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** During his brief moments of consciousness, Ash is able to speak with Will, Karen, and a few others who came to check on him.
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** During his brief moments of consciousness, Ash is able to speak with Will, Karen, Sabrina, and a few others who came to check on him.
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* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies. Before this, she held a 24 hour vigil by his bedside until she got some rest.
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* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies. Before this, she held a 24 20 hour vigil by his bedside until she got some rest.
* Ash reuniting with Wally and promising the boy that he has a gift for him once Ralts gets stronger.
* Ash meeting up with Captain Renato, who came to the Contest with his kids because they wanted to see/meet Ash.
* While some signs are in poor taste, many people come to the Contest to cheer on Ash and give some encouragement after the failed attempt on his life.
* Ash meeting up with Captain Renato, who came to the Contest with his kids because they wanted to see/meet Ash.
* While some signs are in poor taste, many people come to the Contest to cheer on Ash and give some encouragement after the failed attempt on his life.
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* Ash finally finds Silver and convinces him to turn himself into the Ever Grande League after treating him to lunch.
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* Ash finally finds Silver and convinces him to turn himself into the Ever Grande League after treating him to lunch.lunch.
* Wallace finding out that Ash is Giovanni's son and telling the boy that he does not hold Giovanni's sins against Ash.
* Wallace finding out that Ash is Giovanni's son and telling the boy that he does not hold Giovanni's sins against Ash.
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* When deciding where to bury Anorith, Ash thinks of a couple of ideas. First he thinks about going back to Forina to see if Jirachi can resurrect Anorith, then he thinks about giving her a burial at sea. Ash finally decides and asks Mr. Stone for permission to bury Anorith in the Stone Family colony since he wanted to train Anorith there and it would allow Steven and Armaldo to visit as well. Ancient approves and promises that the colony will always guard the grave.
** The fact that every member of Ash's team had some input for the funeral.
** The fact that every member of Ash's team had some input for the funeral.
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* Lance admitting that he would rather have Zinnia escaping justice forever over seeing Ash hurt again.
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* Ash catches Saph on what he has been up to since arriving in Hoenn during the flight to Verdanturf.
* Claydol admits they miss Steven while guarding Ash.
* Claydol admits they miss Steven while guarding Ash.
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* Ash thanking Lotus for saving his life. The Spiritomb ends up retreating to the keystone out of embarrassment!
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* Ash thanking Lotus for saving his life. The Spiritomb ends up retreating to the keystone out of embarrassment!embarrassment!
* Ash finally finds Silver and convinces him to turn himself into the Ever Grande League after treating him to lunch.
* Ash finally finds Silver and convinces him to turn himself into the Ever Grande League after treating him to lunch.
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** Lance naming Ash the best apprentice ever as a result.
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** Lance practically in tears over his gift while naming Ash the best apprentice ever as a result.apprentice.
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* The first thing Ash does when reuniting with Steven is to give the man a hug.
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* The first thing Ash does when reuniting with Steven is to give the man a hug.hug and thank him for his training since it helped him survive the attack. Steven is left on the verge of tears as a result.
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** During his brief moments of consciousness, Ash is able to speak with Will, Karen, and a few others who came to check on him.
** Flannery is a frequent visitor, bringing Lava Cookies and cards from various members of the Ever Grande League.
** Flannery is a frequent visitor, bringing Lava Cookies and cards from various members of the Ever Grande League.
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* Despite being enemies, Durand rescues Ash from Zinnia's attack and helps bandage him up.
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* Despite being enemies, Durand rescues Ash from Zinnia's attack and helps bandage him up. According to League intel, she has a bit of a soft spot for Ash.
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* Glacia urginign Ash to act more like a child when she was instructing him on manners and etiquette just in the previous chapter.
* Glacia urging Ash to act more like a child when she was instructing him on manners and etiquette just in the previous chapter.
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* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies.
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* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies. Before this, she held a 24 hour vigil by his bedside until she got some rest.
** Professor Oak coming to visit Ash along with Delia.
** Ash receiving emails from Gary, Jon, Amelia, and Daisy after they get the news of his latest incident.
** Professor Oak coming to visit Ash along with Delia.
** Ash receiving emails from Gary, Jon, Amelia, and Daisy after they get the news of his latest incident.
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* The skull in Ever Grade turns out to have belonged to Coral Buccalos, Drake's personal guard and a Water Type Master. He wished to watch over Ever Grande even in death, so Drake obliged his request.
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* The skull in Ever Grade Grande turns out to have belonged to Coral Buccalos, Drake's personal guard and a Water Type Master. He wished to watch over Ever Grande even in death, so Drake obliged his request.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.can.
* Despite being enemies, Durand rescues Ash from Zinnia's attack and helps bandage him up.
* Drake comes to meet up with Ash and lets him ride his Hydreigon, Henry, to the meeting spot. Henry makes sure that one head always has a visual on Ash.
*The first thing Ash does when reuniting with Steven is to give the man a hug.
* Steven tries to convince Ash to go back to Kanto where it is safer following Zinnia's assassination attempt. Ash shoots his teacher down and assures him that he wants to stay with Steven in Hoenn.
* Glacia urginign Ash to act more like a child when she was instructing him on manners and etiquette just in the previous chapter.
