Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
fixed typos
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Kelsey Deveraux who thinks himself bound for officer candidate school is instead assigned by a whim of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat bureaucracy]] to the destroyer USS Caron. Then he is sent to [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII Guadalcanal]] where the Caron is hit and crippled. The Caron's engine's are knocked out and it is forced to ride the ocean current to Australia.
to:
Kelsey Deveraux who thinks himself bound for officer candidate school is instead assigned by a whim of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat bureaucracy]] to the destroyer USS Caron. Then he is sent to [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII Guadalcanal]] where the Caron is hit and crippled. The Caron's engine's engines are knocked out and it is forced to ride the ocean current to Australia.
Changed line(s) 5 (click to see context) from:
This is a typical fifties teenage war-story of the type written by Robb White. It is well written and entertaining. It is probably more idealistic then cynic, but it is not so idealistic that one can quite accuse it of saying WarIsGlorious . At least if it does it doesn't say "war is fun" in any case.
to:
This is a typical fifties teenage war-story of the type written by Robb White. It is well written and entertaining. It is probably more idealistic then cynic, but it is not so idealistic that one can quite accuse it of saying WarIsGlorious . At least if it does does, it doesn't say "war is fun" in any case.
Changed line(s) 10 (click to see context) from:
* BeleagueredBureaucrat : another way of looking at the reason Kelsey is aboard the Caron and strongly implied.
to:
* BeleagueredBureaucrat : BeleagueredBureaucrat: another way of looking at the reason Kelsey is aboard the Caron and strongly implied.
Changed line(s) 12 (click to see context) from:
* TheBully : Ruddy's bullying goes beyond the mere instrumental bullying of a DrillSergeantNasty and in fact is really borderline criminal.
to:
* TheBully : TheBully: Ruddy's bullying goes beyond the mere instrumental bullying of a DrillSergeantNasty and in fact is really borderline criminal.
Changed line(s) 24 (click to see context) from:
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: subverted for Kelsey as he was might not have made a good fit for OCS anyway so they accidently got it right.
to:
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: subverted for Kelsey as he was might not have made a good fit for OCS anyway so they accidently accidentally got it right.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
Kelsey Deveraux who thinks himself bound for officer candidate school is instead assigned by a whim of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat bureaucracy]] to the destroyer USS Caron. Then he is sent to [[WorldWarII Guadalcanal]] where the Caron is hit and crippled. The Caron's engine's are knocked out and it is forced to ride the ocean current to Australia.
to:
Kelsey Deveraux who thinks himself bound for officer candidate school is instead assigned by a whim of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat bureaucracy]] to the destroyer USS Caron. Then he is sent to [[WorldWarII [[UsefulNotes/WorldWarII Guadalcanal]] where the Caron is hit and crippled. The Caron's engine's are knocked out and it is forced to ride the ocean current to Australia.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not a trope
Deleted line(s) 29 (click to see context) :
* WorldWarII
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Crowning Moment of Awesome
Deleted line(s) 14 (click to see context) :
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Ruddy and several minions attack Kelsey when no one is looking. Kelsey beats Ruddy up while Jesse waits in the dark(because ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself ). Then when the minions come for revenge, Jesse chases them away with a blowtorch.
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* TheSoCalledCoward: A rather blatant example. In the middle of a battle Kelsey actually shoughts "Abandon ship" because he saw it in a movie. After that, he is nicknamed "abandon ship" until he proves himself.
to:
* TheSoCalledCoward: A rather blatant example. In the middle of a battle Kelsey actually shoughts shouts "Abandon ship" because he saw it in a movie. After that, he is nicknamed "abandon ship" until he proves himself.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
moved to namespace
Added DiffLines:
Kelsey Deveraux who thinks himself bound for officer candidate school is instead assigned by a whim of the [[ObstructiveBureaucrat bureaucracy]] to the destroyer USS Caron. Then he is sent to [[WorldWarII Guadalcanal]] where the Caron is hit and crippled. The Caron's engine's are knocked out and it is forced to ride the ocean current to Australia.
Meanwhile Deveraux is put through a classic "coming of age aboard ship". He is bullied by one Chief (Ruddy), he is befriended by a mechanic Jesse Woodham. And he is taught by the distant but benevolent captain how to be a good sailor.
This is a typical fifties teenage war-story of the type written by Robb White. It is well written and entertaining. It is probably more idealistic then cynic, but it is not so idealistic that one can quite accuse it of saying WarIsGlorious . At least if it does it doesn't say "war is fun" in any case.
