Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Shortened length. It was clever, but unecessary.
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
Increasing game length with repetitive, mechanistic activities while conserving content. Extending gameplay without "game" or "play".
to:
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even HERE.....................It is [[FakeLongevity HERE]]-]
to:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even HERE.....................It is [[FakeLongevity HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................It is [[FakeLongevity HERE]]-]
to:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................HERE.....................It is [[FakeLongevity HERE]]-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................It is [[Longevity HERE]]-]
to:
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................It is [[Longevity [[FakeLongevity HERE]]-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Pointlessly long trip to find the link to the unabridged version link. :)
Added DiffLines:
----
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................It is [[Longevity HERE]]-]
-->[-Visit unabridged version not HERE, or HERE, or even here.....................It is [[Longevity HERE]]-]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Prepend a more facty bit. Deword following bit some.
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
Extending gameplay in ways that don't involve much of either "game" or "play".
to:
Increasing game length with repetitive, mechanistic activities while conserving content. Extending gameplay in ways that don't involve much of either without "game" or "play".
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 1 (click to see context) from:
Extending gameplay through additional tasks, none of which actually add anything new to the game.
to:
Extending gameplay through additional tasks, none in ways that don't involve much of which actually add anything new to the game.either "game" or "play".
