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* WouldHurtAChild: The Gilded Cross see nothing wrong with subjecting children of other [[{{ANaziByAnyOtherName}}races]] to ''disembowelment''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The Gilded Cross see nothing wrong with subjecting children of other [[{{ANaziByAnyOtherName}}races]] [[{{ANaziByAnyOtherName}} Races]] to ''disembowelment''.
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Starlight]]''
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PrecisionFStrike: Gunari lets one out when the alarm is set off in Fort Romulus.
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* PrecisionFStrike: Gunari lets one out when the alarm is set off in Fort Romulus.
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* EliteMook: Joseph's personal guard, who are stated to be vastly more experienced than the normal grunt.
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* CurbStompBattle: Eden and Tasaria vs Joseph.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Gunari, who uses shadow magic, wields a scythe and wears a helmet with raven markings on it, is the [[{{BigGood}}]] of the series.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Gunari, who uses shadow magic, wields a scythe and wears a helmet with raven markings on it, is the [[{{BigGood}}]] [[{{BigGood}} Big Good]] of the series.
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* DarkIsNotEvil: Gunari, who uses shadow magic, wields a scythe and wears a helmet with raven markings on it, is the [[{{BigGood}}]] of the series.
** Tasaria also uses shadow magic, but she is also a wonderful person.
** Tasaria also uses shadow magic, but she is also a wonderful person.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Tasaria begins questioning the ideology of the Gilded Cross from the first time we see her, but it's when she found out they lied to her about her family that she went full face for good.
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* Playing with Fire: Eden uses fire to imbue her melee strikes,
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* CoolAirship: The GCAS Fatherland, being incredibly massive and lined with rows of cannons.
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** Rachel and Eden are also childhood friends.
* ClusterFBomb: Gunari's introduction is her delivering an angry, swear laden rant to a preacher inciting violence against Roja people.
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** Maria and Joseph get their names from The Virgin Mary and Joseph, and lead a group of Catholic extremists.
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* ActionGirl: all of the main characters except for Vashti are women, and each of them are skilled in combat in their own right
** Maria also applies as a villainous example
** Maria also applies as a villainous example
* AnAxeToGrind: Windsor wields a double edged battleaxe, which he uses alongside his wind magic to great effect.
* BadassInDistress: Tasaria, when she is captured by Joseph and his elites
**Rachel and Eden are also childhood friends.
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* EasySexChange: Eden manages to turn her body into that of a girl’s by place a rune on her chest and saying a chant.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Windsor is pretty polite when he’s not committing mass murder without remorse or mercilessly beating his partner to the ground for feeling guilt for their crimes.
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* FauxAffablyEvil: Windsor is pretty polite when he’s not committing mass murder without remorse or mercilessly beating his partner to the ground for feeling guilt for their crimes.not taking part in the slaughter of a caravan.
* MeaningfulName: ''Wind''sor uses ''wind'' magic
**Maria and Joseph get their names from The Virgin Mary and Joseph, and lead a group of Catholic extremists.
**Maria and Joseph get their names from The Virgin Mary and Joseph, and lead a group of Catholic extremists.
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** Vashti is pretty laid back and friendly for a Dragon. It helps that he spent most of his life with Gunari.
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** Vashti is pretty laid back and friendly for a Dragon.friendly. It helps that he spent most of his life with Gunari.
* OurElvesAreDifferent: The Alayim are very similar in appearance to Tolkeinesque Elves, but their culture draws heavily from [[{{Judaism}} Judaism]]
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* WouldHurtAChild: The Gilded Cross see nothing wrong with subjecting children to ''disembowelment''.
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* WouldHurtAChild: The Gilded Cross see nothing wrong with subjecting children of other [[{{ANaziByAnyOtherName}}races]] to ''disembowelment''.
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* GoodOldFisticuffs: Eden alternates between this fighting style and using a staff. She often imbues fire into these attacks as well.
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* ANaziByAnyOtherName: The Gilded Cross is explicitly based off of Nazis, and are introduced commiting genocide.
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** Eden, mainly when she’s figuring out her [[{{Transgender}} transsexuality]].
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** Gunari gives Eden and Rachel a place to sleep and eat for nothing in return.
