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* Whenever you liberate children from a factory, especially the cutscene just after each one that shows a Rook or two helping them escape.
** When all the Child Liberation missions are complete you can have a final talk with Clara O'Dea. Clara formally thanks the Frye twins on behalf of all the children they saved. Clara then gives Evie a hug.
** When all the Child Liberation missions are complete you can have a final talk with Clara O'Dea. Clara formally thanks the Frye twins on behalf of all the children they saved. Clara then gives Evie a hug.
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* Whenever you liberate children from a factory, especially the cutscene just after each one that shows a Rook or two helping them escape.
**escape. When all the Child Liberation missions are complete complete, you can have a final talk with Clara O'Dea. Clara formally thanks the Frye twins on behalf of all the children they saved. Clara then gives Evie a hug.
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* During one of the modern-day sequences, Shaun explains why he's working himself to death: He's trying to honor Desmond, who worked day and night in the Animus to find the Piece of Eden despite the enormous stress it caused. Especially considering when they first met, Shaun clearly didn't care for Desmond.
** Immediately after that, Galina showing up and assuring Shaun that he's a good Assassin in light of this. While also funny, both of their behaviors give off the feel of two people very glad to see another friendly face.
** Immediately after that, Galina showing up and assuring Shaun that he's a good Assassin in light of this. While also funny, both of their behaviors give off the feel of two people very glad to see another friendly face.
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* During one of the modern-day sequences, Shaun explains why he's working himself to death: He's trying to honor Desmond, who worked day and night in the Animus to find the Piece of Eden despite the enormous stress it caused. Especially considering when they first met, Shaun clearly didn't care for Desmond.
**Desmond. Immediately after that, Galina showing shows up and assuring assures Shaun that he's a good Assassin in light of this. While also funny, both of their behaviors give off the feel of two people very glad to see another friendly face.
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* Rebecca naming her drone after Lucy, and Shaun referring to her as a friend in the Database, proving once and for all that Shaun and Rebecca do still see Lucy as one of their closest friends, despite her betrayal.
** Another one of the drones is named Clay, which is especially heartwarming (and somewhat a Tear Jerker) when you think back to an exchange between Desmond and Rebecca in III, calling back to the events of ''Revelations''.
---> '''Rebecca''': Hey, Desmond, didn't Subject Sixteen's-
---> '''Desmond''': [[TheDeadHaveNames His name was Clay.]]
** Another one of the drones is named Clay, which is especially heartwarming (and somewhat a Tear Jerker) when you think back to an exchange between Desmond and Rebecca in III, calling back to the events of ''Revelations''.
---> '''Rebecca''': Hey, Desmond, didn't Subject Sixteen's-
---> '''Desmond''': [[TheDeadHaveNames His name was Clay.]]
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* Rebecca naming her drone after Lucy, and Shaun referring to her as a friend in the Database, proving once and for all that Shaun and Rebecca do still see Lucy as one of their closest friends, despite her betrayal.
**betrayal. Another one of the drones is named Clay, which is especially heartwarming (and somewhat a Tear Jerker) when you think back to an exchange between Desmond and Rebecca in III, calling back to the events of ''Revelations''.
---> --> '''Rebecca''': Hey, Desmond, didn't Subject Sixteen's-
---> --> '''Desmond''': [[TheDeadHaveNames His name was Clay.]]
**
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* The mission where Jacob escorts Mrs. Disraeli through the slums, simply to earn her favor and learn the identity of his next target. It is one of the more peaceful scenarios that you wouldn't expect to be in a game called ''Assassin's Creed''.
** Jacob accidentally leaves her unattended in a rather seedy open tavern, and when he rushes back, expecting the worst, he instead finds her offering a group of Blighters emotional support and life advice. One of them even postures up when Jacob approaches her until she introduces him as her escort, and the trio don't cause Jacob any trouble at any point.
** Jacob accidentally leaves her unattended in a rather seedy open tavern, and when he rushes back, expecting the worst, he instead finds her offering a group of Blighters emotional support and life advice. One of them even postures up when Jacob approaches her until she introduces him as her escort, and the trio don't cause Jacob any trouble at any point.
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* The mission where Jacob escorts Mrs. Disraeli through the slums, simply to earn her favor and learn the identity of his next target. It is one of the more peaceful scenarios that you wouldn't expect to be in a game called ''Assassin's Creed''.
**Creed''. At one point, Jacob accidentally leaves her unattended in a rather seedy open tavern, and when tavern. When he rushes back, expecting the worst, he instead finds her offering a group of Blighters emotional support and life advice. One of them even postures up when Jacob approaches her until she introduces him as her escort, and the trio don't cause Jacob any trouble at any point.
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