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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''"It looked like falling snow...."'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a reference [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''"It looked like falling snow...."'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a reference [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])jpeg]]).
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* StarsAreSouls: In ''Madgie, what did you do? LII: Can I die happy, now?'', Doki mentioned Madgie amongst the stars
* SnowMeansDeath: Quite often this is used. The most prominent uses of this trope would be ''Nuclear Snow'', ''Bloodied Snow Angel'' ''The Winter's Blood Red Sky'', ''Snow Angel'', and ''"It looked like falling snow..."''
* SnowMeansDeath: Quite often this is used. The most prominent uses of this trope would be ''Nuclear Snow'', ''Bloodied Snow Angel'' ''The Winter's Blood Red Sky'', ''Snow Angel'', and ''"It looked like falling snow..."''
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* StarsAreSouls: In ''Madgie, what did you do? LII: Can I die happy, now?'', Doki mentioned Madgie amongst the stars.
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* ChildrenForcedToKill: The subject matter of ''Madgie, what did you do? XIX: Mercenary'' and, as the description put it, no one is exempt from fighting, even the youngest must fight, as in if they can hold a weapon and know what it is, they can fight.
** One a side note, it's also been pointed out that Bunny was surprised that Doki (the one leading this group) was affectionate and maternal towards them and that they mean a lot to her, thus if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be putting them up to it but she has no choice and they have no choice either, as per the lines:
--->''In whatever war that is going on, I was surprised that Doki was very affectionate with them and it occurred to me that, due to what was going on, she didn't want to put them up to killing as so to defend their turf or themselves but it was not like she could take them anywhere else or hide them for very long. As it seemed in the case of Violetta, who was minus a leg, they would have to be damaged in sort of way if they were to be out of duty. Doki's affection towards them proved what no one thought, it proved that they were not expendable weapons and, that to her, they were precious and that, if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be making them do what they are doing.''
** One a side note, it's also been pointed out that Bunny was surprised that Doki (the one leading this group) was affectionate and maternal towards them and that they mean a lot to her, thus if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be putting them up to it but she has no choice and they have no choice either, as per the lines:
--->''In whatever war that is going on, I was surprised that Doki was very affectionate with them and it occurred to me that, due to what was going on, she didn't want to put them up to killing as so to defend their turf or themselves but it was not like she could take them anywhere else or hide them for very long. As it seemed in the case of Violetta, who was minus a leg, they would have to be damaged in sort of way if they were to be out of duty. Doki's affection towards them proved what no one thought, it proved that they were not expendable weapons and, that to her, they were precious and that, if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be making them do what they are doing.''
* ChildrenForcedToKill:
** The subject matter of ''Madgie, what did you do? XIX: Mercenary'' and, as the description put it, no one is exempt from fighting, even the youngest must fight, as in if they can hold a weapon and know what it is, they can fight.
** One a side note, it's also been pointed out that Bunny was surprised that Doki (the one leading this group) was affectionate and maternal towards them and that they mean a lot to her, thus if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be putting them up to it but she has no choice and they have no choice either, as per the lines:
--->''In whatever war that is going on, I was surprised that Doki was very affectionate with them and it occurred to me that, due to what was going on, she didn't want to put them up to killing as so to defend their turf or themselves but it was not like she could take them anywhere else or hide them for very long. As it seemed in the case of Violetta, who was minus a leg, they would have to be damaged in sort of way if they were to be out of duty. Doki's affection towards them proved what no one thought, it proved that they were not expendable weapons and, that to her, they were precious and that, if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be making them do what they are doing.''
** The subject matter of ''Madgie, what did you do? XIX: Mercenary'' and, as the description put it, no one is exempt from fighting, even the youngest must fight, as in if they can hold a weapon and know what it is, they can fight.
** One a side note, it's also been pointed out that Bunny was surprised that Doki (the one leading this group) was affectionate and maternal towards them and that they mean a lot to her, thus if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be putting them up to it but she has no choice and they have no choice either, as per the lines:
--->''In whatever war that is going on, I was surprised that Doki was very affectionate with them and it occurred to me that, due to what was going on, she didn't want to put them up to killing as so to defend their turf or themselves but it was not like she could take them anywhere else or hide them for very long. As it seemed in the case of Violetta, who was minus a leg, they would have to be damaged in sort of way if they were to be out of duty. Doki's affection towards them proved what no one thought, it proved that they were not expendable weapons and, that to her, they were precious and that, if she didn't have to, she wouldn't be making them do what they are doing.''
