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I tried making this more faithful to the unabridged page.
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The hero who encourages others to be more heroic.
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The hero who encourages others helps other characters to be more heroic.demonstrate how to assist themselves.
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--> [-If it weren't for all those encouraging words, the [[TheParagon unabridged version]] wouldn't have ever become what it is now.-]
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Minor formatting fix; unabridged version joke created. ^^
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[TheParagon HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the main page [[TheParagon HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the main page unabridged version [[TheParagon HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the main page [[TheParagon HERE]].-]
-->[-Visit the main page [[TheParagon HERE]].-]
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editing for clarity
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Be a hero and you've saved the day; teach others to be heroes, and you've saved a lifetime.
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Leads the people to the light by example.
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