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* WeakSauceWeakness: The Vampires originally died out because a pair of intersecting lines at right-angles that filled more than 30 degrees of their visual field induced an invariably-fatal grand mal seizure. Upon encountering another vampire they'll go into a territorial rage and attack them immediately, making co-operation impossible. Their eyes are adapted for low light and so daylight is quite uncomfortable for them. It is even suggested that the old trick where you throw a handful of rice on the ground to distract a vampire who feels compelled to count the grains works on them, too. However...

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* WeakSauceWeakness: WeaksauceWeakness: The Vampires originally died out because a pair of intersecting lines at right-angles that filled more than 30 degrees of their visual field induced an invariably-fatal grand mal seizure. Upon encountering another vampire they'll go into a territorial rage and attack them immediately, making co-operation impossible. Their eyes are adapted for low light and so daylight is quite uncomfortable for them. It is even suggested that the old trick where you throw a handful of rice on the ground to distract a vampire who feels compelled to count the grains works on them, too. However...
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** Sarasti clicks a lot in {{Blindsight}}, and Siri hears a lot of creepy, clicky "music" broadcast from the solar system during his long return flight. It is possibly a standard part of vampire "language".

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** Sarasti clicks a lot in {{Blindsight}}, {{Literature/Blindsight}}, and Siri hears a lot of creepy, clicky "music" broadcast from the solar system during his long return flight. It is possibly a standard part of vampire "language".
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* BigDamnHero: [[spoiler: Jim Moore saving Dan Brüks from an enraged Rakshi, then Valerie saving Brüks from a crazy Jim Moore]].

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* BigDamnHero: [[{{BigDamnHeroes}} Big Damn Hero]]: [[spoiler: Jim Moore saving Dan Brüks from an enraged Rakshi, then Valerie saving Brüks from a crazy Jim Moore]].

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* PluckyBaseline: Averted, hard. There's no out-thinking or out-fighting the transhumans if you're a mere human, regardless of how augmented you are. If you think you've beaten them, it is because you don't understand what just happened.

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* PluckyBaseline: RockBeatsLaser: Averted, hard.hard. There are no Plucky Baselines in Watts' universe. There's no out-thinking or out-fighting the transhumans if you're a mere human, regardless of how augmented you are. If you think you've beaten them, it is because you don't understand what just happened.happened.
** Also played straight, albeit in a very minor way. One epithet used by augmented humans is "roach", referring to unaugmented individuals who are just too dumb and simple to suffer from augmentation failures, elaborate hacks and other problems caused by living on the bleeding edge of technology. It doesn't do Brüks much good though.
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* KillItWithFire: It doesn't get much more effective than throwing the enemy into the ''sun''.


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* PluckyBaseline: Averted, hard. There's no out-thinking or out-fighting the transhumans if you're a mere human, regardless of how augmented you are. If you think you've beaten them, it is because you don't understand what just happened.

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* WeakSauceWeakness: The Vampires originally died out because a pair of intersecting lines at right-angles that filled more than 30 degrees of their visual field induced an invariably-fatal grand mal seizure. Upon encountering another vampire they'll go into a territorial rage and attack them immediately, making co-operation impossible. Their eyes are adapted for low light and so daylight is quite uncomfortable for them. It is even suggested that the old trick where you throw a handful of rice on the ground to distract a vampire who feels compelled to count the grains works on them, too. However...
** [[spoiler: Valerie works out how to avoid the crucifix glitch, probably as a result of human experimentation finding out the limits of the problem.]]
** [[spoiler: Valerie works closely with the other vampires in her research lab in order to escape, as each predicts how the others will act, and works out where they are and what they are doing by observing the reactions of the humans. Perfect coordination, without ever seeing or communicating with each other.]]
** [[spoiler: A vampire's savant-level mathematical skills and superhuman visual pattern-matching abilities would let them count all the grains of rice (or leaves of grass) in an instant, distracting them barely at all.]]

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* TWordEuphemism: The 2015 UK paperback edition lacks the awesome old-school sci-fi cover shown above, and also lacks the author's own artwork which appears in other editions. What it does have is a quote from RichardMorgan, who describes the work as "''F**ing awesome!''", which is unusually unrestrained for front cover text.