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* DeadAllAlong: In ''Requiem II'', this is most prominent, as it is implied that she may have died a little while before then and that they weren't aware that she's died, with life continuing as somewhat usual. This is evident in that Toki is [[BloodFromTheMouth bleeding from the mouth]] and said bleeding should have killed her or should have stopped.
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* DeadAllAlong: DeadAllAlong:
** In ''Requiem II'', this is most prominent, as it is implied that she may have died a little while before then and that they weren't aware that she's died, with life continuing as somewhat usual. This is evident in that Toki is [[BloodFromTheMouth bleeding from the mouth]] and said bleeding should have killed her or should have stopped.
** In ''Requiem II'', this is most prominent, as it is implied that she may have died a little while before then and that they weren't aware that she's died, with life continuing as somewhat usual. This is evident in that Toki is [[BloodFromTheMouth bleeding from the mouth]] and said bleeding should have killed her or should have stopped.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by Creator/{{Amoridere}} (known on Website/DeviantArt as [=AkaiChounokoe=]). It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by Creator/{{Amoridere}} (known on Website/DeviantArt Platform/DeviantArt as [=AkaiChounokoe=]). It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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!Tropes for the ''Madgie, what did you do?'' Series:
%%* AfterTheEnd: When Bunny and Madgie returns to the future
* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely. Death does not discriminate, seeing as the titular Madgie has died more than once during the second story in the series
%%* AfterTheEnd: When Bunny and Madgie returns to the future
* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely. Death does not discriminate, seeing as the titular Madgie has died more than once during the second story in the series
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* IllGirl: Varies. Usually, it's Toki and other times it is Madgie.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by as Creator/{{Amoridere}} (known on Website/DeviantArt as [=AkaiChounokoe=]). It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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* InfantImmortality: Played with and more often than not averted in Madgie's case
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* InfantImmortality: ImprobableInfantSurvival: Played with and more often than not averted in Madgie's case
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* AfterTheEnd: When Bunny and Madgie returns to the future
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* BadFuture: Played with to a certain degree. Usually it is and, sometimes, it kinda is.
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* BloodFromTheMouth: Depending on the story and usually the cause is some sort of illness.
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* DeadHandShot: Some of the preview images have Madgie's and, at one point, Antoinette's hand.
* DiseaseBleach: Sometimes.
* DrivenToSuicide: The titular Madgie and, sometimes, Toki
* DrowningMySorrows: Doki in ''Madgie, what did you do? V''
* EndlessWinter: Happens to a fair amount.
* EmpathyDollShot: Some of the preview images
* DiseaseBleach: Sometimes.
* DrivenToSuicide: The titular Madgie and, sometimes, Toki
* DrowningMySorrows: Doki in ''Madgie, what did you do? V''
* EndlessWinter: Happens to a fair amount.
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* FlowerMotifs: Yes, sometimes. More often than not, it comes in the form of lilies, the which typically symbolizes or are associated innocence and death.
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* FlowerMotifs: Yes, sometimes. FlowerMotifs:
** More often than not, it comes in the form of lilies, the which typically symbolizes or are associated innocence and death.
** More often than not, it comes in the form of lilies, the which typically symbolizes or are associated innocence and death.
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*** Actually, ANYONE that dies in series is like this, however, Madgie dies the most. This should be noted that this isn't for comedy, rather, in the first instance, it was to make the story more poignant.
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** What gives the series it's title.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by as Creator/{{Amoridere}} (known on Website/DeviantArt as [=AkaiChounokoe=].[=AkaiChounokoe=]). It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by by as Creator/{{Amoridere}} (known on Website/DeviantArt user [=AkaiChounokoe=], otherwise and universally known as Creator/{{Amoridere}}.[=AkaiChounokoe=]. It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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* MercyKill: In XIX, this is the reason as to why Toki has hidden herself in an underground safehouse. Well, needless to say, she's regretted it and says Madgie didn't give her a choice. Subverted, though, as Madgie is not explicitly mentioned as suffering, though if she was bleeding quite severely, so one would assume that she had been injured badly enough and was already dying, so what Toki regretted ever having to do had only quickened her death.
