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* ''Fanfic/BreatheInBreatheOut:'' [[spoiler: The Vine Nomu, aka High-End Zero.]] While the fic follows the'' My Hero Academia'' canon as closely as possible, considering the number of divergences on it, the trope namer is introduced on [[WhamEpisode Chapter 31.]] [[spoiler: Izuku, Momo, Yui, Miruko and Ryukyu head to raid a possible human trafficking operation. There they find the High-End Zero, and this becomes one of the closest calls for the students since the USJ. It takes Nejire, the current wielder of One for All here, to kill the thing before it can finish off the heroes and students. WordOfGod commented that if a a High-End was able to almost to kill Endeavor in canon, there is no way two heroes and couple of students would stand a chance against it, even if it was a FlawedPrototype.]]

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* ''Fanfic/BreatheInBreatheOut:'' [[spoiler: The Vine Nomu, aka High-End Zero.]] While the fic follows the'' My Hero Academia'' canon as closely as possible, considering the number of divergences on it, the trope namer is introduced on [[WhamEpisode Chapter 31.]] [[spoiler: Izuku, Momo, Yui, Miruko and Ryukyu head to raid a possible human trafficking operation. There There, they find the High-End Zero, and this becomes one of the closest calls for the students since the USJ. The entire chapter evolves into a nightmare situation, with the five main characters barely making out of the battle alive and the High-End Zero not taking any damage despite their best efforts. It takes Nejire, the current wielder of One for All here, to kill the thing before it can finish off the heroes and students. students with a single strike. WordOfGod commented that if a a High-End was able to almost to kill Endeavor in canon, there is no way two heroes and couple of students would stand a chance against it, even if it was a FlawedPrototype.]]
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* ''Fanfic/BreatheInBreatheOut:'' [[spoiler: The Vine Nomu, aka High-End Zero.]] While the fic follows the'' My Hero Academia'' canon as closely as possible, considering the number of divergences on it, the trope namer is introduced on [[WhamEpisode Chapter 31.]] [[spoiler: Izuku, Momo, Yui, Miruko and Ryukyu head to raid a possible human trafficking operation. There they find the High-End Zero, and this becomes one of the closest calls for the students since the USJ. It takes Nejire, the current wielder of One for All here, to kill the thing before it can finish off the heroes and students. WordOfGod commented that if a a High-End was able to almost to kill Endeavor in canon, there isno way two heroes and couple of students would stand a chance against it, even if it was a FlawedPrototype.]]

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* ''Fanfic/BreatheInBreatheOut:'' [[spoiler: The Vine Nomu, aka High-End Zero.]] While the fic follows the'' My Hero Academia'' canon as closely as possible, considering the number of divergences on it, the trope namer is introduced on [[WhamEpisode Chapter 31.]] [[spoiler: Izuku, Momo, Yui, Miruko and Ryukyu head to raid a possible human trafficking operation. There they find the High-End Zero, and this becomes one of the closest calls for the students since the USJ. It takes Nejire, the current wielder of One for All here, to kill the thing before it can finish off the heroes and students. WordOfGod commented that if a a High-End was able to almost to kill Endeavor in canon, there isno is no way two heroes and couple of students would stand a chance against it, even if it was a FlawedPrototype.]]
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* ''Fanfic/BreatheInBreatheOut:'' [[spoiler: The Vine Nomu, aka High-End Zero.]] While the fic follows the'' My Hero Academia'' canon as closely as possible, considering the number of divergences on it, the trope namer is introduced on [[WhamEpisode Chapter 31.]] [[spoiler: Izuku, Momo, Yui, Miruko and Ryukyu head to raid a possible human trafficking operation. There they find the High-End Zero, and this becomes one of the closest calls for the students since the USJ. It takes Nejire, the current wielder of One for All here, to kill the thing before it can finish off the heroes and students. WordOfGod commented that if a a High-End was able to almost to kill Endeavor in canon, there isno way two heroes and couple of students would stand a chance against it, even if it was a FlawedPrototype.]]
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* ''Fanfic/AClashOfNeets'': While the story has its share of legitimately serious villains, they tend to be either LaughablyEvil ([[MonsterClown The Lord of Light]] an his followers) or TheComicallySerious (Stannis, Baelish). However, the Great Other, [[IHaveManyNames also known as the Kinslayer]], real name [[spoiler: [[VideoGame/{{Warcraft}} Arthas Menethil]]]], is the exception: whenever he appears in a chapter, all comedy and lightheartedness ''immediately'' stop, and the tone turns [[{{Pun}} dead]] serious, as heroes die and the shere horror of what the Children of Destiny are up against is displayed. There is ''nothing'' funny about him.
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* Even though ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11249784/ Phineas and Ferb Visit Jurassic World!]]'' is a LighterAndSofter take on the film, the ''Indominus rex'' is still played quite seriously. Things immediately turn dark the moment she shows up, and everyone in the cast labels her as TheDreaded upon encountering her. Even Perry the Platypus finds her terrifying.

