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** And of course [[spoiler: the previous "hero" doesn't view any of the residents of the Hooflands as people but only as talking beasts at best]]
** And of course [[spoiler: the previous "hero" doesn't view any of the residents of the Hooflands as people but only as talking beasts at best]]
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* DarkSecret: [[spoiler:There has never been a human hero in the Hooflands. The previous "heroes" simply ceased control of the throne and have been passing it on in secret for a long time, and every other human has either died, been killed, or was DrivenToSuicide.]]
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* DarkSecret: [[spoiler:There has never been a human hero in the Hooflands. The previous "heroes" simply ceased seized control of the throne and have been passing it on in secret for a long time, and every other human has either died, been killed, or was DrivenToSuicide.]]
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* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler:The old man posing as Queen Kagami asks Regan to put him out of his misery. Regan can't bear to do it herself, but sends Gristle up to do it for her.]]
* DeathSeeker: [[spoiler:The old man posing as Queen Kagami asks Regan to put him out of his misery. Regan can't bear to do it herself, but sends Gristle up to do it for her.]]
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* HoldingOutForAHero: The equines of the Hooflands put all their need for heroism on the humans that arrive there, claiming that humans are simply better for the job. This is why Queen Kagami is allowed to reign: although they could rise up against her, they are waiting for the right human to do it instead. [[spoiler:It turns out that "Queen Kagami", and likely many human heroes before him, have been using this to exploit them.]] Regan eventually snaps and yells at them about how for all their claim that HumansAreSpecial, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot they could have solved their own problems long ago]] and it's unrealistic to put the fate on their land on a child.
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* HoldingOutForAHero: The equines of the Hooflands put all their need for heroism on the humans that arrive there, claiming that humans are simply better for the job. This is why Queen Kagami is allowed to reign: although they could rise up against her, they are waiting for the right human to do it instead. [[spoiler:It turns out that "Queen Kagami", and likely many human heroes before him, have been using this to exploit them.]] Regan eventually snaps and yells at them about how for all their claim that HumansAreSpecial, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot they could have solved their own problems long ago]] and it's unrealistic to put the fate on their land on a child.
* NoGoodDeedGoesUnpunished: Regan saves the Hooflands, and is promptly [[spoiler:tricked into going back to Earth, losing her family and home.]]
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* WhiteMansBurden: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:The human "heroes" of the Hooflands have been using this premise to rule over the Hooflands in the shadows, pretending to be their horse companions and spreading propaganda about how humans are the only fit heroes so that any other humans will be brought to the castle.]]
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* WhiteMansBurden: Deconstructed. [[spoiler:The The creatures of the Hooflands say that humans are simply better at being heroes than the rest of them, hence why it's their job to save everyone. [[spoiler:Deconstructed. It's all propaganda spread by previous human "heroes" of the Hooflands have been using this premise to rule over the Hooflands in the shadows, pretending to be keep their horse companions and spreading propaganda about how humans are the only fit heroes so that any other humans will be brought to the castle.power under human control.]]
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* FigureItOutYourself: When Queen Kagami is defeated, the rest of her soldiers ask Regan what to do since she refuses the throne. Regan bluntly says she hasn't the slightest idea how government works, and they're gonna have to deal with it themselves.
* IronicHell: [[spoiler:"Queen Kagami" despises the Hooflands and murdered his caretaker to seize control while waiting for his door so he could go home. It never reappeared, and it's implied the same has been true for every FallenHero of the Hooflands, letting them age and die in a place they hate.]]
* TheManBehindTheCurtain: [[spoiler:The human hero who crowned Kagami queen of the Hooflands assumed the throne in her place and waited for his door to reappear. It's implied all previous human heroes did the same.]]
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* TheManBehindTheCurtain: [[spoiler:The TheReveal: [[spoiler:There has never been a human hero who crowned Kagami queen of in the Hooflands assumed the throne in her place and waited for his door to reappear. It's implied all Hooflands. Their previous human heroes did acts of heroism were subterfuge to let them seize control of the same.throne, and everyone else died or committed suicide.]]
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: In a manner of speaking. [[spoiler:The man who's pretending to be Queen Kagami asks Regan to kill him and assume his place as the rightful ruler over the Hooflands. He reveals that he did this to the woman before him, and she before him.]]