** This trope was one of the things Doki had done in which she was not proud.
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* MercyKill: In XIX, this is the reason as to why Occurs at least twice.
** Once, in ''"It looked like falling snow..."'', Tokihas hidden herself mentions having to euthanize a badly burned Stinky (Bunny's cat)
**The second occurred inan underground safehouse. Well, needless to say, she's regretted it ''Broken Wings'', with Doki and says Madgie didn't give her a choice. Subverted, though, badly burned Madgie, however, the latter is more subtle as Madgie is not explicitly it isn't outright stated but she was mentioned as suffering, though if she was bleeding quite severely, so one would assume that she had been injured badly enough and was already dying, so what Toki regretted ever having to do had only quickened her death.
** This trope washave become Madgie's "angel of mercy", this being one of the things Doki had done she did in which she was not proud. wasn't proud.
** Once, in ''"It looked like falling snow..."'', Toki
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**What gives the series it's title.
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It looked like falling snow....'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a reference [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It ''"It looked like falling snow....'', "'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a reference [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by Website/DeviantArt user [=AkaiChounokoe=], otherwise and universally known as Amoridere. It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
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The ''Madgie, what did you do?'' (alternatively shortened to ''M,wdyd?'' or ''Madgie'') Series is a series of short stories written by Website/DeviantArt user [=AkaiChounokoe=], otherwise and universally known as Amoridere.Creator/{{Amoridere}}. It involves the titular Madgie and her older sister, Bunny, and a series of time travelling experiments gone awry. So far the series has about 55 stories, with more to come.
*BiblicalMotifs: More so in the ''Turning the Hands of Time'' arc, where Doki is heard reciting bible verses.
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* TheVirus: ''Blood Rains'', ''Shattered Plague'', and ''Virus'' have some sort of illness spreading around.
* TheSpeechless: Toki was forced to be this in XXXI, with her vocal cords removed for reasons implied to be because she knew of a genetically engineered biological weapon.
* TheSpeechless: Toki was forced to be this in XXXI, with her vocal cords removed for reasons implied to be because she knew of a genetically engineered biological weapon.
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*TitleDrop: Story 53 get it's title from Doki describing the nuclear ash as looking like snow.
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* TheVirus: ''Blood Rains'', ''Shattered Plague'', and ''Virus'' have some sort of illness spreading around.
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* ShoutOut: Story 40 has a shoutout to ''AChristmasCarol''
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* ShoutOut: Story 40 has a shoutout to ''AChristmasCarol''''Literature/AChristmasCarol''
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* Madgie, what did you do? Finale!: The Crystals of Dreamer's Dust and The Angel
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* Madgie, what did you do? Finale!: The Crystals of Dreamer's Dust and The Angel
* Madgie, what did you do? LVI: Turning the Hands of Time, Part I
* Madgie, what did you do? LVI: Turning the Hands of Time, Part I
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*HitlersTimeTravelExemptionAct: While its not about killing Hitler, it does touch upon how time travelling to past can be destructive, as almost each and every last time Madgie and Bunny traveled to the past, the future (or, rather, their present) was worst than what it was, although, ''how'' worst varied but it wasn't as should be.
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* Madgie, what did you do? LVII: Turning the Hands of Time, Part I
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* Madgie, what did you do? LVII: LVI: Turning the Hands of Time, Part I
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* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely
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* AnyoneCanDie: Definitely Definitely. Death does not discriminate, seeing as the titular Madgie has died more than once during the second story in the series
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* DeadAllAlong: In ''Madgie, what did you do? XXVI: Requiem II'', this is most prominent.
