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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Molly's mom manages to stop J from killing Molly but she has to sacrifice herself to do it. Molly comforts her mom as she dies telling her she forgives her. Molly discovers other people in stasis on board ''The Infinity'' meaning she'll never be alone again.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Molly's [[spoiler:Romy's mom manages to stop J from killing Molly her daughter but she has to sacrifice herself to do it. Molly Romy comforts her mom as she dies telling her she forgives her. Molly Romy discovers other people in stasis on board ''The Infinity'' meaning she'll never be alone again.]]
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* FasterThanLightTravel: Averted. 'The Infinity' has a maximum speed of 0.09c, and the much faster 'The Eternity' has a maximum speed of 0.75c.
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* FasterThanLightTravel: Averted. 'The Infinity' ''The Infinity'' has a maximum speed of 0.09c, and the much faster 'The Eternity' ''The Eternity'' has a maximum speed of 0.75c.
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* ShowWithinAShow: Exploited; Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it. [[spoiler:J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him.]]
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* ShowWithinAShow: Exploited; Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it. [[spoiler:J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's Jayden Ness-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him.]]
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* SurvivorsGuilt: [[spoiler:What ultimately causes Romy's mother to crack.]]
* TheShrink: Romy's therapist Molly is an awesome shrink.
* TheShrink: Romy's therapist Molly is an awesome shrink.
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* SurvivorsGuilt: [[spoiler:What ultimately causes Romy's mother to crack.crack, leading to her husband's death.]]
* TheShrink: Romy's therapist Molly is an awesome shrink. [[spoiler:J cuts off all and any contact with the Infinity to weaken Romy's resolve.]]
* TheShrink: Romy's therapist Molly is an awesome shrink. [[spoiler:J cuts off all and any contact with the Infinity to weaken Romy's resolve.]]
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''The Loneliest Girl in the Universe'' is a book by Lauren James about a girl who is completely alone in Space with only her therapist from Earth's daily voice messages for comfort. Over the course of the book, a war breaks out on Earth and her therapists voice messages stop. Luckily, a ship, ''The Eternity'' will connect with ''The Infinity'' and now she has someone else to talk to.
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''The Loneliest Girl in the Universe'' is a book by Lauren James about a girl who is completely alone in Space space with only her therapist from Earth's daily voice messages for comfort. Over the course of the book, a war breaks out on Earth and her therapists voice messages stop. Luckily, a her ship, ''The Eternity'' Eternity'', will connect with ''The Infinity'' Infinity'', and now she has someone else to talk to.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is an awesome shrink.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, therapist Molly is an awesome shrink.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The Universe'' is a book by Lauren James about a girl who is completely alone in Space with only her therapist from Earth's daily voice messages for comfort. Over the course of the book, a war breaks out on Earth and her therapists voice messages stop. Luckily, a ship, ''The Eternity'' will connect with ''The Infinity'' and now she has someone else to talk to.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The in the Universe'' is a book by Lauren James about a girl who is completely alone in Space with only her therapist from Earth's daily voice messages for comfort. Over the course of the book, a war breaks out on Earth and her therapists voice messages stop. Luckily, a ship, ''The Eternity'' will connect with ''The Infinity'' and now she has someone else to talk to.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The Universe'' contains examples of:
* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Molly's mom manages to stop J from killing Molly but she has to sacrifice herself to do it. Molly comforts her mom as she dies telling her she forgives her. Molly discovers other people in stasis on board ''The Infinity'' meaning she'll never be alone again.]]
* CentrifugalGravity: In both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' this is used.
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* BittersweetEnding:
* CentrifugalGravity: In both ''The Infinity'' and ''The
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* ProperlyParanoid: Romy is scared that the astronauts are out for revenge that she lived and they died. [[spoiler: although it isn't the ''astronauts'' who are out for revenge, J wants to kill Romy because of that reason.]]
