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* PlainJane: Patience is described as averagely pretty, but she doesn’t take care of herself which knocks more beauty points off.
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* PlainJane: Patience is described as averagely pretty, but she doesn’t take care of herself which knocks more beauty points off.off.
* BestServeredCold: Patience waits about a decade to get revenge on Leonardo. In addition, she could have killed him multiple times but held off in order to get the ultimate revenge on him by exposing him as a criminal.
* BestServeredCold: Patience waits about a decade to get revenge on Leonardo. In addition, she could have killed him multiple times but held off in order to get the ultimate revenge on him by exposing him as a criminal.
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* GoodIsNotNice: Patience can come off as rude, crass and bitter but her heart is in the right place and she genuinely wants to help people.
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* TheNapoleon: Patience is 4’11 and filled with rage.
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* YouthfulFreckles: Patience is described as having a lot of freckles and as being youthful.
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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Leonardo to Patience both when she was forced to stay at his house and in Italy.
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* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Leonardo to Patience both when she was forced to stay at his house and in Italy.Italy.
* PlainJane: Patience is described as averagely pretty, but she doesn’t take care of herself which knocks more beauty points off.
* PlainJane: Patience is described as averagely pretty, but she doesn’t take care of herself which knocks more beauty points off.
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* LeanAndMean: Salvatore
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* LeanAndMean: Salvatore
Salvatore.
* LightIsNotGood: Leonardo has the face of an angel but his true colors aren’t nearly so pretty.
* LightIsNotGood: Leonardo has the face of an angel but his true colors aren’t nearly so pretty.
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to Patience
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to Patience
Patience.
* BeautyIsBad: Leonardo is extremely attractive and extremely despicable.
* BeautyIsBad: Leonardo is extremely attractive and extremely despicable.
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* AbstractApotheosis: Leonardo’s mother is so idealized in his head she’s viewed as a real person.
* ChildByRape:Andrea
Andrea.
* ExperiencedProtagonist: Patience has been researching and following Leonardo for years before the story takes place.
* SelfProclaimedLoveInterest: Both Leonardo and Salvatore believe themselves to be the center of Patience’s love life. Truth be told, she can’t stand either of them, and for good reason.
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* ExperiencedProtagonist: Patience has been researching and following Leonardo for years before the story takes place.
* SelfProclaimedLoveInterest: Both Leonardo and Salvatore believe themselves to be the center of Patience’s love life. Truth be told, she can’t stand either of them, and for good reason.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Both Salvatore and Leonardo are over 6’0, Patience,however, is tiny at 4’11.
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* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Both Salvatore and Leonardo are over 6’0, Patience,however, is tiny at 4’11.4’11.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Leonardo to Patience both when she was forced to stay at his house and in Italy.
* IHaveYouNowMyPretty: Leonardo to Patience both when she was forced to stay at his house and in Italy.
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* PostRapeTaunt: Both Salvatore and Leonardo do this.
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* PostRapeTaunt: Both Salvatore and Leonardo do this.this.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Both Salvatore and Leonardo are over 6’0, Patience,however, is tiny at 4’11.
* HugeGuyTinyGirl: Both Salvatore and Leonardo are over 6’0, Patience,however, is tiny at 4’11.
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* YouHaveFailedMe: Leonardo broke Stefano’s hand after he failed to assassinate Senator Nizzola.
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* LeanAndMean: SalvatoreSalvatore
* PostRapeTaunt: Both Salvatore and Leonardo do this.
* PostRapeTaunt: Both Salvatore and Leonardo do this.
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* WouldntHurtAChild: Salvatore adores children and won’t cross the line into hurting one.
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* ChildByRape: AndreaAndrea
* LeanAndMean: Salvatore
* LeanAndMean: Salvatore
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* BabyFactory: Leonardo would like to turn Patience into one
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* BabyFactory: Leonardo would like to turn Patience into oneone
* ChildByRape: Andrea
* ChildByRape: Andrea
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Leonardo doesn’t remember killing Patience’s parents
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* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Leonardo doesn’t remember killing Patience’s parentsparents
* VillainousCrush: Leonardo has a major one for Patience.
* BabyFactory: Leonardo would like to turn Patience into one
* VillainousCrush: Leonardo has a major one for Patience.
* BabyFactory: Leonardo would like to turn Patience into one
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to Patience
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* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to PatiencePatience
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Leonardo doesn’t remember killing Patience’s parents
* ButForMeItWasTuesday: Leonardo doesn’t remember killing Patience’s parents
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* PrivateDetective: The main character--and per the start of the story, just barely getting by.by.
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to Patience
* AbhorrentAdmirer: Leonardo is one to Patience
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* PrivateDetective: The main character.character--and per the start of the story, just barely getting by.
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!!Tropes in this work include
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* TheFifties: More towards the end of the decade, but it fits the dark, gritty aspect of the '50s.
* PrivateDetective: The main character.
* TheFifties: More towards the end of the decade, but it fits the dark, gritty aspect of the '50s.
* PrivateDetective: The main character.
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7942924/chapters/18158137 Ragnatela]]'' is a work of historical fiction
erotica by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Quieta/pseuds/Quieta Quieta]].
erotica by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Quieta/pseuds/Quieta Quieta]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7942924/chapters/18158137 Ragnatela]]'' is a work of historical fiction
fiction erotica by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Quieta/pseuds/Quieta Quieta]].
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''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/7942924/chapters/18158137 Ragnatela]]'' is a work of historical fiction
erotica by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Quieta/pseuds/Quieta Quieta]].
United States, 1959. Private Eye Patience Winslow has one dream: to take down the mafia, the vicious organization that stole the lives of her parents. Unfortunately, when she catches the attention of the suave, manipulative Don of the Borghese family, her life and dreams begin to quickly fall into ruin.
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erotica by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Quieta/pseuds/Quieta Quieta]].
United States, 1959. Private Eye Patience Winslow has one dream: to take down the mafia, the vicious organization that stole the lives of her parents. Unfortunately, when she catches the attention of the suave, manipulative Don of the Borghese family, her life and dreams begin to quickly fall into ruin.
!!Tropes in this work include
