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''The Black Witch Chronicles'' is a YA fantasy series by Laurie Forest. The first book was published in 2017. The books in the series are ''The Black Witch'' (2017) and ''The Iron Flower'' (2018). There are also two {{prequel}} e-book novellas, ''Wandfasted'' and ''Light Mage''.
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''The Black Witch Chronicles'' is a YA fantasy series by Laurie Forest. The first book was published in 2017. The books in the series are are:
* ''The Black Witch''(2017) and (2017)
* ''The Iron Flower''(2018). (2018)
* There are also two {{prequel}}e-book novellas, ''Wandfasted'' and ''Light Mage''.Mage'', first published as e-books, and later collected in ''The Rebel Mages'' (2019).
* ''The Black Witch''
* ''The Iron Flower''
* There are also two {{prequel}}
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* StayInTheKitchen: Gardnerian culture holds that the men, who have the wand magic, are to be soldiers, while the women, who generally have little magic, are to give birth to more Gardnerian men to pass the power onto. What this means in effect is that the Gardnerian women with actual power, like Tessla and Sage, are effectively blocked from actually being taught to use their power, while Gardneria loses out on more soldiers because of its own cultural stupidity.
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** Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words, which are in an ancient language.
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** Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words, which are in an ancient language.language that isn't used in conversation and isn't taught to anyone except practicing mages.
** Tessla is initially ecstatic at the Black Witch's triumph over the Kelts because it means that she and her family will be able to live in peace, without fear of being persecuted for existing. But as the book continues, she finds that the Gardnerians are just as xenophobic as the Kelts, and will happily commit atrocities to anyone of a race they don't like. By the end of the book, her idealised view of her country is all but gone.
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* YouKilledMyFather: Yvan tells Ren that her grandmother the Black Witch killed his father. [[spoiler:His father was the legendary, dreaded Icaral.]]
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* YouKilledMyFather: Yvan tells Ren that her grandmother the Black Witch killed his father. [[spoiler:His father was the legendary, dreaded Icaral.]]
]] Elloren responds by saying that his people, the Kelts, killed both of her parents.
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* PsychosomaticPowerOutage: [[spoiler:Icarals who grow up being told they're foul and weak will end up with atrophied wings.]]
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* PsychosomaticPowerOutage: PsychosomaticSuperpowerOutage: [[spoiler:Icarals who grow up being told they're foul and weak will end up with atrophied wings.]]
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* DragonAncestry: [[spoiler:The wyvern-shifters interbred with all other sentient species, resulting in the Icarals.]]
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* EarAche: "Cropping", cutting the points of an Urisk's long ears off and shaving their head. [[spoiler:During the riots in ''The Iron Flower'', Olilly becomes a victim of this. Later, Diana takes revenge on several Gardnerian military apprentices by ripping their ears off during the evacuation.]]
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* EarAche: "Cropping", cutting the points of an Urisk's long ears off and shaving their head. [[spoiler:During the riots in ''The Iron Flower'', Olilly becomes a victim of this. Later, Diana takes revenge on several the Gardnerian military apprentices responsible by ripping their ears off during the evacuation.]]
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz's best rune-sorceresses.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left leaves out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz's best rune-sorceresses.
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* HopeSpot: At one point in ''The Iron Flower'', everyone's problems appear to be solved if they can just escape to the Lupine lands. [[spoiler:The next chapter has the reveal that 99% of the Lupines have been murdered.]]
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* HopeSpot: HopeSpot:
** At one point in ''The Iron Flower'', everyone's problems appear to be solved if they can just escape to the Lupine lands. [[spoiler:The next chapter has the reveal that 99% of the Lupines have been murdered.]]
** At one point in ''The Iron Flower'', everyone's problems appear to be solved if they can just escape to the Lupine lands. [[spoiler:The next chapter has the reveal that 99% of the Lupines have been murdered.]]
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* PsychosomaticPowerOutage: [[spoiler:Icarals who grow up being told they're foul and weak will end up with atrophied wings.]]
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* AllYourPowersCombined: Ordinarily, rune-sorcerers can only use the runes of their respective race, and no other. Mixed-race people like Na'bee (who is half-Smaragdalfar and half-Ishkart) can use both. Gardnerian Light Mages, however, can use all the runes of every race.
** Rivyr has one after a cave full of Smaragdalfar refugees run screaming at the sight of him, when all he wanted to do was greet them and offer the children sweets.
** At a later point in the same book, [[spoiler:Ariel is taken prisoner and thrown into a prison in Valgard, where she'll shortly be killed for being an Icaral. Yvan and Elloren manage to break her out and get her to safety, but they soon find that Ariel overdosed on nilantyr and will die as a result, and there's nothing anyone can do.]]
* MindRape: The Alfsigr do this to their entire race. At the age of twelve, every child is given a necklace that's enchanted to make them placid, serene and free of rebellious thoughts. Anyone who refuses to wear it is either banished or thrown into prison.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists — six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was Level Four or higher.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists — six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was Level Four or higher. They're also incredibly powerful, being rune-sorcerers who can use every kind of rune.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz' best rune-sorceresses.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz' Amaz's best rune-sorceresses.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie.]] Sage's son, Fy'nir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
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* HalfHumanHybrid: HalfHumanHybrid:
** [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie.]] ]]
** Sage's son,Fy'nir, Fyn'ir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
** [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie.
** Sage's son,
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* SecretTestOfCharacter: When Ren goes to university, Vyvian gives instructions for Ren to be housed in the dorm with the Icarals and placed in an uncomfortable work rota to try and pressure her into fasting Lukas. Vice Chancellor Quillen goes along with it because the Resistance wants to see what kind of person Ren is.
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* AndYouThoughtItWasAGame: Zig-zagged. Gwynn gives Sage the White Wand and tells her to keep it hidden, which Sage does. However, years pass with nothing happening, and both girls convince themselves that it was a game they took too seriously. When things start happening, both realise it was real after all.
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* AnIcePerson: Fallon Bane and her father's power works mostly through ice.
* AndYouThoughtItWasAGame: Zig-zagged. Gwynn gives Sage the White Wand and tells her to keep it hidden, which Sage does. However, years pass with nothing happening, and both girls convince themselves that it was a game they took too seriously. When things start happening, both realise it was real after all.
* AndYouThoughtItWasAGame: Zig-zagged. Gwynn gives Sage the White Wand and tells her to keep it hidden, which Sage does. However, years pass with nothing happening, and both girls convince themselves that it was a game they took too seriously. When things start happening, both realise it was real after all.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Fallon Bane starts out almost friendly to Elloren, but quickly reveals herself to be utterly cruel.
** Elloren's Aunt Vyvian.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. He constantly longs for the ocean, but he has no gills or seal-skin- and since the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
** Elloren's Aunt Vyvian.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. He constantly longs for the ocean, but he has no gills or seal-skin- and since the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: BitchInSheepsClothing:
** Fallon Bane starts out almost friendly to Elloren, but quickly reveals herself to be utterly cruel.
** Elloren's AuntVyvian.
Vyvian, whose cruelty and bigotry becomes more obvious as her position of power becomes more threatened.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. He constantly longs for the ocean, but he has no gills orseal-skin- seal-skin — and since the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
** Fallon Bane starts out almost friendly to Elloren, but quickly reveals herself to be utterly cruel.
** Elloren's Aunt
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. He constantly longs for the ocean, but he has no gills or
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* BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage: After Vogel takes over, wandfasting is made mandatory for every Gardnerian above a certain age who isn't a priest, with anyone above the age limit who isn't fasted by the deadline being subject to this.
