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* Ashley and Maria's talk in the tent.
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
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* Ashley and Maria's talk in the tent. \n
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
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** But the reason why she needs to be comforted is a TearJerker...
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
* Ronnie comforting Rory when she finds out that [[spoiler: she is Drake and Alex's younger sister and Alex shuns her because of it]].
-->'''Ronnie:''' "You don't have to be ''physically'' strong. There are all different kinds of strengths."
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
* Ronnie comforting Rory when she finds out that [[spoiler: she is Drake and Alex's younger sister and Alex shuns her because of it]].
-->'''Ronnie:''' "You don't have to be ''physically'' strong. There are all different kinds of strengths."
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** But the reason why she needs to be comforted is a TearJerker...
TearJerker...
* Ashley and Maria's talk in the tent.
* Any moment between Tony and Rory. \n* Ronnie comforting Rory when she finds out that [[spoiler: she is Drake and Alex's younger sister and Alex shuns her because of it]]. \n-->'''Ronnie:''' "You don't have to be ''physically'' strong. There are all different kinds of strengths."
* Ashley and Maria's talk in the tent.
* Any moment between Tony and Rory.
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* The DuskShipping scene where Jet promises to not let anyone hurt her anymore.
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* The DuskShipping scene where Jet promises to not let anyone hurt her anymore.
* Ashley and Maria's talk after Maria broke down into tears in front of everyone.
* The reason why Ashley has a scar. [[spoiler: She was protecting Maria from nearly being raped]].
* Jay comforting Ashley with a hug.
** But the reason why she needs to be comforted is a TearJerker...
* Ashley and Maria's talk after Maria broke down into tears in front of everyone.
* The reason why Ashley has a scar. [[spoiler: She was protecting Maria from nearly being raped]].
* Jay comforting Ashley with a hug.
** But the reason why she needs to be comforted is a TearJerker...
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-->'''Ronnie:''' "Couldn't sleep, huh?"
-->'''Rory:''' "Yeah... How did you know?"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Intuition."
-->'''Rory:''' "Um, Ronnie, is Alex always so-"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "She's just upset. Alex has always been the mature one. She forced herself to grow up quickly for some reason. If you want the real story, you should ask Drake."
-->'''Rory:''' "She never treated me well before, and now..."
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Alex doesn't like letting people in. She's built up walls around her. I think that's why Ashley always annoyed her; it was the only way for Alex act childishly. Look, Rory, I know you're very confused about Alex, but you have to be patient. Alex may, no, is difficult, but she has a heart of gold behind those walls. Just hang in there, alright?"
-->'''Rory:''' *moments later* "Thanks, Ronnie. For everything."
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-->'''Rory:''' "Yeah... How did you know?"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Intuition."
-->'''Rory:''' "Um, Ronnie, is Alex always so-"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "She's just upset. Alex has always been the mature one. She forced herself to grow up quickly for some reason. If you want the real story, you should ask Drake."
-->'''Rory:''' "She never treated me well before, and now..."
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Alex doesn't like letting people in. She's built up walls around her. I think that's why Ashley always annoyed her; it was the only way for Alex act childishly. Look, Rory, I know you're very confused about Alex, but you
-->'''Rory:''' *moments later* "Thanks, Ronnie. For everything."
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* Ronnie comforting Rory when she finds out that [[spoiler: she is Drake and Alex's younger sister and Alex shuns her because of it]].
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Couldn't sleep, huh?"
-->'''Rory:''' "Yeah... How did you know?"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Intuition."
-->'''Rory:''' "Um, Ronnie, is Alex always so-"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "She's just upset. Alex has always been the mature one. She forced herself to grow up quickly for some reason. If you want the real story, you should ask Drake."
-->'''Rory:''' "She never treated me well before, and now..."
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Alex doesn't like letting people in. She's built up walls around her. I think that's why Ashley always annoyed her; it was the only way for Alex act childishly. Look, Rory, I know you're very confused about Alex, but you have to be patient. Alex may, no, is difficult, but she has a heart of gold behind those walls. Just hang in there, alright?"
-->'''Rory:''' *moments later* "Thanks, Ronnie. For everything."
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Couldn't sleep, huh?"
-->'''Rory:''' "Yeah... How did you know?"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Intuition."
-->'''Rory:''' "Um, Ronnie, is Alex always so-"
-->'''Ronnie:''' "She's just upset. Alex has always been the mature one. She forced herself to grow up quickly for some reason. If you want the real story, you should ask Drake."
-->'''Rory:''' "She never treated me well before, and now..."
-->'''Ronnie:''' "Alex doesn't like letting people in. She's built up walls around her. I think that's why Ashley always annoyed her; it was the only way for Alex act childishly. Look, Rory, I know you're very confused about Alex, but you have to be patient. Alex may, no, is difficult, but she has a heart of gold behind those walls. Just hang in there, alright?"
-->'''Rory:''' *moments later* "Thanks, Ronnie. For everything."
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* When Alex tells Drake off, showing that she really loves and cares for her brother.
-->'''Alex:''' "Because I care about you, idiot! Listen to me, Drake! Don't you ''dare'' think that you're the only hurting! What about Lewis, huh? He just lost two members of his family! Don't make this all about you! You weren't the only one that cared for Maria and Ashley! Jay may be denying it at the moment, but he loves Ashley the way you love Maria! Lizzie was practically Maria's sister! How do you think she's coping? Just because she keeps on that ridiculous cheery smile on her face twenty-four/seven doesn't mean that she isn't hurting at all. And I- Ashley was my...best friend. And it kills me on the inside to see you so depressed. Don't become like Dad when his dad left after Grandmother's death. Please... This isn't you.
-->'''Alex:''' "Because I care about you, idiot! Listen to me, Drake! Don't you ''dare'' think that you're the only hurting! What about Lewis, huh? He just lost two members of his family! Don't make this all about you! You weren't the only one that cared for Maria and Ashley! Jay may be denying it at the moment, but he loves Ashley the way you love Maria! Lizzie was practically Maria's sister! How do you think she's coping? Just because she keeps on that ridiculous cheery smile on her face twenty-four/seven doesn't mean that she isn't hurting at all. And I- Ashley was my...best friend. And it kills me on the inside to see you so depressed. Don't become like Dad when his dad left after Grandmother's death. Please... This isn't you.