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* Even though ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11249784/ Phineas and Ferb Visit Jurassic World!]]'' is a LighterAndSofter take on the film, the ''Indominus rex'' is still played quite seriously. Things immediately turn dark the moment she shows up, and everyone in the cast labels her as TheDreaded upon encountering her. Even Perry the Platypus finds her terrifying. She even still manages to cause one death.
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* ''Fanfic/CindersAndAshesTheChroniclesOfKamenRiderDante'' has Magane as one. While she is one in [[Anime/ReCreators her anime]], this fanfic has her take her role and runs with it. Her cameo signals the shift to a darker and more serious tone, with the following scenes featuring her as a major threat, to the point where her first encounter with Hoshi brings with it [[spoiler:his brief FaceHeelTurn]]. While an honorable mention goes to Vega for bringing the [[MonsterOfTheWeek Kaizo-Majin]] into the world and Malacoda [[spoiler:for almost killing Hoshi's sister]], Magane is the one who, directly or indirectly, is responsible for the more reprehensible Kaizo-Majin that managed to score more kills than the Kaizo-Majin that Vega makes.

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* ''Fanfic/CindersAndAshesTheChroniclesOfKamenRiderDante'' has Magane as one. While she is one in [[Anime/ReCreators her anime]], this fanfic has her take her role and runs run with it. Her cameo signals the shift to a darker and more serious tone, with the following scenes featuring her as a major threat, to the point where her first encounter with Hoshi brings with it [[spoiler:his brief FaceHeelTurn]]. While an honorable mention goes to Vega for bringing the [[MonsterOfTheWeek Kaizo-Majin]] into the world and Malacoda [[spoiler:for almost killing Hoshi's sister]], Magane is the one who, directly or indirectly, is responsible for the more reprehensible Kaizo-Majin that managed to score more kills than the Kaizo-Majin that Vega makes.
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* ''Fanfic/CindersAndAshesTheChroniclesOfKamenRiderDante'' has Magane as one. While she is one in [[Anime/ReCreators her anime]], this fanfic has her take her role and run with it. Her cameo signals the shift to a darker and more serious tone, with the following scenes featuring her as a major threat, to the point where her first encounter with Hoshi brings with it [[spoiler:his brief FaceHeelTurn]]. While an honorable mention goes to Vega for bringing the [[MonsterOfTheWeek Kaizo-Majin]] into the world and Malacoda [[spoiler:for almost killing Hoshi's sister]], Magane is the one who, directly or indirectly, is responsible for the more reprehensible Kaizo-Majin that managed to score more kills than the Kaizo-Majin that Vega makes.

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* ''Fanfic/CindersAndAshesTheChroniclesOfKamenRiderDante'' has Magane as one. While she is one in [[Anime/ReCreators her anime]], this fanfic has her take her role and run runs with it. Her cameo signals the shift to a darker and more serious tone, with the following scenes featuring her as a major threat, to the point where her first encounter with Hoshi brings with it [[spoiler:his brief FaceHeelTurn]]. While an honorable mention goes to Vega for bringing the [[MonsterOfTheWeek Kaizo-Majin]] into the world and Malacoda [[spoiler:for almost killing Hoshi's sister]], Magane is the one who, directly or indirectly, is responsible for the more reprehensible Kaizo-Majin that managed to score more kills than the Kaizo-Majin that Vega makes.
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* Even though ''[[https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11249784/ Phineas and Ferb Visit Jurassic World!]]'' is a LighterAndSofter take on the film, the ''Indominus rex'' is still played quite seriously. Things immediately turn dark the moment she shows up, and everyone in the cast labels her as TheDreaded upon encountering her. Even Perry the Platypus finds her terrifying.
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* ''Recap/DiaryOfAnAnalog'': Machinedramon is given a '''major''' case of a CerebusRetcon regarding his origins, being depicted as not only the Dark Masters individual we know him as from ''Anime/DigimonAdventure'', but he's ''also'' the exact same Machinedramon from which Analogman had used in ''VideoGame/DigimonWorld''. Machinedramon, even though his remains have been rendered into a self-repairing sack of spare parts, even when currently helpless, Machinedramon is the one bullying the strings behind his figurative and literal dragon that is Darkdramon and the D-Brigade, from which Machinedramon is to Piedmon as Darkdramon is to Myotismon in the fact Machinedramon had created Darkdramon as a Digimon of free will who he would use as his PuppetKing for his new incarnation of the Dark Masters from whom Darkdramon will serve as his enforcer once his training is complete, even when it becomes aware that Darkdramon's free will gives him more than an agenda of his own accord, such as starting off his villainous deeds by agreeing to an anonymous bounty on Sora's head placed on her in the wake of [=Y2K=], and then proceeding to toy with his food by outright making Sora's waking life nothing short of a living hell for her in the following years.
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** Shared with [[PsychoPsychologist Dr. Nicole Cho]], the abusive school counselor.
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* Despite its cynical tone, ''Fanfic/MiraculousThePhoenixRises'' prides itself on its BlackComedy throughout the main characters' goofy hijinks. However, when any mention is made of the [[HateSink motherfucker who framed Morgan for stalking]], all of that vanishes.