** In ''Wandfasted'', the Gardnerians after Carnissa Gardner's victory were subjected to this, with the unfasted being told that they had a day to find someone to fast to- and if they couldn't find anyone, someone would be found for them.
** In ''Wandfasted'', the Gardnerians after Carnissa Gardner's victory were subjected to this, with the unfasted being told that they had a day to find someone to fast to- and if they couldn't find anyone, someone would be found for them.
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* BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage: BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage:
** After Vogel takes over, wandfasting is made mandatory for every Gardnerian above a certain age who isn't a priest, with anyone above the age limit who isn't fasted by the deadline being subject to this.
** In ''Wandfasted'', the Gardnerians after Carnissa Gardner's victory were subjected to this, with the unfasted being told that they had a day to find someone to fastto- to — and if they couldn't find anyone, someone would be found for them.
** After Vogel takes over, wandfasting is made mandatory for every Gardnerian above a certain age who isn't a priest, with anyone above the age limit who isn't fasted by the deadline being subject to this.
** In ''Wandfasted'', the Gardnerians after Carnissa Gardner's victory were subjected to this, with the unfasted being told that they had a day to find someone to fast
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* DoomedByCanon: Tessla and Vale Gardner, the protagonists of ''Wandfasted'' are dead before ''The Black Witch''.
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* DoomedByCanon: Tessla and Vale Gardner, the protagonists of ''Wandfasted'' ''Wandfasted'', are dead before ''The Black Witch''.
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* EarAche: "Cropping", cutting the points of an Urisk's long ears off and shaving their head. [[spoiler:During the riots in ''The Iron Flower'', Olilly becomes a victim of this.]]
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* EarAche: "Cropping", cutting the points of an Urisk's long ears off and shaving their head. [[spoiler:During the riots in ''The Iron Flower'', Olilly becomes a victim of this. Later, Diana takes revenge on several Gardnerian military apprentices by ripping their ears off during the evacuation.]]
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* ElementalPowers: Gardnerian magic comes in five types- fire, water, earth, air and light. Everyone has at least one elemental affinity, sometimes multiple.
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* ElementalPowers: Gardnerian magic comes in five types- types — fire, water, earth, air and light. Everyone has at least one elemental affinity, sometimes multiple.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz' best rune-sorcerers.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them- the multiple wars the Western Realm has suffered through are the cause of most of them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them- the multiple wars the Western Realm has suffered through are the cause of most of them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz' best rune-sorcerers.
rune-sorceresses.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled onthem- them — the multiple wars the Western Realm has suffered through are the cause of most of them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on
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* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Gardnerians- they're descended from Dryad Fae, and they all have black hair, green eyes and skin that glows green in the dark.
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie]]. Sage's son, Fy'nir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
* HateAtFirstSight: Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie]]. Sage's son, Fy'nir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
* HateAtFirstSight: Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
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* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Gardnerians- Gardnerians — they're descended from Dryad Fae, and they all have black hair, green eyes and skin that glows green in the dark.
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to behalf-Selkie]]. half-Selkie.]] Sage's son, Fy'nir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
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** Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be
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** Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: Elloren has one after [[spoiler:the Amaz rescue the Selkies, who were being used as sex slaves. Seeing how broken they were, some barely in their teens, absolutely devastates her.]]
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* HeroicBSOD: HeroicBSOD:
** Elloren has one after [[spoiler:the Amaz rescue the Selkies, who were being used as sex slaves. Seeing how broken they were, some barely in their teens, absolutely devastates her.]]
** Elloren has one after [[spoiler:the Amaz rescue the Selkies, who were being used as sex slaves. Seeing how broken they were, some barely in their teens, absolutely devastates her.]]
* AnIcePerson: Fallon Bane and her father's power works mostly through ice.
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* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
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* LoveTriangle: Elloren is initially interested in Lukas Grey, the mage her aunt wants her to fast to, but eventually also becomes attracted to Yvan Guriel, a Kelt, after he warms up to her from his initial dislike. [[spoiler:By the end of ''The Iron Flower'', Ren has chosen Yvan, but she's been forcibly wandfasted to Lukas before running away, with the magical binding that will punish her if she has sex with someone other than Lukas.]]
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* LoveTriangle: LoveTriangle:
** Elloren is initially interested in Lukas Grey, the mage her aunt wants her to fast to, but eventually also becomes attracted to Yvan Guriel, a Kelt, after he warms up to her from his initial dislike. [[spoiler:By the end of ''The Iron Flower'', Ren has chosen Yvan, but she's been forcibly wandfasted to Lukas before running away, with the magical binding that will punish her if she has sex with someone other than Lukas.]]
** Elloren is initially interested in Lukas Grey, the mage her aunt wants her to fast to, but eventually also becomes attracted to Yvan Guriel, a Kelt, after he warms up to her from his initial dislike. [[spoiler:By the end of ''The Iron Flower'', Ren has chosen Yvan, but she's been forcibly wandfasted to Lukas before running away, with the magical binding that will punish her if she has sex with someone other than Lukas.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Sage names her newborn son "Fyn'ir", which means 'freedom'. Her son is not only [[spoiler:thought to be the Icaral destined to fight the next Black Witch, he's also one of the last remaining Smaragdalfar royals, his father being the other.]]
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* MeaningfulName: Sage names her newborn son "Fyn'ir", which means 'freedom'."freedom". Her son is not only [[spoiler:thought to be the Icaral destined to fight the next Black Witch, he's also one of the last remaining Smaragdalfar royals, his father being the other.]]
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* MulticoloredHair: Gareth's is black with silver tips. In Gardneria, this is both radical and anomalous- Gardnerians all have black hair, so any Gardnerian with hair that isn't entirely black is suspected of having mixed blood. [[spoiler:In Gareth's case, they're right- he's half-Selkie.]]
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* MulticoloredHair: Gareth's is black with silver tips. In Gardneria, this is both radical and anomalous- anomalous — Gardnerians all have black hair, so any Gardnerian with hair that isn't entirely black is suspected of having mixed blood. [[spoiler:In Gareth's case, they're right- right: he's half-Selkie.]]
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Ariel burns Elloren's quilt, one of the few remnants she had of her dead mother. Ren asks Lukas to retaliate- though she doesn't specify how- and he does so by killing Ariel's pet chicken horribly. Ren is aghast at the results, which leave Ariel emotionally devastated.
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* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Ariel burns Elloren's quilt, one of the few remnants she had of her dead mother. Ren asks Lukas to retaliate- retaliate — though she doesn't specify how- how — and he does so by killing Ariel's pet chicken horribly. Ren is aghast at the results, which leave Ariel emotionally devastated.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Tessla Harrow steals a wand and uses it to save dozens of captive Gardnerians, including the elderly and children, from certain death. After they're all rescued, rumours are started and spread about her- some by some of the people she rescued- that she slept with a Kelt and that when she stole the wand, she only used it to protect herself and the Kelt, and interfered with the Mages who saved them.
* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand magic- spells cast on them have no effect, but they cannot use wand magic themselves, even the ones who used to be Gardnerian.
* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand magic- spells cast on them have no effect, but they cannot use wand magic themselves, even the ones who used to be Gardnerian.
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* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Tessla Harrow steals a wand and uses it to save dozens of captive Gardnerians, including the elderly and children, from certain death. After they're all rescued, rumours are started and spread about her- her — some by some of the people she rescued- rescued — that she slept with a Kelt and that when she stole the wand, she only used it to protect herself and the Kelt, and interfered with the Mages who saved them.
* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wandmagic- magic — spells cast on them have no effect, but they cannot use wand magic themselves, even the ones who used to be Gardnerian.
* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand
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* NotSoDifferent: Tessla slowly realises over the course of ''Wandfasted'' that the Gardnerians are no different from the Kelts or anyone else- they'll inflict atrocities on anyone different from them just for existing.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's 'going hunting' every few months and disappearing for a few days. The Amaz all know where she's going, but Freyja can't tell them the truth because to do so would result in her exile.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's 'going hunting' every few months and disappearing for a few days. The Amaz all know where she's going, but Freyja can't tell them the truth because to do so would result in her exile.
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* NotSoDifferent: Tessla slowly realises over the course of ''Wandfasted'' that the Gardnerians are no different from the Kelts or anyone else- else — they'll inflict atrocities on anyone different from them just for existing.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's'going hunting' "going hunting" every few months and disappearing for a few days. The Amaz all know where she's going, but Freyja can't tell them the truth because to do so would result in her exile.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's
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* RealityEnsues: Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words, which are in an ancient language.
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* RealityEnsues: RealityEnsues:
** Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words, which are in an ancient language.
** Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words, which are in an ancient language.
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** Sage is fasted to Tobias at the age of thirteen, but because of their ages, they don't live together afterwards, they both live at home for years until they become adults, and aren't even allowed to write to each other. By the time they're due to actually live together, they've barely said two words to each other. In the intervening time, Tobias has become involved with another woman, and has no real interest in Sage- and things only go downhill from there.
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** Sage is fasted to Tobias at the age of thirteen, but because of their ages, they don't live together afterwards, they both live at home for years until they become adults, and aren't even allowed to write to each other. By the time they're due to actually live together, they've barely said two words to each other. In the intervening time, Tobias has become involved with another woman, and has no real interest in Sage- Sage — and things only go downhill from there.
* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
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* SadisticChoice: The Amaz will take in refugees of every race... but they have to be female. So any would-be refugee with male friends or family (the Amaz won't even allow male children) has to decide between living in safety while her loved ones are in danger, or refusing that safety to live with her loved ones.
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* SadisticChoice: SadisticChoice:
** The Amaz will take in refugees of every race... but they have to be female. So any would-be refugee with male friends or family (the Amaz won't even allow male children) has to decide between living in safety while her loved ones are in danger, or refusing that safety to live with her loved ones.
** The Amaz will take in refugees of every race... but they have to be female. So any would-be refugee with male friends or family (the Amaz won't even allow male children) has to decide between living in safety while her loved ones are in danger, or refusing that safety to live with her loved ones.
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* ShapeshifterModeLock: [[spoiler:The Gardnerian military uses geomancy to lock wyvern-shifters in their dragon forms before breaking them. This happened to Naga.]]
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* ShapeshifterModeLock: ShapeshifterModeLock:
** [[spoiler:The Gardnerian military uses geomancy to lock wyvern-shifters in their dragon forms before breaking them. This happened to Naga.]]
** [[spoiler:The Gardnerian military uses geomancy to lock wyvern-shifters in their dragon forms before breaking them. This happened to Naga.]]
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* StarCrossedLovers: Valasca and Ni Vin, primarily because neither of them wants to leave their culture permanently to be with the other.
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* StarCrossedLovers: StarCrossedLovers:
** Valasca and Ni Vin, primarily because neither of them wants to leave their culture permanently to be with the other.
** Valasca and Ni Vin, primarily because neither of them wants to leave their culture permanently to be with the other.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists- six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was Level Four or higher.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists- specialists — six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was Level Four or higher.
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* BitchInSheepsClothing: Fallon Bane starts out almost friendly to Elloren, but quickly reveals herself to be utterly cruel.
** Elloren's Aunt Vyvian.
** Elloren's Aunt Vyvian.
* DoomedByCanon: Tessla and Vale Gardner, the protagonists of ''Wandfasted'' are dead before ''The Black Witch''.
** Upper River Gardnerians despise Lower River Gardnerians due to their living close to Kelts, not that said closeness saved them when the Kelts decided to murder all the Gardnerians.
* NotSoDifferent: Tessla slowly realises over the course of ''Wandfasted'' that the Gardnerians are no different from the Kelts or anyone else- they'll inflict atrocities on anyone different from them just for existing.
** Aislinn and Jarod are deeply in love, but she's the daughter of a Gardnerian diplomat who's promised to another man, while he's the son of Lupines who really dislike Aislinn's family.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists- six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was rank Four or higher.
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists- six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was rank Level Four or higher.
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* WhenTreesAttack: In ''The Iron Flower'', Elloren can feel the forest's hatred of her and desire to kill her because of her power.
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* ExactWords: Valasca initially tells Elloren that she's merely a humble goat-herder. This is true. What she left out is that she's also the commander of the Queen's Guard and one of the Amaz' best rune-sorcerers.
* GreenSkinnedSpaceBabe: Gardnerians- they're descended from Dryad Fae, and they all have black hair, green eyes and skin that glows green in the dark.
** Alcippe utterly loathes Elloren at first sight, and does not warm up to her even after finding that Elloren is nothing like her grandmother and freed an abused Selkie.
** Alcippe had one in her backstory after she killed her father and brought his head to her mother, hoping the sight would break her out of her timidity, and instead, her mother was horrified and wept for her dead husband, even though he'd beaten and abused her for years.
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** Then, of course, there are the non-Gardnerians who believe that she will be just as awful a person as her grandmother, invoking SinsOfOurFathers.
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** Then, of course, there are the non-Gardnerians who believe that she will be just as awful a person as her grandmother, invoking SinsOfOurFathers. Even those who accept that she (ostensibly) has no magic need to be convinced that she doesn't have the same attitude as her grandmother.
* LightTheWay: Sage, as a Light Mage.
* MeaningfulName: Sage names her newborn son "Fyn'ir", which means 'freedom'. Her son is not only [[spoiler:thought to be the Icaral destined to fight the next Black Witch, he's also one of the last remaining Smaragdalfar royals, his father being the other.]]
* MulticoloredHair: Gareth's is black with silver tips. In Gardneria, this is both radical and anomalous- Gardnerians all have black hair, so any Gardnerian with hair that isn't entirely black is suspected of having mixed blood. [[spoiler:In Gareth's case, they're right- he's half-Selkie.]]
* MyCountryRightOrWrong: Lukas Grey admits that a lot of the things Gardneria supports and intends to carry out are horrible, and that Vogel is a power-hungry madman, but has no interest in leaving the army or trying to help the oppressed.
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* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand magic.
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* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand magic.magic- spells cast on them have no effect, but they cannot use wand magic themselves, even the ones who used to be Gardnerian.
* NoSocialSkills: Diana does not give a damn about anyone else's social norms, and also does not know when it would be a good idea to shut up. This leads to a few near-misses.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's 'going hunting' every few months and disappearing for a few days. The Amaz all know where she's going, but Freyja can't tell them the truth because to do so would result in her exile.
* NoSocialSkills: Diana does not give a damn about anyone else's social norms, and also does not know when it would be a good idea to shut up. This leads to a few near-misses.
* OpenSecret: The Amaz warrior Freyja keeps up an illicit relationship with her Kelt lover, Clive Soren, by telling the Amaz that she's 'going hunting' every few months and disappearing for a few days. The Amaz all know where she's going, but Freyja can't tell them the truth because to do so would result in her exile.
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* RealityEnsues: Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words.
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* RealityEnsues: Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words.words, which are in an ancient language.
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* WingsDoNothing: Ariel and Wynter's wings are intact, but they cannot fly with them. [[spoiler:Yvan's wings are also intact, and he can fly. According to him, Icarals who grow up being told how foul and weak they are become psychosomatically unable to fly.]]
