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-> A modern man finds himself reincarnated in the body of a young slave with no skills and quickly fading memories. Follow his journey to find normalcy while living in a savage world, filled with myth and legends, monsters and Demons. In a land where the strong rule, the weak serve, and bloodshed is a way of life, peace is a luxury few can afford.
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A modern man finds himself reincarnated in the body of a young slave with no skills and quickly fading memories. Follow his journey to find normalcy while living in a savage world, filled with myth and legends, monsters and Demons. In a land where the strong rule, the weak serve, and bloodshed is a way of life, peace is a luxury few can afford.
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* BadDreams: Spectres will commonly harass tainted individuals with targeted nightmares to increase paranoia.
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* DoubleJump: Some Martial Warriors can do this, and it's called Cloud Stepping.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken that follows Rain around like an oversized dog. [[spoiler:Pong Pong is a tiny turtle that is even ''more powerful''. Ping Ping later joins Pong Pong when she ascends and becomes a true Diving turtle.]]
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken that follows Rain around like an oversized dog. [[spoiler:Pong Pong is a tiny turtle that is even ''more powerful''. Ping Ping later joins Pong Pong when she ascends and becomes a true Diving turtle.Divine Turtle.]]
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* ActionGirl: Female soldiers are rare in the Empire. The Bekhai are the exception with plenty of examples among the cast.
* AmbiguouslyGay: How Dastan views Rain after a series of misconceptions.
* AmbiguouslyGay: How Dastan views Rain after a series of misconceptions.
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* ActionGirl: Female soldiers are rare rarer than male soldiers in the Empire. The Bekhai are the exception with plenty of examples among the cast.
*AmbiguouslyGay: How Dastan views Rain after a series ApocalypseHow: Some of misconceptions.the Defiled wish to bring about a ApocalypseHow/Class6, as they believe the next life is better than the current one.
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* EnemyWithin: The Spectres are this, causing the people they inhabit to be more and more depressed, angry, and irrational, whittling away at their sanity until the they become Defiled. They aren't always successful, as it also depends on the environment and the will of the person they are trying to affect, among other things.
** It is later stated that animals can also do this.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken that follows Rain around like an oversized dog. [[spoiler:Pong Pong is a tiny turtle that is even ''more powerful''.]]
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken that follows Rain around like an oversized dog. [[spoiler:Pong Pong is a tiny turtle that is even ''more powerful''. Ping Ping later joins Pong Pong when she ascends and becomes a true Diving turtle.]]
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* SupernaturalMartialArts: Martial Warriors and Defiled alike learn a set of movements called The Forms to create their own martial arts. Combined with [[KiManipulation Chi]], this gives them supernatural fighting abilities. This consists of being able to [[SuperStrength hit harder]] and [[SuperSpeed move faster]] to being able to [[DoubleJump air jump]] and send [[{{Vibroweapon}} shock-waves]] through your opponent, and much more.
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* ShockwaveClap: One of the Chi skills that Martial Warriors is called Reverberation. This allows one to create shockwaves to attack opponents. It can invade the body of an enemy that doesn't know how to counter it.
* SupernaturalMartialArts: Martial Warriors and Defiled alike learn a set of movements called The Forms to create their own martial arts. Combined with [[KiManipulation Chi]], this gives them supernatural fighting abilities. This consists of being able to [[SuperStrength hit harder]] and [[SuperSpeed move faster]] to being able to [[DoubleJump air jump]] and send[[{{Vibroweapon}} shock-waves]] [[ShockwaveClap shockwaves]] through your opponent, and much more.
* SupernaturalMartialArts: Martial Warriors and Defiled alike learn a set of movements called The Forms to create their own martial arts. Combined with [[KiManipulation Chi]], this gives them supernatural fighting abilities. This consists of being able to [[SuperStrength hit harder]] and [[SuperSpeed move faster]] to being able to [[DoubleJump air jump]] and send
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* LostTechnology: The Walls that protect the Empire were created long ago; so long that everyone has forgotten how to make them. [[spoiler:This poses a problem when they are breached by the Defiled.]] Thankfully, Rain has developed concrete, which is a step in the right direction to rediscovering how to create the Walls.
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* LostTechnology: The Walls that protect the Empire were created long ago; so long that everyone has forgotten how to make them. [[spoiler:This poses a problem when they are breached by the Defiled.]] Thankfully, Rain has developed concrete, which is a step in the right direction to rediscovering how to create the Walls.]]
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** The various Imperial families from the Eastern Province are even ''worse'' with this, as their feuds will include manipulating, or even sacrificing, hundreds of millions of people from the other provinces.
