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* ThisIsNotADrill: The alert at the beginning includes the phras, 'This is not a drill' and even repeats it.
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* ThisIsNotADrill: The alert at the beginning includes the phras, phrase, 'This is not a drill' and even repeats it.
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* RedAlert: The story starts with a call over the ship's speakers, telling everyone to get to their battle stations.
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* ThisIsNotADrill: The alert at the beginning includes the phras, 'This is not a drill' and even repeats it.
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[[http://www.amazon.com/All-Hands-E-G-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DD0V62A/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1394820295&sr=1-3 All Hands!]] Comes with: Space Adventure! Action! Battle! Sacrifice! A sci-fi military short story, sold online. Oh yeah, it's also written by E. G. Castle.
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[[http://www.amazon.com/All-Hands-E-G-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DD0V62A/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1394820295&sr=1-3 All Hands!]] Comes with: Space Adventure! Action! Battle! Sacrifice! A sci-fi military short story, sold online. Oh yeah, it's also written by [[Creator/EGCastle E. G. Castle.Castle]].
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* SuicideAttack: By necessity, at the end.
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* MedalsForEveryone: [[spoiler: ''Every'' named character gets one... Posthumously.]]
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* MedalsForEveryone: [[spoiler: ''Every'' named character gets one... [[spoiler: Posthumously.]]
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work anyway, because the opposing ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work anyway, because [[spoiler: the opposing ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
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* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: By necessity, at the end.]]
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* SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: By necessity, at the end.]]
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ work anyway, because their opponents' the opposing ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
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* NoSenseOfHumor: Mrs. Cousins.
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* NoSenseOfHumor: Mrs. Cousins.IShallTauntYou: Captain Harcourt to the Affastffern, to get them to focus on his ship and not the merchant it's protecting.
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* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
* NoSenseOfHumor: Mrs. Cousins.
* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
* RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
* RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
* RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
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* IShallTauntYou: Captain Harcourt to the Affastffern, to get them to focus on his ship and not the merchant it's protecting.
* RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
* RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
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[[http://www.amazon.com/All-Hands-E-G-Castle-ebook/dp/B00DD0V62A/ref=la_B00DILJS3I_1_3?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1394820295&sr=1-3 All Hands!]] Comes with: Space Adventure! Action! Battle! Sacrifice! A sci-fi military short story, sold online. Oh yeah, it's also written by E. G. Castle.
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!! All Hands! contains examples of:
*GoingDownWithTheShip: [[spoiler: Mr. Fort, Captain Harcourt, Chief Engineer Lisle. Not that the two former had a choice.]]
*NoSenseOfHumor: Mrs. Cousins.
*LeaveNoSurvivors: [[spoiler: The Treeblossom and its crew get all killed.]]
*RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
*MedalsForEveryone: [[spoiler: ''Every'' named character gets one... Posthumously.]]
*SpacePirates: The Affastffern Confederation’s navy is apparently more or less made up of these.
*SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: By necessity, at the end.]]
*IShallTauntYou: Captain Harcourt to the Affastffern, to get them to focus on his ship and not the merchant it's protecting.
*RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
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!! All Hands! contains examples of:
*GoingDownWithTheShip: [[spoiler: Mr. Fort, Captain Harcourt, Chief Engineer Lisle. Not that the two former had a choice.]]
*NoSenseOfHumor: Mrs. Cousins.
*LeaveNoSurvivors: [[spoiler: The Treeblossom and its crew get all killed.]]
*RammingAlwaysWorks: Subverted, but done anyway. [[spoiler: They specifically say it's preposterous, but make it work\ anyway, because their opponents' ship temporarily loses its engines.]]
*MedalsForEveryone: [[spoiler: ''Every'' named character gets one... Posthumously.]]
*SpacePirates: The Affastffern Confederation’s navy is apparently more or less made up of these.
*SuicideAttack: [[spoiler: By necessity, at the end.]]
*IShallTauntYou: Captain Harcourt to the Affastffern, to get them to focus on his ship and not the merchant it's protecting.
*RedShirt: ''Major'' subversion. [[spoiler: Every named character dies, but a large number of the Starcougar’s crew survive.]]
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