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** Trystan is saddled with one: he's a Level Five Mage, the most powerful kind, and it's an important part of his identity. But he's also gay, which in Gardneria gets you imprisoned. He ''could'' join the Lupines, who have no problems with homosexuality, but Lupines can't use wands, so he'd have to give up that part of himself.
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** Trystan is saddled with one: he's a Level Five Mage, the most powerful kind, and it's an important part of his identity. But he's also gay, which in Gardneria gets you imprisoned. He ''could'' join the Lupines, who have no problems with homosexuality, but Lupines can't use wands, so he'd either have to give up that part of himself.his magic or continue to live in peril, since he'll eventually have to fast to a woman. [[spoiler:He takes a third option by escaping to the east.]]
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* SuperEmpowerment: Elloren can boost the magic levels of other Mages just by touching them.
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* SuperEmpowerment: SuperEmpowering: Elloren can boost the magic levels of other Mages just by touching them.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Fallon Bane is obsessed with wandfasting to Lukas Grey, despite the fact that Lukas is not at all interested in her.
* AchillesHeel: Gardnerians can only work magic by way of wands. As a result, if a Gardnerian soldier's wand is stolen, broken or destroyed, the Gardnerian is helpless, unless they have some other form of weapon or martial arts skill. And a high-level Gardnerian Mage without a wand may as well have no magic at all, unless they can get their hands on one.
* AchillesHeel: Gardnerians can only work magic by way of wands. As a result, if a Gardnerian soldier's wand is stolen, broken or destroyed, the Gardnerian is helpless, unless they have some other form of weapon or martial arts skill. And a high-level Gardnerian Mage without a wand may as well have no magic at all, unless they can get their hands on one.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Young Gardnerian women are usually subjected to this for their wandfastings, sometimes as young as ''thirteen''.
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* ArrangedMarriage: Young Gardnerian women are usually subjected to this for their wandfastings, sometimes as young as ''thirteen''. However, they usually don't live and have sex with their fastmates until both parties are adults.
* BerserkButton: Ariel's is threatening or doing anything to hurt her pet chickens.
* BerserkButton: Ariel's is threatening or doing anything to hurt her pet chickens.
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* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. But he constantly longs for the ocean, and because the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
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* BigDamnHeroes: [[spoiler:Naga shows up to rescue Yvan, Ariel and Elloren from the Icaral prison just as they're out of options.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes.But he He constantly longs for the ocean, but he has no gills or seal-skin- and because since the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes.
** In ''Wandfasted'', the Gardnerians after Carnissa Gardner's victory were subjected to this, with the unfasted being told that they had a day to find someone to fast to- and if they couldn't find anyone, someone would be found for them.
* CannotTellALie: Dryad Fae can't lie to each other. Gardnerians are descended from Dryads, so those with particularly strong Dryad ancestry have trouble being dishonest with each other.
* CannotTellALie: Dryad Fae can't lie to each other. Gardnerians are descended from Dryads, so those with particularly strong Dryad ancestry have trouble being dishonest with each other.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Elloren bitterly remarks late in ''The Iron Flower'' that if she'd actually been told about her powers and taught to use them, a great deal of the cast's problems could have been overcome much more easily, if not outright nullified. [[spoiler:For one, Ariel likely wouldn't have been captured and sent to the asylum.]]
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to.
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Elloren bitterly remarks late in ''The Iron Flower'' that if she'd actually been told about her powers and taught to use them, a great deal of the cast's problems could have been overcome much more easily, if not outright nullified. [[spoiler:For one, Ariel likely wouldn't have been captured and sent to the asylum.asylum, and for another, Elloren could have prevented her uncle from dying.]]
* DeadlyEuphemism: After Elloren becomes distressed at seeing a Selkie in a cage, Vyvian reassures her that she's against the Selkie trade and believes that there are better ways to deal with them than by keeping them in cages. Later in the book, Elloren finds out that her aunt wants all Selkies killed on sight.
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to. Both her and his parents denying it happened and blaming it on her was the other reason.
* DeadlyEuphemism: After Elloren becomes distressed at seeing a Selkie in a cage, Vyvian reassures her that she's against the Selkie trade and believes that there are better ways to deal with them than by keeping them in cages. Later in the book, Elloren finds out that her aunt wants all Selkies killed on sight.
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to. Both her and his parents denying it happened and blaming it on her was the other reason.
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* IAmXSonOfY: Diana introduces herself like this. Jarod has to tell her that the other races don't do that.
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* {{Hypocrite}}: According to Diana, the Amaz regularly accuse the Lupines of stealing their male babies, despite the fact that the Amaz themselves left those babies to die in the woods.
* IAmXSonOfY: Diana introduces herself likethis.this, and doesn't stop at one generation. Jarod has to tell her that the other races don't do that.
* IAmXSonOfY: Diana introduces herself like
* {{Irony}}: The Gardnerians preach that they are a pure-blooded race, and despise all the other races, especially Kelts and the Fae. It's revealed partway through ''The Black Witch'' that the original Gardnerians are the offspring of Kelts and Dryad Fae.
* NoSell: The Lupines are immune to wand magic.
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** Sage is fasted to Tobias at the age of thirteen, but because of their ages, they don't live together afterwards, they both live at home for years until they become adults. By the time they're due to actually live together, they've barely said two words to each other. In the intervening time, Tobias has become involved with another woman, and has no real interest in Sage- and things only go downhill from there.
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* {{Sadist}}: Styvius Gardner and Malkyn Bane.
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** Trystan is saddled with one: he's a Level Five Mage, the most powerful kind, and it's an important part of his identity. But he's also gay, which in Gardneria gets you imprisoned. He ''could'' join the Lupines, who have no problems with homosexuality, but Lupines can't use wands, so he'd have to give up that part of himself.
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* SuperEmpowerment: Elloren can boost the magic levels of other Mages just by touching them.
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* UnbalancedByRivalsKid: Jules Kristian becomes upset a couple of times when talking to Elloren, as she reminds him of her mother, who he was in love with.
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* CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot: Elloren bitterly remarks late in ''The Iron Flower'' that if she'd actually been told about her powers and taught to use them, a great deal of the cast's problems could have been overcome much more easily, if not outright nullified. [[spoiler:For one, Ariel likely wouldn't have been captured and sent to the asylum.]]
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero: During ''The Iron Flower'', Naga destroys Ariel's stash of nilantyr, forcing her to detox. [[spoiler:Later in the book, after she's sobered up and stayed clean, Ariel is captured and sent to a prison where she and the other Icarals are given nilantyr. She relapses, but takes an amount she can't handle, which puts her in a coma she'll eventually die from. Had she not been forced to detox, it's possible that consuming the nilantyr wouldn't have hurt her, and she could have been rescued in a somewhat healthy state.]]
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''The Black Witch Chronicles'' is a YA fantasy series by Laurie Forest. The first book was published in 2017. The books in the series are ''The Black Witch'' (2017) and ''The Iron Flower'' (2018). There are also two {{prequel}} ebook novellas, ''Wandfasted'' and ''Light Mage''.
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''The Black Witch Chronicles'' is a YA fantasy series by Laurie Forest. The first book was published in 2017. The books in the series are ''The Black Witch'' (2017) and ''The Iron Flower'' (2018). There are also two {{prequel}} ebook e-book novellas, ''Wandfasted'' and ''Light Mage''.
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Sage seriously contemplated throwing herself off a bridge after her fast mate beat her and tried to rape her, and their families blamed her for it. She was stopped at the last minute, though.]]
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* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Sage seriously contemplated throwing herself off a bridge after her fast mate fastmate beat her and tried to rape her, and their families blamed her for it. She was stopped at the last minute, though.]]
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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie]].
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* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie]]. Sage's son, Fy'nir, is half-Gardnerian, half-Snake Elf, and an Icaral.