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* BodyHorror: Brüks has a moment of this, when he realises how the Bicamerals rewired their brains.



* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: The Bicamerals are basically walking brain tumors.

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* CyberneticsEatYourSoul: Averted, unexpectedly. The Bicamerals are basically walking brain tumors. tumors linked by organic radio but it is all wetware. Valerie certainly needs no cybernetics. Moore is modified, but seems quite human. Only Rakshi is a little... ''off''.

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Brüks's body, that has his memories.]]

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, end (possibly mad, possibly with a defective zombie switch, possibly both). Brüks' body is certainly alive at the end, and the undead alien thing wearing Brüks's body, that it has all of his memories.memories. He's quite dead though.]]

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Now someone else has mapped Daniel -> Bruks, I may as well umlaut the whole lot.


Daniel Bruks is a living fossil: a field biologist in a world where biology has turned computational, a cat's-paw used by terrorists to kill thousands. Taking refuge in the Oregon desert, he’s turned his back on a humanity that shatters into strange new subspecies with every heartbeat. But he awakens one night to find himself at the center of a storm that will turn all of history inside-out.

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Daniel Bruks Brüks is a living fossil: a field biologist in a world where biology has turned computational, a cat's-paw used by terrorists to kill thousands. Taking refuge in the Oregon desert, he’s turned his back on a humanity that shatters into strange new subspecies with every heartbeat. But he awakens one night to find himself at the center of a storm that will turn all of history inside-out.



Their pilgrimage brings Dan Bruks, the fossil man, face-to-face with the biggest evolutionary breakpoint since the origin of thought itself.

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Their pilgrimage brings Dan Bruks, Brüks, the fossil man, face-to-face with the biggest evolutionary breakpoint since the origin of thought itself.



* AIIsACrapshoot: Discussed. Bruks's wife was a "cloudkiller"; it was her job to pull the plug on AI networks that had become too smart for their own good. She eventually came to the conclusion that [[ItCanThink they were genuinely sapient]], and quit soon after. However ... there was another class of AI, one so superhumanly intelligent that it achieved sapience and kept right on going, until its mind was incomprehensible to its creators. Those, Bruks says, [[ParanoiaFuel "worried her."]]

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* AIIsACrapshoot: Discussed. Bruks's Brüks's wife was a "cloudkiller"; it was her job to pull the plug on AI networks that had become too smart for their own good. She eventually came to the conclusion that [[ItCanThink they were genuinely sapient]], and quit soon after. However ... there was another class of AI, one so superhumanly intelligent that it achieved sapience and kept right on going, until its mind was incomprehensible to its creators. Those, Bruks Brüks says, [[ParanoiaFuel "worried her."]]



* AudienceSurrogate: Bruks spends much of the first act being as confused as the reader - transhumans have a hard time explaining themselves to baselines.
* BadassNormal: Rakshi calls Bruks "Roach" not as an insult, but rather because baseline humans are damn near indestructible - that is, at least, they're invulnerable to the various hacks and exploited glitches an augmented human might fall victim to.
* BigDamnHero: [[spoiler: Jim Moore saving Dan Bruks from an enraged Rakshi, then Valerie saving Bruks from a crazy Jim Moore]].
** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Bruks on the other side]] whilst his blood is practically fizzing. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...
** Moore pulls the crippled body of Bruks to safety as they flee [[spoiler: Icarus]]. This is interesting because he uses a [[spoiler: "Zombie Switch" to disengage his higher brain functions for extra efficiency in an emergency]]. When he claims "that wasn't me", he means it.

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* AudienceSurrogate: Bruks Brüks spends much of the first act being as confused as the reader - transhumans have a hard time explaining themselves to baselines.
* BadassNormal: Rakshi calls Bruks Brüks "Roach" not as an insult, but rather because baseline humans are damn near indestructible - that is, at least, they're invulnerable to the various hacks and exploited glitches an augmented human might fall victim to.
* BigDamnHero: [[spoiler: Jim Moore saving Dan Bruks Brüks from an enraged Rakshi, then Valerie saving Bruks Brüks from a crazy Jim Moore]].
** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Bruks Brüks on the other side]] whilst his blood is practically fizzing. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...
** Moore pulls the crippled body of Bruks Brüks to safety as they flee [[spoiler: Icarus]]. This is interesting because he uses a [[spoiler: "Zombie Switch" to disengage his higher brain functions for extra efficiency in an emergency]]. When he claims "that wasn't me", he means it.



* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Bruks kills himself when he realizes he was taken over by Portia. Portia manages to continue firing his brain cells and takes over his broken body and walks towards civilization. [[GainaxEnding Humanity will forever be changed]].]]
* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: Bruks. He realizes that the hacked Portia is taking over him and decides to walk off the cliff. Sadly, while he dies, his body still lives on. [[GainaxEnding Maybe that was for the best]].]]

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* DownerEnding: [[spoiler:Bruks [[spoiler:Brüks kills himself when he realizes he was taken over by Portia. Portia manages to continue firing his brain cells and takes over his broken body and walks towards civilization. [[GainaxEnding Humanity will forever be changed]].]]
* DyingAsYourself: [[spoiler: Bruks.Brüks. He realizes that the hacked Portia is taking over him and decides to walk off the cliff. Sadly, while he dies, his body still lives on. [[GainaxEnding Maybe that was for the best]].]]



* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler: Bruks stabs Valerie after the two become friendly, well as friendly as a lion can be to a lamb; of course, Bruks had already been taken over by Portia, which Valerie herself infected him with]].

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* EtTuBrute: [[spoiler: Bruks Brüks stabs Valerie after the two become friendly, well as friendly as a lion can be to a lamb; of course, Bruks Brüks had already been taken over by Portia, which Valerie herself infected him with]].



* GainaxEnding: [[spoiler: Portia is a parasite. Valerie hacks Portia and infects Bruks with it. It strengthens him and plans to use him as a vector to create a sort of upgraded humans and to disable the glitches in Vampires. Maybe humanity will survive after all, but at a great cost to itself. Maybe.]]

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* GainaxEnding: [[spoiler: Portia is a parasite. Valerie hacks Portia and infects Bruks Brüks with it. It strengthens him and plans to use him as a vector to create a sort of upgraded humans and to disable the glitches in Vampires. Maybe humanity will survive after all, but at a great cost to itself. Maybe.]]



* NoodleIncident: Averted. [[spoiler: It is revealed halfway through that Dan Bruks was tangentially responsible for an incident that killed Rakshi's wife that involved an encephalitis variant outbreak.]]

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* NoodleIncident: Averted. [[spoiler: It is revealed halfway through that Dan Bruks Brüks was tangentially responsible for an incident that killed Rakshi's wife that involved an encephalitis variant outbreak.]]



* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Bruks's body, that has his memories.]]

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Bruks's Brüks's body, that has his memories.]]



* MetaphoricallyTrue: Moore pulls this on Bruks early on.
-->'''Bruks:''' "You said we were in orbit."

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* MetaphoricallyTrue: Moore pulls this on Bruks Brüks early on.
-->'''Bruks:''' -->'''Brüks:''' "You said we were in orbit."



** Once someone has been "sensitized" to the glitch, it can be triggered by ''anyone'' if they know the trick. [[spoiler:Rakshi]] uses this on [[spoiler:Bruks]] in the end.
** Rakshi realises what is happening to [[spoiler:Bruks]], shortly after she learns who is to blame for the death of her partner and shortly before [[spoiler:she dies of a gunshot wound inflicted by Moore]].

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** Once someone has been "sensitized" to the glitch, it can be triggered by ''anyone'' if they know the trick. [[spoiler:Rakshi]] uses this on [[spoiler:Bruks]] [[spoiler:Brüks]] in the end.
** Rakshi realises what is happening to [[spoiler:Bruks]], [[spoiler:Brüks]], shortly after she learns who is to blame for the death of her partner and shortly before [[spoiler:she dies of a gunshot wound inflicted by Moore]].



** Bruks gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realizes something at the same time as the super-intelligent hive mind.
--->'''Bruks''': ''This is a sampling transect''.