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* CrystalDragonJesus: Rain gaining the title of The Mother's Chosen Son, complete with defiled cleansing action provided by Blobby.
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** The usage of tricks, like utilizing poison or oil to burn enemies is also looked down upon as dishonorable.
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* MedievalStasis: In the Azure Empire, change is slow at best, and resisted at worst.
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* MentalWorld: Martial Warriors who can create one, called a Domain, are considered Experts, the ones at the peak of the Martial Path. [[spoiler:This is disregarding those who go beyond even that.]]
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* RealityEnsues: No matter how revolutionary his ideas are, Rain is only one man going up against millennia of tradition. As such, it takes time for most, if not all, of his plans to get off the ground and gain traction.
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* FigureItOutYourself: This is how much of the teaching of higher level techniques works, as everyone understands the Martial Dao differently. Justified as actually trying to teach someone else exactly how one performs their techniques can end up not helping at best, or detrimentally affecting their Martial Dao at worst.
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* EmotionBomb: Some people can cause fear in others by creating a Aura. Fewer people can instill emotions through their voice.
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* FluffyTheTerrible: Rain has a tendency of giving him many pets, some of which are terrifying creatures in normal circumstances, rather cute or ridiculous names.
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* PureEnergy: Heavenly Energy either from natural sources or purified Spectre remains.
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* ElementalPowers: It is possible for people to develop this after experiencing an Awakening.
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* ElementalPowers: It is possible for people to develop this after experiencing an Awakening. These abilities are called Blessings. They are further divided into several sub-categories.
** Primal Blessings consist of the four classical elements, Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water.
** Auxiliary Blessings come from the combination of two Primal Blessings.
** There is a third sub-category called Esoteric Blessings. The only ones of this kind that have been revealed are Sound and Space.
** Primal Blessings consist of the four classical elements, Earth, Fire, Wind, and Water.
** Auxiliary Blessings come from the combination of two Primal Blessings.
** There is a third sub-category called Esoteric Blessings. The only ones of this kind that have been revealed are Sound and Space.
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* TheCorruption: Defiled can all wield chi and grow in power quickly with aid from the specters, gaining power the more they become defiled.
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* OurSpiritsAreDifferent: Specters are incorporeal, like to gather in droves, cannot be sensed by normal beings, seek to corrupt any sentient being, and have a universal goal of causing as much suffering in destruction as possible.
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* PowerAtAPrice: Specters give small bits of power to tainted in hopes that they continue to crave the specters until they surrender and become a demon.
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* PowerAtAPrice: Specters Spectres give small bits of power to tainted in hopes that they continue to crave the specters Spectres until they surrender and become a demon.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As Specters turn people defiled, this is the usual case the further they sink into the Specters' influence. If they surrender to the Specters and become a full Demon, then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As Specters Spectres turn people defiled, this is the usual case the further they sink into the Specters' Spectres' influence. If they surrender to the Specters Spectres and become a full Demon, then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: The world of Savage Divinity runs on this in spades. Chances are if someone is of a higher position than they can and will enforce it.
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* CastFromCalories: Healing works this way having to convert from your way, converting excess body mass in order to heal the wounds.
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* ImprobableAimingSkills: Guiding allows martial warriors Martial Warriors to do this with spiritual weapons.
* LongevityTreatment: Martial Practitioners get the benefit of slowed aging because of cultivating Heavenly Energy. Humans can live to about a hundred years, only experiencing physical debilitation near the end.
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* MusclesAreMeaningless: Downplayed. Martial Warriors are much stronger than their appearances would suggest, but physical fitness is still a factor in how strong one is.
* NamesToRunAwayFromReallyFast: Manymartial warriors Martial Warriors have them but the "Smiling Slaughterer" Guan Suo is in a league all his own, with stories of his slaughter and battles echoing through the Empire's elite.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Some people, usually arrogant nobles, rely on their friendships of family relations to get what they want.
* SeaMonster: Krakens are just what lie just outside coastal waters of the Empire.
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* ScrewTheRulesIHaveConnections: Some people, usually arrogant nobles, rely on their friendships of or family relations to get what they want.
* SeaMonster: Krakens are just what lie just outside coastal waters of the Empire. Even more terrifying creatures live further out.
* SeaMonster: Krakens are just what lie just outside coastal waters of the Empire. Even more terrifying creatures live further out.
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* ElementalPowers: It is possible for people to develop this after experiencing an Awakening.
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* EyeScream: Happens a few times in series, the most notable is Husolt who has been blinded in one eye and refuses have it healed.
