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Grab some poor sap and let his body block bullets.
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Grab some poor sap and let his their body block bullets.
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[BulletproofHumanShield HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[BulletproofHumanShield HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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It's not necessary for the shielded person to be headed for safety to fit the trope.
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Grab some poor sap and let his body block bullets while you head for safety.
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Grab some poor sap and let his body block bullets while you head for safety.bullets.
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Grab a nearby {{Mook}} and let him block bullets while you head for safety.
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Grab a nearby {{Mook}} some poor sap and let him his body block bullets while you head for safety.
safety.
