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—> Did he expect Swindle to give up without a fight, or the police to call off the investigation when the first search turned out nothing? If that wasn’t bad enough, he also gave zero consideration for his parents. Like maybe they wouldn’t notice anything unusual going on. Was he crazy, or just stupid? He certainly didn’t have the right to call himself the Man With The Plan anymore.
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* AndThenWhat:AndThenWhat: [[spoiler: Griffin has himself thinking this in his room after the police search through his house following the home invasion with a large amount of evidence left behind leading to him, as well as his parents chewing him out]].
—> Did he expect Swindle to give up without a fight, or the police to call off the investigation when the first search turned out nothing? If that wasn’t bad enough, he also gave zero consideration for his parents. Like maybe they wouldn’t notice anything unusual going on. Was he crazy, or just stupid? He certainly didn’t have the right to call himself the Man With The Plan anymore.
—> Did he expect Swindle to give up without a fight, or the police to call off the investigation when the first search turned out nothing? If that wasn’t bad enough, he also gave zero consideration for his parents. Like maybe they wouldn’t notice anything unusual going on. Was he crazy, or just stupid? He certainly didn’t have the right to call himself the Man With The Plan anymore.
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* ExactEavesdropping: When Pitch gets her invitation to the ballroom that she was chosen for her special skills (for the heist), Darren happened to be curious and looked over her shoulder to see what was on the slip of paper. This clued him in that there was to be a cash reward, and so he went to this meeting at the time it was set and learned about what was going on, which made him want to team up to get a cut of the money.
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* BrutalHonesty:BrutalHonesty: When Savannah gets suspicious and asks Griffin and Ben what they are REALLY doing asking her to call Luthor down for, Griffin thinks that he can’t sugarcoat it, so he just outright says it to her.
-> Griffin: We need you to calm the dog down so we can break into the store and steal a baseball card. (Savannah’s mouth drops open in shock) But it’s not as bad as it sounds! [[NotHelpingYourCase We’ll give you a cut of the money]]!
-> Griffin: We need you to calm the dog down so we can break into the store and steal a baseball card. (Savannah’s mouth drops open in shock) But it’s not as bad as it sounds! [[NotHelpingYourCase We’ll give you a cut of the money]]!
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* GossipEvolution:GossipEvolution: The rumors of how the Rockdale residence got abandoned led to one involving the owner being killed with a railroad spike to the head, to one about how he was killed by a possessed pet.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It isn’t specified on which year each story takes place, but given that “Swindle” has October 16 on a Thursday April 15 on a Wednesday, and other clues, this means the series starts off in the year 2014. And since the first book was released in 2008, this makes most of the books technically this trope.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It isn’t specified on which year each story takes place, but given that “Swindle” has October 16 on a Thursday Thursday, April 15 on a Wednesday, and other clues, this means the series starts off in the year 2014. And since the first book was released in 2008, this makes most of the books technically this trope.
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* InsistentTerminology: plenty of characters use these, but the one who uses this the most by far is Savannah. Animals in her house are not pets, they are family members. Also, an animal shouldn’t be referred to as “it”, but as “him” of “her”.
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* InsistentTerminology: plenty Plenty of characters use these, but the one who uses this the most by far is Savannah. Animals in her house are not pets, they are family members. Also, an animal shouldn’t be referred to as “it”, but as “him” of “her”.or “her."
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* ScrewThisImOutOfHere: This is known to the team this way as “Code Z”; when a plan is reaching the stage of failure and exposure, the best course of action is to flee the scene.
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* TemptingFate: Often, when a character prompts up saying that things seem to be looking up for them, that’s when disaster for them strikes.
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* TemptingFate: Often, when a character prompts up saying comments that things seem to be looking up for them, that’s when disaster for them strikes.
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* BatScare: While investigating the abandoned Rockdale house in the beginning, a bat attacks Griffin, going through his curly hair with its’ claws.
* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: After the heist, Griffin believes that there is a police officer secretly around the corner watching his every move. [[spoiler:And when he actually goes to get the baseball card to the location he mailed it to, they indeed were watching the place and caught him there]].
* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: After the heist, Griffin believes that there is a police officer secretly around the corner watching his every move. [[spoiler:And when he actually goes to get the baseball card to the location he mailed it to, they indeed were watching the place and caught him there]].
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* BatScare: While investigating the abandoned Rockdale house in the beginning, a bat attacks Griffin, going through his curly hair with its’ its claws.
* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: After the heist, Griffin believes that there is a police officer secretly around the corner watching his every move. [[spoiler:And when he actually goes to get the baseball card to the location he mailed it to, they indeed were watching the place andcaught catch him there]].
* BigBrotherIsWatchingYou: After the heist, Griffin believes that there is a police officer secretly around the corner watching his every move. [[spoiler:And when he actually goes to get the baseball card to the location he mailed it to, they indeed were watching the place and
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* BrickJoke: Griffin recalled how Darren spread a rumor at school that he was related to the Rockdale’s, Rockdales, the owners of the abandoned house that is about to be demolished. This rumor turns out to be true, as he is the youngest relative of the Rockdale lady that [[spoiler:inherited the Babe Ruth baseball card. And when it is sold, all the money goes to him]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The SmartPick. Griffin races back home and to the Palomino house in order to [[spoiler:retrieve the baseball card that was stuck to the top of a tree that Darren was about to get]].
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* ChekhovsGun: The SmartPick.Smart Pick. Griffin races back home and to the Palomino house in order to [[spoiler:retrieve the baseball card that was stuck to the top of a tree that Darren was about to get]].
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* DoubleTake: While biking home all alone, Ben passes by the Bing home out of reflex. There he sees a home seller putting out a sign that says, “For Sale”. This causes Ben to veer off course staring at it in shock and getting into an accident. This incident also gives him a reality check of the Bing family situation and why Griffin wants the card back so bad.
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* DoubleTake: While biking home all alone, Ben passes by the Bing home out of reflex. There he sees a home seller putting out a sign that says, “For Sale”. Sale.” This causes Ben to veer off course staring at it in shock and getting into an accident. This incident also gives him a reality check of the Bing family situation and why Griffin wants the card back so bad.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It isn’t specified on which year each story takes place, but given that “Swindle” has October 16 on a Thursday and other clues, this means the series starts off in the year 2014. And since the first book was released in 2008, this makes most of the books technically this trope.
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* TwentyMinutesIntoTheFuture: It isn’t specified on which year each story takes place, but given that “Swindle” has October 16 on a Thursday April 15 on a Wednesday, and other clues, this means the series starts off in the year 2014. And since the first book was released in 2008, this makes most of the books technically this trope.
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* BigNo: Griffin internally does this as well as a RapidFireNo when Pitch calls him to let him know that she was forced to rat him out to the police because of her parents.
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* BigNo: Griffin internally does this as well as a RapidFireNo when Pitch [[spoiler:Pitch calls him to let him know that she was forced to rat him out to the police because of her parents.parents]].
* ChekhovsGun: The SmartPick. Griffin races back home and to the Palomino house in order to [[spoiler:retrieve the baseball card that was stuck to the top of a tree that Darren was about to get]].
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* DestinationDefenestration: When Darren ends up stuck in a tree at the Palomino residence, the branch under him starts to break. This branch then breaks away and swings toward the size of the house, hitting a window and breaking through it. Darren is miraculously not seriously injured, but breaking this window activated the house alarm and causes the team to get out of there before the cops arrive.
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* DestinationDefenestration: When [[spoiler:When Darren ends up stuck in a tree at the Palomino residence, the branch under him starts to break. This branch then breaks away and swings toward the size of the house, hitting a window and breaking through it. Darren is miraculously not seriously injured, but breaking this window activated the house alarm and causes the team to get out of there before the cops arrive.arrive]].
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* BothSidesHaveAPoint:BothSidesHaveAPoint: Griffin is entirely right in pointing out that how Swindle cheated him out of the baseball card is incredibly deceitful. But Ben and Savannah (whom were initially opposed to his heist plan) point out that if they pull off the heist, the authorities won’t automatically think that he was taking back what was rightfully his, he’s just stealing it.
