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-->In the market place Lewis met Kit Marican
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* [[spoiler:HappilyFailedSuicide]]: [[spoiler:Lewis tries to throw himself from the highest tree around after he realizes that he's been a bad father to Thomas. After that fails to kill him he stops being a Stepford Smiler.]]
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* [[spoiler:HappilyFailedSuicide]]: [[spoiler:Lewis tries to throw himself from the highest tree around after he realizes that he's been a bad father to Thomas. After that fails to kill him him, he stops being a Stepford Smiler.StepfordSmiler.]]
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK with Thomas healing their captured enemies.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK okay with Thomas healing their captured enemies.
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* StepfordSmiler: Lewis is said to have "painted a false smile upon his face" in responce to his father's disaproval.
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* StepfordSmiler: Lewis is said to have "painted a false smile upon his face" in responce response to his father's disaproval.disapproval.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK with Thomas healing thier captured enemies.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't please thier father (partly by having Lewis cheer them up), and then how Lewis dealt with it. Also, at the end Lewis and Thomas are noted for thier big hearts and Meredith for her strange sense of priorities.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't please thier father (partly by having Lewis cheer them up), and then how Lewis dealt with it. Also, at the end Lewis and Thomas are noted for thier big hearts and Meredith for her strange sense of priorities.
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* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK with Thomas healing thier their captured enemies.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't pleasethier their father (partly by having Lewis cheer them up), and then how Lewis dealt with it. Also, at the end Lewis and Thomas are noted for thier their big hearts and Meredith for her strange sense of priorities.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't please
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The doctors of the Cat family is a short story about four generations in a dysfunctional family of cats. The narration style is a bit weird.
It can be found here: http://lorcastuff.weebly.com/the-doctors-of-the-cat-family.html
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!! This whatever-it-is provides examples of:
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:
-->In the market place Lewis met Kit Marican
-->She was short, but she could jump high
-->Her eyes were the color of newly sprouted leaves
-->And he could see she could run fast, for she was being chased by mafia goons
* [[spoiler:HappilyFailedSuicide]]: [[spoiler:Lewis tries to throw himself from the highest tree around after he realizes that he's been a bad father to Thomas. After that fails to kill him he stops being a Stepford Smiler.]]
* MaliciousSlander: People spread rumors about Jonathan Cat because they were jealous of his wealth.
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK with Thomas healing thier captured enemies.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't please thier father (partly by having Lewis cheer them up), and then how Lewis dealt with it. Also, at the end Lewis and Thomas are noted for thier big hearts and Meredith for her strange sense of priorities.
* SpeciesSurname: The Cat family. There are also cats with different surnames (Kit Marican, Hector Kithro), and the one hare character has the surname 'Clearwater'.
* StepfordSmiler: Lewis is said to have "painted a false smile upon his face" in responce to his father's disaproval.
* WhyCouldntYouBeDifferent: Jonathan Cat isn't pleased with any of his children except for Janet. [[spoiler:Lewis isn't too happy about Thomas joining the revolution either. He eventually gets over it.]]
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It can be found here: http://lorcastuff.weebly.com/the-doctors-of-the-cat-family.html
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!! This whatever-it-is provides examples of:
* BreadEggsMilkSquick:
-->In the market place Lewis met Kit Marican
-->She was short, but she could jump high
-->Her eyes were the color of newly sprouted leaves
-->And he could see she could run fast, for she was being chased by mafia goons
* [[spoiler:HappilyFailedSuicide]]: [[spoiler:Lewis tries to throw himself from the highest tree around after he realizes that he's been a bad father to Thomas. After that fails to kill him he stops being a Stepford Smiler.]]
* MaliciousSlander: People spread rumors about Jonathan Cat because they were jealous of his wealth.
* TheRevolutionWillNotBeVilified: Not only is the government evil when the revolution breaks out, the leader of the revolution is OK with Thomas healing thier captured enemies.
* RuleOfThree: It's first explained how Lewis' brother and sister dealt with knowing they couldn't please thier father (partly by having Lewis cheer them up), and then how Lewis dealt with it. Also, at the end Lewis and Thomas are noted for thier big hearts and Meredith for her strange sense of priorities.
* SpeciesSurname: The Cat family. There are also cats with different surnames (Kit Marican, Hector Kithro), and the one hare character has the surname 'Clearwater'.
* StepfordSmiler: Lewis is said to have "painted a false smile upon his face" in responce to his father's disaproval.
* WhyCouldntYouBeDifferent: Jonathan Cat isn't pleased with any of his children except for Janet. [[spoiler:Lewis isn't too happy about Thomas joining the revolution either. He eventually gets over it.]]
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