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* OurDragonsAreDifferent: If Vashti is anything to go by, Dragons are fully sentient and capable of speech.
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** Eden and Rachel are very sweet and compassionate for mercenaries.
** Gunari gives Eden and Rachel a place to sleep and eat for nothing in return.
* Vashti is pretty laid back and friendly for a Dragon. It helps that he spent most of his life with Gunari.
* OurDragonsAreDifferent: If Vashti is anything to go by, Dragons are fully sentient and capable of speech.
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* AffablyEvil: Maria and Joesph are genuinely polite. They also love each other very much.
* BadBoss: Though She is forgiving to a point, Maria eventually kills Windsor after only two failures.
* BadBoss: Though She is forgiving to a point, Maria eventually kills Windsor after only two failures.
* DirtyCoward: Windsor is sent packing the second Tasaria stands up to him.
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* HateSink: Windsor, the StarterVillain, has absolutely nothing likable or cool about him. He is nothing more then a cowardly, abusive, and murderousracist.racist.
* {{Jerkass}}: The nicest way to describe most of the Gilded Cross.
* {{Transgender}}: Eden didn’t feel comfortable in her male body, so changed it in the second story to a female one.
* WouldHurtAChild: The Gilded Cross see nothing wrong with subjecting children to ''disembowelment''.
* HateSink: Windsor, the StarterVillain, has absolutely nothing likable or cool about him. He is nothing more then a cowardly, abusive, and murderous
* {{Jerkass}}: The nicest way to describe most of the Gilded Cross.
* {{Transgender}}: Eden didn’t feel comfortable in her male body, so changed it in the second story to a female one.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Maria and Joesph are married, and their love is genuine.
* HateSink: Windsor, the StarterVillain, has absolutely nothing likable or cool about him. He is nothing more then a cowardly, abusive, and murderous racist.
* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Maria and Joesph are married, and their love is genuine.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1239929 Kadu'av]] is a web fantasy series written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Mistresskabooms/pseuds/Mistresskabooms/works Mistresskabooms]]. The series follows mercenaries Eden and Rachel, as they battle the evil and hateful Gilded Cross.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1239929 Kadu'av]] is a web fantasy series written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Mistresskabooms/pseuds/Mistresskabooms/works Mistresskabooms]]. The series follows mercenaries Eden and Rachel, as they battle the evil and hateful Gilded Cross.Cross.
'''Stories in the series:'''
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16355669?view_full_work=true Kadu'av: the Beginning of the End]]''
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17316659?view_full_work=true Kadu'av: Starlight]]'' (In-progress)
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!!Tropes in the series include:
* {{Adorkable}}:
** Eden, mainly when she’s figuring out her [[{{Transgender}} transsexuality]].
** Tasaria when she’s falls for Eden after she successfully becomes a woman.
* BadassGay: Tasaria is ''extremely'' powerful, and in love with Eden.
* BigBad: Maria and Joesph are the heads of the Gilded Cross, so they function as this for the whole series. That said:
** ''The Beginning of the End'': Windsor.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Windsor is the BigBad of the first story.
'''Stories in the series:'''
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/16355669?view_full_work=true Kadu'av: the Beginning of the End]]''
* ''[[https://archiveofourown.org/works/17316659?view_full_work=true Kadu'av: Starlight]]'' (In-progress)
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!!Tropes in the series include:
* {{Adorkable}}:
** Eden, mainly when she’s figuring out her [[{{Transgender}} transsexuality]].
** Tasaria when she’s falls for Eden after she successfully becomes a woman.
* BadassGay: Tasaria is ''extremely'' powerful, and in love with Eden.
* BigBad: Maria and Joesph are the heads of the Gilded Cross, so they function as this for the whole series. That said:
** ''The Beginning of the End'': Windsor.
* DiscOneFinalBoss: Windsor is the BigBad of the first story.
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[[https://archiveofourown.org/series/1239929 Kadu'av]] is a web fantasy series written by [[https://archiveofourown.org/users/Mistresskabooms/pseuds/Mistresskabooms/works Mistresskabooms]]. The series follows mercenaries Eden and Rachel, as they battle the evil and hateful Gilded Cross.
