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* NamesTheSame: Erin's last name, obviously. She even got the company to sponsor the car. It's even mentioned she's related to Creator/{{Walt|Disney}}, albeit distantly.
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* {{Determinator}}: ''KEVIN''.
* [[DownToTheLastPlay Down To The Last Lap]]: Photo finish! [[spoiler: Kevin wins.]]
* [[DownToTheLastPlay Down To The Last Lap]]: Photo finish! [[spoiler: Kevin wins.]]
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* TheHeart: Reggie is a rare male example.
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** Erin too, but it's justified. See NamesTheSame for details.
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* OpposingSportsTeam: Ferrari, although Erin does mention that she likes the cars.
* TheRival: Helio Barrichello is this to Kevin.
* SpiderSense: Implied for Kevin, but not confirmed.
* TheRival: Helio Barrichello is this to Kevin.
* SpiderSense: Implied for Kevin, but not confirmed.
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* TsunDere / SugarAndIcePersonality: Erin is a snarky Type A Tsundere and a Type 1 and 3 SugarAndIcePersonality. She does deredere when Kevin gives her a lotus; ''very'' deredere, so much that Kevin is bewildered to see it.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: A cosmetic version, Erin is mentioned to look older than her real age of 22.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: A cosmetic version, Erin is mentioned to look older than her real age of 22.22.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former UsefulNotes/{{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like Anime/SpeedRacer or Series/KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
Available to read [[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2836626/1/Imola here]].
Available to read [[http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2836626/1/Imola here]].
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* NamesTheSame: Erin's last name, obviously. She even got the company to sponsor the car. It's even mentioned she's related to [[WaltDisney Walt]], albeit distantly.
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* NamesTheSame: Erin's last name, obviously. She even got the company to sponsor the car. It's even mentioned she's related to [[WaltDisney Walt]], Creator/{{Walt|Disney}}, albeit distantly.
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* AnnoyingVideoGameHelper: [[invoked]] The [=GTX5's=] A.I. constantly bugs Kevin
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* StopHelpingMe: The GTX5's A.I. constantly bugs Kevin
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like Anime/SpeedRacer or Series/KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} UsefulNotes/{{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like Anime/SpeedRacer or Series/KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like Anime/SpeedRacer or KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like Anime/SpeedRacer or KnightRider, Series/KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like SpeedRacer or KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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''Imola'' is a short sci-fi story by [=BigD1987=] on the Fictionpress website. The story is about the last laps of a big race in Italy for a futuristic racing series called "Super Formula". The protagonist, named Kevin Reilly, a young former {{NASCAR}} driver is struggling to catch his Brazilian rival Helio Barrichello before the checkered flag. Kevin is joined by his pit crew, led by crew chief Skip Boone and jackman Reggie Williams and team owner Erin Disney. The "Super Formula" racing series is almost like SpeedRacer Anime/SpeedRacer or KnightRider, albeit more realistic than Speed Racer in terms of racing.
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* {{Nakama}}: Team Disney.
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* TsunDere / {{Kuudere}}: Erin is a snarky Type A Tsundere and a Type 1 and 3 Kuudere. She does deredere when Kevin gives her a lotus; ''very'' deredere, so much that Kevin is bewildered to see it.
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* TsunDere / {{Kuudere}}: SugarAndIcePersonality: Erin is a snarky Type A Tsundere and a Type 1 and 3 Kuudere.SugarAndIcePersonality. She does deredere when Kevin gives her a lotus; ''very'' deredere, so much that Kevin is bewildered to see it.
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* TheAce: Kevin is mentioned to be one.