----
!! Tropes in this work:
* AFatherToHisMen: The Captain of the Caron
* AFriendInNeed: Jesse, also the captain.
* BeleagueredBureaucrat : another way of looking at the reason Kelsey is aboard the Caron and strongly implied.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Jesse has this toward Kelsey
* TheBully : Ruddy's bullying goes beyond the mere instrumental bullying of a DrillSergeantNasty and in fact is really borderline criminal.
* TheCaptain: The Captain of the Caron
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Ruddy and several minions attack Kelsey when no one is looking. Kelsey beats Ruddy up while Jesse waits in the dark(because ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself ). Then when the minions come for revenge, Jesse chases them away with a blowtorch.
* DrillSergeantNasty: Ruddy
* FatherNeptune: Jesse Woodham
** Ruddy is kind of a villainous FatherNeptune
* {{Flashback}}: There are a couple of these
* HonorBeforeReason: They stay with the ship and ride it to Australia.
* ImprovisedWeapon: one time the Caron is taken under tow by a Japanese ship who intends to salvage them thinking them abandoned(it almost is, TheCaptain had put most of his men ashore on a deserted island hoping to come back) . The launching mechanism for the torpedoes are out. So by some seaman's trick, a rigging was set for the Japanese ship to pull the torpedoes toward itself.
** It was placed on a bunk mattress and affixed to the tow line. The tow line was then cut on the Carey side, with the Captain betting that the Japanese Captain would haul in the line rather than waste supplies.
* InMediasRes: Begins this way
* MrFixIt: Jesse
* NewMeat: Kelsey
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: subverted for Kelsey as he was might not have made a good fit for OCS anyway so they accidently got it right.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: The Captain of the Caron
* TheSoCalledCoward: A rather blatant example. In the middle of a battle Kelsey actually shoughts "Abandon ship" because he saw it in a movie. After that, he is nicknamed "abandon ship" until he proves himself.
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself
* TrappedBehindEnemyLines
* WorldWarII
----
Meanwhile Deveraux is put through a classic "coming of age aboard ship". He is bullied by one Chief (Ruddy), he is befriended by a mechanic Jesse Woodham. And he is taught by the distant but benevolent captain how to be a good sailor.
This is a typical fifties teenage war-story of the type written by Robb White. It is well written and entertaining. It is probably more idealistic then cynic, but it is not so idealistic that one can quite accuse it of saying WarIsGlorious . At least if it does it doesn't say "war is fun" in any case.
----
!! Tropes in this work:
* AFatherToHisMen: The Captain of the Caron
* AFriendInNeed: Jesse, also the captain.
* BeleagueredBureaucrat : another way of looking at the reason Kelsey is aboard the Caron and strongly implied.
* BigBrotherInstinct: Jesse has this toward Kelsey
* TheBully : Ruddy's bullying goes beyond the mere instrumental bullying of a DrillSergeantNasty and in fact is really borderline criminal.
* TheCaptain: The Captain of the Caron
* CrowningMomentOfAwesome: Ruddy and several minions attack Kelsey when no one is looking. Kelsey beats Ruddy up while Jesse waits in the dark(because ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself ). Then when the minions come for revenge, Jesse chases them away with a blowtorch.
* DrillSergeantNasty: Ruddy
* FatherNeptune: Jesse Woodham
** Ruddy is kind of a villainous FatherNeptune
* {{Flashback}}: There are a couple of these
* HonorBeforeReason: They stay with the ship and ride it to Australia.
* ImprovisedWeapon: one time the Caron is taken under tow by a Japanese ship who intends to salvage them thinking them abandoned(it almost is, TheCaptain had put most of his men ashore on a deserted island hoping to come back) . The launching mechanism for the torpedoes are out. So by some seaman's trick, a rigging was set for the Japanese ship to pull the torpedoes toward itself.
** It was placed on a bunk mattress and affixed to the tow line. The tow line was then cut on the Carey side, with the Captain betting that the Japanese Captain would haul in the line rather than waste supplies.
* InMediasRes: Begins this way
* MrFixIt: Jesse
* NewMeat: Kelsey
* ObstructiveBureaucrat: subverted for Kelsey as he was might not have made a good fit for OCS anyway so they accidently got it right.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: The Captain of the Caron
* TheSoCalledCoward: A rather blatant example. In the middle of a battle Kelsey actually shoughts "Abandon ship" because he saw it in a movie. After that, he is nicknamed "abandon ship" until he proves himself.
* ThisIsSomethingHesGotToDoHimself
* TrappedBehindEnemyLines
* WorldWarII
----
