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*** Webby musing that his return would probably earn him [[SlapSlapKiss a punch and then a kiss kiss]] from Daisy.
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* Despite being unable to have enough conclusive evidence to seriously hold the heroes's claims about [[spoiler: Farid Kagan's]] evil ways, the current head of S.H.U.S.H. is generous enough to give them a 5 minute head start before they have to start chasing them again.
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** Huey gets a big hug and an apology, helping to give him some closure to his [[spoiler: DisappearedDad issues]] after so long.
** Dewey and Webby offering [[spoiler: Donald]] a chance to get his old job back with a pay bump.
*** Webby musing that his return would probably earn him a punch and then a kiss from [[spoiler: Daisy]]
* The final scene of the fic: Dewy and [[spoiler: Webby swimming in cold cash just like Scrooge of old.]]
* [[spoiler: Donald]] saying goodbye to his [[spoiler: nephews]] after so long.
** Huey gets a big hug and an apology, helping to give him some closure to his [[spoiler: DisappearedDad issues]] after so long.
** Dewey and Webby offering [[spoiler: Donald]] a chance to get his old job back with a pay bump.
*** Webby musing that his return would probably earn him a punch and then a kiss from [[spoiler: Daisy]]
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* Dewey finally coming to terms with his legacy issues with Scrooge, finally understanding why he kept Scrooge's dime: a memory of his adventures.
* [[spoiler: Donald]]Donald saying goodbye to his [[spoiler: nephews]] nephews after disappearing for so long.
** Huey gets a big hug and an apology, helping to give him some closure to his[[spoiler: DisappearedDad issues]] issues after so long.
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* Despite being unable to have enough conclusive evidence to seriously hold the heroes's claims about [[spoiler: Farid Kagan's]] evil ways, he the current head of S.H.U.S.H. is generous enough to give them a 5 minute head start before they have to start chasing them again.
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* Jose finding his adventurer spirit once more as he leaves the story.
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* Dewey finally coming to terms with his legacy issues with Scrooge, finally understanding why he kept Scrooge's dime: a memory of his adventures.
* [[spoiler: Donald]] saying goodbye to his [[spoilers: nephews]] after so long.
** Huey gets a big hug and an apology, helping to give him some closure to his [[spoiler: DisappearedDad issues]] after so long.
** Dewey and Webby offering [[spoiler: Donald]] a chance to get his old job back with a pay bump.
*** Webby musing that his return would probably earn him a punch and then a kiss from [[spoiler: Daisy]]
* The final scene of the fic: Dewy and [[spoiler: Webby swimming in cold cash just like Scrooge of old.]]
* [[spoiler: Donald]] saying goodbye to his [[spoilers: nephews]] after so long.
** Huey gets a big hug and an apology, helping to give him some closure to his [[spoiler: DisappearedDad issues]] after so long.
** Dewey and Webby offering [[spoiler: Donald]] a chance to get his old job back with a pay bump.
*** Webby musing that his return would probably earn him a punch and then a kiss from [[spoiler: Daisy]]
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* The triplets parting on good terms now that their last great adventure was completed.
** The final scene of the fic: Dewy and [[spoiler: Webby swimming in cold cash just like Scrooge of old.]]
* Dewy and Louie reconciling their differences and getting drunk together having a 40 dollar bottle of alcohol.
* The triplets parting on good terms now that their last great adventure was completed.
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* Despite this being a Duck Tales adventure, the way Hewey and Louie become friends with Cloudkicker and [[spoiler: Gosalyn]] is pretty sweet. Especially as they both helped the two find new purposes after splitting up.
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* Huey, Dewy and Lewy reunite in Duckburg.