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* MistakenForGay: Tessla initially thinks that Fain and Vale are lovers. Not only are they not lovers, neither are gay.
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* MistakenForGay: Tessla initially thinks that Fain and Vale are lovers. Not only are they not lovers, neither are Vale isn't gay.
** Carnissa, the original Black Witch, used fire en masse to wipe out her enemies.
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** A lot of wandfastings take place between couples who don't know or don't like each other, and were arranged between parents with little or no input from the couples themselves. This results in several occasions where a girl has to be forced into fasting (Tessla, Draven, [[spoiler:Elloren]]).
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** A lot of wandfastings take place between couples who don't know or don't like each other, and were arranged between by their parents with little or no input from the couples themselves. This results in several occasions where a girl has to be forced into fasting (Tessla, Draven, [[spoiler:Elloren]]).
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* SadisticChoice: The Amaz will take in refugees of every race... but they have to be female. So any would-be refugee with male friends or family (the Amaz won't even allow male children) has to decide between living in safety while her loved ones are in danger, or refusing that safety to live with her loved ones.
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* AerithAndBob: There are names like Diana, Jarod, Iris, Gareth and Clover, and then there's names like Carnissa, Elloren, Yvan, Alcippe and Olilly.
* AlphaBitch: Fallon Bane. Her mother was also like this.
* AlphaBitch: Fallon Bane. Her mother was also like this.
* AnguishedDeclarationOfLove: Ariel makes one [[spoiler:to Wynter before impersonating her so Wynter can escape]].
* AnIcePerson: Fallon Bane and her father's power works mostly through ice.
* AndYouThoughtItWasAGame: Zig-zagged. Gwynn gives Sage the White Wand and tells her to keep it hidden, which Sage does. However, years pass with nothing happening, and both girls convince themselves that it was a game they took too seriously. When things start happening, both realise it was real after all.
* AnIcePerson: Fallon Bane and her father's power works mostly through ice.
* AndYouThoughtItWasAGame: Zig-zagged. Gwynn gives Sage the White Wand and tells her to keep it hidden, which Sage does. However, years pass with nothing happening, and both girls convince themselves that it was a game they took too seriously. When things start happening, both realise it was real after all.
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* BrokenBird: Ariel Haven grew up in a horrific sanitarium because she had the misfortune to be born an Icaral in Gardnerian society, and was addicted to a terrible drug. Wynter also has terrible self-esteem because of her Icaral status, making her hated in Alfsigr society despite her brilliant artistic talents.
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* BigBad: Marcus Vogel, who leads Gardneria on a march to exterminate all non-allied races and take over the Western Realm.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. But he constantly longs for the ocean, and because the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
* BrokenBird: Ariel Haven grew up in a horrific sanitarium because she had the misfortune to be born an Icaral in Gardnerian society, and was addicted to a terrible drug. Wynter also has terrible self-esteem because of her Icaral status, making her hated in Alfsigr society despite her being a royal with brilliant artistic talents.
* BlessedWithSuck: [[spoiler:Gareth is half-Selkie. He can hold his breath for up to an hour, doesn't need a compass or sextant to navigate, doesn't feel cold and can predict weather changes. But he constantly longs for the ocean, and because the Selkies live in undersea cities, he can't live with them.]]
* BrokenBird: Ariel Haven grew up in a horrific sanitarium because she had the misfortune to be born an Icaral in Gardnerian society, and was addicted to a terrible drug. Wynter also has terrible self-esteem because of her Icaral status, making her hated in Alfsigr society despite her being a royal with brilliant artistic talents.
* DoorStopper: ''The Iron Flower'' is over a thousand pages long.
* DoesNotLikeMen: The Amaz turn this trope UpToEleven. They view all men as vile abusers, won't allow men within their nation, even refugees, and leave any male babies in the Lupine forests without caring what happens to them (they're usually taken in by the Lupines).
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Sage seriously contemplated throwing herself off a bridge after her fast mate beat her and tried to rape her, and their families blamed her for it. She was stopped at the last minute, though.]]
* DrivenToSuicide: [[spoiler:Sage seriously contemplated throwing herself off a bridge after her fast mate beat her and tried to rape her, and their families blamed her for it. She was stopped at the last minute, though.]]
* ElementalPowers: Gardnerian magic comes in five types- fire, water, earth, air and light. Everyone has at least one elemental affinity, sometimes multiple.
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* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
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* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them- the multiple wars the Western Realm has suffered through are the cause of most of them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
* HalfHumanHybrid: [[spoiler:Gareth is revealed to be half-Selkie]].
* HeroicBSOD: Elloren has one after [[spoiler:the Amaz rescue the Selkies, who were being used as sex slaves. Seeing how broken they were, some barely in their teens, absolutely devastates her.]]
* HopeSpot: At one point in ''The Iron Flower'', everyone's problems appear to be solved if they can just escape to the Lupine lands. [[spoiler:The next chapter has the reveal that 99% of the Lupines have been murdered.]]
* IAmXSonOfY: Diana introduces herself like this. Jarod has to tell her that the other races don't do that.
* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
** There's a running theme in the series that Gardnerians will be fasted to people who already have love interests. It happens with Sage (fasted to Tobias, who Draven was crushing on), Elloren (Lukas Grey, who Fallon Bane wants) and Vale (Tessla Harrow, who [[spoiler:Jules Kristian]] was in love with).
* MistakenForGay: Tessla initially thinks that Fain and Vale are lovers. Not only are they not lovers, neither are gay.
* MyGodWhatHaveIDone: Ariel burns Elloren's quilt, one of the few remnants she had of her dead mother. Ren asks Lukas to retaliate- though she doesn't specify how- and he does so by killing Ariel's pet chicken horribly. Ren is aghast at the results, which leave Ariel emotionally devastated.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Tessla Harrow steals a wand and uses it to save dozens of captive Gardnerians, including the elderly and children, from certain death. After they're all rescued, rumours are started and spread about her- some by some of the people she rescued- that she slept with a Kelt and that when she stole the wand, she only used it to protect herself and the Kelt, and interfered with the Mages who saved them.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Tessla Harrow steals a wand and uses it to save dozens of captive Gardnerians, including the elderly and children, from certain death. After they're all rescued, rumours are started and spread about her- some by some of the people she rescued- that she slept with a Kelt and that when she stole the wand, she only used it to protect herself and the Kelt, and interfered with the Mages who saved them.
** Elloren and her parents have strong fire affinities.
* RealityEnsues: Sage was never taught any magic. The first time she finally gets some spells, it takes a while for her to get them right because she doesn't know how to pronounce the words.
** A lot of wandfastings take place between couples who don't know or don't like each other, and were arranged between parents with little or no input from the couples themselves. This results in several occasions where a girl has to be forced into fasting (Tessla, Draven, [[spoiler:Elloren]]).
** Sage is fasted to Tobias at the age of thirteen, but because of their ages, they don't live together afterwards, they both live at home for years until they become adults. By the time they're due to actually live together, they've barely said two words to each other. In the intervening time, Tobias has become involved with another woman, and has no real interest in Sage- and things only go downhill from there.
** A lot of wandfastings take place between couples who don't know or don't like each other, and were arranged between parents with little or no input from the couples themselves. This results in several occasions where a girl has to be forced into fasting (Tessla, Draven, [[spoiler:Elloren]]).
** Sage is fasted to Tobias at the age of thirteen, but because of their ages, they don't live together afterwards, they both live at home for years until they become adults. By the time they're due to actually live together, they've barely said two words to each other. In the intervening time, Tobias has become involved with another woman, and has no real interest in Sage- and things only go downhill from there.
