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* Snape's occasional PetTheDog moments with the player character, such as giving advice about how they should choose a date for the Celestial Ball, or apologizing for accidentally reading their Love Note out loud during class. He's probably thinking of [[TheLostLenore Lily]] when his facade briefly cracks and he talks about the player character choosing a date.
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* Snape's occasional PetTheDog moments with the player character, such as giving advice about how they should choose a date for the Celestial Ball, or apologizing for accidentally reading their Love Note out loud during class. He's probably thinking of [[TheLostLenore Lily]] when his facade façade briefly cracks and he talks about the player character choosing a date.
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-->'''Merula:''' If I get cast as a lead and have to talk all mushy with someone, it better be someone I can stomach. Someone like you, (Player). Going to the Valentine's Day Ball with you, dare I say, sweet. The idea of romance usually makes me sick, but when I'm with you I never feel like I want to chunder.
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-->'''Merula:''' If I get cast as a lead and have to talk all mushy with someone, it better be someone I can stomach. Someone like you, (Player). Going to the Valentine's Day Ball with you, dare I say, sweet. The idea of romance usually makes me sick, but when I'm with you you, I never feel like I want to chunder.