* ShowWithinAShow: Exploited, Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it [[spoiler: J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him]]
* SleeperStarship: ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' are both this.[[spoiler: However due to a failure in the stasis pods on ''The Infinity'' all the astronauts save Romy's parents die.]]
* ShowWithinAShow: Exploited, Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it [[spoiler: J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him]]
* SleeperStarship: ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' are both this.[[spoiler: However due to a failure in the stasis pods on ''The Infinity'' all the astronauts save Romy's parents die.]]
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* ProperlyParanoid: Romy is scared that the astronauts are out for revenge that she lived and they died. [[spoiler: although [[spoiler:although it isn't the ''astronauts'' who are out for revenge, J wants to kill Romy because of that reason.]]
* ShowWithinAShow:Exploited, Exploited; Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it [[spoiler: J it. [[spoiler:J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him]]
him.]]
* SleeperStarship: ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' are both this.[[spoiler: However [[spoiler:However, due to a failure in the stasis pods on ''The Infinity'' Infinity'', all the astronauts save Romy's parents die.]]
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* SleeperStarship: ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' are both this.
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* SurvivorsGuilt: [[spoiler: What ultimately causes Romy's mother to crack.]]
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* SurvivorsGuilt: [[spoiler: What [[spoiler:What ultimately causes Romy's mother to crack.]]
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* SleeperStarship: ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' are both this.[[spoiler: However due to a failure in the stasis pods on ''The Infinity'' all the astronauts save Romy's parents die.]]
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* SurvivorsGuilt: [[spoiler: What ultimately causes Romy's mother to crack.]]
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler: Molly's mom manages to stop J from killing Molly but she has to sacrifice herself to do it. Molly comforts her mom as she dies telling her she forgives her. Molly discovers other people in stasis on board ''The Infinity'' meaning she'll never be alone again.]]
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* FasterThanLightTravel: Straight, both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' can travel faster than light.
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* FasterThanLightTravel: Straight, both ''The Infinity'' Averted. 'The Infinity' has a maximum speed of 0.09c, and ''The Eternity'' can travel the much faster than light.'The Eternity' has a maximum speed of 0.75c.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is an awesome shrink.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is an awesome shrink.shrink.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is TheAwesomeShrink.
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* TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is TheAwesomeShrink.an awesome shrink.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The Universe'' is a book by Lauren James about a girl who is completely alone in Space with only her therapist from Earth's daily voice messages for comfort. Over the course of the book, a war breaks out on Earth and her therapists voice messages stop. Luckily, a ship, ''The Eternity'' will connect with ''The Infinity'' and now she has someone else to talk to.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The Universe'' contains examples of:
*CentrifugalGravity: In both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' this is used.
*FasterThanLightTravel: Straight, both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' can travel faster than light.
*ProperlyParanoid: Romy is scared that the astronauts are out for revenge that she lived and they died. [[spoiler: although it isn't the ''astronauts'' who are out for revenge, J wants to kill Romy because of that reason.]]
*ShowWithinAShow: Exploited, Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it [[spoiler: J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him]]
*SpacePeople: The astronauts on ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' expected to spend most of their life in space. Romy is, however, the only person born in space.
*TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is TheAwesomeShrink.
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''The Loneliest Girl In The Universe'' contains examples of:
*CentrifugalGravity: In both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' this is used.
*FasterThanLightTravel: Straight, both ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' can travel faster than light.
*ProperlyParanoid: Romy is scared that the astronauts are out for revenge that she lived and they died. [[spoiler: although it isn't the ''astronauts'' who are out for revenge, J wants to kill Romy because of that reason.]]
*ShowWithinAShow: Exploited, Romy watches Loch and Ness, as well as reading and writing fanfiction of it [[spoiler: J takes advantage of this by using lines from her fanfiction and purposefully acting like Jayden-Romy's favorite character-so he can make her like him]]
*SpacePeople: The astronauts on ''The Infinity'' and ''The Eternity'' expected to spend most of their life in space. Romy is, however, the only person born in space.
*TheShrink: Romy's therapist, Molly is TheAwesomeShrink.