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* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
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* SuperpowerLottery: Sage is a Level Four Light Mage. Light Mages are the rarest of Gardnerian specialists- six years before ''Light Mage'', the Gardnerian army had ''one'' Light Mage who was rank Four or higher.
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* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Kam Vin knows from the moment of Elloren's wandtesting that she has powerful magic, but doesn't tell even other members of the Resistance, let alone Ren herself.]]
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* WrittenByTheWinners: All but one of the history classes at the University are taught by Gardnerian professors, who naturally teach a version of history that makes their people out to be saints. Ren eventually goes to Professor Kristian for answers because she realizes what she's learning in her history class doesn't match up with her experiences elsewhere.
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** Gardnerian Mages can only work magic through these. [[spoiler:It's because they're descended from Dryads.]]
** The White Wand and its EvilCounterpart the Shadow Wand, two powerful objects that can dictate the fate of the world.
** Gardnerian Mages can only work magic through these. [[spoiler:It's because they're descended from Dryads.]]
** The White Wand and its EvilCounterpart the Shadow Wand, two powerful objects that can dictate the fate of the world.
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* PowerCrutch: Gardnerian Mages can't do magic without a properly made wand. [[spoiler:Elloren is so powerful she can destroy a tree by setting it on fire with a candle-lighting spell cast via a branch she picked up off the ground.]]
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* PassingNotesInClass: Aislinn and Jarod start flirting by passing notes about literature in their Chemistrie class, to the point that Elloren and Diana make them sit in the aisle seats on their tables so they can take notes and not get distracted by having to pass the notes for them.
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* {{Gendercide}}: The Gardnerians inflicted one on the Urisks so their males wouldn't threaten them. Male Urisks are now a rarity.
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** Urisk males are powerful geomancers, while females are powerless. So the Gardnerians killed as many Urisk males as they could.
** Vu Trin men have no magic, while the women are universally rune sorceresses.
** Urisk males are powerful geomancers, while females are powerless. So the Gardnerians killed as many Urisk males as they could.
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* TheProphecy: As spoken by seers of every race and faction, it states that a powerful male Icaral will appear, and the next Black Witch will rise to face him, and they will fight, and so determine the fate of the world. [[spoiler:The fact that the subjects of said prophecy, Elloren and Yvan, are in love with each other, was definitely not expected. What's really going to happen is anyone's guess.]]
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* PolarOppositeTwins: Diana Ulrich is HotBlooded and frequently expresses wishes to outright kill various terrible people on the spot, while her brother Jarod is calmer and more tactful.
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* EarAche: "Cropping", cutting the points of an Urisk's long ears off and shaving their head. [[spoiler:During the riots in ''The Iron Flower'', Olilly becomes a victim of this.]]
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** Late in ''The Black Witch'', Aislinn mentions that her father, ambassador to the northern Lupines, has mentioned a weapon the Gardnerians are planning to use on the shapeshifters. [[spoiler:This weapon, or something like it, is used to wipe out almost all of them partway through ''The Iron Flower'', leaving only Diana, Jarod, and escapees Brendan and young Konnor.]]
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* ChekhovsGun: In ''The Iron Flower'', the dresses with Ironflower thread that Vyvian sends Elloren so she'll attract Lukas. [[spoiler:Ren and Tierney use the thread to make up a poison undetectable to magic that will take out the Gardnerians long enough for the Resistance to evacuate the area.]]
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* StarCrossedLovers: Valasca and Ni Vin, primarily because neither of them wants to leave their culture permanently to be with the other.
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''The Black Witch Chronicles'' is a YA fantasy series by Laurie Forest. The first book was published in 2017. The books in the series are ''The Black Witch'' (2017) and ''The Iron Flower'' (2018). There are also two {{prequel}} ebook novellas, ''Wandfasted'' and ''Light Mage''.
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Elloren Gardner is the [[IdenticalGranddaughter spitting image]] of her late grandmother Carnissa Gardner, the Black Witch who defeated Gardneria's enemies in the Realm War. A prophecy dictates that there will be another Black Witch, and some people think that's Elloren, but she is utterly devoid of power in a society that prizes magical power above all else.
When Ren gets the chance to follow her brothers to Verpax University, the first time in her life she's been outside of Gardneria, she leaps at the opportunity to try and get out of the shadow of her grandmother's legacy. But university isn't all it's cracked up to be for the granddaughter of such an infamous woman. Not only that, but evil is looming, and Elloren discovers that her best hopes may lie with people who have every reason to hate her and her people.
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!!Tropes:
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation:
** The Urisk species have a multitude of skin colours, dividing them into different social classes.
** The Amaz lands are like this because they accept women from all species.
* ArrangedMarriage: Young Gardnerian women are usually subjected to this for their wandfastings, sometimes as young as ''thirteen''.
* BrokenBird: Ariel Haven grew up in a horrific sanitarium because she had the misfortune to be born an Icaral in Gardnerian society, and was addicted to a terrible drug. Wynter also has terrible self-esteem because of her Icaral status, making her hated in Alfsigr society despite her brilliant artistic talents.
* BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage: After Vogel takes over, wandfasting is made mandatory for every Gardnerian above a certain age who isn't a priest, with anyone above the age limit who isn't fasted by the deadline being subject to this.
* ChekhovsGun: In ''The Iron Flower'', the dresses with Ironflower thread that Vyvian sends Elloren so she'll attract Lukas.
* ColdIron: Fae have this traditional weakness.
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to.
* DraconicHumanoid: [[spoiler:Icarals have wings and fire powers because they're descended from wyvern-shifters.]]
* DramaticIrony:
** The prologue outright tells readers that Elloren does have immense magical power, and it's heavily implied throughout the book. Until late in ''The Iron Flower'', however, Ren believes either that she's outright powerless or that she's incapable of accessing her latent power.
** Commander Kam Vin and Vice Chancellor Lucretia Quillen's first scene reveals that they are good guys involved in some kind of conspiracy, and that they plan on making things hard for Ren as a SecretTestOfCharacter to see what kind of person she is. Ren doesn't learn Quillen's true allegiance until the last chapter of ''The Black Witch'', and Commander Vin's allegiance until early in ''The Iron Flower''.
* {{Egopolis}}: Elloren's ancestor Styvius Gardner, FounderOfTheKingdom, named both the country he founded and his ''species'' after himself.
* EmeraldPower: All Gardnerians have skin that glows green. [[spoiler:Courtesy of their Dryad ancestry.]]
* EmpathicWeapon: The White Wand is perfectly capable of ensuring it goes to its chosen wielders.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
** Icarals, in particular, get this from multiple factions, including the Alfsigr Elves and the Gardnerians. [[spoiler:They and their wings are living proof that none of the species of the Western Realms are as "pure" as some of them like to claim they are, as their wings are a throwback to their wyvern-shifter ancestors.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** In Kam Vin and Lucretia Quillen's first scene, they agree that Kam can send out elite assassins after Ren if she tries to contact the Amazakaran. [[spoiler:Guess where Sage Gaffney and her LivingMacGuffin baby are hiding?]]
** Yvan's secret:
*** He hates Ren, who looks exactly like her infamous grandmother, on sight.
*** There are hints from early on that Yvan has superhuman abilities, like when he rescues Olilly from Damion Bane and displays SuperSpeed. This leads Ren to initially conclude that he's a Fire Fae.
*** When Professor Kristian gives Ren a more accurate recounting of the history of the Western Realms, he tells her that the infamous Icaral that Carnissa fought in the Realm War [[spoiler:was simply a Keltanian healer who fought to defend a people who were prejudiced against him]]. Later, Yvan mentions that [[spoiler:his father was killed by Carnissa, was a physician, and was an important figure in the Keltanian Resistance]]. [[spoiler:Yes, they're the same person.]]