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* DramaticSpotlight:DramaticSpotlight: [[spoiler:When Griffin sneaks out at night to the demolished Rockdale (the place that he mailed the baseball card to in order to lead the police off his scent) he goes to the mailbox to retrieve the card. But it turns out that the police were monitoring the place on account of what one of the heist members had told them, and they turned on the floodlights that surrounded the place, catching Griffin in the act]].
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AnalogyBackfire: Griffin keeps thinking and explaining to his friends and family that he’s not stealing the baseball card, he’s taking back what’s rightfully his. He compares it to a person repossessing a car, which is perfectly legal. [[spoiler:But when Griffin actually does the deed, the authorities don’t exactly agree with his thinking, and believe it rightfully belongs with the Rockdale family]].
*AngerBornOfWorry:AngerBornOfWorry: [[spoiler:When the parents of the heist members find out about what their children did, they are mentioned to be very angry with them for doing such a thing, including Ben’s mother who allegedly yelled at him for an hour]].
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* AstonishinglyAppropriateInterruption:AstonishinglyAppropriateInterruption: When Griffin is asking what he thinks of the break-in plan to Ben in the cafeteria, his nurse comes in to say that she thinks it’s time for his allergy nap.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Ben has been shown to fall asleep easily. This is a tip off that he has narcolepsy, a fact that he tells Griffin before they go on the heist.
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* {{Foreshadowing}}: Ben has been shown to fall asleep easily. This is a tip off that he [[spoiler:he has narcolepsy, a fact that he tells Griffin before they go on the heist.heist]].
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!! Because of many spoileriffic moments, spoiler captions are OFF! beware of spoilers! You have been warned!
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* BittersweetEnding: The team ends up getting caught, gain intense police suspicion, and Griffin has to give up the card because of inheritance issues. However, because of the publicity of the SmartPick’s used in the robbery, this solves the financial problems that the Bing family has been going through. In addition, the money used in the card selling helped create the skateboarding concept that Griffin wanted to be approved.
* BrickJoke: Griffin recalled how Darren spread a rumor at school that he was related to the Rockdale’s, the owners of the abandoned house that is about to be demolished. This rumor turns out to be true, as he is the youngest relative of the Rockdale lady that inherited the Babe Ruth baseball card. And when it is sold, all the money goes to him.
* BrickJoke: Griffin recalled how Darren spread a rumor at school that he was related to the Rockdale’s, the owners of the abandoned house that is about to be demolished. This rumor turns out to be true, as he is the youngest relative of the Rockdale lady that inherited the Babe Ruth baseball card. And when it is sold, all the money goes to him.
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* BittersweetEnding: The [[spoiler:The team ends up getting caught, gain intense police suspicion, and Griffin has to give up the card because of inheritance issues. However, because of the publicity of the SmartPick’s used in the robbery, this solves the financial problems that the Bing family has been going through. In addition, the money used in the card selling helped create the skateboarding concept that Griffin wanted to be approved.
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* BrickJoke: Griffin recalled how Darren spread a rumor at school that he was related to the Rockdale’s, the owners of the abandoned house that is about to be demolished. This rumor turns out to be true, as he is the youngest relative of the Rockdale lady thatinherited [[spoiler:inherited the Babe Ruth baseball card. And when it is sold, all the money goes to him.him]].
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* FreudianSlip: When asked why the baseball card is so cold on TV, Mr. Palomino replies that it’s for all the “cold hard cash” that the card is worth. This is a tip off that he isn’t actually keeping the card hidden in his safe, but in a heat cavity deep in a frozen turkey he bought.
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* FreudianSlip: When asked why the baseball card is so cold on TV, Mr. Palomino replies that it’s for all the “cold hard cash” that the card is worth. This is a tip off that he isn’t [[spoiler:isn’t actually keeping the card hidden in his safe, but in a heat cavity deep in a frozen turkey he bought.bought]].
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{{Foreshadowing}}: Ben has been shown to fall asleep easily. This is a tip off that he has narcolepsy, a fact that he tells Griffin before they go on the heist.
*FreudianSlip:FreudianSlip: When asked why the baseball card is so cold on TV, Mr. Palomino replies that it’s for all the “cold hard cash” that the card is worth. This is a tip off that he isn’t actually keeping the card hidden in his safe, but in a heat cavity deep in a frozen turkey he bought.
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