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* DeadAllAlong: In ''Madgie, what did you do? XXVI: Requiem ''Requiem II'', this is most prominent.prominent, as it is implied that she may have died a little while before then and that they weren't aware that she's died, with life continuing as somewhat usual. This is evident in that Toki is [[BloodFromTheMouth bleeding from the mouth]] and said bleeding should have killed her or should have stopped.
**In ''Radioactive Rain'', it is implied Toki may have committed suicide, if not died of radiation sickness, not too long before Bunny arrives back to the BadFuture. The fact that, despite having Bunny having seen her, Doki doesn't speak of her and her room is boarded up.
**In ''Radioactive Rain'', it is implied Toki may have committed suicide, if not died of radiation sickness, not too long before Bunny arrives back to the BadFuture. The fact that, despite having Bunny having seen her, Doki doesn't speak of her and her room is boarded up.
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**In ''Broken Wings'', Doki was mentioned to have done things in which she wasn't proud, although what they were wasn't made too clear.
* NumberedSequels:YupYes, with the sequels being titled in accordance to their order, with the exception of the finale, which is titled as such.
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** In ''Turning the Hands of Time, Part I'', Bunny mentions this with Jinx and, his brother, Spin, noting that if the former was around then the latter wouldn't be far behind, so, when he isn't, this causes her to assume the worst. In that vein, the fact that Toki's house is quite populated but, in that story, she finds out only Jinx and Doki remain.
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* Madgie, what did you do? LVII: Turning the Hands of Time, Part II
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* Madgie, what did you do? LV: Broken Wings.
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**Madgie, what did you do? LVII: Turning the Hands of Time, Part II
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** The [[http://akaichounokoe.deviantart.com/art/Purpura-and-Lycoris-flowers-548206140 preview image]] for the 56th story has Doki standing amongst lycoris flowers, the which are often associated with death (said flowers being planted in and around graveyards), at the same time, they are also associated with not seeing someone again or lost memories.
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* SnowMeansDeath: Quite often this is used. The most prominent uses of this trope would be ''Nuclear Snow'', ''Bloodied Snow Angel'' ''The Winter's Blood Red Sky'', and ''Snow Angel''.
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* SnowMeansDeath: Quite often this is used. The most prominent uses of this trope would be ''Nuclear Snow'', ''Bloodied Snow Angel'' ''The Winter's Blood Red Sky'', and ''Snow Angel''.Angel'', and ''"It looked like falling snow..."''
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* FlowerMotifs: Yes, sometimes. More often than not, it comes in the form of lilies
* ForegoneConclusion: Usually, we know that someone is going to die by the title.
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* FlowerMotifs: Yes, sometimes. More often than not, it comes in the form of lilies
lilies, the which typically symbolizes or are associated innocence and death.
**The [[http://akaichounokoe.deviantart.com/art/Purpura-and-Lycoris-flowers-548206140 preview image]] for the 56th story has Doki standing amongst lycoris flowers, the which are often associated with death (said flowers being planted in and around graveyards), at the same time, they are also associated with not seeing someone again or lost memories.
* ForegoneConclusion: Usually, we know that someone is going to die by thetitle.title, an example of which would be ''Requiem'' and ''Requiem II''.
**The [[http://akaichounokoe.deviantart.com/art/Purpura-and-Lycoris-flowers-548206140 preview image]] for the 56th story has Doki standing amongst lycoris flowers, the which are often associated with death (said flowers being planted in and around graveyards), at the same time, they are also associated with not seeing someone again or lost memories.
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* SnowMeansDeath: Quite often this is used. The most prominent uses of this trope would be ''Nuclear Snow'', ''Bloodied Snow Angel'' ''The Winter's Blood Red Sky'', and ''Snow Angel''.
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It looked like falling snow....'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a refference) [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It looked like falling snow....'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki (a refference) reference [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It looked like falling snow....'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.
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* TruthInTelevision: Some of the material, from dying of radiation sickness in one story to mental illness in another, are actually based on real things. For example in ''It looked like falling snow....'', it was mentioned the heat from the nuke burned the floral pattern of Doki's dress into her skin, something that occurred during the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki.Nagasaki (a refference) [[https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/3/36/Hiroshima-nagasaki-atomic-bomb-ww2-incredible-pictures-history-images-photos-001.jpeg]])
