesscourt could be thought of as GrowingWithTheAudience, but it's done in such a way that the latter books aren't well suited to ''any'' demographic. Our first introduction to the series comes from a book review calling out book #7 for precisely that.

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* [[invoked]]UncertainAudience: Chesscourt could be thought of charitably framed as GrowingWithTheAudience, but except it's done in such a way so weirdly that the latter books aren't well suited to ''any'' demographic. Our first introduction to the series comes from age range. JustifiedTrope because it's a book review calling out book #7 for precisely that.philosophical treaties masquerading as literature, written by a man who flat-out says, "I don't spend much time thinking about my audience."


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* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series and say, "Huh, there's a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." But Salby's particular anvil -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, it can be hard to ''quite'' identify how that's the whole point of his books. Once you know, though, the idea that these books were written as a philosophy treaties rather than a story makes sense.

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* [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series and say, "Huh, there's a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." It's clear to see where his interests lie. But Salby's particular anvil -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, it can be hard to ''quite'' identify how that's the whole point of his books. that it ''is'' a philosophy or an anvil. Once you know, though, the idea that these books were written as a philosophy treaties rather than a story makes sense.structure of the whole series snaps into place.
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* {{Anvilicious}}: Anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series and say, "Huh, there's a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." But Salby's particular anvil -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, it can be hard to ''quite'' identify how that's the whole point of his books. Once you know, though, the idea that these books were written as a philosophy treaties rather than a story makes sense.

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* {{Anvilicious}}: [[invoked]]{{Anvilicious}}: Anyone can look at Salby's Chesscourt series and say, "Huh, there's a man obsessed with fiendishly detail-oriented, interconnected, duty-driven plots, and largely disinterested in his characters and worldbuilding." But Salby's particular anvil -- obeying Mundum -- is off the wall enough that, without exterior knowledge of his philosophy, it can be hard to ''quite'' identify how that's the whole point of his books. Once you know, though, the idea that these books were written as a philosophy treaties rather than a story makes sense.
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* UncertainAudience: Chesscourt could be thought of as GrowingWithTheAudience, but it's done in such a way that the latter books aren't well suited to
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-->'''Charles Adair:''' As ''Other Mirrors'' demands from its reader a certain drab, bureaucratic cast of mind, no child who is fully a child will enjoy it; as its sensibility never progresses beyond that of a precocious adolescent, no adult who is fully an adult will tolerate it. Salby has written what is perhaps a definitive test of abnormal development, but he has written a dreadful novel.

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-->'''Salby:''' I simply set out the world as I saw it, the vale of responsibility, and devised a cast of characters, as charismatic as I could make them and with all the gleaming oddities without which fiction today is deemed arid. I made these characters obey, simply and without straying, the voice of Mundum, never mentioning that hidden protagonist explicitly but directing all action bluntly by its command.



* ScatterbrainedSenior: Zigzagging. ''The Northern Caves'' is Salby's final unpublished manuscript that he was working on at the time of his death. Just ''how'' clear-headed he was at this point is a matter of debate amongst the fans. Sentiments include:

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When one fan involved in the debate gets access to a cache of Salby's old papers, everyone is excited for what they might reveal, and a small group of the most dedicated participants meet up in person to look through them. However, things soon take a dark turn as they learn more about Salby than they bargained for...

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* CosmicHorrorReveal: The revelation that [[spoiler:the diner employees to whom Aaron "spoke in the voice of the sky" committed suicide, proving that the effects of ''The Northern Caves'' aren't just in the Spelunkers' heads]]... [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane unless]] you buy the explanation that [[spoiler:it was just a coincidence.]]

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* CosmicHorrorReveal: The revelation that [[spoiler:the diner employees to whom Aaron "spoke in the voice of the sky" committed suicide, proving that the effects of ''The Northern Caves'' aren't just in the Spelunkers' heads]]... heads]]… [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane unless]] you buy the explanation that [[spoiler:it was just a coincidence.]]



-->Salby starts from the comfort zone of a prepubescent fantasy reader and builds from there. In that he's akin to [[Creator/JRRTolkien Tolkien]] or [[Creator/CSLewis Lewis]] or any one of their progeny. But what Salby builds into is not ''maturity'', per se. He does not "grow up" with the reader. [...] The characters do not mature, except in the sense of casting off some of the cloying vocabulary that marred ''A Thornbush Tale'' (their "golly"s and "gosh"es and "darn"s). Aging is implied to occur, but sex and romance are absent. Nor do the characters "come of age," either in the sense of being initiated into the adult culture of some surrounding society or in the sense of striking out boldly on some self-determined path. Instead, the trajectory is one of increasing moral weight.

