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General clarification on work content: The Babylon campaign's take on the Splash Canyon cutscene.
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* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement ("tinkering is all he's really good at").
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* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement ("tinkering is all he's really good at"). [[spoiler: In Wave's perspective of the scene from [[PerspectiveFlip the Babylon story]], Wave's thoughts belie that, for a more recent Gear mechanic, the Blue Star is well made... so as insurance, she planted the bomb.]]
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* Jet praising Storm on a job well done in ''Zero Gravity'' after he makes it back with two of the Arcs of the Cosmos. [[UndyingLoyalty Storm is so dedicated to]] [[YesMan Jet and his causes]] that getting a [[NotBad genuine compliment]] turns him into a [[BruiserWithASoftCenter chuckling, geeked up goofball.]]
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* Jet praising Storm on a job well done in ''Zero Gravity'' after he makes it back with two of the Arcs of the Cosmos. [[UndyingLoyalty Storm is so dedicated to]] [[YesMan Jet and his causes]] that getting a [[NotBad genuine compliment]] turns him into a [[BruiserWithASoftCenter chuckling, geeked up goofball.]]]]
* Sonic defends Amy from the Babylon Rogues in Zero Gravity.
* Sonic defends Amy from the Babylon Rogues in Zero Gravity.
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* When the Rogues knock Tails off his board in the intro, Sonic immediately stops, rushes to the back of the race (where Tails is) and grabs his hand. He then smiles at him, gives him a thumbs up, and puts him back on his board.
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* When the Rogues knock Tails off his board in the intro, Sonic immediately stops, rushes to the back of the race (where Tails is) and grabs his hand. He Sonic then smiles at him, Tails, gives him a thumbs up, and puts him back on his board.
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* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
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* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering ("tinkering is all he's really good at".at").
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Changed line(s) 3 (click to see context) from:
* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
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* In an early scene, Wave insults the Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".at".
* Jet praising Storm on a job well done in ''Zero Gravity'' after he makes it back with two of the Arcs of the Cosmos. [[UndyingLoyalty Storm is so dedicated to]] [[YesMan Jet and his causes]] that getting a [[NotBad genuine compliment]] turns him into a [[BruiserWithASoftCenter chuckling, geeked up goofball.]]
* Jet praising Storm on a job well done in ''Zero Gravity'' after he makes it back with two of the Arcs of the Cosmos. [[UndyingLoyalty Storm is so dedicated to]] [[YesMan Jet and his causes]] that getting a [[NotBad genuine compliment]] turns him into a [[BruiserWithASoftCenter chuckling, geeked up goofball.]]
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** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhCrap moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
* In an early scene Wave insults the extreme gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
* In an early scene Wave insults the extreme gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
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** Knuckles even looks back and back, has an OhCrap moment of realization and starts to panic until he sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
* In an earlyscene scene, Wave insults the extreme gear Extreme Gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
* In an early
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** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhCrap moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
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** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhCrap moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.care.
* In an early scene Wave insults the extreme gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
* In an early scene Wave insults the extreme gear Tails customized and both Sonic and Amy get extremely defensive of him. Knuckles even chimes in with an InnocentlyInsensitive agreement it was rude because 'tinkering is all he's really good at".
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** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhShit moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
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** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhShit OhCrap moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
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* When the Rogues knock Tails off his board in the intro, Sonic immediately stops, rushes to the back of the race (where Tails is) and grabs his hand. He then smiles at him, gives him a thumbs up, and puts him back on his board.
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* When the Rogues knock Tails off his board in the intro, Sonic immediately stops, rushes to the back of the race (where Tails is) and grabs his hand. He then smiles at him, gives him a thumbs up, and puts him back on his board.board.
** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhShit moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
** Knuckles even looks back and has an OhShit moment of realization and starts to panic until sees Sonic has it covered. He really does care.
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* When the Rogues knock Tails off his board in the intro, Sonic immediately stops, rushes to the back of the race (where Tails is) and grabs his hand. He then smiles at him, gives him a thumbs up, and puts him back on his board.