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* Despite its cynical tone, ''Fanfic/MiraculousThePhoenixRises'' prides itself on its BlackComedy throughout most of the time keeps to following the main characters' characters goofy hijinks. hijinks surrounded by episodes of BlackComedy. However, when any mention is made of the [[HateSink motherfucker thug who framed Morgan for stalking]], all of that vanishes.
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* Despite its cynical tone, ''Fanfic/MiraculousThePhoenixRises'' prides itself on its BlackComedy throughout the main characters' goofy hijinks. However, when any mention is made of the [[HateSink motherfucker who framed Morgan for stalking]], all of that vanishes.
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** The group of mercenaries who [[spoiler:have staged the Indominus’ ambush on Brunet’s platoon and murdered Gareth Turner, Mei Tian and Patience Bellamy,]] darkens the story’s atmosphere even more. When the grey guards discovers that [[spoiler:this group of mercenaries is actually InGen’s black ops team, things escalate and a war break out on the island between InGen and the Grey Guard.]]

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** The group of mercenaries who [[spoiler:have staged the Indominus’ ambush on Brunet’s platoon and murdered Gareth Turner, Mei Tian and Patience Bellamy,]] darkens the story’s atmosphere even more. When the grey guards discovers that [[spoiler:this group of mercenaries is actually InGen’s [=InGen=]’s black ops team, things escalate and a war break out on the island between InGen [=InGen=] and the Grey Guard.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. Nihilus' inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus as a POV character being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. Nihilus' inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus as a POV character being among the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. Nihilus' inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. Nihilus' inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' Nihilus as a POV character being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His Nihilus' inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between him and his friends while pushing him closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between him Jaune and his friends while pushing him ever closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between him and his friends while pushing him closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between him and his friends while pushing him closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than its source material, material with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[BigBad [[UndeadAbomination Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his OmnicidalManiac whose [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. PlayedForDrama as it drives a wedge between him and his friends while pushing him closer to a FaceHeelTurn. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly directly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he [[DemonicPossession possesses Jaune's body body]] and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and villains alike are KilledOfForReal by Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they are violently KilledOffForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable horror that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome with CharactersDroppingLikeFlies as over a dozen heroes and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they villains alike are violently KilledOffForReal KilledOfForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].Nihilus' rampage.]]
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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek--a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would've died then and there. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in later chapters.

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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek--a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight of the fights preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would've died then and there. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in later chapters.
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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable force of destruction that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they are violently KilledOffForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].]]

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** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable force of destruction horror that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role as the BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they are violently KilledOffForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].]]
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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek--a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing the main protagonist Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek--a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing the main protagonist Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. would've died then and there. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in the chapters that follow.later chapters.
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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek, a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing the main protagonist Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to master his powers as he settles in at his new school. That all changes with the introduction of the terentatek, a terentatek--a homicidal alien beast mutated by the Dark Side and hellbent on tearing the main protagonist Jaune apart limb from limb. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've encountered that outclasses them in almost every way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight preceding it with limbs being broken, a teenager getting disemboweled, and the main protagonist almost dying in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side]] in the chapters that follow.
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** While not without drama, the story is initially lighthearted and is about a teenage boy learning to control his new powers at his combat school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and makes all the protagonists' previous struggles seem trivial by comparison. For the heroes, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle against the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any of the fic's previous fights with Pyrrha nearly being impaled, Yang's arm getting broken, and Jaune having his intestines ripped out and nearly dying from blood loss. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story is initially starts out fairly lighthearted and is about a [[Franchise/StarWars Force-sensitive]] teenage boy learning to control master his powers as he settles in at his new powers at his combat school. That all changes once with the terentatek comes along. It's introduction of the terentatek, a nigh-unstoppable homicidal alien monster beast mutated by the Dark Side and makes all hellbent on tearing the protagonists' previous struggles seem trivial by comparison. main protagonist Jaune apart limb from limb. For the heroes, Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've faced encountered that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. way and who Jaune's Force powers ''don't work on''. The battle against between the heroes and the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any of the fic's previous fights fight preceding it with Pyrrha nearly limbs being impaled, Yang's arm broken, a teenager getting broken, disemboweled, and Jaune having his intestines ripped out and nearly the main protagonist almost dying from blood loss. in a pool of his own blood. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] last-minute GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from [[SlowlySlippingIntoEvil slowly becomes corrupted by the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] Side]] in the chapters that follow.
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** While not without drama, the story is initially lighthearted and is about a teenage boy learning to control his new powers at his combat school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and makes every previous struggles faced by the heroes seem trivial by comparison. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle against the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any of the fic's previous fights with characters breaking limbs, having their stomachs ripped open, and nearly bleeding to death. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story is initially lighthearted and is about a teenage boy learning to control his new powers at his combat school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and makes every all the protagonists' previous struggles faced by the heroes seem trivial by comparison. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the heroes, the terentatek is the first serious threat they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle against the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any of the fic's previous fights with characters breaking limbs, Pyrrha nearly being impaled, Yang's arm getting broken, and Jaune having their stomachs his intestines ripped open, out and nearly bleeding to death.dying from blood loss. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.
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** While not without drama, the story is fairly lighthearted at first and is about Jaune learning how to control his new Force powers. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and the threat it poses makes all the heroes' previous struggles seem trivial in comparison. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first villain they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle with the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight scene preceding it and includes the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame with its violence. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.
** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable force of destruction that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the story is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role in the plot, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they are violently KilledOffForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].]]