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** Bruks Brüks gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realizes something at the same time as the super-intelligent hive mind.
--->'''Bruks''': --->'''Brüks''': ''This is a sampling transect''.



** [[spoiler:Bruks ends up with a mysteriously recurring cancer, suggested to be a pre-existing condition. Rakshi sees something in his eyes which makes her realise what is happening to him. The eyes of the Bicamerals glow, as a side effect of tracer proteins expressed by their cancers. Join the dots!]].
** [[spoiler:Bruks is given something by Valerie...suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or ''both'', do a splendid job of turning Bruks into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].

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** [[spoiler:Bruks [[spoiler:Brüks ends up with a mysteriously recurring cancer, suggested to be a pre-existing condition. Rakshi sees something in his eyes which makes her realise what is happening to him. The eyes of the Bicamerals glow, as a side effect of tracer proteins expressed by their cancers. Join the dots!]].
** [[spoiler:Bruks [[spoiler:Brüks is given something by Valerie...suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or ''both'', do a splendid job of turning Bruks Brüks into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].



* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this to some degree. With a mental off-switch that turns them into a "Zombie" and significantly enhanced biology; amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Bruks, making him much faster and stronger. They're totally outclassed by the vampires, however, who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.
* TeamPet: Dan Bruks is so out of his element, he might as well be this in ''Echopraxia'', at least initially.

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* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this to some degree. With a mental off-switch that turns them into a "Zombie" and significantly enhanced biology; amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Bruks, Brüks, making him much faster and stronger. They're totally outclassed by the vampires, however, who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.
* TeamPet: Dan Bruks Brüks is so out of his element, he might as well be this in ''Echopraxia'', at least initially.



** In an aversion, Dan Bruks, is the least augmented person so far, and he gets called Oldschool and Roach.

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** In an aversion, Dan Bruks, Brüks, is the least augmented person so far, and he gets called Oldschool and Roach.



* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back one way or another. And the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Bruks]] who promptly murders [[spoiler:Valerie, despite her being a vampire that's normally far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behavior]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back one way or another. And the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Bruks]] [[spoiler:Brüks]] who promptly murders [[spoiler:Valerie, despite her being a vampire that's normally far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behavior]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.



* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Bruks, the whole damn time. Not even killing himself stops him from being manipulated.]]
* UpliftedAnimal: [[spoiler: Bruks, from a certain point of view]].
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:Bruks gives one to Jim Moore, Siri's dad, over him now being worried about Siri's well-being when it had been his partial zombie-ism, the augmentations and hemispherectomy that he got to counter the effects that made him the best suited Synthesist for Theseus. Not to mention that the reason why Siri got infected was because his dad was the actual target]].

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* UnwittingPawn: [[spoiler: Bruks, Brüks, the whole damn time. Not even killing himself stops him from being manipulated.]]
* UpliftedAnimal: [[spoiler: Bruks, Brüks, from a certain point of view]].
* WhatTheHellHero: [[spoiler:Bruks [[spoiler:Brüks gives one to Jim Moore, Siri's dad, over him now being worried about Siri's well-being when it had been his partial zombie-ism, the augmentations and hemispherectomy that he got to counter the effects that made him the best suited Synthesist for Theseus. Not to mention that the reason why Siri got infected was because his dad was the actual target]].

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* TitleDrop: There's mention of a "weaponised echopraxia", and an encounter with its aftereffects. The vector isn't mentioned, though most unpleasant things in Peter Watts' work tend to be bioweapons, so it is probably some sort of encephalitis. Victims helplessly mirror each others actions, locked into a feedback loop that traps them til they pass out. Unless they're driving, or flying, or fighting, in which case they don't last nearly so long.
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Changing Daniel -> Bruks for consistency


* AudienceSurrogate: Daniel Bruks spends much of the first act being as confused as the reader - transhumans have a hard time explaining themselves to baselines.

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* AudienceSurrogate: Daniel Bruks spends much of the first act being as confused as the reader - transhumans have a hard time explaining themselves to baselines.



** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Daniel on the other side]] whilst his blood is practically fizzing. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...
** Moore pulls the crippled body of Daniel to safety as they flee [[spoiler: Icarus]]. This is interesting because he uses a [[spoiler: "Zombie Switch" to disengage his higher brain functions for extra efficiency in an emergency]]. When he claims "that wasn't me", he means it.

