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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshiping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirshu dart from Jianzhu.
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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshiping worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirshu dart from Jianzhu.
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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshiping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu Shirshu dart from Jianzhu.
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* While the books do nothing to disprove the image of a powerful, justice seeking avatr that Kyoshi would have on her future, they also picture her as a thorougly human character. Not to mention that probably nobody believed Kyoshi coud be this adorable.
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* While the books do nothing to disprove the image of a the powerful, justice seeking avatr Avatar that Kyoshi would have on become in her future, they also picture show her as to be a thorougly thoroughly human character. Not to mention that probably nobody believed Kyoshi coud could be this adorable.
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* While the books do nothing to disprove the image of a powerful, justice seeking avatr that Kyoshi would have on her future, they also picture her as a thorougly human character. Not to mention that probably nobody believed Kyoshi coud be this adorable.
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* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Hei-Ran, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk; which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.
* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Hei-Ran, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk; which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.
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* After Kyoshi convinces the Flying Opera company that she really is the Avatar, she is shocked when they treat her respectfully and suggest going out of their way to disentangle her from their lives because it will be safer for her--even though it will be dangerous for them. Her experiences watching Jianzhu and Yun have taught her that the Avatar is merely a tool for others, and she has trouble comprehending that most people will see her as a sacred hero.
* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him forworshipping worshiping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu.
* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Hei-Ran, and thought highly of his time withKuruk; which Kuruk. Which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.
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* While Kyoshi was stated to be [[BiTheWay bisexual]] in ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars, in her own story, we get to see her actually experience her romantic feelings towards Yun and Rangi.
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* While Kyoshi was stated to be [[BiTheWay bisexual]] bisexual in ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars, ''ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars'', in her own story, we get to see her actually experience her romantic feelings towards Yun and Rangi.
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!!Administrivia/SpoilersOff applies to all Hearwarming pages, so all spoilers are unmarked. Administrivia/YouHaveBeenWarned!
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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when [[spoiler: he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu]].Jianzhu.
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* Rangi telling the Flying Opera Company that they are "true companions of the Avatar," and Kirima, Lao Ge, and Wong rescuing her and Hei-Ran from Jianzhu because she's "one of ours.""
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* As Kyoshi travels to the air temples, she notices Kelsang's statue isn't among the other airbending masters and requests as the Avatar that her father-figure's face be put up again despite what he did in the past.
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* As Kyoshi travels to the air temples, she notices Kelsang's statue isn't among the other airbending masters and requests as the Avatar that her father-figure's face be put up again despite what he did in the past.past.
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* Rangi telling the Flying Opera Company that they are "true companions of the Avatar," and Kirima, Lao Ge, and Wong rescuing her and Hei-Ran from Jianzhu because she's "one of ours."
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* Being abandoned and nearly starved to death as a child, it's nice to see her happily seeing Kelsang as her ParentalSubstitute and Kelsang treating her like his own.
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* Being abandoned and nearly starved to death as a child, it's nice to see her happily seeing Kelsang as her ParentalSubstitute and Kelsang treating her like his own.
* While Kyoshi was stated to bebisexual [[BiTheWay bisexual]] in ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars, in her own story, we get to see her actually experience her romantic feelings towards Yun and Rangi.
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* The Flying Opera company, despite being a small criminal group really do treat each other as FoundFamily and would do almost anything to make sure everyone is safe.
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* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Hei-Ran, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk; which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.heartbreaking.
* As Kyoshi travels to the air temples, she notices Kelsang's statue isn't among the other airbending masters and requests as the Avatar that her father-figure's face be put up again despite what he did in the past.
* As Kyoshi travels to the air temples, she notices Kelsang's statue isn't among the other airbending masters and requests as the Avatar that her father-figure's face be put up again despite what he did in the past.
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* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Rei-Han, Hei-Ran, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk; which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.
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* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Rei-Han, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk.Kuruk; which make his later moments rather heartbreaking.
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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when [[spoiler: he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu]].
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* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when [[spoiler: he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu]].Jianzhu]].
* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Rei-Han, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk.
* Despite all of Jianzhu's treachery and antagonism in the book and towards Kyoshi, he still deeply cared for his remaining friend Rei-Han, and thought highly of his time with Kuruk.
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Despite Kyoshi's life not being an easy one even before becoming an Avatar, there are some truly heartwarming moments in her story.
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* While Kyoshi was stated to be bisexual in ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars, in her own story, we get to see her actually experience her romantic feelings towards Yun and Rangi.
** To add onto this, Kyoshi and Rangi's relationship. Even before the two actually get together, Kyoshi is noticeably more attentive to what happens to Rangi and the girls are very open to one another. After Rangi gets beat up by a ''daofei'', Kyoshi nearly jumps down into the ring to save her. Afterwards, Rangi berates Kyoshi that what she did in the ring was exactly how she felt watching her as the Avatar put herself at risk. The two then share a BigDamnKiss with Kyoshi initially worried that Rangi doesn't feel the same for her, but Rangi only tells Kyoshi that she should be kissing the uninjured side of her face.
** Rangi and Kyoshi then spend the rest of the book flirting and teasing one another while also being a ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend towards each other.
* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when [[spoiler: he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu]].
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* While Kyoshi was stated to be bisexual in ComicBook/TheLegendOfKorraTurfWars, in her own story, we get to see her actually experience her romantic feelings towards Yun and Rangi.
** To add onto this, Kyoshi and Rangi's relationship. Even before the two actually get together, Kyoshi is noticeably more attentive to what happens to Rangi and the girls are very open to one another. After Rangi gets beat up by a ''daofei'', Kyoshi nearly jumps down into the ring to save her. Afterwards, Rangi berates Kyoshi that what she did in the ring was exactly how she felt watching her as the Avatar put herself at risk. The two then share a BigDamnKiss with Kyoshi initially worried that Rangi doesn't feel the same for her, but Rangi only tells Kyoshi that she should be kissing the uninjured side of her face.
** Rangi and Kyoshi then spend the rest of the book flirting and teasing one another while also being a ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend towards each other.
* Lek slowly becoming an AnnoyingYoungerSibling for Kyoshi, who at first hated him for worshipping her parents, but comes to respect him. It makes it all the more heartbreaking when [[spoiler: he dies after being hit by a poisoned Shirsu dart from Jianzhu]].