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-->Salby starts from the comfort zone of a prepubescent fantasy reader and builds from there. In that he's akin to [[Creator/JRRTolkien Tolkien]] or [[Creator/CSLewis Lewis]] or any one of their progeny. But what Salby builds into is not ''maturity'', per se. He does not "grow up" with the reader. [...] […] The characters do not mature, except in the sense of casting off some of the cloying vocabulary that marred ''A Thornbush Tale'' (their "golly"s and "gosh"es and "darn"s). Aging is implied to occur, but [[NoHuggingNoKissing sex and romance are absent. absent]]. Nor do the characters [[RiteOfPassage "come of age," age,"]] either in the sense of being initiated into the adult culture of some surrounding society or in the sense of striking out boldly on some self-determined path. Instead, the trajectory is one of increasing moral weight.weight.
* KissingCousins: Paul ships cousins Charles and Sally.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. Paul's {{shipping}} of Charles and Sally, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. Paul's {{shipping}} of Charles and Sally, Fandom {{shipping}}, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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* BrotherSisterTeam: The main characters of Chesscourt are siblings Sally and Tom, and their older cousin Charles.



* FlatCharacter: Salby isn't known for being that good at character development, and his characters are generally thought to be a bit flat and stilted, as well as {{static|Character}}. JustifiedTrope -- as they dig deeper into Salby's personal writings, they find him saying point-blank that the characters are just vessels to demonstrate his worldview.
-->'''Salby:''' I simply set out the world as I saw it, the vale of responsibility, and devised a cast of characters, as charismatic as I could make them and with all the gleaming oddities without which fiction today is deemed arid. I made these characters obey, simply and without straying, the voice of Mundum, never mentioning that hidden protagonist explicitly but directing all action bluntly by its command.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. The fandom {{shipping}} of Charles and Sally, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.

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* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. The fandom Paul's {{shipping}} of Charles and Sally, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.
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* FixFic: Not in the usual plot-based "fix the story" sense, but in a thematic way. Paul describes Chesscourt fanfic as overwhelmingly ''anti-Salbian'' in tone.
-->We wanted to stop the relentless forward motion, turn back the clock, find some way to let our characters rest a moment, laugh for a moment, take a moment to notice how beautifully the light gleams off each others' hair. (Etc.) Jenny gave the Lorrums the development that they deserved and that Salby denied them, precisely because he was himself. I involved myself in the possibility of Sally cut off from the world of Chesscourt, living out an un-Salbian life. I imagined Charles and Sally recognizing the deep kinship which was all too obvious in their every interaction, but which the iron law of the vigil proscribed.
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* {{Doorstopper}}: As the Chesscourt series goes on the books get longer and longer, in addition to getting weirder and more complex. The nine books lengths are: 166 pages, 255 pages, 242 pages, 271 pages, 345 pages, 435 pages, 676 pages, 775 pages, 844 pages.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist, previously the author of {{WebOriginal/Floornight}}. Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist, previously nostalgebraist (previously the author of {{WebOriginal/Floornight}}.''{{WebOriginal/Floornight}}''). Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby.



When one fan involved in the debate gets access to a cache of Salby's old papers, everyone is excited for what they might reveal, and a small group of the most dedicated participants meet up in person to look through them. However, things soon take a dark turn as they learn more about Salby than they bargained for....

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When one fan involved in the debate gets access to a cache of Salby's old papers, everyone is excited for what they might reveal, and a small group of the most dedicated participants meet up in person to look through them. However, things soon take a dark turn as they learn more about Salby than they bargained for....
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* GrowingWithTheAudience: The Chesscourt books reportedly do. Sort of. In a weird way that many readers find unsatisfying.
-->Salby starts from the comfort zone of a prepubescent fantasy reader and builds from there. In that he's akin to [[Creator/JRRTolkien Tolkien]] or [[Creator/CSLewis Lewis]] or any one of their progeny. But what Salby builds into is not ''maturity'', per se. He does not "grow up" with the reader. [...] The characters do not mature, except in the sense of casting off some of the cloying vocabulary that marred ''A Thornbush Tale'' (their "golly"s and "gosh"es and "darn"s). Aging is implied to occur, but sex and romance are absent. Nor do the characters "come of age," either in the sense of being initiated into the adult culture of some surrounding society or in the sense of striking out boldly on some self-determined path. Instead, the trajectory is one of increasing moral weight.