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** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Daniel Bruks on the other side]] whilst his blood is practically fizzing. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...
** Moore pulls the crippled body of Daniel Bruks to safety as they flee [[spoiler: Icarus]]. This is interesting because he uses a [[spoiler: "Zombie Switch" to disengage his higher brain functions for extra efficiency in an emergency]]. When he claims "that wasn't me", he means it.



* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Daniel's body, that has his memories.]]

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', only Jim Moore survives to the end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Daniel's Bruks's body, that has his memories.]]



** Rakshi realises what is happening to [[spoiler:Daniel]], shortly after she learns who is to blame for the death of her partner and shortly before [[spoiler:she dies of a gunshot wound inflicted by Moore]].

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** Rakshi realises what is happening to [[spoiler:Daniel]], [[spoiler:Bruks]], shortly after she learns who is to blame for the death of her partner and shortly before [[spoiler:she dies of a gunshot wound inflicted by Moore]].



** Daniel gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realizes something at the same time as the super-intelligent hive mind.
--->'''Daniel''': ''This is a sampling transect''.

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** Daniel Bruks gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realizes something at the same time as the super-intelligent hive mind.
--->'''Daniel''': --->'''Bruks''': ''This is a sampling transect''.



** [[spoiler:Daniel ends up with a mysteriously recurring cancer, suggested to be a pre-existing condition. Rakshi sees something in his eyes which makes her realise what is happening to him. The eyes of the Bicamerals glow, as a side effect of tracer proteins expressed by their cancers. Join the dots!]].
** [[spoiler:Daniel is given something by Valerie...suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or ''both'', do a splendid job of turning Daniel into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].

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** [[spoiler:Daniel [[spoiler:Bruks ends up with a mysteriously recurring cancer, suggested to be a pre-existing condition. Rakshi sees something in his eyes which makes her realise what is happening to him. The eyes of the Bicamerals glow, as a side effect of tracer proteins expressed by their cancers. Join the dots!]].
** [[spoiler:Daniel [[spoiler:Bruks is given something by Valerie...suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or ''both'', do a splendid job of turning Daniel Bruks into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].



* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this to some degree. With a mental off-switch that turns them into a "Zombie" and significantly enhanced biology; amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Daniel, making him much faster and stronger. They're totally outclassed by the vampires, however, who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.

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* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this to some degree. With a mental off-switch that turns them into a "Zombie" and significantly enhanced biology; amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Daniel, Bruks, making him much faster and stronger. They're totally outclassed by the vampires, however, who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.



* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back one way or another. And the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Daniel]] who promptly murders [[spoiler:Valerie, despite her being a vampire that's normally far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behavior]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back one way or another. And the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Daniel]] [[spoiler:Bruks]] who promptly murders [[spoiler:Valerie, despite her being a vampire that's normally far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behavior]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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** The fall of [[spoiler:Icarus]] results in a worldwide energy crisis. One chapter starts with a mention of how climate change mitigation requires huge amounts of energy, and the climate is already in a pretty dire state.

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** The fall of [[spoiler:Icarus]] results in a worldwide energy crisis. One chapter starts with a mention of how It's mentioned that climate change mitigation requires huge amounts of energy, and the climate is already in a pretty dire state.



* BrownNote: ''I want you to imagine Christ on the cross.''

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* BrownNote: ''I "''I want you to imagine Christ on the cross.''''"



** Once a human has been "sensitised", anyone could trigger the effect in them, if they knew the trick. One does learn the trick, in the end.
-->'''[[spoiler:Rakshi]]''': "I want you to imagine something, [[spoiler:Roach]]."

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** Once a human someone has been "sensitised", anyone could trigger "sensitized" to the effect in them, glitch, it can be triggered by ''anyone'' if they knew know the trick. One does learn the trick, [[spoiler:Rakshi]] uses this on [[spoiler:Bruks]] in the end.
-->'''[[spoiler:Rakshi]]''': "I want you to imagine something, [[spoiler:Roach]]."
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** Daniel gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realises something at the same time as the superhumanly intelligent hive mind.