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Any Ancestral Beast is capable of slaughtering armies
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* PersonOfMassDestruction: Any Ancestral Beast is capable of slaughtering armies
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* UnlimitedWardrobe: The nobles of central place more attention on how many outfits they have, and how gaudy they are than the nobles of other provinces.
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* EyeScream: Happens a few times in series, the most notable is Husolt who has been blinded in one eye and either refuses or simply can't have it healed.
* FantasticRacism: Half Beasts are treated like this by most citizens of the empire.
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* EyeScream: Happens a few times in series, the most notable is Husolt who has been blinded in one eye and either refuses or simply can't have it healed.
* FantasticRacism: Half Beasts are treated like this by most citizens of theempire.Empire.
* FantasticRacism: Half Beasts are treated like this by most citizens of the
* HonorBeforeReason: Deconstructed. Bows are looked down upon as weapons for peasants, so many Martial Warriors would never think to use them in battles, despite the fact that it would give them a massive advantage when fighting the Defiled. The Bekhai are the only ones who seem see the benefits of a good bowman on the battlefield.
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* UnwantedAssistance: Charity is generally disdained in the Empire, with many only taking it grudgingly or when truly desperate.
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* ADayInTheLimelight: Several chapters show the [=POVs=] of other characters.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Several chapters show the [=POVs=] of other characters.
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* KillerRabbit: Aurie and Rain had to learn this the hard way with Mama Bun.
* KillerRabbit: Aurie and Rain had to learn this the hard way with Mama Bun.
* NoSell: Rain can shrug off his opponent's aura without one of his own. While everyone else without an aura cowers under an oppressive aura, Rain is capable of reacting and fighting back, a feat thought impossible before.
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* NoSell: Rain can shrug off his opponent's aura without one of his own. While everyone else without an aura cowers under an oppressive aura, Rain is capable of reacting and fighting back, a feat thought impossible before.
* SwitchingPOV: The story primarily follows Rain but often shifts to the perspective of other characters, from secondary characters to one-off characters with little influence.
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* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As Specters turn people defiled, this is the usual case the further they sink into the Specters' influence. If they surrender to the Specters and become a full Demon, then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.torture.
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* SupernaturalMartialArts: Martial Warriors and Defiled alike learn a set of movements called The Forms to create their own martial arts. Combined with [[KiManipulation Chi]], this gives them supernatural fighting abilities. This consists of being able to [[SuperStrength hit harder]] and [[SuperSpeed move faster]] to being able to [[DoubleJump air jump]] and send [[{{Vibroweapon}} shock-waves]] through your opponent, and much more.
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* BigEater: All animals that can cultivate Heavenly Energy eat much more than their mundane counterparts.
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* FriendToAllLivingThings: Ping Ping, despite being an ancient giant turtle, goes out of her way not to hurt anyone and has rabbits sleeping in her shell on occasion.
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* TheHorde: The Defiled are this.
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* UnlimitedWardrobe: The nobles of central place more attention on how many outfits, and how gaudy they are than the nobles of other provinces.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken that follows Rain around like an oversized dog.
dog. [[spoiler:Pong Pong is a tiny turtle that is even ''more powerful''.]]
* UnlimitedWardrobe: The nobles of central place more attention on how manyoutfits, outfits they have, and how gaudy they are than the nobles of other provinces.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The various factions of the Empire '''will''' fight to keep out the Defiled... usually at the cost of other factions.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As specters turn people defiled this is the usual case the further they sink into the specters influence. If they surrender to the specters and become a full demon then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: As specters turn people defiled this is the usual case the further they sink into the specters influence. If they surrender to the specters and become a full demon then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.
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* WeAreStrugglingTogether: The various factions of the Empire '''will''' fight to keep out the Defiled... usually at the cost expense of other factions.
* WithGreatPowerComesGreatInsanity: Asspecters Specters turn people defiled defiled, this is the usual case the further they sink into the specters Specters' influence. If they surrender to the specters Specters and become a full demon Demon, then their mind is locked away entirely in madness and torture.
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''[[https://royalroadl.com/fiction/5701/savage-divinity Savage Divinity]]'' is a {{Fantasy}} {{Web Serial Novel}} written by RuffWriter.
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* GeometicMagic: There are runes which can be applied to objects to give them different effects. People who can do so are rather rare, and thus, valuable.
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* GeometicMagic: GeometricMagic: There are runes which can be applied to objects to give them different effects. People who can do so are rather rare, and thus, valuable.