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* YouKillItYouBoughtIt: In a manner of speaking. [[spoiler:The man who's pretending to be Queen Kagami asks Regan to kill him and assume his place as the rightful ruler over the Hooflands. He reveals that he did this to the woman before him, and she before him. Regan refuses, choosing instead to expose the ruse.]]
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* HoldingOutForAHero: The equines of the Hooflands put all their need for heroism on the humans that arrive there, claiming that humans are simply better for the job. This is why Queen Kagami is allowed to reign: although they could rise up against her, they are waiting for the right human to do it instead. [[spoiler:It turns out that "Queen Kagami", and likely many human heroes before him, have been using this to exploit them.]] Regan eventually snaps and yells at them about how for all their claim that HumansAreSpecial, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot they could have solved their own problems long ago]] if they'd truly wanted to. and it's unrealistic to put the fate on their land on a child.
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* WhiteMansBurden: Zigzagged. The point of the story is that the Hooflands' natives could and should have solved their own problems, instead of mindlessly trusting their monarch (and every human they saw). But at the same time, they ''needed a human to tell them this'', [[spoiler:their magic makes them literally incapable of not being racist,]] and it's pointed out earlier in the story that certain actions often needed in heroics (climbing, hiding, dexterous manipulations) are legitimately impossible for equines. [[BrokenAesop So which is it?]]
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* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Queen Kagami, her Sunlit Majesty, who offers a significant bounty to anyone who captures Laurel- dead or alive. She also sets ridiculous prices for trade goods that drive her people into poverty.
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* HoldingOutForAHero: The equines of the Hooflands put all their need for heroism on the humans that arrive there, claiming that humans are simply better for the job. This is why Queen Kagami is allowed to reign: although they could rise up against her, they are waiting for the right human to do it instead. [[spoiler:It turns out that "Queen Kagami", and likely many human heroes before him, have been using this to exploit them.]] Regan eventually snaps and yells at them about how for all their claim that HumansAreSpecial, [[CouldHaveAvoidedThisPlot they could have solved their own problems long ago]] if they'd truly wanted to.
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* {{Anticlimax}}: [[spoiler:Regan gives a speech about autonomy to four people, and then her quest is done and the next door she walks through drops her back on Earth. No word on her reunion with her parents, or how her herd "family" coped with losing her, or whether the Hooflands managed to transition to a more egalitarian government. ''And'' she only re-enters the Door by accident.]] Notably, the ''entire'' finale only takes up a fifth of the book.
* DarkLordOnLifeSupport: [[spoiler:"Queen Kagami" is actually an old human man with a fatal lung disease, who took an opportunity someone else offered him to exploit the Hooflands' natives while he waited to get back to Earth. Even his soldiers drop any pretense to loyalty the minute they see Regan.]]
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* FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch: The unintentional version where it wasn't her choice. Regan confided in Laurel hoping for support from her childhood friend after learning such an identity shaking thing. Instead Laurel rejects her. Processing the incident is a major part of Regan's character arc.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen: Her Sunlit Majesty, Queen Kagami.
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* FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch: The unintentional version where it wasn't her choice. Regan confided in Laurel hoping for support from her childhood friend after learning such an identity shaking identity-shaking thing. Instead Laurel rejects her. Processing the incident is a major part of Regan's character arc.
* GodSaveUsFromTheQueen:Her Queen Kagami, her Sunlit Majesty, Queen Kagami.who offers a significant bounty to anyone who captures Laurel- dead or alive. She also sets ridiculous prices for trade goods that drive her people into poverty.
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* {{Homage}}: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]]'' cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.
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* {{Homage}}: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first ''[[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]]'' cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands Hooflands, rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.
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* UnicornsAreSacred: Averted hard; the centaurs in the Hooflands who herd unicorns use the unicorns for their hides and meat.
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* TheManBehindTheCurtain: [[spoiler: The [[spoiler:The human hero who crowned Kagami queen of the Hooflands assumed the throne in her place and waited for his door to reappear. It's implied all previous human heroes did the same.]]
* TranslatorMicrobes: All species have a small degree of latent magic that they use to understand each other, [[spoiler:but this magic only manifests if they consider whoever they're talking to "a person". The centaurs, socialized since birth to fear kelpies and perytons, '''cannot''' understand their speech- or even that it ''is'' speech. Regan [[AchievementsInIgnorance doesn't have this expectation]], so she can hear those species as they truly are]].
