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** That moment get sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came to him, and he hid himself in the battery for 2 months and not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talked him out of it.
* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finally consummated their love.
* [[spoiler: Nihlus]] saved a young Shepard and willing to fight against [[spoiler: Samara]] to protect her.
* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finally consummated their love.
* [[spoiler: Nihlus]] saved a young Shepard and willing to fight against [[spoiler: Samara]] to protect her.
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** That moment get gets sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came comes to him, and he hid hides himself in the battery for 2 months and months, not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talked him out of it.
* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finallyconsummated consummate their love.
* [[spoiler: Nihlus]] saved a young Shepard and was willing to fight against [[spoiler: Samara]] to protect her.
* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finally
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--> '''Raptor Assassin''': I say, that does not the sky look so much more beautiful after a winter of not seeing it? Its a tired cliche, but like they say, there can be no light without darkness.
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--> '''Raptor Assassin''': Assassin:''' I say, that does not the sky look so much more beautiful after a winter of not seeing it? Its a tired cliche, but like they say, there can be no light without darkness.
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--> Raptor Assassin: '''Raptor Assassin''': I say, that does not the sky look so much more beautiful after a winter of not seeing it? Its a tired cliche, but like they say, there can be no light without darkness.
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--> Shepard: "I never had a brother. But if I did, I wish he were you."
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--> Wrex: '''Wrex:''' He could only wish, resentfully upon a still distant star, to one day have a son like her.
-->Shepard: '''Shepard:''' "I never had a brother. But if I did, I wish he were you."
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** That moment get sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came to him, and he hid himself in the battery for 2 months and not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talk talked him out of it.
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Dark as [[Fanfic/WeightlessMassEffect this story]] is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoments moments]] more beautiful:
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Dark as [[Fanfic/WeightlessMassEffect this story]] is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoments moments]] even more beautiful:
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* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finally consummated their love.
* [[spoiler: Nihlus]] saved a young Shepard and willing to fight against [[spoiler: Samara]] to protect her.
* Chapter 28: Garrus and Shepard finally consummated their love.
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** That moment get sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came to him, and he hid himself in the battery for 2 months and not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talk him out of it.
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Dark as this story is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoment moments]] more beautiful:
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Dark as this story is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoment [[HeartwamingMoments moments]] more beautiful:
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--> Raptor Assassin: I say, that does not the sky look so much more beautiful after a winter of not seeing it? Its a tired cliche, but like they say, there can be no light without darkness.
Dark as this story is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoment moments]] more beautiful:
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* Shepard and Wrex’s conversation.
--> Wrex: He could only wish, resentfully upon a still distant star, to one day have a son like her.
--> "I never had a brother. But if I did, I wish he were you."
* Shepard’s talk with Karin while Garrus was in a coma.
* When Garrus woke up, he was greeted by Karin. Even when the scene seemed so ordinary, there was something so heartwarming about how Karin acted so motherly with her teasing and caring way.
* After she returned from Alchera, Shepard and Garrus finally (wordlessly) acknowledge their feeling for each other.
--> And they both knew, they would never. Ever. Leave each other. Again.
** That moment get sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came to him, and he hid himself in the battery for 2 months and not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talk him out of it.
Dark as this story is, it does makes all those [[HeartwamingMoment moments]] more beautiful:
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* Shepard and Wrex’s conversation.
--> Wrex: He could only wish, resentfully upon a still distant star, to one day have a son like her.
--> "I never had a brother. But if I did, I wish he were you."
* Shepard’s talk with Karin while Garrus was in a coma.
* When Garrus woke up, he was greeted by Karin. Even when the scene seemed so ordinary, there was something so heartwarming about how Karin acted so motherly with her teasing and caring way.
* After she returned from Alchera, Shepard and Garrus finally (wordlessly) acknowledge their feeling for each other.
--> And they both knew, they would never. Ever. Leave each other. Again.
** That moment get sour after that when Garrus’s sense of guilt came to him, and he hid himself in the battery for 2 months and not saying a word to Shepard. Good thing Thane came to the rescue and talk him out of it.