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** Daniel gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realises realizes something at the same time as the superhumanly intelligent super-intelligent hive mind.



* TheChessmaster: It isn't clear who should take this particular title, Valerie or the Bicamerals, but it is very clear that they planned pretty much everything meticulously, even allowing for the myriad of ways in which things could go wrong.
** It is later observed that [[spoiler:the Bicamerals]] could see the writing on the wall and played to lose, but letting the fruits of [[spoiler:their]] labours survive. Either [[spoiler:Valerie]] was in on the plan, or was totally outclassed and manipulated by the superior transhuman mind. It isn't clear which.
** Valerie is certainly this is her back story. She's held captive in a research lab, has a lethal brain defect for which she is dependent on her captors for protection, and can't meet another of her kind without being driven into a murderous territorial rage. Nonetheless, the humans are totally unable to contain her and she walks out leaving a trail of bodies and obtains a small private army to further her own ends without much effort.
* TheCorruption (or perhaps TheVirus): The Bicamerals modify their brains by deliberately inducing a form of cancer which drastically changes the workings of their wetware. Initiates are infected with the cancer, and it isn't really clear whether they can be said to have survived it or not when the process is complete.

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* TheChessmaster: It isn't clear who should take this particular title, Valerie or the Bicamerals, title but it is very it's clear that they planned pretty much everything meticulously, even allowing for the myriad of ways in which things could go wrong.
** It is later observed that [[spoiler:the Bicamerals]] could see the writing on the wall and played to lose, but letting in a way that let the fruits of [[spoiler:their]] labours their labor survive. Either [[spoiler:Valerie]] was in on the plan, or was totally outclassed and manipulated by the superior transhuman mind. It isn't clear which.
** Valerie is certainly this is her back story. She's held captive in a research lab, has a lethal brain defect for which she is dependent on her captors for protection, and can't meet another of her kind without being driven into a murderous territorial rage. Nonetheless, the humans are totally unable to contain her and she walks out leaving a trail of bodies and obtains bodies, obtaining a small private army in the process to further her own ends without much effort.
* TheCorruption (or perhaps TheVirus): The Bicamerals modify their brains by deliberately inducing a form of cancer which drastically changes the workings of their wetware. minds. Bicameral Initiates are infected with the cancer, and it isn't really by the end of the process it's not clear whether they can be said to have survived "survived" it or not when the process is complete.not, or if rather a new person has been created.



** [[spoiler:Daniel gets given something by Valerie... suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or both, do a splendid job of turning Daniel into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].

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** [[spoiler:Daniel gets is given something by Valerie... Valerie...suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or both, ''both'', do a splendid job of turning Daniel into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].



* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this, to some degree. With a zombie off-switch and significantly enhanced biology (amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Daniel, making him much faster and stronger) they are more than a match for more conventional humans.
** However, they're totally outclassed by vampires who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.

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* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this, this to some degree. With a zombie mental off-switch that turns them into a "Zombie" and significantly enhanced biology (amongst biology; amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Daniel, making him much faster and stronger) they are more than a match for more conventional humans.
** However, they're
stronger. They're totally outclassed by vampires the vampires, however, who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.