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* TranslatorMicrobes: All species have a small degree of latent magic that they use to understand each other, [[spoiler:but this magic only manifests if they consider whoever they're talking to "a person". The centaurs, socialized since birth to fear kelpies and perytons, '''cannot''' understand their speech- or even that it ''is'' speech. Regan [[AchievementsInIgnorance doesn't have this expectation]], so she can hear those species as they truly are]].
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* {{Arcadia}}: Compared to some other [[MagicalLand Doors]] the Hooflands are idyllic. Any danger comes more from the political divisions present than from nature or magical rules. Granted, those politics include things like "is it socially acceptable to eat fellow sapients", but it's generally still a good place to grow up.
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* FormerFriendOfAlphaBitch: The unintentional version where it wasn't her choice. Regan confided in Laurel hoping for support from her childhood friend after learning such an identity shaking thing. Instead Laurel rejects her. Processing the incident is a major part of Regan's character arc.
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* {{Homage}}: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]] cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.
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* UnicornsAreSacred: Averted hard; the centaurs in the Hooflands who herd unicorns use the unicorns for their hides and meat.
* WhatAnIdiot: Regan ''knows'' that her best friend Laurel is intensely judgemental and has permanently shunned other girls for even the slightest hint of not being a "proper girl". The narration emphasises how carefully she has avoided ever risking Laurel's disapproval all her life. Then Regan finds out that she's intersex, and even ''Regan's'' first panicked reaction is "I'm a boy?" before she's reassured.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
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* WhatAnIdiot: Regan ''knows'' that her best friend Laurel is intensely judgemental and has permanently shunned other girls for even the slightest hint of not being a "proper girl". The narration emphasises how carefully she has avoided ever risking Laurel's disapproval all her life. Then Regan finds out that she's intersex, and even ''Regan's'' first panicked reaction is "I'm a boy?" before she's reassured.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
'''Instead:''' She immediately tells Laurel that she's XY, and Laurel reacts exactly as badly as one would expect.
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* UnicornsAreSacred: Averted hard; the centaurs in the Hooflands who herd unicorns use the unicorns for their hides and meat.
* WhatAnIdiot: Regan ''knows'' that her best friend Laurel is intensely judgemental and has permanently shunned other girls for even the slightest hint of not being a "proper girl". The narration emphasises how carefully she has avoided ever risking Laurel's disapproval all her life. Then Regan finds out that she's intersex, and even ''Regan's'' first panicked reaction is "I'm a boy?" before she's reassured.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
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* WhatAnIdiot: Regan ''knows'' that her best friend Laurel is intensely judgemental and has permanently shunned other girls for even the slightest hint of not being a "proper girl". The narration emphasises how carefully she has avoided ever risking Laurel's disapproval all her life. Then Regan finds out that she's intersex, and even ''Regan's'' first panicked reaction is "I'm a boy?" before she's reassured.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
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it's not a whole plot reference because it doesn't have the same plot AT ALL.
* {{Homage}}: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]] cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.
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* WholePlotReference: Described by WhatAnIdiot: Regan ''knows'' that her best friend Laurel is intensely judgemental and has permanently shunned other girls for even the author as slightest hint of not being a love letter to the very "proper girl". The narration emphasises how carefully she has avoided ever risking Laurel's disapproval all her life. Then Regan finds out that she's intersex, and even ''Regan's'' first [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]] cartoon. Regan, like Megan, panicked reaction is "I'm a human who goes to a world of horses boy?" before she's reassured.\\
'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
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'''You'd Expect:''' That she would never tell Laurel anything that so obviously set her apart\\
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* {{Kirin}}: In the Hooflands, kirin are sapient unicorns, unlike the unicorns that Regan's centaur friends herd (those unicorns are more like deer with sharp horns, and they are very, VERY unintelligent).
* OurCentaursAreDifferent: The centaurs that Regan meets herd unicorns and have a strange system of husbandry that Regan doesn't fully understand.
* OurCentaursAreDifferent: The centaurs that Regan meets herd unicorns and have a strange system of husbandry that Regan doesn't fully understand.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Regan is utterly, utterly terrified of being "weird" because she knows that KidsAreCruel (see below). This does not make learning she's intersex any easier on her.
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* IJustWantToBeNormal: Regan is utterly, utterly terrified of being "weird" because she knows that KidsAreCruel (see below). This does not make learning she's intersex any easier on her. her, and it's what draws her to the Hooflands in the first place: as the only human girl with no one to compare to, the horses all accept her as normal by default.