*** During the dragon rescue, Naga tells Wynter something about Yvan that makes her absolutely stunned.
*** Yvan also avoids taking off his shirt.
* {{Glamour}}: Several Fae were hidden from the massacre of their kind by these, such as [[spoiler:Tierney Calix]]. [[spoiler:Yvan, being part Lasair Fae, can take his on and off as he wants.]]
* HateAtFirstSight: Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
* HeelRealizaton: Elloren is horrified when she realizes the true history of her people and the atrocities they've committed against others.
* HeroicSacrifice: Two in ''The Iron Flower'':
** [[spoiler:When the Gardnerians at the University and army base are given a sleeping poison so most of the Resistance and their allies can escape, Kitchen Mistress Fernyllia volunteers to stay behind as the poisoner, on the grounds that she's an old woman and won't be able to keep up. She gets executed.]]
** [[spoiler:When the Alfsigr assassins come for Wynter at the North Tower, Ariel poses as her despite everyone's protests, which gets her hauled back to the sanitarium where she was tortured, and she's fed an overdose of nylantir berries before Yvan and Elloren can rescue her, dropping her into a coma from which she will die. Naga takes her off to the wyverns for burial.
* HeteronormativeCrusader: In Gardneria, being gay gets you thrown in jail. [[spoiler:Which is why Trystan Gardner chooses to join the Resistance.]]
* HotBlooded: Diana Ulrich, daughter of Lupine alpha Gunther Ulrich, is noted by several of her friends for her problems with tact.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Elloren looks ''exactly'' like her late grandmother Carnissa, which causes her multiple problems:
** First off, there are a lot of people who believe that because she's inherited her grandmother's looks, she must also have inherited her power, and ''must'' be the next Black Witch of prophecy. Since she believes she has no magic, Ren is under immense pressure from other Gardnerians.
** Then, of course, there are the non-Gardnerians who believe that she will be just as awful a person as her grandmother, invoking SinsOfOurFathers.
* InterspeciesRomance:
** Sage ran away from her abusive fastmate with a Kelt. [[spoiler:Actually, her significant other is a Snake Elf disguised with a glamour.]]
** Lupine twins Diana and Jarod both fall in love with Gardnerians.
** Elloren (Gardnerian) falls in love with Yvan (Kelt[[spoiler:, Icaral, and part Lasair Fae]]).
* LadyLand: The Amazakaran usually execute any men who trespass inside their borders.
* LivingMacGuffin: Sage Gaffney's baby is being hunted by multiple factions because he's believed to be the Icaral of the prophecy. [[spoiler:He's not. It's actually Yvan.]]
* LoveTriangle: Elloren is initially interested in Lukas Grey, the mage her aunt wants her to fast to, but eventually also becomes attracted to Yvan Guriel, a Kelt, after he warms up to her from his initial dislike. [[spoiler:By the end of ''The Iron Flower'', Ren has chosen Yvan, but she's been forcibly wandfasted to Lukas before running away, with the magical binding that will punish her if she has sex with someone other than Lukas.]]
* MutualKill: At the end of the Realm War, Carnissa Gardner and the Icaral who headed the opposition against Gardneria died like this.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: They're called Lupines, they can smell attraction and emotions, and they can shift anytime they want. They can turn others into their kind by biting them in the neck enough to draw blood on the full moon.
* PlayingWithFire:
** Many Icarals, such as Ariel, have this power. [[spoiler:Because they're part dragon.]]
** Yvan is part Fire Fae. [[spoiler:He's also an Icaral.]]
* PurpleIsPowerful:
** The colour is actually illegal in Gardneria due to a species of Fae that could turn into the colour in order to spy.
** [[spoiler:Sage Gaffney, as a Level 4 Light Mage, specializes in the purple end of the spectrum, turning her Gardnerian skin glow purple from the normal green.]]
* ReplacementGoldfish: After Lukas kills Ariel's pet chicken because Ren asked him to step in, to make up for it, she steals Ariel another one.
* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
* SecretKeeper: Naga the dragon, and later Wynter through her, know that [[spoiler:Yvan is an Icaral]] long before he's forced to reveal it to the Resistance.
* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Kam Vin knows from the moment of Elloren's wandtesting that she has powerful magic, but doesn't tell even other members of the Resistance, let alone Ren herself.]]
* ShapeshifterModeLock: [[spoiler:The Gardnerian military uses geomancy to lock wyvern-shifters in their dragon forms before breaking them. This happened to Naga.]]
* SinsOfOurFathers: Carnissa Gardner's wartime atrocities against non-Gardnerians results in many members of the groups she victimized, including members of LaResistance, thinking that Ren is "obviously" going to be exactly the same, resulting in Ren having a hard time before people like Yvan and Fernyllia realizing that she really isn't that kind of person.
* SoullessShell:
** The Gardnerian military's broken dragons.
** Selkies whose sealskins have been destroyed.
* WingedHumanoid: The Icarals, leading to a belief that they're demons. [[spoiler:It's actually because they're part-dragon.]]
* YouKilledMyFather: Yvan tells Ren that her grandmother the Black Witch killed his father. [[spoiler:His father was the legendary, dreaded Icaral.]]
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Elloren Gardner is the [[IdenticalGranddaughter spitting image]] of her late grandmother Carnissa Gardner, the Black Witch who defeated Gardneria's enemies in the Realm War. A prophecy dictates that there will be another Black Witch, and some people think that's Elloren, but she is utterly devoid of power in a society that prizes magical power above all else.
When Ren gets the chance to follow her brothers to Verpax University, the first time in her life she's been outside of Gardneria, she leaps at the opportunity to try and get out of the shadow of her grandmother's legacy. But university isn't all it's cracked up to be for the granddaughter of such an infamous woman. Not only that, but evil is looming, and Elloren discovers that her best hopes may lie with people who have every reason to hate her and her people.
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!!Tropes:
* AmazingTechnicolorPopulation:
** The Urisk species have a multitude of skin colours, dividing them into different social classes.
** The Amaz lands are like this because they accept women from all species.
* ArrangedMarriage: Young Gardnerian women are usually subjected to this for their wandfastings, sometimes as young as ''thirteen''.
* BrokenBird: Ariel Haven grew up in a horrific sanitarium because she had the misfortune to be born an Icaral in Gardnerian society, and was addicted to a terrible drug. Wynter also has terrible self-esteem because of her Icaral status, making her hated in Alfsigr society despite her brilliant artistic talents.
* BureaucraticallyArrangedMarriage: After Vogel takes over, wandfasting is made mandatory for every Gardnerian above a certain age who isn't a priest, with anyone above the age limit who isn't fasted by the deadline being subject to this.
* ChekhovsGun: In ''The Iron Flower'', the dresses with Ironflower thread that Vyvian sends Elloren so she'll attract Lukas.
* ColdIron: Fae have this traditional weakness.
* DomesticAbuse: One of the main reasons Sage Gaffney ran away from the man she was wandfasted to.
* DraconicHumanoid: [[spoiler:Icarals have wings and fire powers because they're descended from wyvern-shifters.]]
* DramaticIrony:
** The prologue outright tells readers that Elloren does have immense magical power, and it's heavily implied throughout the book. Until late in ''The Iron Flower'', however, Ren believes either that she's outright powerless or that she's incapable of accessing her latent power.
** Commander Kam Vin and Vice Chancellor Lucretia Quillen's first scene reveals that they are good guys involved in some kind of conspiracy, and that they plan on making things hard for Ren as a SecretTestOfCharacter to see what kind of person she is. Ren doesn't learn Quillen's true allegiance until the last chapter of ''The Black Witch'', and Commander Vin's allegiance until early in ''The Iron Flower''.