* TheSoulless: Morals, conscience, regret... these are all inconveniences to the working of a proper soldier. So modern human soldiers get an "off switch" installed, which simply shuts down their conscious mind. The rest of their brain gets on with the job much more effectively.
** HelplessGoodSide: The early models of "off switch" left the conscious mind, er, conscious, due to performance issues when the host was fully switched off. Their body and eyes would operate outside of their control, but they'd get to watch it all happening. Some missions [[NoodleIncident didn't go quite to plan]], and the defect was quickly resolved.
* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back, one way or another. But the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Daniel]] who promply murders [[spoiler:Valerie, a vampire far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behaviour than anything else emcountered.]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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* TheSoulless: Morals, conscience, regret... these are all inconveniences to the working of a proper soldier. So modern human soldiers get an have "off switch" switches" installed, which simply shuts down their conscious mind. The rest of their brain gets on with the job much more effectively.
effectively. They're dubbed "Zombies", not in the flesh-eating sense but as a nod to the concept of [[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Philosophical_zombie Philisophical Zombies]].
** HelplessGoodSide: The early models of the "off switch" left the conscious mind, er, conscious, ''conscious'', due to performance issues when the host was fully switched off. Their body and eyes would operate outside of their control, but they'd get to watch it all happening. Some missions [[NoodleIncident didn't go quite to plan]], and the defect was quickly resolved.
* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back, back one way or another. But And the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Daniel]] who promply promptly murders [[spoiler:Valerie, despite her being a vampire that's normally far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behaviour than anything else emcountered.]] behavior]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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* TheCorruption (or perhaps TheVirus): The Bicamerals modify their brains by deliberately inducing a form of cancer which drastically changes the workings of their wetware. Initiates are infected with the cancer, and it isn't really clear whether they can be said to have survived it or not when the process is complete.
** [[spoiler:Daniel ends up with a mysteriously recurring cancer, suggested to be a pre-existing condition. Rakshi sees something in his eyes which makes her realise what is happening to him. The eyes of the Bicamerals glow, as a side effect of tracer proteins expressed by their cancers. Join the dots!]].
** [[spoiler:Daniel gets given something by Valerie... suggested to be a modified Portia organism in an encephalitis jacket. Either this, or the Bicameral cancer, or both, do a splendid job of turning Daniel into something quite terrifyingly inhuman]].

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* TheChessmaster: It isn't clear who should take this particular title, Valerie or the Bicamerals, but it is very clear that they planned pretty much everything meticulously, even allowing for the myriad of ways in which things could go wrong.
** It is later observed that [[spoiler:the Bicamerals]] could see the writing on the wall and played to lose, but letting the fruits of [[spoiler:their]] labours survive. Either [[spoiler:Valerie]] was in on the plan, or was totally outclassed and manipulated by the superior transhuman mind. It isn't clear which.
** Valerie is certainly this is her back story. She's held captive in a research lab, has a lethal brain defect for which she is dependent on her captors for protection, and can't meet another of her kind without being driven into a murderous territorial rage. Nonetheless, the humans are totally unable to contain her and she walks out leaving a trail of bodies and obtains a small private army to further her own ends without much effort.

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* GoneHorriblyRight: The work of Valerie, the Bicamerals and [[spoiler:Portia]] all comes together in the end. It doesn't work out well for its creators.

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* SuperSoldier: All modern human soldiers are this, to some degree. With a zombie off-switch and significantly enhanced biology (amongst other things, Moore has far more mitochondria than Daniel, making him much faster and stronger) they are more than a match for more conventional humans.
** However, they're totally outclassed by vampires who are even faster, stronger, tougher, smarter and just basically better in every way.

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* TheSoulless: Morals, conscience, regret... these are all inconveniences to the working of a proper soldier. So modern human soldiers get an "off switch" installed, which simply shuts down their conscious mind. The rest of their brain gets on with the job much more effectively.
** HelplessGoodSide: The early models of "off switch" left the conscious mind, er, conscious, due to performance issues when the host was fully switched off. Their body and eyes would operate outside of their control, but they'd get to watch it all happening. Some missions [[NoodleIncident didn't go quite to plan]], and the defect was quickly resolved.

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** In an aversion, Dan Bruks, is the least augmented person so far, and he gets called Oldschool and Roach.

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** In an aversion, Dan Bruks, is the least augmented person so far, and he gets called Oldschool and Roach. Roach.
* TranshumanTreachery: Pretty much everyone stabs everyone else in the back, one way or another. But the end result of the work of the Bicamerals and Valerie is an alarmingly upgraded [[spoiler:Daniel]] who promply murders [[spoiler:Valerie, a vampire far faster, more alert, more intelligent and more able to predict human (and hive mind) behaviour than anything else emcountered.]] using nothing but a dumb surgical tool.

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* OhCrap: It's revealed in the prologue that not only can Valerie ignore the Cruciform Glitch, but she has come up with a way to induce it regular humans, essentially flipping the table between vampires and humanity.
** Once a human has been "sensitized", anyone could trigger the effect in them, if they knew the trick.

