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* Danny's got cute moment just after the sirens start to go off.
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* Danny's got Danny fallows that up, with another cute moment just after the sirens start to go off.
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--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
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--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]gone!
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---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Henry, Danny's gone!
---> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (''Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs'')
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (''turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch'') Here's Danny!
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
---> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
---> '''Danny''': I don't know.
---> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (''Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs'')
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
---> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (''turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch'') Here's Danny!
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
---> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
---> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
---> '''Danny''': I don't know.
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** He's got another cute moment just after the sirens start to go off.
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---> '''Danny''': I don't know.
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!
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---> '''Danny''': I don't know.
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!know.
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!
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--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Henry, Danny's gone!
--> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (''Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs'')
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (''turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch'') Here's Danny!
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
--> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
--> '''Danny''': I don't know.
--> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (''Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs'')
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (''turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch'') Here's Danny!
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
--> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
--> '''Danny''': I don't know.
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--> '''Danny''': (catches Jane sneaking down the stairs) Hey! Where're you going?
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--> '''Danny''': (catches (''catches Jane sneaking down the stairs) stairs'') Hey! Where're you going?
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--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs)
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--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (Henry (''Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs)stairs'')
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--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch) Here's Danny!
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--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns (''turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch) couch'') Here's Danny!
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--> '''Danny''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch)
--> '''Danny''': Here's Danny!
--> '''Danny''': Here's Danny!
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--> '''Danny''': '''Mr. Martin''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch)
--> '''Danny''':couch) Here's Danny!
--> '''Danny''':
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--> '''Danny''': [[ComicallyMIssingThePoint Oh they don't need guarding.]]
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--> '''Danny''': [[ComicallyMIssingThePoint [[ComicallyMissingThePoint Oh they don't need guarding.]]
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* Sweet, brave little [[CheerfulChild Danny Martin]].
--> '''Danny''': (catches Jane sneaking down the stairs) Hey! Where're you going?
--> '''Jane''': Shhh, come here, Danny, shhhhhh.
--> '''Danny''': Where are you going?
--> '''Jane''': I've got something very important to do, Danny, but it's got to be a secret.
--> '''Danny''': Will you be back pretty soon?
--> '''Jane''': Well I don't know.
--> '''Danny''': Aren't you afraid to go out by yourself?
--> '''Jane''': You're right, I guess I am, Danny.
--> '''Danny''': I'm not afraid, I'll guard you.
--> '''Jane''': Oh no, Danny, you've got a bigger job to do, I need you to guard Mommy and Daddy for me.
--> '''Danny''': [[ComicallyMIssingThePoint Oh they don't need guarding.]]
** He's got another cute moment just after the sirens start to go off.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Henry, Danny's gone!
--> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs)
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
--> '''Danny''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch)
--> '''Danny''': Here's Danny!
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
--> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
--> '''Danny''': I don't know.
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!
--> '''Danny''': (catches Jane sneaking down the stairs) Hey! Where're you going?
--> '''Jane''': Shhh, come here, Danny, shhhhhh.
--> '''Danny''': Where are you going?
--> '''Jane''': I've got something very important to do, Danny, but it's got to be a secret.
--> '''Danny''': Will you be back pretty soon?
--> '''Jane''': Well I don't know.
--> '''Danny''': Aren't you afraid to go out by yourself?
--> '''Jane''': You're right, I guess I am, Danny.
--> '''Danny''': I'm not afraid, I'll guard you.
--> '''Jane''': Oh no, Danny, you've got a bigger job to do, I need you to guard Mommy and Daddy for me.
--> '''Danny''': [[ComicallyMIssingThePoint Oh they don't need guarding.]]
** He's got another cute moment just after the sirens start to go off.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Henry, Danny's gone!
--> '''Mr. Martin''': What?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': And Jane too! (Henry hangs up and meets her at the stairs)
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Well now calm down...
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': I looked in both their rooms, [[AdultFear they're both gone!]]
--> '''Mr. Martin''': Are you sure?
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Yes! Yes!
--> '''Danny''': Well maybe they're down here. (turns on the living room lights, Danny's asleep on the couch)
--> '''Danny''': Here's Danny!
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Danny! What're you doing here?
--> '''Danny''': I'm... guarding you.
--> '''Mrs. Martin''': Guarding us? Guarding us against what, darling?
--> '''Danny''': I don't know.
** He tried to save his big sister by taking on the [[EldritchAbomination Blob]] with nothing but a pop-gun!
