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* Reading the story, it's obvious that Trixie loves Piercing Gaze, even though she refuses to admit it to herself -- and one wonders if Piercing, who was much older and more sophisticated than Trixie, really cared for her or was just taking advantage of a naive young mare. When one reads the sidestory ''Fanfic/ALongNightAtTheHippodrome'', it become obvious that [[LadykillerInLove Piercing Gaze]] genuinely returns her affections.
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* Reading the story, it's obvious that Trixie loves Piercing Gaze, even though she refuses to admit it to herself -- and one wonders if Piercing, who was much older and more sophisticated than Trixie, really cared for her or was just taking advantage of a naive young mare. When one reads the sidestory ''Fanfic/ALongNightAtTheHippodrome'', it become obvious that [[LadykillerInLove Piercing Gaze]] genuinely returns her affections.affections -- he thinks of her as his "soul mate" and berates himself for having been so forward with her as to drive her away.
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* Reading the story, it's obvious that Trixie loves Piercing Gaze, even though she refuses to admit it to herself -- and one wonders if Piercing, who was much older and more sophisticated than Trixie, really cared for her or was just taking advantage of a naive young mare. When one reads the sidestory ''Fanfic/ALongNightAtTheHippodrome'', it become obvious that [[LadykillerInLove Piercing Gaze]] genuinely returns her affections.
