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* BullyingADragon: A [[spoiler:rabbit]] steals from a bear [[spoiler:and gets eaten by it]].
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* BullyingADragon: A [[spoiler:rabbit]] steals from a bear [[spoiler:and gets eaten by him for it]].
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* BullyingADragon: A [[spoiler:rabbit]] steals from a bear.
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* BullyingADragon: A [[spoiler:rabbit]] steals from a bear.bear [[spoiler:and gets eaten by it]].
* FailedASpotCheck: The Bear fails to notice that [[spoiler:the Rabbit is wearing his hat]] when he meets him.
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--->No. Why are you asking me. I haven't seen him. I haven't seen any rabbits anywhere. I would not eat a rabbit. Don't ask me any more questions.
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--->No. Why are you asking me. I haven't seen him. I haven't seen any rabbits anywhere. I would not eat [[spoiler:eat a rabbit.rabbit]]. Don't ask me any more questions.
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* NiceHat: It is indeed a nice hat and Bear would do anything to get it back. [[spoiler: Including murder.]]
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* IronicEcho: At the end [[spoiler: the Bear lies about seeing the Rabbit in the exact same style the Rabbit lied about seeing his hat]].
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* IronicEcho: At the end [[spoiler: the Bear lies about seeing the Rabbit in the exact same style the Rabbit lied used to lie about seeing his hat]].
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* SeriousBusiness: Hats.
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* SeriousBusiness: Hats.The bear's hat is incredibly important to him, to the point that he [[spoiler:is willing to murder]] whoever stole it.
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* IronicEcho: At the every end [[spoiler: the Bear lies in the exact same style the Rabbit did]].
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* IronicEcho: At the every end [[spoiler: the Bear lies about seeing the Rabbit in the exact same style the Rabbit did]].lied about seeing his hat]].
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Not a trope in the book.
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* LostAesop: [[http://www.buzzfeed.com/briangalindo/11-classic-childrens-books-with-titles-that-reflect-their-da#.lf5K77LG5B In a humorous list of "more appropriate titles" for children's books]], this one is retitled ''[[spoiler:[[ExactlyWhatItSaysOnTheTin IF SOMEONE LIES TO YOU, MURDER THEM AND THEN LIE ABOUT MURDERING THEM.]]]]''
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* TooDumbToLive: Yeah, [[spoiler:harebrain]], steal the bear's hat and wear it in public. WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong [[spoiler:It's not like the bear is, you know, perfectly willing to dine on you or anything]].
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* TooDumbToLive: Yeah, [[spoiler:harebrain]], steal the bear's hat and wear it in public. WhatCouldPossiblyGoWrong [[spoiler:It's not like the bear is, you know, is perfectly willing to dine on you or anything]].you.]]