* {{Egopolis}}: Elloren's ancestor Styvius Gardner, FounderOfTheKingdom, named both the country he founded and his ''species'' after himself.
* EmeraldPower: All Gardnerians have skin that glows green. [[spoiler:Courtesy of their Dryad ancestry.]]
* EmpathicWeapon: The White Wand is perfectly capable of ensuring it goes to its chosen wielders.
* FantasticRacism: All over the place. Every single species or faction has either pulled this on another group, or had it pulled on them. The only places where members of all races are accepted are the Amaz lands (no men allowed, however) and the Noi lands in the east.
** Icarals, in particular, get this from multiple factions, including the Alfsigr Elves and the Gardnerians. [[spoiler:They and their wings are living proof that none of the species of the Western Realms are as "pure" as some of them like to claim they are, as their wings are a throwback to their wyvern-shifter ancestors.]]
* {{Foreshadowing}}:
** In Kam Vin and Lucretia Quillen's first scene, they agree that Kam can send out elite assassins after Ren if she tries to contact the Amazakaran. [[spoiler:Guess where Sage Gaffney and her LivingMacGuffin baby are hiding?]]
** Yvan's secret:
*** He hates Ren, who looks exactly like her infamous grandmother, on sight.
*** There are hints from early on that Yvan has superhuman abilities, like when he rescues Olilly from Damion Bane and displays SuperSpeed. This leads Ren to initially conclude that he's a Fire Fae.
*** When Professor Kristian gives Ren a more accurate recounting of the history of the Western Realms, he tells her that the infamous Icaral that Carnissa fought in the Realm War [[spoiler:was simply a Keltanian healer who fought to defend a people who were prejudiced against him]]. Later, Yvan mentions that [[spoiler:his father was killed by Carnissa, was a physician, and was an important figure in the Keltanian Resistance]]. [[spoiler:Yes, they're the same person.]]
*** During the dragon rescue, Naga tells Wynter something about Yvan that makes her absolutely stunned.
*** Yvan also avoids taking off his shirt.
* {{Glamour}}: Several Fae were hidden from the massacre of their kind by these, such as [[spoiler:Tierney Calix]]. [[spoiler:Yvan, being part Lasair Fae, can take his on and off as he wants.]]
* HateAtFirstSight: Yvan Guriel seems to hate Ren from the moment he sees her, and it isn't until he catches her trying to steal a replacement chicken for Ariel that he starts to warm up to her. [[spoiler:Given exactly who his father was, that's not surprising.]]
* HeelRealizaton: Elloren is horrified when she realizes the true history of her people and the atrocities they've committed against others.
* HeroicSacrifice: Two in ''The Iron Flower'':
** [[spoiler:When the Gardnerians at the University and army base are given a sleeping poison so most of the Resistance and their allies can escape, Kitchen Mistress Fernyllia volunteers to stay behind as the poisoner, on the grounds that she's an old woman and won't be able to keep up. She gets executed.]]
** [[spoiler:When the Alfsigr assassins come for Wynter at the North Tower, Ariel poses as her despite everyone's protests, which gets her hauled back to the sanitarium where she was tortured, and she's fed an overdose of nylantir berries before Yvan and Elloren can rescue her, dropping her into a coma from which she will die. Naga takes her off to the wyverns for burial.
* HeteronormativeCrusader: In Gardneria, being gay gets you thrown in jail. [[spoiler:Which is why Trystan Gardner chooses to join the Resistance.]]
* HotBlooded: Diana Ulrich, daughter of Lupine alpha Gunther Ulrich, is noted by several of her friends for her problems with tact.
* IdenticalGranddaughter: Elloren looks ''exactly'' like her late grandmother Carnissa, which causes her multiple problems:
** First off, there are a lot of people who believe that because she's inherited her grandmother's looks, she must also have inherited her power, and ''must'' be the next Black Witch of prophecy. Since she believes she has no magic, Ren is under immense pressure from other Gardnerians.
** Then, of course, there are the non-Gardnerians who believe that she will be just as awful a person as her grandmother, invoking SinsOfOurFathers.
* InterspeciesRomance:
** Sage ran away from her abusive fastmate with a Kelt. [[spoiler:Actually, her significant other is a Snake Elf disguised with a glamour.]]
** Lupine twins Diana and Jarod both fall in love with Gardnerians.
** Elloren (Gardnerian) falls in love with Yvan (Kelt[[spoiler:, Icaral, and part Lasair Fae]]).
* LadyLand: The Amazakaran usually execute any men who trespass inside their borders.
* LivingMacGuffin: Sage Gaffney's baby is being hunted by multiple factions because he's believed to be the Icaral of the prophecy. [[spoiler:He's not. It's actually Yvan.]]
* LoveTriangle: Elloren is initially interested in Lukas Grey, the mage her aunt wants her to fast to, but eventually also becomes attracted to Yvan Guriel, a Kelt, after he warms up to her from his initial dislike. [[spoiler:By the end of ''The Iron Flower'', Ren has chosen Yvan, but she's been forcibly wandfasted to Lukas before running away, with the magical binding that will punish her if she has sex with someone other than Lukas.]]
* MutualKill: At the end of the Realm War, Carnissa Gardner and the Icaral who headed the opposition against Gardneria died like this.
* OurWerewolvesAreDifferent: They're called Lupines, they can smell attraction and emotions, and they can shift anytime they want. They can turn others into their kind by biting them in the neck enough to draw blood on the full moon.
* PlayingWithFire:
** Many Icarals, such as Ariel, have this power. [[spoiler:Because they're part dragon.]]
** Yvan is part Fire Fae. [[spoiler:He's also an Icaral.]]
* PurpleIsPowerful:
** The colour is actually illegal in Gardneria due to a species of Fae that could turn into the colour in order to spy.
** [[spoiler:Sage Gaffney, as a Level 4 Light Mage, specializes in the purple end of the spectrum, turning her Gardnerian skin glow purple from the normal green.]]
* ReplacementGoldfish: After Lukas kills Ariel's pet chicken because Ren asked him to step in, to make up for it, she steals Ariel another one.
* LaResistance: The Verpacian Resistance. It's still active, and among its members are Vice Chancellor Quillen, Commander Kam Vin, [[spoiler:Professor Kristian]] and [[spoiler:Professor Hawkkyn]].
* SecretKeeper: Naga the dragon, and later Wynter through her, know that [[spoiler:Yvan is an Icaral]] long before he's forced to reveal it to the Resistance.
* SecretSecretKeeper: [[spoiler:Kam Vin knows from the moment of Elloren's wandtesting that she has powerful magic, but doesn't tell even other members of the Resistance, let alone Ren herself.]]
* ShapeshifterModeLock: [[spoiler:The Gardnerian military uses geomancy to lock wyvern-shifters in their dragon forms before breaking them. This happened to Naga.]]
* SinsOfOurFathers: Carnissa Gardner's wartime atrocities against non-Gardnerians results in many members of the groups she victimized, including members of LaResistance, thinking that Ren is "obviously" going to be exactly the same, resulting in Ren having a hard time before people like Yvan and Fernyllia realizing that she really isn't that kind of person.
* SoullessShell:
** The Gardnerian military's broken dragons.
** Selkies whose sealskins have been destroyed.
* WingedHumanoid: The Icarals, leading to a belief that they're demons. [[spoiler:It's actually because they're part-dragon.]]
* YouKilledMyFather: Yvan tells Ren that her grandmother the Black Witch killed his father. [[spoiler:His father was the legendary, dreaded Icaral.]]
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