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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent forms a club to deal with strange gateways to an alternate universe after meeting someone with the capability and gaining the capability himself, and more and more people he knows started gaining the same ability.
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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent forms a club to deal with strange gateways to an alternate universe after meeting someone with the capability and gaining the capability himself, and more and more people he knows started gaining the same ability.
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-->''Visit the Unabridged Version [[VideoGame/TokyoXanadu here]]''
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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent forms a club to deal with strange gateways to an alternate universe after meeting someone with the capability and gaining the capability himself.
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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent forms a club to deal with strange gateways to an alternate universe after meeting someone with the capability and gaining the capability himself.himself, and more and more people he knows started gaining the same ability.
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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent helps his classmate after learning she's a member of a group that closes Eclipse vortexes.
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An OrdinaryHighSchoolStudent helps his classmate forms a club to deal with strange gateways to an alternate universe after learning she's a member of a group that closes Eclipse vortexes.
meeting someone with the capability and gaining the capability himself.
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-->''Visit the Unabridged Version [[VideoGame/TokyoXanaduhere]]''here]]''
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-->''Visit the Unabridged Version [[VideoGame/TokyoXanadu
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Laconic replaced per here
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (and VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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-->''Visit the Unabridged Version [[VideoGame/TokyoXanadu here]]''
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (and VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (and VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or (and VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay battle mechanics lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a VideoGame/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a VideoGame/{{Persona}} Franchise/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a VideoGame/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with a story that feels like it was lifted wholesale from a VideoGame/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay lifted from VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with the scenario that feels like it was lifed from VideoGame/Persona and with gameplay from VideoGame/Ys (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with the scenario a story that feels like it was lifed lifted wholesale from VideoGame/Persona a VideoGame/{{Persona}} game and with gameplay from VideoGame/Ys VideoGame/{{Ys}} (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)
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Basically, VideoGame/TheLegendOfHeroesTrailsOfColdSteel but with the scenario that feels like it was lifed from VideoGame/Persona and with gameplay from VideoGame/Ys (or VideoGame/NiNoKuniIIRevenantKingdom)