* NoHuggingNoKissing: The Chesscourt books are staunchly devoid of any romance. This is part of tremendous ''weightiness'' of the books. The fandom {{shipping}} of Charles and Sally, then, it's a sort of defiance against the themes of canon.
-->It isn't just that no romance occurs, which would not be too unusual in a series of this kind. It's that it feels like it never could have occurred. The characters, by virtue of being the heirs of the Manor, are afflicted with a kind of terrible ''noblesse oblige'' whose full weight emerges steadily across the course of nine whole books. There is no time to stop and enjoy what are, for the rest of us, the ordinary pleasures of life -- everywhere, Weightier Things beckon, and they only beckon louder and louder with time.



--> "You must not imagine that for beings like you and us there can be laughter. The low men laugh, and we envy them. But for us, the higher ones, there is no laughter, only an unending vigil, purely serious, stretching on into the night."

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--> "You -->'''The cherub''': ''[to Sally]'' You must not imagine that for beings like you and us there can be laughter. The low men laugh, and we envy them. But for us, the higher ones, there is no laughter, only an unending vigil, purely serious, stretching on into the night."



* ScatterbrainedSenior: Zigzagging. ''The Northern Caves'' is Salby's final unpublished manuscript that he was working on at the time of his death. Just ''how'' clear-headed he was at this point is a matter of debate amongst the fans. Sentiments include:
-->'''[=JimWind=]:''' I think Salby was not well when he wrote that stuff, and I'd just rather not look at it.
-->'''jenni_fur:''' LS could definitely WRITE, even when he wrote this stuff. not write like he used to. maybe not write as WELL as he used to. but there is something there.



---> '''Aaron''': "Don't even try because two times two makes four, gentlemen, is not life but the beginning of death."
** On two occasions, Paul makes reference to the "[[Literature/NineteenEightyFour place where there is no darkness]]": first in the brightly-lit bathroom where Aaron's emotional state first starts to crumble, and second when stepping outside on the sunny morning when [[spoiler:he first begins to embrace Salby's philosophy]].

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---> '''Aaron''': "Don't --->'''Aaron''': Don't even try because two times two makes four, gentlemen, is not life but the beginning of death."
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** On two occasions, Paul makes reference to the "[[Literature/NineteenEightyFour place [[Literature/NineteenEightyFour "place where there is no darkness]]": darkness"]]: first in the brightly-lit bathroom where Aaron's emotional state first starts to crumble, and second when stepping outside on the sunny morning when [[spoiler:he first begins to embrace Salby's philosophy]].



* TurnOfTheMillennium: The book's setting, complete with early-fandom-style forum threads.

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* TurnOfTheMillennium: The book's setting, complete with early-fandom-style story is set in 2003 and 2004. It's been praised for its accurate depiction of early-00s fandom and forum threads.culture.
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* ShoutOut:
** Aaron paraphrases Dostoevsky’s ''Literature/NotesFromUnderground'':
---> '''Aaron''': "Don't even try because two times two makes four, gentlemen, is not life but the beginning of death."
** On two occasions, Paul makes reference to the "[[Literature/NineteenEightyFour place where there is no darkness]]": first in the brightly-lit bathroom where Aaron's emotional state first starts to crumble, and second when stepping outside on the sunny morning when [[spoiler:he first begins to embrace Salby's philosophy]].
** The Cafe admin torgo shares a name with a character from ''Film/ManosTheHandsOfFate''. His forum signature is a quote from the [[Series/MysteryScienceTheater3000 MST3K]] of the movie:
---> "You are the driver. What would you do if this happened to ''you''?"

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist, previously the author of {{WebOriginal/Floornight}}. Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby. The plot kicks off when one forum regular decides to attempt to understand Salby's unpublished final work ''The Northern Caves'', three thousand pages of incomprehensible MindScrew. The attempt spawns numerous theories and interpretations, and increasingly acrimonious debate as the fans struggle to fit ''The Northern Caves'' into the orderly Chesscourt series they know.

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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist, previously the author of {{WebOriginal/Floornight}}. Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby. Salby.

The plot kicks off when one forum regular decides to attempt to understand Salby's unpublished final work ''The Northern Caves'', three thousand pages of incomprehensible MindScrew. The attempt spawns numerous theories and interpretations, and increasingly acrimonious debate as the fans struggle to fit ''The Northern Caves'' into the orderly Chesscourt series they know.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/3659997 The Northern Caves]]'' is a 2015 WebOriginalFiction novel written by nostalgebraist, previously the author of {{WebOriginal/Floornight}}. Set in the [[TurnOfTheMillennium early 2000s]], it follows a group of fans on an online forum dedicated to the [[ShowWithinAShow fictional]] Chesscourt fantasy book series by Leonard Salby. The plot kicks off when one forum regular decides to attempt to understand Salby's unpublished final work ''The Northern Caves'', three thousand pages of incomprehensible MindScrew. The attempt spawns numerous theories and interpretations, and increasingly acrimonious debate as the fans struggle to fit ''The Northern Caves'' into the orderly Chesscourt series they know.