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* OhCrap: There are quite a few of these.
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It's revealed in the prologue that not only can Valerie ignore the Cruciform Glitch, but she has come up with a way to induce it regular humans, essentially flipping the table between vampires and humanity.
** Once a human has been "sensitized", "sensitised", anyone could trigger the effect in them, if they knew the trick.trick. One does learn the trick, in the end.


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** Rakshi realises what is happening to [[spoiler:Daniel]], shortly after she learns who is to blame for the death of her partner and shortly before [[spoiler:she dies of a gunshot wound inflicted by Moore]].
-->'''Rakshi''': "Oh ''fuck''. Are you ever screwed.''
** Daniel gets an awful lot of these. On one notable occasion though, it is when he realises something at the same time as the superhumanly intelligent hive mind.
--->'''Daniel''': ''This is a sampling transect''.

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** Once a human has been "sensitized", anyone could trigger the effect in them, if they knew the trick.
-->'''[[spoiler:Rakshi]]''': "I want you to imagine something, [[spoiler:Roach]]."

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** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Daniel on the other side]]. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...

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** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Daniel on the other side]].side]] whilst his blood is practically fizzing. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...


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* BrownNote: ''I want you to imagine Christ on the cross.''

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** The fall of [[spoiler:Icarus]] results in a worldwide energy crisis. One chapter starts with a mention of how climate change mitigation requires huge amounts of energy, and the climate is already in a pretty dire state.

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** The Bicameral hives are quite small (the monastery at the beginning of the story has only a few dozen monks), and a hive's component nodes can even act as individuals and communicate with lesser beings if needs be. By comparison, the Moksha mind has millions upon millions of nodes, making it potentially vastly more intelligent. It doesn't seem to interact with human society though. Yet.

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** The victims of the zombie plague play this a little more straight. The disease simply destroys the victim's higher brain functions, leaving them capable of little more than fight/flight/fuck.

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** NiceJobFixingItVillain (or NiceJobBreakingItHero depending on your point of view): Valerie is held captive at a research lab and is the subject of numerous experiments to discover the effects of the crucifix glitch and the limits of her ability to perceive right angles without actually killing her. The experience ultimately makes her immune to the effect.

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', not one survives to the end, including Bruks.]]

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* KillEmAll: [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', not one only Jim Moore survives to the end, including Bruks.end. Oh, and the undead alien thing wearing Daniel's body, that has his memories.]]

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* CharacterTics: Valerie clicks her sharpened teeth together. Revealed later as [[spoiler:the method she used to implant a suggestion into the people around her that enabled to use a variant of the Crucifix Glitch on humans]].

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* CharacterTics: Valerie clicks her sharpened teeth together. together and taps her fingers against nearby surfaces. Revealed later as [[spoiler:the [[spoiler:non-verbal communication mechanism which forms part of the method she used uses to implant a suggestion into the people around her that enabled brainhack mere humans to use induce seizures on command, in a variant reflection of the Crucifix Glitch on humans]].crucifix glitch that vampires suffer.]].
** Sarasti clicks a lot in {{Blindsight}}, and Siri hears a lot of creepy, clicky "music" broadcast from the solar system during his long return flight. It is possibly a standard part of vampire "language".

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** One of the Bicamerals, Chinedum Ofoegbu, walks out of a hyperbaric chamber to break up a "[[CurbStompBattle fight]]" between [[spoiler:Valerie on one side, and Rakshi, Moore, Lianna and Daniel on the other side]]. Of course, given the number of transhumans involved, it isn't clear what would have happened if he hadn't intervened, or if the whole thing wasn't a part of an elaborate ploy...
** Moore pulls the crippled body of Daniel to safety as they flee [[spoiler: Icarus]]. This is interesting because he uses a [[spoiler: "Zombie Switch" to disengage his higher brain functions for extra efficiency in an emergency]]. When he claims "that wasn't me", he means it.
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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', not one survives to the end, including Bruks.]]

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* [[spoiler: KillEmAll: Of [[spoiler:Of all the Bicamerals, zombies, vampires, and in-betweens that crew the ''Crown of Thorns'', not one survives to the end, including Bruks.]]

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