** While trying to persuade Ash to leave Hoenn, Steven suggests that Ash go to Sinnoh and that Cynthia holds the boy in high regard.
* Sabrina actually smiles when talking with Ash.
* It is revealed that while Ash was unconscious in the hospital, various members of the Elite Four came to check on him.
* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies.
* Ash finally tells his mother and Professor Oak about Silver. They both agree that he needs to be found and reassure Ash that he is compassionate.
* The skull in Ever Grade turns out to have belonged to Coral Buccalos, Drake's personal guard and a Water Type Master. He wished to watch over Ever Grande even in death, so Drake obliged his request.
* Ash ends up taking custody of the proto Dreepy left behind by Zinnia's Dragapult. Knowing his team would not welcome the infant due to the recent attempt on his life, Ash instead recalls that Lance once mentioned wanting to train a Dragapult and gifts him the Dreepy.
** Lance naming Ash the best apprentice ever as a result.
* Ash thanking Lotus for saving his life. The Spiritomb ends up retreating to the keystone out of embarrassment!
* Despite being enemies, Durand rescues Ash from Zinnia's attack and helps bandage him up.
* Drake comes to meet up with Ash and lets him ride his Hydreigon, Henry, to the meeting spot. Henry makes sure that one head always has a visual on Ash.
*The first thing Ash does when reuniting with Steven is to give the man a hug.
* Steven tries to convince Ash to go back to Kanto where it is safer following Zinnia's assassination attempt. Ash shoots his teacher down and assures him that he wants to stay with Steven in Hoenn.
* Glacia urginign Ash to act more like a child when she was instructing him on manners and etiquette just in the previous chapter.
** While trying to persuade Ash to leave Hoenn, Steven suggests that Ash go to Sinnoh and that Cynthia holds the boy in high regard.
* Sabrina actually smiles when talking with Ash.
* It is revealed that while Ash was unconscious in the hospital, various members of the Elite Four came to check on him.
* Delia comes to visit Ash in the hospital, complete with a tray of cookies.
* Ash finally tells his mother and Professor Oak about Silver. They both agree that he needs to be found and reassure Ash that he is compassionate.
* The skull in Ever Grade turns out to have belonged to Coral Buccalos, Drake's personal guard and a Water Type Master. He wished to watch over Ever Grande even in death, so Drake obliged his request.
* Ash ends up taking custody of the proto Dreepy left behind by Zinnia's Dragapult. Knowing his team would not welcome the infant due to the recent attempt on his life, Ash instead recalls that Lance once mentioned wanting to train a Dragapult and gifts him the Dreepy.
** Lance naming Ash the best apprentice ever as a result.
* Ash thanking Lotus for saving his life. The Spiritomb ends up retreating to the keystone out of embarrassment!
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** Wallace comments that Ash is quite talented for getting a 3-6 battle with him despite only being a trainer for 2 years. Metagross immediately has Steven correct Wallace that Ash has only been a trainer for 18 months.
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** Wallace comments that Ash is quite talented for getting a 3-6 battle with him despite only being a trainer for 2 years. Metagross immediately has Steven correct Wallace that Ash has only been a trainer for 18 20 months.
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* Lance comes to Lilycove to congratulate Ash in person over his battle with Wallace, going as far as to hug and spin his student around.
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* After Steven teleports back to Lilycove after the multi-attack on Hoenn, Ash's first instinct is to get him food and coffee.
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* After When Steven teleports back to Lilycove after the multi-attack on Hoenn, Ash's the first instinct thing Ash does is to get bring him food bagels and coffee.coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.can.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
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* Upon running into Tobias, Ash gives him some provisions, clothes, and money, which restores a bit of Tobias' memories and a small bit of sanity.
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* Upon running into Tobias, Tobias again in Hoenn, Ash gives him some provisions, clothes, and money, which restores a bit of Tobias' memories and a small bit of sanity.
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* Lance tells Ash that Mamoru the Rhydon tried to break into the Plateau while holding a bouquet of flowers, one Ash recognizes as the one he left at Champion Taimu's grave. Last Lance saw of Mamoru, he was visiting his old teammate Chinatsu.
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* Lance tells Ash that Mamoru the Rhydon tried to break into the Plateau while holding a bouquet of flowers, one Ash recognizes from the description as the one he left at Champion Taimu's grave. Last Lance saw of Mamoru, he was visiting his old teammate Chinatsu.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.
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* When Ash insists on being able to help the League with whatever is going on, Steven gently refuses and lets him explore the region on his own for the next few weeks as a sort of vacation. Despite being part of the League, Steven acknowledges that Ash is still too young to have to face certain horrors and is trying to let him enjoy being a kid as long as he can.can.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
* When Steven teleports back after assessing the damage from the coordinated attacks on Hoenn, the first thing Ash does is bring him bagels and coffee, seeing his teacher on the brink. It's not the greatest quality but Steven still accepts the food.
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* Lance tells Ash that Mamoru the Rhydon tried to break into the Plateau while holding a bouquet of flowers, one Ash recognizes as the one he left at Champion Taimu's grave. Last Lance saw of Mamoru, he was visiting his old teammate Chinatsu.
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* According to Karen's letter, the League made a memorial to Agatha.