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* GoodParents: Regan's parents do their best to keep her from copying Laurel and reassure her that there's no wrong way to be a girl. Sadly, Regan is too young and too afraid to really internalize any of it.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Regan's parents do their best to keep her from copying Laurel and reassure her that there's no wrong way to be a girl, but Regan is too young and too afraid to really internalize any of it.
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* FemaleMisogynist: Laurel is a young version, shunning and bullying any girls who aren't the "right" type of girl.
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* ParentsAsPeople: Regan's parents do their best to keep her from copying Laurel and reassure her that there's no wrong way to be a girl, but Regan is too young and too afraid to really internalize any of it.
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The sixth installment of the ''Literature/WaywardChildren'' series by Creator/SeananMcGuire.
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''“Welcome to the Hooflands. We’re happy to have you, even if you being here means something’s coming.”''
Regan loves, and is loved, though her school-friend situation has become complicated, of late.
When she suddenly finds herself thrust through a doorway that asks her to "Be Sure" before swallowing her whole, Regan must learn to live in a world filled with centaurs, kelpies, and other magical equines―a world that expects its human visitors to step up and be heroes.
But after embracing her time with the herd, Regan discovers that not all forms of heroism are equal, and not all quests are as they seem…
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!!Tropes in ''Across the Green Grass Fields'' include:
* ACupAngst: Regan feels left behind by her peers because they're all going through puberty and she's not, and they're starting to treat her like a baby because she doesn't need a bra or have her period yet.
* AllGirlsLikePonies: Regan ''loves'' horses, which is one of the reasons she ends up going to the Hooflands. Also invoked, Regan knows that her interest is safe from mockery by her junior AlphaBitch "friend" because horses are seen as a typical interest for girls.
* BetaBitch: Regan is a young version--she's so scared of Laurel that she does everything in her power to keep Laurel happy so that she can remain at Laurel's side, and thus be safe from her.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Regan is utterly, utterly terrified of being "weird" because she knows that KidsAreCruel (see below). This does not make learning she's intersex any easier on her.
* KidsAreCruel: The book kicks off with Regan's friend Laurel ostracizing their other friend Heather for thinking a garter snake is cute, because snakes aren't girly enough for Laurel. Regan is miserable but too terrified of Laurel to argue with her. Skip ahead a few years, and Laurel reacts ''extremely'' nastily to Regan's explanation that she's intersex, misgendering her and accusing her of lying.
* WholePlotReference: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]] cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.
Regan loves, and is loved, though her school-friend situation has become complicated, of late.
When she suddenly finds herself thrust through a doorway that asks her to "Be Sure" before swallowing her whole, Regan must learn to live in a world filled with centaurs, kelpies, and other magical equines―a world that expects its human visitors to step up and be heroes.
But after embracing her time with the herd, Regan discovers that not all forms of heroism are equal, and not all quests are as they seem…
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!!Tropes in ''Across the Green Grass Fields'' include:
* ACupAngst: Regan feels left behind by her peers because they're all going through puberty and she's not, and they're starting to treat her like a baby because she doesn't need a bra or have her period yet.
* AllGirlsLikePonies: Regan ''loves'' horses, which is one of the reasons she ends up going to the Hooflands. Also invoked, Regan knows that her interest is safe from mockery by her junior AlphaBitch "friend" because horses are seen as a typical interest for girls.
* BetaBitch: Regan is a young version--she's so scared of Laurel that she does everything in her power to keep Laurel happy so that she can remain at Laurel's side, and thus be safe from her.
* IJustWantToBeNormal: Regan is utterly, utterly terrified of being "weird" because she knows that KidsAreCruel (see below). This does not make learning she's intersex any easier on her.
* KidsAreCruel: The book kicks off with Regan's friend Laurel ostracizing their other friend Heather for thinking a garter snake is cute, because snakes aren't girly enough for Laurel. Regan is miserable but too terrified of Laurel to argue with her. Skip ahead a few years, and Laurel reacts ''extremely'' nastily to Regan's explanation that she's intersex, misgendering her and accusing her of lying.
* WholePlotReference: Described by the author as a love letter to the very first [[WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyAndFriends My Little Pony]] cartoon. Regan, like Megan, is a human who goes to a world of horses and horse-related magical creatures (the Hooflands rather than the Ponylands), and must go on dangerous and heroic quests there.