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* DireBeast: All beasts that cultivate Heavenly Energy are larger than their mundane counterparts.
** Some beasts are born with the ability to cultivate, and as such, they have no mundane counterpart. An example would be the Roosequin.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Ancestral Beasts, and by extension their half beast children have ears, tails and other features of their heritage.
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* LittleBitBeastly: Ancestral Beasts, and by extension their half beast children children, have ears, tails and other features of their heritage.
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* WaifFu: Mei Lin and Sumila get special mention for this.
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* WaifFu: Mei Lin and Sumila get gets special mention for this.
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* LoyalAnimalCompanion: Rain has a whole menagerie including Wildcats, Bears, Birds and Roosequin.
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* LoyalAnimalCompanion: Rain has a whole menagerie including Wildcats, Bears, Birds and Roosequin.Roosequins.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken, that follows Rain around like an oversized dog.
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* ActionGirl: Female soldiers are rare in the Empire, the Bekhai are the exception with plenty of examples among the cast.
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* ActionGirl: Female soldiers are rare in the Empire, the Empire. The Bekhai are the exception with plenty of examples among the cast.
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Pure heavenly energy can transform into matter, create new bodies and even reverse the effects of aging if not grant biological immortality with enough of it.
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* AppliedPhlebotinum: Pure heavenly energy Heavenly Energy can transform into matter, create new bodies and even reverse the effects of aging if not grant biological immortality with enough of it.
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* AwfulWeddedLife: Fung was a victim of this due to his arranged marriage.
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* AwfulWeddedLife: Fung was going to become a victim of this due to his arranged marriage.
marriage. He was saved from this fate thanks to the inadvertent actions of the Bekhai, specifically Rain.
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* ForbiddenZone: The lands beyond the Empire that most of the defiled call home.
* FriendToAllLivingThings: Ping Ping despite being an ancient giant turtle goes out of her way not to hurt anyone and has rabbits sleeping in her shell on occasion.
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* ForbiddenZone: The lands beyond the Empire that most of the defiled Defiled call home.
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* NoSell: Rain can shrug off his opponent's aura without one of his own. While everyone else without an aura cowers under an the opression, Rain is capable of reacting and fighting back a feat thought impossible before this.
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* NoSell: Rain can shrug off his opponent's aura without one of his own. While everyone else without an aura cowers under an the opression, oppressive aura, Rain is capable of reacting and fighting back back, a feat thought impossible before this.before.
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* PlayfulOtter: Roosequin are of the, giant, bipedal, apex predator variety.
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* PlayfulOtter: Roosequin Roosequins are of the, giant, bipedal, apex predator variety.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Rains retinue consists of crippled soldiers, bandits, slaves, and an elite group of turtle guards.
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* RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Rains Rain's retinue consists of crippled soldiers, bandits, slaves, and an elite group of turtle guards.
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* RingOfPower: The runic rings won by the Bekhai youths at the competition allow the user to draw in heavenly energy much faster than normal allowing for faster recovery of chi and training speed.
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* RingOfPower: The runic rings won by the Bekhai youths at the competition allow the user to draw in heavenly energy Heavenly Energy much faster than normal allowing for faster recovery of chi and training speed.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken, that follows Rain around like an oversized Dog.
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* TurtlePower: Ping Ping is a massive ancient turtle capable of eating Kraken, that follows Rain around like an oversized Dog.dog.
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* MagicEnhancement: The Reinforcement skill reinforces muscles with chi and with enough concentration and energy can exponentially increase strength.
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* MagicEnhancement: The Reinforcement reinforcement skill reinforces strengthens muscles with chi chi, and with enough concentration and energy can exponentially increase strength.
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* MagicEnhancement: The Reinforcement skill reinforces muscles with chi and with enough concentration and energy can exponentially increase strength.
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* RagtagBunchofMisfits: Rains retinue consists of crippled soldiers, bandits, slaves, and an elite group of turtle guards.
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* RagtagBunchofMisfits: RagtagBunchOfMisfits: Rains retinue consists of crippled soldiers, bandits, slaves, and an elite group of turtle guards.
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* RazorWind: An expert at chi manipulation can create and shoot a blade of chi, but it is a rare skill.
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* UglyCute: Rain views his Wildcat pets as this, noting that their head is to small and their butt is to big, but that he loves them anyway.
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* UglyCute: Rain views his Wildcat pets as this, noting that their head is to small UnlimitedWardrobe: The nobles of central place more attention on how many outfits, and their butt is to big, but that he loves them anyway.how gaudy they are than the nobles of other provinces.