When one fan involved in the debate gets access to a cache of Salby's old papers, everyone is excited for what they might reveal, and a small group of the most dedicated participants meet up in person to look through them. However, things soon take a dark turn as they learn more about Salby than they bargained for....

The novel is written in a ScrapbookStory style, with most of the text being participant Paul/[=GlassWave=]'s notes for a "report" he has been asked to write explaining these events. This is interspersed with snippets from forum threads and occasionally other documents. It's been praised for its accurate depiction of early-00s fandom and forum culture.

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!!''The Northern Caves'' ​provides examples of:

* AlienGeometries: Experiencing "the separation" causes you to perceive your normal surroundings as this.
* AmbiguouslyAbsentParent: Marsh's mother is never seen or mentioned. Paul wonders about this, but opts not to ask about what could be a sensitive topic.
* ArcWords: "Don't go into the caves."
* {{Bookends}}: Both the first and last chapters feature a document or excerpt where someone disparages Chesscourt and its fans.
* BrokenPedestal: Learning that Leonard Salby [[spoiler:was credibly accused of murder]] is this for Aaron.
--> '''Aaron''': [[spoiler:Leonard Salby killed someone, for real, Paul. My Leonard Salby. I wore out those old Chesscourt paperbacks in my room, alone. Hiding from the folks. Reading the words of a murderer. Isn't that just how it goes?]]
* ChemicallyInducedInsanity: Paul starts experiencing the separation after taking two Adderalls, [[spoiler:and slips the other Spelunkers Adderall in the hopes that the same will happen to them.]]
* ComplexityAddiction: Salby suffered from this in his writing. Over the course of the Chesscourt series, the worldbuilding became more and more convoluted, to the point where he ended up self-publishing the last two books after his editor demanded he tone it down. [[spoiler:It turns out this was a feature and not a bug, since his purpose in writing the books was to spread his philosophy of Mundum.]]
* ConvertedFanboy: Paul got into Chesscourt after his college girlfriend recommended it to him. He notes that this sets him apart from most of the other characters, who grew up with the series.
* CosmicHorrorReveal: The revelation that [[spoiler:the diner employees to whom Aaron "spoke in the voice of the sky" committed suicide, proving that the effects of ''The Northern Caves'' aren't just in the Spelunkers' heads]]... [[MaybeMagicMaybeMundane unless]] you buy the explanation that [[spoiler:it was just a coincidence.]]
* EpilepticTrees: In-universe, Aaron is known for this on the Cafe.
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** Paul's forum signature mentions he's one of the only people whose favorite Chesscourt book is ''Sea of Glass'', a [[invoked]] [[LaterInstallmentWeirdness later installment]] that took Salby's ComplexityAddiction so far he was forced to self-publish it. [[spoiler:Paul ends up being the only Spelunker to adopt Salby's philosophy of life.]]
** In Lugnut's first appearance, he brings up details from Salby's life as possibly relevant to the "Seeking Continuity in TNC" thread, and complains that biographical criticism isn't welcome on the Cafe. [[spoiler:Salby's personal papers, and what they reveal about his life and worldview, turn out to be the key to understanding TNC, although the Spelunkers may wish they weren't.]]
* FreudWasRight: One passage in ''The Northern Caves'' by Leonard Salby contains phrases that lead Aaron to wonder if it's describing a sexual seduction.
--> ''Sally went for Ws full exoteric crystal matrix as hard as graphene megavolts into his LIGHTNING FAST SPHEX transmission lost oh very good 100% on the full heavy''
* MadArtist: Leonard Salby.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Aaron's reaction after learning that [[spoiler:the restaurant staff to whom he "spoke in the voice of the sky" were DrivenToSuicide]].
* NoSenseOfHumor: Salby is accused of this by critics. Although there are humorous moments in his books, he specifically portrays his heroes as too burdened with responsibility to have time for a sense of humor. [[spoiler:We later learn he saw his own life in the same way.]]
--> "You must not imagine that for beings like you and us there can be laughter. The low men laugh, and we envy them. But for us, the higher ones, there is no laughter, only an unending vigil, purely serious, stretching on into the night."
* SawStarWarsTwentySevenTimes: Unsurprisingly, many of the Cafe users allude to having reread the Chesscourt books many times.
* SesquipedalianLoquaciousness: Paul has a tendency to slip into this (along with PurpleProse) in his notes, usually when he's nervous or uncomfortable about what he's writing. He lampshades this tendency a few times.
* TurnOfTheMillennium: The book's setting, complete with early-fandom-style forum threads.
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