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%%It's mentioned in the unabridged version that this is only a DeathTrope.
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%%It's mentioned in the unabridged version that this is only a DeathTrope.{{Death Trope|s}}.
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I don't think the page Villains needs to be linked to twice like that. Granted, I don't think there are any rules on stuff like that.
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-->[-Cry for the fallen {{villain|s}}, who tragically died, at the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Cry for the fallen {{villain|s}}, villain, who tragically died, at the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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I tried adjusting the "unabridged gag".
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-->[-Cry for the fallen {{villain|s}} at the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Cry for the fallen {{villain|s}} {{villain|s}}, who tragically died, at the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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A {{villain|s}}'s death or demise being painted in a sympathetic light.
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A {{villain|s}}'s death or demise being painted in a sympathetic light.
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Added 'or demise' because this can also apply when the villain doesn't outright die.
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A {{villain|s}}'s death being painted in a sympathetic light.
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A {{villain|s}}'s death or demise being painted in a sympathetic light.
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The villain's death, downfall or just misfortune is painted in a sympathetic light.
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A {{villain|s}}'s death being painted in a sympathetic light.
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-->[-Cry for the fallen villain [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Cry for the fallen villain {{villain|s}} at the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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The villain's death or downfall is painted in a sympathetic light.
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The villain's death or death, downfall or just misfortune is painted in a sympathetic light.
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit the unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]].-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]]-]
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-->[-Visit unabridged version [[AlasPoorVillain HERE]]-]HERE]].-]
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The villain's death is painted in a sympathetic light.
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The villain's death or downfall is painted in a sympathetic light.
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Hate me all you want, but the laconic is kind of misleading
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The villain is painted in a sympathetic light.
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The villain villain's death is painted in a sympathetic light.