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** While not without drama, the story is fairly initially lighthearted at first and is about Jaune a teenage boy learning how to control his new Force powers.powers at his combat school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and the threat it poses makes all the heroes' every previous struggles faced by the heroes seem trivial in by comparison. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first villain serious threat they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle with against the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight scene preceding it and includes of the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame fic's previous fights with its violence.characters breaking limbs, having their stomachs ripped open, and nearly bleeding to death. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.
** All that above pales in comparison to the dark, inescapable force of destruction that is [[BigBad Darth Nihilus]]. Whereas even Cinder had her humorous moments, ''nothing'' about Nihilus is ever PlayedForLaughs. He's an insidious EldritchAbomination bent on consuming all of existence and his [[TheCorrupter corruptive influence on Jaune]] is one-hundred percent PlayedForDrama. His inclusion in the story plot is single-handedly responsible for the fic being DarkerAndEdgier than either of its source material, with chapters featuring Nihilus' POV being some of the darkest in the entire story. [[spoiler:Once he possesses Jaune's body and takes an active role in as the plot, BigBad, the story dives headfirst into the CerebusSyndrome and [[CharactersDroppingLikeFlies characters start dropping like flies]] as they are violently KilledOffForReal by [[HeroKiller Nihilus]].]]
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** While not without drama, the story is fairly lighthearted at first and focuses on Jaune slowly getting used to being Force-sensitive as he trains to be a hero at his new school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable monster mutated by the Dark Side and far more dangerous than any [[TheUsualAdversaries Grimm]]. It's the first serious threat that the protagonists face and comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The scene where the creature attacks includes the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame with its violence. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story is fairly lighthearted at first and focuses on is about Jaune slowly getting used learning how to being Force-sensitive as he trains to be a hero at control his new school.Force powers. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable alien monster mutated by the Dark Side and far more dangerous than any [[TheUsualAdversaries Grimm]]. It's the threat it poses makes all the heroes' previous struggles seem trivial in comparison. For Teams JNPR and RWBY, the terentatek is the first serious threat villain they've faced that outclasses them in almost every way. In fact, the protagonists face and creature comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The battle with the terentatek is noticeably BloodierAndGorier than any fight scene where the creature attacks preceding it and includes the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame with its violence. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.
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** While not without drama, the story is fairly lighthearted at first, focusing on Jaune learning to control his new powers while bonding with his teammates. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable monster mutated by the Dark Side and far more dangerous than any [[TheUsualAdversaries Grimm]]. It's the first serious threat that the protagonists face and comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The scene where the creature attacks includes the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame with its violence. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.

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** While not without drama, the story is fairly lighthearted at first, focusing first and focuses on Jaune learning slowly getting used to control being Force-sensitive as he trains to be a hero at his new powers while bonding with his teammates.school. That all changes once the terentatek comes along. It's a nigh-unstoppable monster mutated by the Dark Side and far more dangerous than any [[TheUsualAdversaries Grimm]]. It's the first serious threat that the protagonists face and comes the closest out of any villain to actually ''killing'' Jaune. The scene where the creature attacks includes the first instance of {{Gorn}} in a story that had previously been tame with its violence. If it wasn't for a [[DeusExMachina last-minute]] GunshipRescue, the entire main cast would be dead. In addition, the terentatek's debut marks the start of Jaune's ProtagonistJourneyToVillain as he starts drawing power from the Dark Side and becomes more [[TookALevelInJerkass temperamental and abrasive]] in the chapters that follow.

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